Talk:Total Drama Frozen

Polls
Who's story was your favourite? Andre Britt Dania Emmett Frosty Hannah Ivy Jade Kaleb Lexi Mitchel Rosalie Saber Twilight Vishal Zaina What was your favourite couple? Britt x Hannah Britt x Jade Emmett x Rosalie Frosty x Twilight Mitchel x Ivy Saber x Hannah Who's elimination upset you the most? Andre Dania Emmett Frosty Hannah Jade Kaleb Lexi Mitchel Saber Twilight Vishal Zaina Who do You Want to Win? Britt Ivy Rosalie

Winner Guessing "Contest"
Just put your signature beside the character you think will win! Only one per character, and per user. ♔ ~ Fyre ~ ♕    Living in a Fairy Tale  18:49, January 6, 2013 (UTC) '''Winner shall get to choose the new host for the next season. '''    Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 18:47, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Andre~

Britt~ We're so alike :3  Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 18:56, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Dania~

Emmett~

Frosty~ STOLEN! Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 21:02, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Hannah~  Sunslicer2  Words are just words. They get in my way. 19:09, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy~ "Eat yo' rice!" "Don't tell me to do nothin'."  "Eat yo' rice!"  20:27, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Jade~  Break through the limits!  Limit  Break!  20:58, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Kaleb~  Leave it to Wikia  to get your username backwards.  Avery...I mean Fire.  21:14, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Lexi~ Manatee12 "The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 18:54, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel~  We found dove in  a soapless place  ...  16:36, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Rosalie~ Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 18:55, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Saber~ Space was here and he left something real special for ya! 22:21, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Twilight-The saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 19:33, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Vishal~  Anne Maria:  I was on   Canada's Next Top Model!  23:31, March 4, 2013 (UTC)

Zaina~ -- Where have I been all this ti-i-i-ime?  22:21, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Final Three Guessing Contest:
Here you can predict which three contestants you think will be in the final three! You can only have one active guess at a time, so if your old guess is proven false you can put a new one- But remember no repeated guesses. The winner will get to create/choose a character to return for the second season!     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 18:57, January 26, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy, Dania, Mitchel. Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:26, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel, Lexi, and Rosalie  We found dove in  a soapless place  ...  16:37, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Britt, Saber and Ivy. Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 16:53, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Lexi, Emmett, Twilight. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 10:47, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel, Lexi, Twilight. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 12:32, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Twilight, Mitchel, Ivy. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:44, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Mitchel, Lexi, Ivy. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 15:08, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy, Jade, Saber. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 03:23, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy, Saber, Lexi. <font color="DarkViolet">Call Me Liam, <font color="OrangeRed"> Or Triple L, <font color="Yellow"> Or LLL <font color="Blue">Call me Maybe! :D 11:20, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I still have one last chance here XD Rosalie, Ivy, Britt. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 15:51, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Ivy, Britt, Lexi <font color="DarkViolet">Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! <font color="SpringGreen">Twerk It! Twerk It! Twerk It! 16:26, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Good job Manatee, on FINALLY Guessing the correct Final 3 :) Hook me up on chat or talk page for more info ^^     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 16:07, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

General Comments
Definitely ready to see your work. ~  Bbhinton15   ~ Give   <span class="buttonlink" title="Edits & Contributions">your     heart     a break... ♪ 00:58, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

This will be, like, the first I've read of Zac's :o Can't wait, big buddy :3 <font color="Red"> Leave it to Wikia  <font color="Blue">to get your username backwards.  <font color="Silver">Avery...I mean Fire.  01:10, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

D'awww! Thanks you two. I hope to not dissapoint, it's been awhile since I've written third person... So yeah D: <span style="color:#FF9968; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; border-top-right-radius:1ex; font-family:century gothic">♔ ~ Fyre ~ ♕   Living in a Fairy Tale  01:24, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

