Talk:Total Drama: Paradise Falls

Polls
Who's your favorite character? Alice Benny Bitsy Catheryn Cliff Danny L. Fantine Faustino Helen Joanne Kasey Lancelot Lorelai Mindy Mona Nigel Orlando Sid Starlight Woodrow Yumi Zachariah

Winner Guessing Contest
Welcome to the WGC. Guess the character that you think it's gonna win. Winner will create a character for season 3. Bruno...   he has the spirit    of a wolf!  17:20, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alice - She's sweet. :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  19:07, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Benny - I lieks him :333 - Fred Fuchs?  Fred Fuchs!?   OH MY GOD, FRED FUCHS...  02:51, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Bitsy - Now you’ve got one hand. Look around, floating town. Tell a baby to talk to the hand!  02:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Catheryn - I love her! CookieRaider12 17:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cliff ---Kenzen - Talk  - Blog  02:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Danny L. - -- Happy Hunger Games!  May the odds be   ever in your favor!  22:21, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Fantine -

Faustino - Sprinklemist hasn't changed his signature in a long time. 02:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Helen - Because you deserve it. 00:25, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Joanne - She's awesome in her ordinariness! Frank15 06:40, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Kasey -

Lancelot -

Lorelai - I&#39;m Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 00:23, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mindy - --CK11 decided he should change his sig  to commemorate 2012.  23:53, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mona - Is it the look in your eyes, Or is it this dancing juice? 00:28, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nigel - If you have found this, you are a stealth ninja. Where'd my signature go? 01:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Orlando -

Sid - It was either him or Nigel. ;3 -- When the moonlight brightens up your evening, you must show me your true strength.  22:00, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Starlight - -- N DU  KE  Tis the season to be PJ! "..."  05:36, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Woodrow - He has the potential to win. Not my favorite, but I don't go for favorites (pst, it's for a reason !@#$%^&*) You'll always be inside of me  like a flower  06:12, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yumi - ♥EvaBridgetteGwenRocks♥ TalkAthlete 4 Life 07:38, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Zachariah - My favorite character! <font color="Red">Jake R <font color="Green">-Professional Troll. 01:22, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Final Three Guessing Contest
Guess the final three. Winner will choose a contestant to return for the All-Stars season.

Nigel, Mona, Lorelai Manatee12 <font color="Green">"They call him Hermit, The Frog!" 17:29, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Bitsy, Helen, Faustino (my WGC choice, the bad guy, and unlikely guy who seems just liked enough to make; my reasons for picking :P) Rhonda is the meanest, vilest, ugliest, stankiest, crankiest, won’t even say high to your momma, cheapest, creepiest, arrogant sea witch in all the seas! And I’m not very fond of her either.  23:46, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alice, Faustino, Starlight. My favorites! :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  16:57, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Mona, Helen, Faustino. Toadgamer80 Tony is addicted to a wide array of narcotics... 17:50, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Nigel, Cathryn, Woodrow. <font color="#ebebeb">If you have found this, you are a stealth ninja. Where'd my signature go? 22:31, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Alice, Faustino, Mindy. All very nice kids. :) Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Any good or kindness I can show to any human being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.-Author Unknown 08:00, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lorelai, Helen, and Sid. ;3 <font face="Arial">-- <span style="color:lightcyan; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">When the moonlight brightens up your evening, <span style="color:aliceblue; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">you must <span style="color:powderblue; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">show me <span style="color:lightblue; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">your true strength.  22:01, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mindy, Nigel and Lorelai :D Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You!  20:15, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Alice, Bitsy, Woodrow. :)  <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  07:29, January 18, 2013 (UTC)

Woodrow, Alice, Mona? Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 23:31, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Bitsy, Nigel, AliceThe saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 21:29, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Mindy, Helen, Woodrow? <font size="2.5"> “If you only face forward,  there is something you will miss seeing.”  06:33, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Mona, Helen, Nigel <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:09, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Mona, Alice, Nigel [I actually think the above answer is right but I should try :P]  Code Red. Code Red Mountain Dew. It was pretty popular back then. Some might argue that it's popularity usurped that of regular Mountain Dew. I would argue...  10:21, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Chat. :D
OMG, awesome! Can't wait to read it. Toadgamer80 Everyone was wearing fingerless gloves. 00:37, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can't wait for this! I am a Dreamer... 00:38, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

EPICSAUSE! :D Can't wait! <font color="RoyalBlue">Owenandheatherfan <font color="OrangeRed"> is epicsause, and you know it. 00:44, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ohmigod, YUS. Shadowgeoff has his mind blown by Lady Rainicorn. 00:52, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guy. I'll not disappoint you. :D The characters will be revealed soon, and the fanfiction will start when I actually write the first chapter. :P My name   is   Bruno!  01:00, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

What?! Bruno actually writing a fanfic?! Next thing you know, I'll be finishing comp. fics... Mrdaimion:   like you,   only better.  01:04, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks MrD. xD Good luck with finishing your comp stories. I've readed all your one-shots, and the first chapter of MA, and it's really good. :D And just you wait to see my fic. :P My name   is   Bruno!  01:17, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm so excited for this, it looks really cool!  Your heart, your heart abandoned. Your wrong now bear the shame. Like dead trees in cold December nothing but ashes remain. Oh Ember, so warm and tender, you will remember my name!  18:40, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Rhona, I didn't saw your comment until now. xD Thanks, I'll try my best to make this fanfiction a bit good. :D Just wait and you'll see. My name  is   Bruno!  02:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Dude. This is freaking epic. So epic, that I shall make a rankings blog later. Anyway, this seems cool. All the characters have been revealed, and I'm super excited. My favorite three are Mona, Nigel, and Zachariah. Mona because she loves rock music. Zachariah because he's epic. And I love Nigel's outfit. It looks like something you'd see from an everyday person. And I like that. So ready for this! <font color="Maroon">Jake R <font color="DarkGreen">Got a problem? Talk to me. 04:50, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Jake. I'm glad you like those characters. :P The first chapter will be posted next week. Also, more surprises coming soon. :P My name   is   Bruno!  05:02, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I liked the first chapter, and I'm happy to see that you grammar is not as bad as I thought it would be (sorry if that offended you), Catheryn is my favorite so far. You are encouraging me to write a fanfiction and publish it here, I had the cast, elimination order and major plotlines planned for a long time, but never got the courage to write and publish. I&#39;m Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 22:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Manatee. :D No, I'm not offended. I really thought it would have a lot of bad grammar too. xD Catheryn was one of my favorites to write for. I think you should really publish your fanfiction here. You has the elimination and plots, why not? I actually thought about two fanfictions, but never got the courage to post it, and the characters were actually pretty lame. xD I really liked your comment. :) My name   is   Bruno!  23:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

My biggest problem in writing a stoty is the comedy, and besides that, I only have the major plotline, and that involves 5 out of 20 characters. I'm really going off topic, I'll stop the comment here XD I&#39;m Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 23:29, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the first chapter Bruno! Really liked Bitsy, she was funny and I loved her references. Joanne and Nigel were funny. I thought it was funny to have both of the more quiet characters introduced first. Benny's jokes were pretty corny but I think you were going for that and he's pretty funny for a jokester character. Catheryn was very funny and I tend to love the gossip hounds. Her previous friendship and or relationship (which I'm hoping happens) with Orlando was very interesting and I can't wait to see how that works out. Danny L was pretty funny too. Cliff was funny too but he seems like an early out since he always wants to take a nap. Of course it might be too early too say anything. Fantine was nice and I liked the mentioning of her different badges and I hope her skills become important for her team later on. And XD on the cookie selling thing. First thing that comes to my mind when I think about girl scouts. Alice didn't really do much but I tend to like nature lovers usually. Mona was awesome! Faustino was pretty funny and I really liked his bad luck. Lancelot was funny and I predict a friendship between Faustino and Lancelot. Mindy was really sweet. I can't wait to see who Helen seduces as the guys seem pretty interested. Sid seems interesting and I predict he'll play a bigger role. I like how Woodrew was an allusion to Woody (I love Toy Story) and I want to see him use his cowboy skills. Lorelai was funny and Zachariah was pretty funny too. Yumi was nice and I liked the scarf joke. Orlando seems funny and I liked Starlight's personailty.

