User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/Update time!/@comment-1324135-20100326154459

Actually, it's twenty one now. xD But in terms of word count, that might be a bit over 3,000 depending on how much revising I end up doing. And it's definitely not over yet.

Oh don't worry, if LAL were a book it would have all these.

1.) Completely different, better fleshed out characters.

2.) A more developed world.

3.) The Organization, what it does, and how it ties in with the government and has so much power would make more sense (this is the big, huge problem that almost makes me want to abandon the idea completely, but I'm sure I can figure it out eventually).

4.) A somewhat revised plot.

5.) One or two sequels. xD (This one's a bit iffy, but I've been playing around with the idea of an LAL sequel or two for a long time, but I assure you there will NOT be a sequel to the actual fanficton).

6.) Maybe a title change, although I do like Life After Lies as the title.

Aaaaand I would totally give all those agents trapped within the Organization a theme song that really fits what they're going through. Look up the song Toy Soldiers by Martika on Youtube. I think the lyrics really match.

But that's just the wishful fantasy of a 14 year old who takes her fanfiction waaaaaaay too seriously. Ignore me. xD