Talk:Total Drama Frozen

Polls
Which contestants' story for you like best? Andre Britt Dania Emmett Frosty Hannah Ivy Jade Kaleb Lexi Mitchel Rosalie Saber Twilight Vishal Zaina What was your favourite chapter? One Two Three Four Five Six Seven Eight Who do You Want to Win? Britt Frosty Ivy Jade Mitchel Rosalie Saber Twilight Vishal Zaina Who should return? No one Andre Kaleb Dania Emmett Lexi Hannah

Winner Guessing "Contest"
Just put your signature beside the character you think will win! Only one per character, and per user. ♔ ~ Fyre ~ ♕    Living in a Fairy Tale  18:49, January 6, 2013 (UTC) '''Winner shall get to choose the new host for the next season. '''    Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 18:47, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Andre~

Britt~ We're so alike :3  Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 18:56, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Dania~

Emmett~

Frosty~ STOLEN! Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 21:02, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Hannah~  Sunslicer2  Words are just words. They get in my way. 19:09, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy~ "Eat yo' rice!" "Don't tell me to do nothin'."  "Eat yo' rice!"  20:27, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Jade~  Break through the limits!  Limit  Break!  20:58, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Kaleb~  Leave it to Wikia  to get your username backwards.  Avery...I mean Fire.  21:14, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Lexi~ Manatee12 "The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 18:54, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel~  We found dove in  a soapless place  ...  16:36, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Rosalie~ Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 18:55, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Saber~ Space was here and he left something real special for ya! 22:21, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Twilight-The saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 19:33, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Vishal~

Zaina~

Final Three Guessing Contest:
Here you can predict which three contestants you think will be in the final three! You can only have one active guess at a time, so if your old guess is proven false you can put a new one- But remember no repeated guesses. The winner will get to create/choose a character to return for the second season!     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 18:57, January 26, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy, Dania, Mitchel. Manatee12 "The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:26, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel, Lexi, and Rosalie  We found dove in  a soapless place  ...  16:37, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Britt, Saber and Ivy. Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 16:53, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Lexi, Emmett, Twilight. Manatee12 "The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 10:47, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel, Lexi, Twilight. Manatee12 "The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 12:32, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Twilight, Mitchel, Ivy. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:44, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

General Comments
Definitely ready to see your work. ~  Bbhinton15   ~ Give   <span class="buttonlink" title="Edits & Contributions">your     heart     a break... ♪ 00:58, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

This will be, like, the first I've read of Zac's :o Can't wait, big buddy :3 <font color="Red"> Leave it to Wikia  <font color="Blue">to get your username backwards.  <font color="Silver">Avery...I mean Fire.  01:10, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

D'awww! Thanks you two. I hope to not dissapoint, it's been awhile since I've written third person... So yeah D: <span style="color:#FF9968; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; border-top-right-radius:1ex; font-family:century gothic">♔ ~ Fyre ~ ♕   Living in a Fairy Tale  01:24, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

I have wanted to see how Zac would write a TD-Comp. Looking forward to this! ^_^ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:08, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Aha. I'm looking forward to seeing how I write it too! <span style="color:#FF9968; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; border-top-right-radius:1ex; font-family:century gothic">♔ ~ Fyre ~ ♕   Living in a Fairy Tale  20:30, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Mwahahaha with Andre gone I'm one step closer to winning the Winner Guessing Contest, and also great job I highly enjoyed Chapter 2! Space was here and he left something real special for ya! 18:48, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, thanks.I`m starting to be able to throw in some of the plot elements, but it might take a few more chapters for things to get settled. Though... I wouldn`t get too excited, this may not be the last time you hear from Andre.... Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 18:50, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 1-4
... Read the line. Like just above this. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 20:11, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I'm reading that as I said I would. Loving the intern, I don't know exactly why but I think he works pretty well with Lindsay. I still can tell if your story is more humour-based or plot-based, but it's kinda difficult to tell that from the first chapter >_< My favorites so far are Lexi and Kaleb. Especially want to see how/if his team will deal with him. Okay, onto the criticism part: I didn't see anything wrong with the writing (Good job!), so I'll just point out that Lexi's hair change colors during the story. Once you siad it was brown, then it was blond XD Looking forward for more, and I wonder who's that "elf"... <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 21:12, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Meep. You want to know the worse part? I had to edit out a section where I said her hair was Red.... I'm off my game today... xD But thanks, glad you're enjoying it. There is plot to the story, just, I kind of wanted to avoid doing much sense I really do hate introductions. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:16, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ooh, so the elf is actually... An elf? o_o I was expecting a surprising logical explanation, but I think the surprise came in him joining the competition :P I was sure it was Dania who was missing in the finish line, guess that was Andre. Due to that, his elimination wasn't a surprise, but what can I expect from the first elimination? Aww, Lexi didn't do much this chapter, but Kaleb is still Kaleb ^^ Oh and I think you typed "flushed" instead of "blushed" once... Unless the word flushed can be used in that context. It's just that I picture Hannah flushing a toilet XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:33, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