I love the team names and I like Blaineley showing up and can't wait too see what happens next! I love the whole cast and already love this story! <font color="33FF33">Now you’ve got one hand. Look around, floating town. <font color="6600CC">Tell a baby to talk to the hand!  02:35, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Rhona. :D I really like your comment. Bitsy is pretty funny to write for. I had the idea of the two quiet characters interacting, and it seemed awesome. xD Benny was meant to tell corny jokes. And to be annoying. You'll have to wait to see what's going on with Catheryn and Orlando. You'll see about Cliff too. Danny L. was pretty funny to write for. Cookies are the first thing I thought when I think about girl scouts too. xD You'll see more of Faustino and random animals attacking him in the next/next chapters. You'll see if Helen will seduce anyone, or if she will be a fake seducer like Elle. xD I love Toy Story too. It's my favorite Disney-Pixar movie. :D I've watched TS3 about 5 times. xD You'll see more about scarf jokes with Yumi too. :P I just had the random idea about a friendship between Starlight, Cosmic River, Waterlily and Love Possum. xD I love the team names too. I needed team names, and were playing Angry Birds, and then it turned as the team's name. I love Blaineley, so I needed to add her at the story. xD You'll see what will happen next chapter. :D And I bet you'll be surprised. My name  is   Bruno!  03:29, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome chapter! It was kinda short, but I loved it! Zachariah is still beast, as usual. Bitsy was just plain epicness. Her intro reminded me of Izzy, but it probably reminded lots of people. Anyway, great chapter! I wonder what Blainely is going to do. I'll update rankings tomorrow after school. You got talent, my boy. <font color="Red">Jake R <font color="Green">-Professional Troll. 05:43, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Jake. Zachariah is pretty awesome. You'll se more of him next chapter. I loved write for everybody, to be honest. Bitsy's intro was kinda based on Izzy's. :P I know the chapter was short, but it was pretty hard to write the intros. xD It would be longer, but I revised and somethings doesn't made any sense, so I deleted. xD The next one will be longer, though. Thanks for the compliment. :D You'll see about Blaineley, also. My name  is   Bruno!  22:51, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hello Bruno :) Well, I just came here to say that this is a VERY, VERY good story. I love it. And if this story is mostly finished or becomes finished, it might as well be Featured Story. Sure, I don't go on here everyday like before and whether you remember me or not isn't really important. Anyways, I just absolutely fell in love with this story and this is one of the only four stories I am reading on here. I love how unique every single character is and how they carry themselves thoroughout the entire story. I loved Bitsy, Yumi, Mona, Nigel Starlight, Orlando, Catheryn, Lorelai and Woodrow the most. The only character in this story that I feel err about is I say Benny. Isn't really that funny, but of course, he's annoying. But, the point is, I absolutely love this story and I only read four on here (including this one) and it's a real honor for you and this story. The team 'Angry Bird's' is a unique twist. Anyways, well I have to go, but if you ever need anything, you can leave me a message on my talk page :) Bye, Bruno :) You'll always be inside of me  like a flower  06:05, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, MS. That really means a lot for me. :) I'm glad people are liking my story. You'll see more of those characters in the next chapters. Benny was meant to be annoying, so I've already accomplished my goal with his character. xD It's a honor to know I'm one of the four stories you read. The Angry Birds is a epic name for a team. And thanks. If you need something, leave a message at my talkpage too. :D Chapter two have been posted. Bruno:   Can't Think   Of a Good Sign!  20:40, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the new chapter! Blaineley and Chris are hilarious. Zachariah was a bit obnoxious but skilled. Alice getting the fish to help was pretty cool. Starlight and Woodrow might make a cut couple. I really like Orlando's character and I'm interested to see how he develops. Catheryn is funny and devious and again, I can't wait to see how she and Orlando interact. Though, Helen and Kasey seem to be likely antagonists as well, and I can't wait to see how their alliance goes. Mindy, Bitsy and Benny had some funny lines too. I'm interested to see Sid's character develop too and was glad he wasn't voted. I was sad to see Lancelot go but I would have missed anyone because this cast is awesome and I wanted Orlando to stay more. I can't wait for more! <font color="33FF33">Now you’ve got one hand. Look around, floating town. <font color="6600CC">Tell a baby to talk to the hand!  01:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Rhonda. :D I'm glad you loved the chapter. Blaineley and Chris are really hilarious, I love to write for them. :D Zachariah was a bit obnoxious, but it's just his adrenalin. xD You'll see more of Starlight and Woodrow. I've planned a lot for Orlando also. Catheryn is pretty fun to write too, and you'll see more of her too. Helen and Kasey are the antagonists, so you can expect all the evilness of them. xD Lancelot was pretty fun to write for, but I lacked of plot ideas for him, so he was automatically eliminated. I'm sad, but I like to write for them all. It's so hard to eliminate someone. xD Next chapter will coming soon, stay tuned. ;D Bruno:   Can't Think   Of a Good Sign!  02:56, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm a late-comer to this cool story, and I can't wait to start reading it! Yay! Your first story! :D JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  05:06, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yay, you are going to read my story. :D Thanks Jay. I'm sure you'll not regret. :P Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 15:27, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I just finished and loved the new chapter! I'm kinda confused on why Bitsy was cut off in her confessional. Was it on purpose or an error.

I have to say, you had me fooled in Helen being in love with Kasey. I was sold that she was head over heels in love with Kasey and thinking back to last chapter when she formed the alliance how here label is the Sarcastic Seducer and who she was set up like a villain and I was thinking, "If she is a seducer or villain than I'm Queen of Shiva." XD I guess I'm a queen. I seriously thought Helen would go home. But she was playing him the whole time! I salute you Bruno for that surprising elimination! I love shocking suspenseful eliminations.

Alice's alliance with Mindy and Nigel seems like it might go well. But I think Orlando will stay awhile so it might not. Alice forming it was interesting and I like how Nigel and Alice respected Mindy's opinion. I also love Alice's strong connection to animals because it's really cool and I just love animals in general. I also really like Nigel and Mindy as a couple, those two are so cute together! I like how at the end they kissed and Whitnney Houston played. That was a sweet tribute.

Starlight is a player XD Seriously though, I like the love triangle. I can't decide who she will want to be with! But I think it might lead to her elimination.

I loved the challenge. The rowing was fun and liked all the different people paired together worked well. XD I love how Joanne's confessional had a warning that it was boring. I liked Faustino being supportive to Zachariah very well and enjoyed the other interactions too.

XD Sorry it took so long to reply, but I really loved the chapter and can't wait for more! Rhonda is the meanest, vilest, ugliest, stankiest, crankiest, won’t even say high to your momma, cheapest, creepiest, arrogant sea witch in all the seas! And I’m not very fond of her either. 03:34, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, my female-friend Rhonda! :D Bitsy's confessional was a error. xD I fixed that. I'm glad I fooled someone with Helen (congrats on being a Queen, btw). xD Now I know that I can write surprising moments. Helen and Kasey's moment was pretty hard to write for, specially coming up with a good idea to write it, but I'm happy to see someone liking it. :D You'll see more of the alliance. I thought it was rnadom at first, but tried my best to make it a nice plot. I'm glad you liked Mindy and Nigel. You'll see more of them too. And Whitney Houston deserved a tribute. First, she's in your fanfiction, and now she's in my. xD The triangle is pretty interesting to write for. I'll try to not turn it into another DuncanxGwenxCourtney. If I do, I'll eliminate them all in a triple elimination. xD It will be a important plot for the next chapters. I love rowing challenges, so I had to do a chapter based on it. And poor Joanne can't help but being boring. You'll see more of Zachariah and Faustino's friendship also. I'm happy with your comment. :D Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 04:30, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oh the new chapter was exciting! I was surprised Yumi left, though I kinda felt she wouldn't make it too far. I just thought Joanne would be the first out. Helen is certainly living up to her role as the villain, and I feel really bad for Yumi, being the fashionable one and being eliminated for it. It was ironic though. I think Helen might backstab Joanne though if needed.

XD You made a What The Heck joke! I feel special :3 I have to say I really like Alice and think she is much more likable than typical nature lover characters on the wiki. I was digging some of Starlight's words she used though I don't know where she stands with me. Nigel and Mindy are really cute together, though I'm glad Mindy realizes that they're going to fast.

I was glad to see Lindsay and Heather again. And I like the introduction of Crystal. She seems very sweet and her love of pink was very funny. Alot of people thought Crystal's image was Chris and Blaineley's daughter, so could Blaineley have abandoned Chris and Crystal. XD I think it's a long shot but it could be.

I liked how Lorelai is starting to express emotions. I'm excited to see where this leads too. I also love how Bitsy designed outfits based on famous female video game characters. I'm very excited to see what Orlando's secret and I really like his interactions with Catheryn.

I liked all the outfits on the runway (even Lindsay's last outfit :P). I really liked that Yumi took the blame. All in all, I loved it! Not sure who goes next though I feel Helen maybe behind it. Rhonda is the meanest, vilest, ugliest, stankiest, crankiest, won’t even say high to your momma, cheapest, creepiest, arrogant sea witch in all the seas! And I’m not very fond of her either. 00:56, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'll be honest here, I thought about giving up on that story after I read chapter 2. The grammar on that chapter was awful, but I decided to give it a chance and read chapter 3, I really liked it and the grammar improved. I'm impressed with the grammar in chapter four, it's not perfect, but It's really good, and besides that, who am I to judge someone's grammar? That was my favorite chapter overall, especially because of the challenge, I preffer chalenges that take skill than dangerous and extreme challenges, and that one was great, The Racoon's clothes looked ugly in my mind, even the ones that were not sabotaged. And as a gamer myself, I would declare The Birds the winners, btw good job on parody names for the games, they were fun. I'm glad it wasn't Lorelai who got eliminated, I like her and Yumi was boring. There was a moment when you wrote bitchin', I'm pretty sure that was a typo XD I&#39;m Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 01:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Rhonda. Oh yeah, Yumi was made to be a early-out. She would make it further, though, because I though she would be awesome to write for. I was wrong. xD Yay, you got the What the Heck joke. :D I admit that I googled some hippie slang to make Starlight's lines. xD I read some Cosmic River, Waterlily and Love Possum lines, too. {C You'll see more of Nigel and Mindy's relationship. I loved writing for Heather and Lindsay too. xD I wanted someone for the model challenge, and who's better than Lindsay and Heather? Crystal is awesome. xD I loved writing for her. She'll appear more in future chapters. Lorelaihas emontions. Even I am susrpised with that, and I wrote that. xD The video-game references was my favorite part of the chapter. You'll find out more about Orlando and Catheryn soon. The good news is that the next chapter may take less time to be up, so you'll see who's going next soon.

