Talk:Chlöe

I don't like to comment on Character pages because prehype/expectations/therearesomany but I try to comment on one per story!

I really think you should include the music video somewhere on the page, or atleast mention it in the trivia. Not that your bio didn't paint a great image of Chloe, but her movement and actions alone in the video portray her in a way you can't do justice, atleast in a bio. I think that if you really try to, you will be able to mimic her actions, and overal persona really well and that it will make her as a character ten times greater.

One of my biggest concerns is that she might become too Alejandro ( I cant spell his name, what kind of TD fan am I?) like. By saying that, I mean nothing in her bio shows her as a weak contestant. If anything it paints her as a mary-sue for the show. Which doesn't seem very fun. Which is ironic because she is my favourite character right now! (Not because she's the only one revealed...) But because she seems like she could be a really, really interesting villain. Or anti-her. She is THE character who could easily stir the pot around. Whether or not you have planned out your elimination order yet, I suggest keeping her in for a long time. As long as you avoid her becoming a game-bot, (atleast avoid it pre-merge) she could be a really interesting character. I feel like she can easily interact with any character you put in front of her, beause of her rumour-based nature.

Again, I don't know what you have planned so far BUT this is what I would personally love to see as part of her story. I think it would be amazing, and karma-based if a character she had eliminated due to a rumour returned. While at the eliminated location, the character and the others were able to piece it together that Chloe started the rumour, and many others. And then when the character comes back, they could black-mail Chloe... After all sometime a pawn just-so-happens to make it across the board, and it's a game changer, right?

If not... I would love to see Chloe start a rumour that ends up being true. Just to see her reaction!

All in all I feel like she can be amazing! Amazing art-work by Bruno aswell! I wish you the best of luck for your story!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 00:19, December 30, 2014 (UTC)