Umm. Whether or not Frosty is an actual elf is still up for discussion, while he claims to be, it's obvious that characters like Ivy and Vishal don't buy it 100%- So that logical explanation could still be on its way. Ah, yeah the challenge was odd enough, and I had to try and jump around without actually showing that Andre wasn't there. I didn't really expect it to be a surprise when Andre was eliminated. However it served its purpose of fueling the Ivy-Dania "friendship". I adore Lexi as a character, and I realized she didn't do much in the chapter aswell, but it was not intentinal. As for Kaleb, he is in fanct still Kaleb. I think, but don't hold me to it, that flushed can be used in context, but yeah I see the imagery I may have misled in there, and I will prolly change it out later. Thanks again for your comment(s) :)     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 23:39, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

Wow, chapter 3 is up already? You write faster than Sprink O_O So, Ivy and Jade so far remind me of Lindsay and Heather, not that I don't like them, but I'm hoping to see something to make them more original. I really liked Frosty and Emmet's interaction, looking forward to more of them. And Twilight is so adorable, but I think her naïveté may cost her the game. Aww, my favorite is out D: well, I'm starting to warm up to other characters, such as Frosty, Emmet and Twilight. Kaleb can be replaced :P  <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 18:35, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Aha thanks mana for reading! It means bundles to me. I try to keep it a chapter a week, but who knows how long that will last. Lindsay and Heather is a very fair comparison to Ivy and Jade. I will say I've done that on purpose, but they will split from their counterparts as some point soon. I'm not exactly sure what Emmett and Frosty did this chapteer asides from the exercises, but thanks xD. Twilight is one of my little angels. As for her being naive, we shall see where that lands her- I'm sure you'll like it. I'm glad the other characters are becoming better for you, I'm trying to make many likeable, while trying to add in some drama. Yeah I was debating on whether or not I could drag Kaleb along a little longer, but if I did that, other stories would get torn and I dontt want that! I do promise thoufh, if I ever make a second season he will be part of the cast! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:10, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, it's Mana. I'm on my grandpas computer and can't log in, so I will make this short. First, you just got more awesome for referencing Ace Attorney. And as a criticism, you should use more commas. Tomorrow when I get home I will expand this comment.

Aha, yeah I make... random references based on what Andre decides to PM me about on Facebook at the time of writing. And yeah, I can see that becoming an issue. I'm not a fan of grammar, but I'll try and add in some extra comma's next chapter ^_^. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 23:06, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, expanding the comment, the characters seemed to be more unique this chapter, and it's great to see them developing a personality of their own, I also enjoyed Ivy's long confessional thorout the chapter :P Dania being eliminated, well, I saw it comming when it narrowed down to her and Ivy, but it was still surprising. And I guess my F3 guess has to be redone, even though I was never really serious with that one, it was more of a response to you saying the F3 was obvious XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 09:22, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, most of the characters will start to stand on their own two feet starting from chapter four and on, which will hopefully led to better interactions and friendships. Ivy's long confessional... She sure does like to complain :P. And I suppose your F3. Does need to be remade, but I understand the last one being a joke, xD Who knows maybe you'll get it right this time!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 10:26, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 5-7
Looky looky! I posted chapter five!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 01:20, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yay, new chapter! Poor Brandon, but at least Zania and Lexi made the introduction good. Speaking of Zania, sometimes I forget she exists XD I'm sure I would get most references in this challenge if I watched Madagascar, but since I didn't... Yeah. Mitchel's remark about his friends being eliminated <3 I guess he should become Ivy's friend if you want her out soon XD Ooh, and about the characters based on existing characters, I have a guess. Would Rosalie be based on Bella from Twilight? Aww, you don't have to be sorry for posting the chapter late just for eliminating Emmet :3 <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 12:31, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