Thanks Manatee. And thanks for not giving up. I realized my not-good grammar, and started to revise others fanfictions, to see how they write. I'm improving in grammar. :D xD I loved the challenge too. Chris doesn't agrees with you about the skill challenges over dangerous ones. xD I suck at fashion, so I didn't knew anything about what I'd use in the challenge. xD I've saw some runways, and they had some pretty scary clothes in that. xD I agree that Yumi was boring. xD Bitchin' is a hippie slang for "awesome, cool" (at least that's what Google said). I'll change it, though, because it looks like a offensive word. :P Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 01:40, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I was re-reading chapter two, and the grammar is not as bad as I remembered it to be, guess I wasn't in a good mood the day I first read it XD And I forgot to comment one thing about the last chapter, I didn't expect Helen to be evil, I thought she would be just an Alexandria clone, that was a surprise for me. I&#39;m Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 12:43, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Helen is probably a combination of both antagonists. I hated Blaineley, Kasey and even Helen but I liked the part when the old total drama characters return (minus Crystal) I like Crystal as also. I loved the fashion runway challenge. I will miss Yumi in the next chapter. She's so awesome.Tmhall02 16:06, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

xD Manatee. The lessons is: just read fanfictions in a good mood. And I'm glad you didn't expected Helen to be evil. xD

Thanks for the comennt, tmhall. Blaineley is so awesome. xD And I'm glad you like Crystal, loved the runway challenge, and will miss Yumi. I'm also glad that you hate Kasey and Helen. xD Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 17:14, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I just finished chapter 2, and I'll miss the bird attacks and Lancelot, xDD, but I'm sure Gull would apologize to him for the angry birds. I'm really loving your animal and nature rich story! This is fun. Thanks! :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  19:53, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Jay. :D I'm glad you are liking the story. I love animals and nature, so I'd sure add this into my story. Actually, it is Faustino who gets the animal attack. xD But yeah, he Lancelot was fun to write for. And he takes Gull's apologize. :) Thanks for the comment, I appreciate that. Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 20:20, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ooops! I got Faustino right when I apologized on his character page, at least. :3 And I'll comment more when I read some more chapters. :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  06:39, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

I loved the Rowing chapter! Great challenge, and super character development. I hope her team is smart enough to vote Helen off the next time they go to eliminations, but knowing Total Drama...probably not. I've finally identified Faustino in my head. "Faust" made a deal with the devil, and poor Faustino is paying for it. xDD JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  07:57, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Next Top Model was fun. I enjoyed all the outfits, and I even liked Lindsay's last one. It seems that only Starlight suspects Helen. I'm guessing that Starlight is mostly TD:ROTI's Dawn? I love them both. :D I'm really into animals and nature, too. After I finally get Gull's speech posted, you'll see how he can speak English, or any language we need him to speak. xD JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  08:43, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, Jay. :D I had the rowing challenge idea a long time ago. It was the first idea for a challenge I had. You'll see about Helen. I can surprise people, also. xD Faustino is glad that you remember him. xD I like America's Next top Model too (even though I'm a guy). xD You'll see more of Starlight and Helen in the future. ;) Her and Dawn? xD They did look like a bit. It wasn't on purpose, though. You'll see more animals, also. There's a few challenges (two or three) that will have animals in a important role. It will more in the fture, though. One of them is at the merge. And yeah, I'll read Gull's speach. :D Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 20:19, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Do you row? I've paddled, but never rowed. Yay, surprise! Faustino is fun! Animals!!!! :D xD I think you're on my Subscriber's List, but if not I'll be sure and notify you anyway. ;) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  01:53, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I read the new chapter and really liked it! I was glad to have more background on Orlando and Catheryn, though I feel like that might not be the whole story. Helen was being kinda mean, which she should be careful of, She lost some important allies today and that could harm her in the future. I liked the challenge and found the booby traps interesting. I was really sad to see Fatine and Johanne leave. I had a feeling Johanne would leave but I still liked her and thought Fatine would last longer, nor did I think she was boring. I certainly didn't expect a double elimination. I did feel that Johanne would leave since she injured herself. Really great chapter Bruno, and I'm dying for the next one :D Rhonda is the meanest, vilest, ugliest, stankiest, crankiest, won’t even say high to your momma, cheapest, creepiest, arrogant sea witch in all the seas! And I’m not very fond of her either.  06:58, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! This episode was awesome. :D I'm shocked that Joanne got sent home because an injury, being a slotfiller, but it's an original way to do it. Fantine, I think she was boring, and that she would of been sent home first. Like Rhonda said, Helen was pretty mean, but I'm still rooting for her in the WGC. :P Good chapter, can't wait for more.

Thanks Rhonda. :D I'm glad read the chapter. Catheryn and Orlando may have more story before th show. Helen was mean, but that's her way. You'll see what happens with her, as she have lost two allies. I'll be honest, this is my favorite challenge. I always loved those kinds of challenges. Sorry about Joanne and Fantine. That was a last-minute decision, actually. Joanne would leave next chapter, but then I decided that her injury could boot her off the show. xD Next one will be up sooner than this one. xD

Thanks for reading and commenting, Flamey. :D I felt Fantine didn't had a real storyline in this, and Joanne would leave after her becuase of plot, so why not a double elimination? xD Helen was mean, but what do you expect, she's the antagonist. xD Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 14:24, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm disappointed in chris for voting Joanne and fauntine off cuz they're boring. I like the maze challenge, it was funny with the traps. Sometimes I hate Chris.Tmhall02 20:05, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, tmh. Chris can be really unfair, sometimes. xD I'm glad you liked the maze challenge. :D Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 20:13, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

I read it yesterday, but didn't feel like commenting at the the time. I thought Faustino's team would lose and he would be eliminated for his bad luck... Maybe that was your plan :P. I kinda liked Joanne and her boringness, ironically I didn't like Fantine because she was boring XD I still don't get why Chris served them a buffet, tough. I&#39;m Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 20:21, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comement, Manatee. I purposely made it plausible that Faustino's team would lose. xD I tricked you. :p Joanne was fun to write for, with her proposital boringness. Fantine, I hadn't much fun writing for her. It was hard, also. I was going to use the buffet thing to something into the story, then I wrote everything and forgot. Then I remember that part later. It was meant that he'd expect them stuck at the maze for a long time, so he did the buffet because it would be the only thing they'd eat in that day. xD Get it? Or is this confusing? :p Anne Maria:  "Brick may not be attractive in any way, but he is still a person." 20:37, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Danny wasn't eliminated? I'm not a psychic D: at least Sprink don't hate me now :P I was finding the challenge boring, until the Semi-aquatic egg-laying mammal of action. The secret figure is proabably Blaneley, but maybe it's your plan to make it seem like it's Blaineley but it's really... Chef Hatchet? Nah, maybe it's Heather, or Oprah Winfrey. Orlando wasn't one of my favorites, so, no problem in seeing him being eliminated. Manatee12 <font color="Green">"They call him Hermit, The Frog!" 16:45, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you aren't. I am the only psychic here. xD It was a boring challenge, but what can I do? How about creating interesting challenges? Wait, Perry the Platypus would do a great host. xD Why do you guesse it was Oprah? Now I'll have to change who's the secret figure. :p You'll see who's the secret figure... soon or later. *plays mystery song* Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  20:28, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

It's kind of late here, but I just finished your A-maze-ing chapter. :) I'll leave a longer comment later, but I loved the parrot leading part of the group out. xDD And two outs? Nice! JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  07:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

COOL! I'm glad Orlando got eliminated. He was just so.... rich. xD The challenge was really boring, up until the egg-laying part, like Mana said. :P And I think the figure was Blaineley. Or the other hand, I also think it's Heather. Can't wait for episode 7!

