User blog:Nalyd Renrut/What Do I Need

I'm writing a new Total Drama Losers, and I'll admit this chapter is kind of a clunker, but I'm wondering what you guys think the story is missing? Do I need more relationships, friendships, conflicts?

If you guys have any ideas for TDLosers, challenges, character stuff, please comment. Or if you gives have criticism for the story, please comment.