User blog comment:Dburns37/Total Drama Island: Challenges that are insane/@comment-1621439-20100724223717

I'm sorry, Dburns. It is not a very good story so far. I mean, no offense.

Here's some advice my friend. Try to keep your characters dialouge more realistic. Sentences like, "Chef: I'm Chef Hatchet and for the next 7 weeks you will eat whatever i cook," just aren't very realistic. You have potential, I mean, there was potential for me apparently, and Total Drama Survivor sucked way back then... Anyway. Try to get different kind of characters, like, this is more a teenager wiki, as that it the closest range of age on the wiki, so maybe if you had some more mature characters from maybe a more mature-like show. I mean, if you're young, you should still watch what you write, just keep it a little older, but not too old. You know what I mean? I'm sure you're a pretty young boy/girl, so I can understand this kind of writing. You really do have some writing potential my friend. :)