Thanks for the comment, Jay and Flamey. :D Nah, no problem, Jay. You will catch up soon, thanks to my slow writing. xD The parrot scene was funny to write for. And Flamey, I was jealous Orlando was so rich too. xDD I had plans for him, but the others all needed something else. You'll see soon who's the figure. It can be Blaineley, or Heather. Or even... Queen Elisabeth. :O *mysteriosuly vanquishes* :p Stay tuned for the next chapter, who may be up soon. xD Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  17:09, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I finally entered the F3C! :D I'm glad Orlando's out too. He was a bratty snob, and certainly wasn't making any friends. I loved <3 the guessing contest! xDD I thought that was funny too, about the guess of an egg-laying mammal. xD Poor Benny. I hope his team isn't too mad at him. <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z   Lady Gideon  17:04, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Jay. :) Yay that you entered the guessing contest, and you catch up also. :DDD Orlando really was a bratty snob. Glad you liked the guessing challenge. The egg-laying mammal part was my favorite from the chapter. You'll see if Benny's team is still mad at him. Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  19:47, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I just finished "Manhunt", and am sad that Benny is out. I L<3VED that Gull helped out, since the Raccoons obviously need all the help they can get! xDD None of that group are puzzlers, huh? :P And Mindy's reaction to Gull was totes adorable!! :) *hugs Bruno* Thanks! Gull seems to really like people now that he can understand them. :D xDD I enjoyed the challenge and the chapter! Great work! ;) <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  15:44, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yay, Jay! :D I'm sorry about Benny. I liked writing for him too, but I couldn't find a reason for him stay. Gull was really helpful to them. Gull is a celebrity now, so he had to make a cameo here. xD Mindy's reaction is based on a scene from the movie "Despicable Me". ;) Thanks for liking the chapter and the challenge. :D *hugs Jay* Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  17:00, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Great chapter, it seems like your writing have improved, and now I'm feeling even better to have chosen you as a collab partner. I haven't thought that Catheryn finding an idol immediately was some kind of deal with Chris, I honestly thought it was some lame attempt at causing a surprising elimination XD Aww, I liked Starlight, but I'm glad she ended up with Woodrow... Unless he goes on rodeos, in this case I suggest her to dump him and mark his butt with a burning iron for him to feel some pain. Ain't I an adorable person? :3 Manatee12 <font color="Green">"They call him Hermit, The Frog!" 18:21, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Mana. :D Yeah, my writing is better now. :P Catheryn's finding the idol was really a attempt at causing a surprising elimination... not sure about the lame part, though. xD As for Starlight, I loved writing for her, but I liked the idea for her elimination, and didn't wanted to scrap. Well, I forget about Woodrow going to rodeo, as stated in his bio. :P I've thought about a plot for this, that could work. xD Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  19:52, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Omg I love your work, I just finished all 8 chapters and just wow! This is really good, I'll stick arround for more!! Also one question do you think I can trace Kasey (and maybe Cliff) and add him in my comic book series? I need more characters for it and Kasey would be an AWESOME inclusion to the storyline, I have already thought out something in mind. Check out my profile to see what I'm all about and the comic stuff. :) Hoping to hear back soon! NoahRileyM 07:39, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the loving. :D Glad to know that you read this. A new fan is always appreciated. :) Chapter 9 is coming soon, so stay tunned. And sure, you can use Kasey and Cliff. ;) I'm curious about their storylines. :P Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  16:36, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome! :) I can't wait till Chapter 9, my prediction, Cliff or Woodrow goes home. :) And thanks!! NoahRileyM 18:35, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And I was right, Cliff is history! :DDD I really really hope Kasey returns, he needs another chance, perhaps he'll return at merge? :DDDDD NoahRileyM (talk) 03:39, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you were right. xD As for Kasey, you'll have to wait and see if he's going to return. ;) It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  22:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

The line about ponies barfing rainbows reminded me of a hilarious comicstrip I have to show you XD I would have a hard time writing a challenge like this, as I would have trouble in writing the characters' reactions to their teammates' death. Whn Catheryn mentioned Chris was dating a former contestant, I had Heather in mind, but maybe it will be someone unexpected like... Katie! Cliff wasn't interesting at all, so it wasn't that bad seeing him go. Apparently, he was just a plot device for Starlight, which is funny since Starlight wasn't even in the original version. I wonder what was Cliff's plot before. One thing that bothers me about this chapter is the title, I don't know if the mistake is intentional for the sake of the reference, but the correct form would be "And then there was one". <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 15:16, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I wanna see this comicstrip. For some reason, ponies barfing rainbows is something I like to see. xD Iactually had a hard time writing the challenge. Chris and Katie? That's possible. :P I'm sure Chris' girlfriend will surprise you... or not. As for Cliff, I liked writing for him, but he was the most expendable now, as I need everybody else for future plots. In the original version, Cliff's plot would be about him being lazy, yet surviving every elimination because of someone else's mistake. He then was going to be eliminated one chapter before the merge. :P As for the title, it's for the reference, but its mostly a mistake. :P It was originally "And Then There Were Fewer", but it's a Family Guy episode. :P Then, I changed it to "And Then There Were Thirteen", but I decided the actual title was better. :P It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  18:57, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Super Drama Bros was awesome!! And yay, Gull!! ;) I'm sad that Starlight is out, but she was happy and made a bunch of friends, so I'm glad. I loved that challenge! xDD Plush turtles and costumed interns!! xDDDD I could see it happening in my mind! :) Thanks! Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Any good or kindness I can show to any human being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.-Author Unknown 19:41, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I loved <3 "And Then There Was One"! Of course it made me think of The Hunger Games, but have you seen the movie "Clue"? This really reminded me of that one, too! Great twists and turns in this, and I'm glad about the person who won! I really like xxx. :) I also adore your picture for Super Drama Bros! I voted for it. Congrats on that! :D <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  20:24, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Jay. :D I loved this chapter too, it's my favorite, as of now. The challenge was partially based on the movie Clue. I love that movie, and I also like Tim Curry. :D I wanted to make something special for the person who won, because he's one of my favorites to write for. :D Thanks about the Super Drama Bros picture too. <3 It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I really like Tim Curry, too! The first time I saw him was in "The Rocky Horror Show", and I realized that he was doing the actual singing. In "Clue", I saw his comedic side. xDD Awwww!! Xxx is one of my favorites, too, as you can see in my FTWG. :) I'm really glad you enjoy writing for him! Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Any good or kindness I can show to any human being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.-Author Unknown 21:13, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I've never seen "The Rocky Horror Show". :( But I plan to. :3 Tim Curry is pretty awesome, anyway. And yeah, I realized you liked this xxx by your FTGC. xD I love writing for him (as I do love writing for all the remaining contestants). It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  22:06, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, I am so behind on commenting. I'm going to try and comment on everything I haven't yet soon, I promise. But for know I'm going to talk about the most recent chapter. Which was awesome! :DDD It was super funny and shocking!

I'm curious to see how Helen will do in the merge. Her alliance is off to a good start but Mona may jump to ship. As long as she doesn't betray Bitsy outright she'll be good :P Somehow I think we will see Cliff again while Helen is flirting with Danny L.

Sid's idea of sabotage is a good one :P I wonder if he'll try that at the merge. And Catheryn is right. The other teams will target each other most likely, which may cause problems.

XD I don't know if What The Heck was a reference, but I'm pretty sure supercalifragilisticexpialidocious was :P I'm going to try and make some more TD:PF references in TDWTH and in TD:UMV :P

I like the Olympics challenge. And why am I not surprised Helen and Lorelai are in the swimming challenge. I think Zachariah summed up what it was all about :P Poor Faustino. I didn't expect him to win, but I did expect him to get hurt.

XD I love how when Mona throws the basketball it is shown in slow motion, making it look like it will make it. Zach and Mona played a really good game though, and it was climatic. And when Mindy and Bitsy fought, I so thought Mindy was going to lose. But then she just plain beats Bitsy. XDDD

I expected Danny L to lose just so Helen could manipulate him :P The other challenges were cool. And XDDD at Lorelai and Mona taking forever at tennis. And at Chris wanting to do a badminton challenge! Glad to see an archery challenge though.

I love the game parodies Bitsy played :P Why was Faustino allowed to shot? I did notice that Catheryn hit the red ring and got nine points that got me confused when Sid hit a red one and got seven :P Although I have probably made worse mistakes :P

Yay Bitsy! You sweetheart! I was so happy she made it. I was feeling bad for her. And good job of Danny L. supporting her. XDDD I love how Zach does point out how it was kinda predictable. And I love Lorelai stating that only I can break the fourth wall XDDD Which is true >_> (JK :P).

And then I love how Blaineley just shows up! And then she quotes OHF XDDDDD OHF=Blaineley for sure! Yay for the birds! XDD Is it wrong that when Sid says he doesn't like Bitsy my reaction is that Bitsy and Sid make a cute couple?

I did not see Catheryn going :O I did think that Faustino would go and then use his idol. Wonder how he will use that...

Catheryn revealing secrets was even more shocking! I might have guessed Zach had a crush on Lorelai. I wonder how she will react to that. And now that Mindy has been revealed wealthy she maybe in trouble. And Faustino has a crush on Bitsy? They would be cute together :3 And Nigel is British? Well that isn't really too shocking or dangerous for Nigel :P It kind of makes sense with his name.

But Blaineley and Chirs had a child? I didn't see that one coming. Nor that Chris is not Crystal's father! :O Dang! That's quite a story, and I didn't predict that at all! But I'm glad that Chris loves Crystal :3

But Chris is dating Eva? Talk about desperate. I mean dating Chris? :P I'm curious to see what Catheryn will do!

