User blog comment:That Epic/Wiki Project- Chapter Two/@comment-30611205-20140130220611

​Character Development: 

I kinda liked the first chapter, as there is alot of potential for great plot points but the way I see it is that a few characters who didn't get development (besides terrible development) in the original show, didn't get the personality I hoped they would (it was wishful thinking though).

Trent: I know all he did was focus on Gwen but, now that she's gone, we need him to get personality! Honestly, Trent HAS the potential of a brilliant character if only they persued it. His personality could be a little more diverse and realistic, he could become less bland and actually do stuff. He has a music career everyone forgot about, he could be more inspired! Just an improvement, and it'd be great!

Ezekiel: Even though the Zeke isn't a personal favourite of mine, think about what could be done with him. He is home-schooled and, because of this, doesn't have social skills! Also, despite his pretend ego, I believe he's just looking for attention, he doesn't have much or any friends so he puts on a fake personality so he can finally be noticed in his life, he's persistent as he was embarrassed of being out first twice and believed he could take the money, I know the rest of his appearances make him just weird but if you look at his intentions, I can't help but feel sorry for him. And, he could be really insecure on the inside, especially around girls as they caused his sexist comments in the first place. He could be gullible and always trying to do what he thinks is Right yet it's not always the case or he does it wrong (this is way too long)

That's it for today, maybe I'll do some tommorow but OK, just keep that in mind