User blog comment:Nalyd Renrut/This is It/@comment-1153194-20090819223004

I agree with Sunshine here. Copy and paste a chapter and revise it on the new page. If you don't mind my saying, I would love for the story to have more detail and conversation, as opposed to talking about what a character said or did, have them actually saying it or doing it. I honestly haven't read it all, since I'm fairly new here. I find it easier to read a story as it comes out, as opposed to already being posted (it seems more intimidating). So I would definitely read the revised edition, and it would be kind of like reading it for the first time, while still knowing the outcome. ~ Longest blog reply evah!