I really loved the chapter! It had a great mix of funny and shock! Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if anyone will be returning...  Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese!  04:34, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

First, I <3 your huge comments, Rhonda. :D xDD I wasn't expecting anyone would read the latest chapter today. xD I'm glad it was both funny and shocking. :)

I have some great plans for Helen and her allies at the merge... You'll see if she will betray Bitsy or if there's more of Cliff. :P As for Sid, I also have some ideas for him too.

Every "What the heck" that appears here is a reference to your story. xD Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious was also a reference. There's a lot off references at this chapter. And yay for more TD:PF's references at your stories. :P We are both advertising each others' stories. xDD

I liked to write the Olympics challenge, specially because I'm currently addicted to the Olympics. Sadly, it's gonna end today. :( Helen and Lorelai at the swimming challenge was pretty awesome. :P And Faustino's injuries are also predictable. xD

The basketblal challenge was meant to look like Mona would win, but she didn't. :P That'd be my 3rd favorite match from the episode, after the swimming at the tennis' ones. xD I wasn't sure if Mindy winning would be too OOC or not, but I had to do it for the unexpected. I also liked the others matches, and as I said before, the tennis' one was one of my faves. xD Danny L. will be more manipulated, also. :P

I love making Bitsy's references. :P Catheryn's red ring thing thing was a typo. :P I wanted to do a lame predictable happy ending for the challenge, so why not Bitsy? :p And it's true, only you can break the fourth-wall. :P I admit, Blaineley only apperead to make that quote. xD Bitsy and Sid? You have some interesting couple ideas. xD

I wanted to do a unexpected elimination for a while... Catheryn was a really important character, so I guessed people would expect her to make it far. I wasn't sure about eliminating her, because I loved writing for her. But I had ideas for everybody else at the merge (and my OCD wanted the teams to be even at the merge. :P)

The secrets was meant to be shocking too. :P It was kinda based on Blaineley's TDWT elimination. It will play an important role at later chapters, though. Even Nigel being British. :P

I was glad that people expected Chris and Blaineley's being Crystal's parents, and Chris dating Blaineley, so the true revelations would be really a surprise. xDD Eva wasn't always Chris' girlfriend, though. :P It was Heather originally, but I felt it was too predictable. But yeah, she was really desperate. xD Thanks for the comment, Rhonda, and the next chapters will be up soon. ;) :3 "I'm Brazilian, I love Chelsey,   and my last name is really hard to pronounce."   — Bruno  06:18, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, interesting way to display who's competing in each match, Where have I seen that before?. Jk, it's not like I invented it and claimed rights :P After writing SSTD and reading this chapter I've come to a conclusion... It's impossible to make a basketball challenge interesting XD I loved how Lorelai contradicted herself by responding the fourth wall breaking with another fourth wall breaking. And I was right about Eva :O that was so random XD For some reason, I think Fausino will win, he seems so un-winnery. I almost forgot to say, I liked that Danny L. line when he comforted Bitsy XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 16:07, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mana, you've finally read. :P I totally didn't based the way of displaying the matches' on SSTD's. :p Really, I thought basketball's challenge would be interesting... I was wrong. xD I loved the fourth-wall beaking joke... that's the funny part about it... and the fact that it's true. :P And yes, Eva... you were right. I also thought about Sadie, Katie, Beth, Bridgette, and even Staci. :P Faustino... you will see... I already have the winner decided, so you may be right or not. >:D :P You liked something Danny L. said/did? :O I liked that line too. xD "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light!"   "Surrender now or prepare to fight!"  16:29, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hello it's me TMHALL02, the last four chapters were great so far. I'm very proud of Faustino and the rest for making it to the merge. Catheryn did make Chris and Blaineley look bad for revealing that Crystal is not Chris' father. So anyways can't wait for the next chapterTmhall02 (talk) 16:40, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

Hello it's me TMHALL02, sorry if I made a extra space when I was trying to send you a message. I was going to say that I loved the last four chapters. Catheryn made Chris and Blaineley look bad when she reveals that Crystal is not Chris' daughter after all. And during the find chef challenge, I'm proud of Fustino for winning his team and making it to the merge. So I can't wait for the next chapter Bruno. Tmhall02 (talk) 16:48, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I would be happier when Danny was eliminated, I guess I finally started liking him once he was Helen's dimwitted sidekick. I also liked the scene where they were romantically talking to each other and Danny says something like "let's look for the vomit", it was unintentionally(?) funny. I thought Chris would take the photo of the boy with the vomit, but only I would get that reference XD I also enjoyed my cameo in Alice's speech. I have various predictions now as to who will win, Mona, Nigel and Alice seem like classical winners, while Sid and Faustino seem to fit the unlikely winner category, so I think one of these 5 might win... Not very accurate, I know XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 18:02, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tm: Oh, Tm, I missed your comments. c: I'm glad to see you're reading this, though. :D Thanks for loving the chapters. Catheryn did make them look bad. :P And yeah, Faustino was an unpredictable winner for the challenge. xD You'll see how he will do at the merge. :P Next chapter will be up soon, also. :D

Mana: I thought you would be happier too. xD I was liking him more too now. :P Chris was actually gonig to show that boy's pic, but I forgot. :P I was gonig to add a link to the new, though. xD I knew you'd like your cameo too. xD You sure has a lot of preditcions... You'll be surprised when finding out the winner-or not! :p "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  23:01, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

The Olympics was a wonderful chapter!! :D Poor Faustino. Maybe he should pray for that curse to be lifted, somehow. ;P And Mona and Lorelai were pretty darn spectacular! Zach may have purposefully cost his team the challenge. Is he Scott in disguise?? :O :P jk jk Yay, Bitsy!! That challenge was epic!! And I love how you made her shot like a movie scene! ;) I'm glad xxx is still in the running, and I'm uber glad that Catheryn is O-U-T, OUT!! :) That was an awesome chapter!! Kudos on your writing, too! :) Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Things turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 23:31, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yay!! Lots of manatees in this chapter!! ;D I love that they stayed in groups even though they were merged. That just feels friendlier, somehow. And how did they get out of that hole? :/ xDD Also, nine lines after chapter 11's (theme song), Faustino asks, "Nigel, how's Grain Britain?" My mental image was Britain covered in 'waves of golden grainfields'. xDD Just thought I'd point out that faux pas. ;) Fun chapter! No one was dashing here, or racing there. It was fairly nice and relaxed! I'm looking forward to your next chapter! <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  00:11, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Awww, Jay, I missed your comments. :P Thanks for it. :D I loved the Olympics chapter too, it's currently my fave. :P Faustino's "curse" will play a important role in a later chapter. :P Zach is Scott? How did you found out? D: Jk :P I loved the challenges, and Lorelai vs. Mona was one of my faves. xD I liked Catheryn, though, she didn't had a important role later, so she had to go. Thanks for liking my story. :3 "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  00:17, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

You're very welcome, Bruno. I've missed reading your story, and I'm glad I caught up. You are an awesome writer, and this story has a lot of fun interactions and humor. I really enjoy reading it. :) Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Things turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 05:53, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Just read the losers chapters. I know this may sound weird coming from me, but my favorite part was the challenge, it had so much good dialogue XD Catheryn's opinion on Joanne, Fantine and Yumi was hilarious too :P That was actually your most humorous chapter, TBH. So yeah, I should have expected you wouldn't make Sid the winner, you don't seem the kind of writer who has unlikely winners, but I thought it was weird the fact he was getting quite some character development lately. Also:

“…Zachariah!” Chris tosses a shell to the grumpy girl.

You might want to fix that XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkRed">"What the heck was that wriggling piece of plywood?" 14:56, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

I wish someone could read this out loud for me. <font color="Pink">Brony forever <font color="Purple">till I die.   Not before then.  15:30, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

You liked the challenge? :O I loved writing the challenge, and Catheryn's moments just made me wonder why I eliminated her. :P I add a lot of humor because Losers chapters tend to be boring, and I didn't wanted to make people fall asleep while reading it. :P I wanted Sid to be a semi-developed character, because I wanted him to be a mystery. ;\ Thanks for pointing out the typo. xD Lorelai was at the bottom two, but for some reason I changed it for Zachariah. :P "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  21:17, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

We went to the Whale.....vomit. Ewww! xDDD That was a fun little adventure! And that was cool about the double winners! I hope Sid changes his attitude soon, or he will be voted off, and I'll miss Danny L's silly rap songs. ;P I've got one more chapter before I'm caught up again, so I might as well read it now. ;) brb! :D <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  18:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I love Starlight's "causes"! I'm glad you referenced Cosmic's caterpillars, and Rhonda. :) And I love that Crystal helped to break that fourth wall. xDD That was a wonderful chapter, since I've forgotten most of those happenings, now. And it was a great way to keep xxx and update us on 'Loser-ville"! Thank you! :) Gull thanks you, too, for supporting not hunting seagulls! xDD ;) Jay JLOM <font color="Red">Things turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 18:59, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Jay, I just saw your comment. :3 The Whale's chapter was really fun. xD Yeah, Sid was meant to be like this, and you'll see more of him later. I'll miss Danny L.'s raps too. :P And yay, you also read the losers chapter. :D One of the reasons I made the losers chapter, was to keep the readers updated about Loser-ville. xD I love making references, so I had to reference caterpillar’s rights and Gull. xDD :P And for Gull, no problem. It's always good to help my best animal-buddy. :3 "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  03:01, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