... XD I did not change the names of the characters who I referenced from. But yeah, the penguins made their first appearance, maybe not their last in chapter five. I tried to make it easy to follow whether or not you've seen the films, but that's never easy when you're talking about penguins. I never really planned for Brandon or Lindsay to be "good" hosts, but there are differences between the two, such as Lindsay can actually control the contestants and has (some) respect, while Brandon is teased. Zaina and Lexi :D I needed to have some newer friendships due to the Frosty-Emmett friendship dying, so I tried out a number of odd pairings this chapter (Mitchel and Ivy anyone?). Yeah... I decided to put Mitchel's comment in there if only to hint towards Emmett being eliminated, but I'm pretty sure based off of other things it was rather obvious his time was coming to an end (that tie!!). And finally (so long!), Zaina will have more to do starting in the next chapter, she's finally getting some real "story", I'm not exactly sure you can call it that though, aha. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 13:53, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Isn't it ironical how I'm the only one to read it, yet each episode someone I guessed is eliminated? >_< I loved the tribute to Lavigne, and I wish I had read it, why was it cancelled anyway? Ivy did seem less vilanious in this chapter, maybe because Dania is not there anymore, and also for Vishal to step up as a bigger villain. Speaking of that, I'm starting to see Britt in a better light, he seemed a bit vilannious in the first chapter, but now he is even pitiable sometimes. Aww, Lexi is out. I have to admit I thought I'd like her a lot more than I did, but I'll still miss her D: <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:43, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

I'm starting to think you're cursed!! Aha. Yeah, I hope people enjoyed the chapter- the only issue was it was slightly shorty and ergo a tad choppy, but I think it worked, to create a more surprising, hopefully, elimination. Lavigne was cancelled due to me finding out some information at the time in regards to an ex of mine, and I just couldn't bring myself to write. Ivy was never really intended to be a villain, but we shall see her story evolve more soon. Vishal... well I have no comment... Britt wasn't ever meant to seem like a villain O_o he was always just meant to be Hannah's boy friend, even though they really shouldn't be together in the first place- though it seems I failed to build on their relationship as much as I would have wanted... Originally, Britt was going to convince Saber to ask Hannah out... #Awks. Lexi.... I don't know how I feel towards her. At first I adored her, but then I tossed out her story- as it would have been too many couples.... Zaina x Lexi. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:35, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, it took some time but I read! I loved Brandon's bit in the intro, complete with that moment that will be forever dubbed as a VonKarma moment in my head XD And Vishal is still teaching Puck ball to Britt? I wonder when he will realize it'a hockey :P Hannah and the birds remind me of this disturbing movie I saw... Oh God, why? >_< I also love the random point giveaway in the challenge, Lindsay is a great host, at least for our entertainment XD  I'm enjoying this love triangle, even though I'm not a fan of them. It's that unlike the cleché ones, the original lover is the handsome guy, and the guy who replaces him is the nerd... Wait, Hannah is out? Yeah, I guess Saber went back to being the underdog. Well, one more reason for me to enjoy this plot! XD Oh, and in the whip cream scene of this chapter, I think you wrote "Mitchell" instead of Frosty :P <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 20:28, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, atleast you read it :D I rather it later than never! As for Brandon... I have no clue where I was going with that- but I;m glad you enjoyed him xD No clue who or what VonKarma is though? Yes.... Puck (wink wink) ball. I thought it would be nice for them to continue their interesting story of sports... aha. Hannah... Oh Hannah, you see, her story was never meant to be like this, never. But once I changed it to be more of a "bad" girl, I decided she should play with the birdies :D And I like Lindsay as host aswell, though she's not exactly as fun, personally as Chris was but I am working on it! I have no clue what I was doing with this love triangle type-thing. Like I said before it was NEVER meant to go like that, Britt was always meant to just, kind of catch on to Saber liking Hannah and kind of letting him date her instead- though I like how it ended up better... But yes, Hannah is OUT. She was...Meh. And ty I will adjust that now!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:48, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 8-10
A mini-comment for a mini-chapter :P Losers chapter! Those can be either incredibly boring or awesome if written right, and you did it! I loved Hannah-Emmet-Kaleb interactions, and Sierra taught about Beth about getting boys? I guess that wasn't a good idea of Beth :P By the way, you mentioned the jello reminded Trent of his girlfriend, if I'm not mistaken, that was a reference to TDI. However, the jello pool was Courtney's fear, not Gwen. If it wasn't a reference, you can completely ignore this part of the comment XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:49, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, yeah I adored the outed contestants, so I knew I had to have atleast one chapter just for them! Hannah-Emmett-Kaleb, this was again, just a random interaction session, due to me not really knowing what to do with the three, but I do agree, the end result was unique. Sierra and Beth... xD Aha yeah, I always wondered what would have happened if the two were to meet and get together, I guess I... found out? Trent and his fiance ;) Not girlfriend... aha. But it is a refeference, however it is not a mistake... take that as you will :) Thanks for reading, as always!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 16:58, February 24, 2013 (UTC)