* Gull wing-hugs Bruno for his latest statement, and for protecting Gulls and caterpillars* ^g^ <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  22:03, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Just finished this chapter! So, the challenge was totally inspired by a Mario Party DS minigame, right? Now give me my reference-spotting cookie! :3 I thought Mindy's sugar rush would have some meaning this chapter, not necessarily a reason to be eliminated, though. I'm also curious as how Woodrow's idol will come in play. Well, my unlikely winner theory is over, as the two biggest candidates for that were eliminated in a row, so I'll stick with the theory that either Nigel or Mona will win. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="MidnightBlue">"And our friend Zeke is really nice, he likes Asian rice." 13:21, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, you are totally right about the challenge. :P *give Mana Angie's cookies* Mindy sugar-rush was meant to be just a joke, for no reason at all. xD Though, that wasn't the only reason why she was targeted. *shift eyes* As for Woodrow's idol, you'll see... and remember that we have two idols in the game, and some more hiden. As for the winners, you'll see if you are right. But you'll have to wait until the final 2. :P "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  20:06, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'm enjoying contemplating Woodrow's idol, and Bitsy's actions were truly inspired in this chapter! I'm totally sad about who got booted, but I'm looking forward to your next chapter! :) <font color="Brighgreen">Jay JLOM <font color="Green">If you think you'll lose, you've lost; for out in the world you'll find Success begins with a fellow's will, -Author Unknown 08:03, January 18, 2013 (UTC)

Just saw your comment, Jay! Thanks. :) Woodrow's idol will play an important role in a later chapter. Writing Bitsy's scenes this chapter was really fun. :P As for the eliminated person, I knew a lot of readers would be sad. I was sad too, because I really enjoyed writing for him, but I had to go with what I've planned for the story. :( "I CAN GET   LOUD TOO,   WTF!"  18:43, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

<p style="margin-top:1em;margin-bottom:1em;">Yay, new chapter! And it starts with... Lots of strtaegy talk... More strtaegy talk... Oh God, you need to stop watching Survivor >_> loljk.

''“We’re going to have. Wanna join us?” Woodrow asks''

I know this is a typo, but I laughed at this for some reason XD ... More strategy... More strategy... Oh, challenge! Aroo? What the heck is that, is it some hidden message like coal-me-dah? XD Woodrow PJ'ing <3 Oh, Woodrow is out, not surprising at all and- Wait, Woodrow used his idol after receiving the votes? I can live with that, I didn't like Zachariah anyway ;\ Oh, Chris is telling people to shut up way too much, by the way, just as an advice ^^ But I'm disappointed at you that the chapter is not called "Dead Day 14" >_> <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 18:44, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

You're a fast reader, Mana. xD Oh yeah, sorry for the strategy. :P No strategy-feast chapters anymore. ;\ Aroo is something is something I saw on "The Funny 115". :P It's a interjection when you're surprised, I think. :P And yeah, after the votes... The rules are the same as TDRI. ;\ :P Shut up! Well, I think Chris is just too much stressed... ;\ And I almost named this chapter "Dead Day 14", and dedicated it to Noncho. ;\ "I CAN GET   LOUD TOO,   WTF!"  18:53, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

This was a lot of fun! :D  And I'm starting to associate Bitsy with Izzy. Like, "Aroo?" xDDD  Is "The Funny 115" a cartoon? Reminds me of Scooby Doo. Although, he usually howls his name, instead. xDD  And I was gonna be SO unhappy when Woodrow was voted off. I'm kinda glad Zac's gone. And I adored those random bits of junk that Chris threw at the contestants!! :D  Very strategic chapter. :)  <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  22:01, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

It was really fun to write this chapter. :P Thanks Jay! "The Funny 115" is a site about Survivor. :P "Aroo" sounds like Scooby-Doo, though. xD And yeah, I liked Woodrow more than Zachariah, it was his time to go. :P Actually, Zachariah was my least favorite from the remaining characters to write for. xD Glad you liked it. :3 And yes, this chapter was really strategic. xD "I CAN GET   LOUD TOO,   WTF!"  01:25, January 22, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! :)   I'll have to look up "Funny 115", and I'm glad you saved Woodrow.  :)  I was imagining Chris scouring the beach for something different to throw at each contestant, and getting frustrated. xDDD  Great chapter! =)  <font color="Brighgreen">Jay JLOM <font color="Green">If you think you'll lose, you've lost; for out in the world you'll find Success begins with a fellow's will, -Author Unknown 06:03, January 22, 2013 (UTC)

Your welcome, Jay. :P Yes, "Funny 115" is pretty... funny. xD Look it up. :) And yes, Woodrow is one of my favorites to write for, and he's still has things to do. :P Oh, that'd be pretty epic. xD I should've done that with Chris. :P <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  04:35, January 24, 2013 (UTC)

Bruno, this story is amazing! The interactions are good, and all the characters are unique and intresting (except for Joanne, but I think that's what you were going for XD) I love when people change up the story format, and Crystal and Blainely do that, while both being g.oddess's <3 My favorites are Bitsy and Nigel tbh. I can't wait to read moreThe saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 23:23, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Bruno, this story is just amazing! I love Bitsy, and I want her to win so badly! I love all of the interactions, and I cannot wait for your second story, you've really came a long way since the first chapter you posted. Great work! -- Anne Maria:  I was on   Canada's Next Top Model!  23:26, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks Epic. ^-^ Yes, Joanne isn't really interesting... or is she? ;\ xD And yeah, I love writing for Crystal and Blaineley. They are both g.oddesses. :P Glad you love it so much. As for Bitsy and Nigel, I love writing for them too. :P You'll see about their fate. ;\ <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  23:32, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks Duke! :3 As I said, I love writing for Bitsy. You'll see more about her soon. ;\ My second story is coming soon, so stay tunned! :P Yes, I've been writing this for a long time. ;\ Hopefully, it'll be finished soon. xD <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  23:35, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

That chapter <3 Blaineley "Drama!" Paradise Falls <3 But really, it was a great chapter. The relationship with Mindy and Nigel <3. The challenge wass good (and totally not stolen off Survivor :p) I like the friendship with Woodrow and Nigel. Is Nigel his favorite deputy? :) :p The boots, though. </3 Botsy </3 Lorelai </3 Can't wait for more!The saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 22:16, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Great chapter! You finally got off your lazy butt and wrote one >.> I loved Blaineley saying "Drama!". <3 There was a lot of strategy, but I don't blame you, ever since I started watching Survivor I've been putting more and more strategy in my chapters. XD Speaking of Survivor, I loved the challenge. :P I may or may not use it in my story ;\ I loved the Survivor references too, like the Shii Ann "Stupid people" one (I assume that was a reference XD) and whatnot. Nigel PJing <3 And Bitsy and Lorelai </3 I loved them, but there are still a bunch of great people left. Nice chapter! Green eyes glare,  pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  22:33, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yay for two comments. <3 xD Thanks for the comments.

@Epic - Happy you liked it. :P Blaineley's "Drama!" <3 Yes, you'll see more of MindyXNigel next chapters. ;\ And no, the challenge was totally original. ;\ lol Yes, Nigel is Woodrow's favorite deputy. ;\ xD Kinda because they are the last two boys. :P I was sad about eliminating Lorelai and Bitsy, but I had to do it. </3 At least one of them may be back for future seasons, though. ;\

@Toad - Yay, you liked the chapter! Yes, I finally finished it. xD Blaineley "Drama!" again. <3 Ikr? Survivor changes our life. xD I guess I have to give Survivor a break. :P The original challenge. <3 I loved it, too. xD I'd love to see it on India. <3 xD You got Shii Ann's reference. <33 Nigel PJing. <3 And yeah, the elimination was sad. :c I just love all the characters left. xD

And hopefully, next chapter will be up soon. ;\ <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  23:00, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

My winner guess is out D: Meh, I actually expected her to get around 7th place and she did XD Nigel going back to his "Yeah" roots <3 Or was he always like that and I just JERealized now? ;\ I never cared too much about Bitsy, though, she was kinda boring. With what's left of the cast, I expect Helen to either get a cliché villain placement, or to win against Mona in the final 2. I just love predicting XD Oh, you might either want to change Lorelei's line in the beginning of the chapter, or change the rating to Peih Gee PG 13, as it allows one curse in the story. Also, can't wait for you to start revealing the S2 characters <3 <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:08, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, for the comment, Mana! :D :P Your winner guessing contest was close. ;\ xD Yay for you expecting her placement, though. xD I guess Nigel was always "Yeah", but not as much as he used to be in the beggining. And someone who didn't liked Bitsy. :O xD Yes, she was mostly there for gaming references and for being Helen's goat. :P But I actually liked to write for her. ;\ You'll see about your predictions. ;\ Oh, I forgot about that line. I guess I'll change it to PG 13. ;\ xD And the first S2 character will be revelead this weekend. :D <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  18:15, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Oooh, (drama)! Too bad helen was immune for the 62435th time, but I don't hate her, so that's okay XD Mona should have gone home instead, I just don't ike her for whatever reason, maybe because she feels like an obvious winner since the beginning, but she probably won't win XD Woodrow... well, I didn't really care about him. Hope Alice wins... and maybe unintentionally hurt more people in the way >:D <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 21:51, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Mana! Yes, Helen is an immunity w***e. :P But yay for you not hating her. And wow at you not liking Mona. :P You'll see if wins and her victory is really predictable. Yeah, Woodrow was likeable, I guess. idk. I feel like this f5 was kinda boring. ;-; You'll see if Alice wins or not... and she may or may not unintentionally hurt more people. ;\ :P <font color="00B7EB">If you have time to think of a beautiful end, <font color="87CEFA">then live beautifully  <font color="6699CC">until the end."  23:07, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Zac's Corner
So I had to make my own heading... to you know, avoid the spoilers :3 Sorry 'bout that!

(1 & 2) Right now my fav. Characters are Zach, Woodrow and Catheryn. Zach NOT because he stole my name and is living MY life.... but because he's actually pretty interesting in a way. He adds his own flavor to the show by trying to 'over-do' everything. I really liked him during the challenge, he shone the most then, especially when he begged Chris to let him dive again after all of the sharks were added!

Woody! I love country folk, (has nothing to do with living in the county side for a while... >_>. Maybe.) He's a fun addition to the cast. He's a team-player it seems (basically the opposite of my other zactastics...) but at the same time a bit of a ditz- speaking of which I think I might enjoy a pirate for dinner tonight. Do you think Woodrow would have a recipe that I could use?

Catheryn!! I adore her. (Basically because she's the head biz-nitch.) Her interactions with everyone during the introductions were fun, more specifically with Woody and Zach! When she found out they were both famous she instantly latched herself on, but later detached herself from the former. Her lines are always fun, and I can see her outing Orlando's secret at some point and causing either her or Orlando to get eliminated... Fingers crossed for Zacheryn though! Or a famouse-person alliance ;3!

WOAH Blainley <3 the one and only Q.ueen. Glad she's around and I love her interactions with Chris, she surprisingly has ~reason~ which is odd, but still great! Can't say Im sad to see Lancelot go, he wasn't exactly... the most interesting. But his lines were still fun I suppose ~ you always need that one wimpy kid! Will definately read more! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 14:00, January 7, 2014 (UTC)

Yay! You read it, Zactastic! :D Yeah, beware of the spoilers. Glad to hear about your favorite characters. :P Zachariah is a really fun character, I really like writing for him. :D He will have some good plots with someone, that you may or may not like. ;\ xD

YAY for Woodrow and country people! :D Yes, Woodrow is a team-player, he is kind of the leader of his team as well. :P Oh, I'm sure Woodrow has a recipe for you, her mother is a great cook. xD

CATHERYN! :D XD She is a fan favorite for this story, and is probs my favorite to write for. :o xD I love her interactions and lines too. :P You'll see about her and Orlando, they sure have a lot of stuff going on. :O You'll see about Zacheryn too. I can tell you they'll interact in some way. :P

And Blaineley, the one and only Blainerific queen! <3 :P Yeah, I had to add her to the story, I love her. xD Her interactions with Chris are hilarious, and one of my fave scenes to write for. She also won't just be here, she will have some important stuff with Chris later on. :O Yeah, Lancelot was fun to write for, but not one of my faves. :P He was mostly meant to be the first boot (even though he wasn't the first boot at first :o). Thanks for reading, Zac! :D <3 Goomila Kunis  =  G.ODDESS   ❤  22:22, January 7, 2014 (UTC)

(3) So a smaller comment, but that's only because I'm slightly confused at who people are and what just happened... aha.

First off, please, please, PLEASE. Go back and reread these early chapters. There are a lot of mistakes. I don't mind reading the grammar errors, but there are a number of places where you have put the wrong character name in speech, as well as other places. This makes it even harder to understand exactly who is who... Aswell, I have a hard time understanding exactly who is who when it comes to the 'f' names, but only because neither really seems to do very much...

Onto actual story points... WHAT? Just happened. Like for cerealz bro? Helen x Kasey was 100% not legit? I started off peeved at Kasey for using Helen, and I was going to write an angry comment when she was eliminated! But that never happened, and now I adore Helen for being the smarter person!

As for suspense, I am glad to say I didn't know which team would lose the challenge! You made it so either team could have lost and something would have happened, Catheryne and Orlando, or Helen and Kasey. Speaking of Catheryn, still loving her, but she seems to be in the 'right place' all the time now. Which tends to be a quality a mary sue could have. As for Orlando, I want to like him, but his only interactions are with Catheryn.

Mindy/Alice/Joanne. I don't understand what makes Joanne so boring? She seems pretty fine to me? aha. As for Mindy, her new-found relationship seems awkward? We don't really have any feelings for her or Nigel at this point, and then they just suddenly have a relationship? It's not bad, but I think deving up either character first would have been better, as now all I will know either character for is being the boyfriend/girlfriend of the other. On a side note GO YUMI GO!

I'll be sure to read more as time goes by!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 14:01, February 2, 2014 (UTC)

(4) Blah! You know how I was loving Helen? She can leave now. I don't like her anymore. She's part Heather, part Scott and that's just an icky combination. I was hoping she was more of a girl-power gal than what she's turning out to be -- a mary sue. She has had a perfect game so far and I can't wait for something bad to happen to her!

I loved Blaineley this chapter! She's constantly reminding me why I frickin' love her! Her conflict with Chris is awesome as always and her bit with Chef is fun! I hope Crystal sticks around a little longer, she's something else, but fun nonetheless! LINDSAY AND HEATHER <3 <3 I loved the two cameos! They both made the chapter all that much better... Also DannyL's changing scene!!

Sid, and Ben are still sucky. But Zach... what, what has happened to him </3 Or maybe I was just blind this entire time! Has he always been such a jerk? He seemed to atleast care a little bit last time... but now </3 Woodrow and the love triangle is still interesting, its not forced into the spot light, but its still there! Cliff seems to be a little decieving, and I feel bad for Starlight, she seems clueless!

So YUMI! She literally was just becoming my favourite ever! And then boom. HEADSHOT. may she rest in peace.... because she was a true princess </3 I HATE YOU HELEN OMG OMG RAGE RAGE QUIT OMG    Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 20:36, February 4, 2014 (UTC)

Yay! You read more! :D Now I feel bad for not reading more Frozen... I'm such a lazy bum. x( I've been planning on fixing the grammar from early chapter for a long time. But again, I'm lazy. xD I'm glad you liked HelenXKasey's plot, and Helen. :P It was sure unexpected. :P Joanne isn't a boring character, but in-story she's a normal, flat girl and that's it, so people think she's boring. :P

As for chapter 4... aw. :( xD I'll be honest, Helen is kinda Heather-ish. :P Hopefully you'll like her again in the next chapters. BLAINELEY! <3 I not only love her in the show, but I love writing for her. :P She's hilarious. Yah, Sid and Ben are kinda ignored, not gonna lie, they are not my favorite characters. ;\ Zach will get nicer as the season progresses, don't worry. :P Sorry about Yumi. :( I really didn't have a lot of ideas for her. :( Hope you like other characters though.

Thanks for reading, Zac! :D Goomila Kunis  =  G.ODDESS   ❤  23:52, February 4, 2014 (UTC)

(5) ... What. You can't keep doing this to me Bruno! My faves can not keep getting eliminated! It's just not cool, but it seems to ALWAYS happen in stories. Joanne didn't do much this chapter though...except for randomly falling, and ~dying~. The major issue I have with most of the eliminations is that they are slightly obvious... but that might just be me?

There was no Blaineley this chapter... did she get lost in the maze?

I liked the challenge though! It was just what the story needed, it allowed the characters to interact more, and reallys how who they are to some degree! BEN did SOMETHING. like what?! And I actually kind of, partially like him... Maybe.

Helen continues her tyranny, without anyone realizing it... When is Catheyrn going to get evil queen eliminated? Please be soon! Speaking of, liking the expansion on Catheryn and Orlando... Not a big fan of Orlanda still, I'm pretty sure he has a very limited vocabulary...

The love triangle has been getting teased lately... I'm expecting a big something something in the next chapter! Maybe, hopefully Cliff gets sent packing? But I'm not too sure why Star seems so sad lately... Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 00:41, February 5, 2014 (UTC)

Wow, another chapter? :O :P Thanks for reading and commenting. :D Sorry about Joanne. :P I didn't have any plots for her, so she had to go. :( I forgot about Blaineley this chapter. It was a constant problem in the story, tbh. :P Glad you like CatherynXOrlando! :D There will be more about them soon. ;\ Also the love triangle. It will be the main plot in a chapter coming soon, so stay tuned. :P Goomila Kunis  =  G.ODDESS   ❤  00:54, February 5, 2014 (UTC)

(6) The secret is finally revealed... And D'awww! Poor Catheyn... having a possible romance being ripped from her! And to be honest I could care less about Orlando, he didn't do very much during the entire story, and the big ~reveal~ lacked luster because he wasn't built up as a character.

Well I was hoping for Lorelai/Zachariah conflicts... but I guess a friendship between the two is cool too? Maybe I guess so anyways. I'll see how it goes! And them possibly ganging about against alpha female Catheryn? And just exactly are Chris's secrets? Hmmf!

The Migel scene is just ugggh. it puts the two characters EXACTLY where they were a few chapters back, with no real progress whats so ever. And the love triangle is starting to grow cold, with Cliff becoming a lazy sack of potatoes, it makes things a tad bit obvious...

I would comment on the challenge, but it still confuses me... sorry </3! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 01:34, February 5, 2014 (UTC)

(7) One of the biggest issues I have with 'twists' in fanfiction is that by the time they get revealed. They are ALWAYS USED. This makes it overly obvious what's going to happen. The ordering of things in the chapter could have been changed to make the idol being played more shocking. What if Catheryn was given the idol and none of the contestants even knew the idols were around? I feel like that would have been more shocking for the reader, and the contestants... not that I'm not sad that Catheryn gets to stay over Benny!

In other news LorixZac? I don't know how I feel about their friendship,... mostly because it's more of a mutual using of the other person than an actual friendship, but I enjoy how Lorelai gave him a test of his medicine... And how they ALMOST got Catheryne eliminated. They are the power duo on their team... if only Catheryn could get some dirt on them...

As for the other team, Nigel and Mindy show no signs of being in any type of relationship so I don't see why they ~had~ to get back together in the last chapter. But then again lots of things confuse me story-wise in the story... Exactly why is Mona still here?

Can't say I'm sad to see Benny leave though! Good riddance! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 02:09, February 5, 2014 (UTC)

(8) Warning Quality Impovement is approaching! This chapter was a definite step up from the previous bunch! More characters actually did things! Which is good, considering how before this chapter it was always the same select group of people who would do, well everything!

Can't say that I am sad to see Starlight go though. I don't know why people like her. All she really did in the story was 'date' two boys, she never interacted with anyone asides from the two, and she wasn't very interesting on her own either. That being said I am glad she 'choce' Woodrow before she left. This means Cliff definately has no reason to stick around anymore and will hopefully leave next. He's another one of those characters who literally does nothing.

The challenge was great! Really, definately my favourite so far I think! It showed more development for all of the characters... It even showed a heart-broken Woodrow D'awwww </3; And YAY! Zach/Woodrow conflict was continued into this chapter! Hopefully it keeps continueing?

I do enjoy the story, and I think now you have a (much) better handle on how to fairly give screen time... So fingers crossed! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 10:10, February 5, 2014 (UTC)

(9) Finally the sloth has been eliminated! I think your story could be a lot better if the elimination order was tweaked... a lot of the characters who don't do anything made it further than some of the interesting characters.. I mean Cliff and Sid were still around this far! I guess Cliff makes some sense for Cliff x Starlight x Woodrow... but even then that wasn't exactly something that had to be stretched so long!

The challenge idea was great! But it fell short due to it being over really quick, and the lack of description made it hard to follow and easy to skim over. I was hoping that the chapter would let Mona and some other characters shine more... but it didn't it just showed that characters like Mona and Nigel are basically dead weight.

Speaking of, Nigel and Mindy, and Alice! The first two are just so off-putting, when they are together they turn into the most boring couple ever, because they don't do anything! And when they are seperate they have such strange one-liner lines... They could be such a better 'Migel' IF they were to blend their traits when they were together...

Woodrow seemed so sad this chapter and that was upsetting!! But it's nice seeing a charcter develope further as he goes into the story... Zach and Lorelai? That's an interesting duo, and I LOVE how they stalk Catheryn! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 23:55, February 5, 2014 (UTC)

4 in a row? xD Let's go:

(6) Aww, Catheryn won't have a showmance... or will she? :o ;\ :P Yes, Orlando wasn't very developed. He was mostly a plot device tbh. ;\ Zach/Lorelai have more stuff coming up. :P You'll see it. Aw for Migel. But yeah, I can see why you don't like it. Same for Cliff. :P

(7) Yes, it was kinda predictable. ;\ xD Glad you liked that Catheryn stayed over Benny though. :P Again, Zach/Lori has a power plot going on for them. Coming soon. :p

(8) Oh, nice! :D :P I wasn't good at spreading screentime tbh. ;\ Yah, Starlight is pretty popular. I personally liked writing for her, and the traingle plot. I loved that challenge too. xD And heartbroken Woodrow. </3 xD

(9) Nice to see you're glad Cliff is out! :P I loved the challenge too, but yah, I'm not good with descriptions. ;\ Sorry about Migel. :P But glad you like Zach/Lori and Woodrow! :D Goomila Kunis  =  G.ODDESS   ❤  00:13, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

(10) EPIC challenge! They have really improved since the first few to be honest! This challenge was able to show who would do well once merge hits... which seems to be next!? I think that Zach wanted Catheryn out since the archery challenge? And that's why he made her shoot instead of him.... but the real question is, if they wanted to win, why not have Lorelai, Catheryn and Zachariah shoot? They are obviously the strongest on the team? Nonetheless, Catheryn left with a BANG! And I couldn't see it any other way! Blaineley and Chris.. OMG but that's pretty interesting way to have 'started' their conflict! ... PSSST OMG EVA!?

Mindy, Nigel, Sid and Mona still seem to do nothing. Yet they still do something... You know what I mean? They're basically the DJ of your story so far anyways. They make it far into the show, but they aren't exactly interesting in anyway shape or form.... Well, DJ had the whole scaredy cat thing. NOW I will say this because that comment seems overly harsh, they have improved as characters as the story progressed, because you took more time to write for all of the characters, but in general they still haven't POPPED. For me, at least.

Danny and Helen sitting in a tree... K-I-S-S-I-N-G! You would think that the boys would have caught on to her tricks by now? But I suppose not! I'll be looking forward to seeing just how long they last, as Helen has a tendacy of ditching her toys fairly often! BUT atleast this gives Danny some more story! And who knows, maybe he'll flip on her?

Zachariah!! I don't know if he's the villain or what to think! But I KNOW something is going to happen next chapter, with his crush being revealed! And I CAN NOT wait! Because I love him, and I love Lorelai!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 11:42, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

Wow, you're almost catching up. I should write some more. xD Glad you liked the challenge, it was one of my faves. And yep, the merge is next. :P And yep, Zachariah pretty much threw the challenge, he really wanted Catheryn gone. :P And yay that you like Chris/Blaineley's conflict. It will play a HUGE role in the story later. :o

As for these characters, I can see where you're coming from about them not doing much. I can asure you that at least one of them will get more screentime post-merge. I can't say you'll start to love them or they will be huge characters, just that they will do more. :P

So, first Mana and now you? I guess Helen makes Danny a much better character. xD You'll see about them. You'll see more of LoriXZac too. :o Thanks for reading, that means a lot, Zac! :D Goomila Kunis  =  G.ODDESS   ❤  16:46, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

(11?) First off.. MINDY CANT LIVE WITHOUT HER BFF ALICE! WHAT ABOUT NIGEL. omg this just makes me like her even less! Anyways, I'm glad we got to see more of ALL the characters this chapter! But you can just look at the rankings for more info on that... SPOILERS: Things havent changed much!

The challenge was a good idea for merge, it allowed the contestants to mix and match more than they might have in the past! Also! I love how Helen searched with Danny- seperately! It really gives her much needed character.

Bitsy and Woodrow winning? That's shocking actually. First off the fact that they would work together in the first place, and secondly that Chris let them both win? Not that I'm complaining I like the two of them!

YEAH YEAH YEAH. Wait nononononono! Lori x Zach </3, I'm glad that Catheryn's secrets are still mumbling around at the resort, but why does Lorelai have to be so cold hearted! I was looking forward to them getting even closer!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 20:56, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

(12) I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter!! I loved Catheryn in it! And Orlando!! Starlight was MUCH better as a loser than she ever was back at the actual show... But in general, most of the characters were meh.

Joanna and Yumi... Well! They are still awesome! They continue to remind me why I like them in the first place! They're two fun characters who were both robbed from the show!! I was HOPING Joanne could returh... but no. Instead she saves game bot Helen...

BUT in other news Sid is gone. CELEBRATE EVERYONE!! That only leaves Nigel, Mindy and partially Alice for boring characters who NEED to go soon! That being said, Mona is still MEH, she actually became a real-live person in the past chapters, BUT now that Sid is gone, who acted as he character crutch, I have my doubts on what will become of her.

No comment on the challenge... It was interesting, albeit long. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 11:07, February 7, 2014 (UTC)