I have wanted to see how Zac would write a TD-Comp. Looking forward to this! ^_^ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:08, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Aha. I'm looking forward to seeing how I write it too! <span style="color:#FF9968; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; border-top-right-radius:1ex; font-family:century gothic">♔ ~ Fyre ~ ♕   Living in a Fairy Tale  20:30, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Mwahahaha with Andre gone I'm one step closer to winning the Winner Guessing Contest, and also great job I highly enjoyed Chapter 2! Space was here and he left something real special for ya! 18:48, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, thanks.I`m starting to be able to throw in some of the plot elements, but it might take a few more chapters for things to get settled. Though... I wouldn`t get too excited, this may not be the last time you hear from Andre.... Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 18:50, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 1-4
... Read the line. Like just above this. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 20:11, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I'm reading that as I said I would. Loving the intern, I don't know exactly why but I think he works pretty well with Lindsay. I still can tell if your story is more humour-based or plot-based, but it's kinda difficult to tell that from the first chapter >_< My favorites so far are Lexi and Kaleb. Especially want to see how/if his team will deal with him. Okay, onto the criticism part: I didn't see anything wrong with the writing (Good job!), so I'll just point out that Lexi's hair change colors during the story. Once you siad it was brown, then it was blond XD Looking forward for more, and I wonder who's that "elf"... <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 21:12, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Meep. You want to know the worse part? I had to edit out a section where I said her hair was Red.... I'm off my game today... xD But thanks, glad you're enjoying it. There is plot to the story, just, I kind of wanted to avoid doing much sense I really do hate introductions. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:16, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ooh, so the elf is actually... An elf? o_o I was expecting a surprising logical explanation, but I think the surprise came in him joining the competition :P I was sure it was Dania who was missing in the finish line, guess that was Andre. Due to that, his elimination wasn't a surprise, but what can I expect from the first elimination? Aww, Lexi didn't do much this chapter, but Kaleb is still Kaleb ^^ Oh and I think you typed "flushed" instead of "blushed" once... Unless the word flushed can be used in that context. It's just that I picture Hannah flushing a toilet XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:33, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

Umm. Whether or not Frosty is an actual elf is still up for discussion, while he claims to be, it's obvious that characters like Ivy and Vishal don't buy it 100%- So that logical explanation could still be on its way. Ah, yeah the challenge was odd enough, and I had to try and jump around without actually showing that Andre wasn't there. I didn't really expect it to be a surprise when Andre was eliminated. However it served its purpose of fueling the Ivy-Dania "friendship". I adore Lexi as a character, and I realized she didn't do much in the chapter aswell, but it was not intentinal. As for Kaleb, he is in fanct still Kaleb. I think, but don't hold me to it, that flushed can be used in context, but yeah I see the imagery I may have misled in there, and I will prolly change it out later. Thanks again for your comment(s) :)     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 23:39, January 21, 2013 (UTC)

Wow, chapter 3 is up already? You write faster than Sprink O_O So, Ivy and Jade so far remind me of Lindsay and Heather, not that I don't like them, but I'm hoping to see something to make them more original. I really liked Frosty and Emmet's interaction, looking forward to more of them. And Twilight is so adorable, but I think her naïveté may cost her the game. Aww, my favorite is out D: well, I'm starting to warm up to other characters, such as Frosty, Emmet and Twilight. Kaleb can be replaced :P  <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 18:35, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Aha thanks mana for reading! It means bundles to me. I try to keep it a chapter a week, but who knows how long that will last. Lindsay and Heather is a very fair comparison to Ivy and Jade. I will say I've done that on purpose, but they will split from their counterparts as some point soon. I'm not exactly sure what Emmett and Frosty did this chapteer asides from the exercises, but thanks xD. Twilight is one of my little angels. As for her being naive, we shall see where that lands her- I'm sure you'll like it. I'm glad the other characters are becoming better for you, I'm trying to make many likeable, while trying to add in some drama. Yeah I was debating on whether or not I could drag Kaleb along a little longer, but if I did that, other stories would get torn and I dontt want that! I do promise thoufh, if I ever make a second season he will be part of the cast! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:10, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, it's Mana. I'm on my grandpas computer and can't log in, so I will make this short. First, you just got more awesome for referencing Ace Attorney. And as a criticism, you should use more commas. Tomorrow when I get home I will expand this comment.

Aha, yeah I make... random references based on what Andre decides to PM me about on Facebook at the time of writing. And yeah, I can see that becoming an issue. I'm not a fan of grammar, but I'll try and add in some extra comma's next chapter ^_^. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 23:06, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, expanding the comment, the characters seemed to be more unique this chapter, and it's great to see them developing a personality of their own, I also enjoyed Ivy's long confessional thorout the chapter :P Dania being eliminated, well, I saw it comming when it narrowed down to her and Ivy, but it was still surprising. And I guess my F3 guess has to be redone, even though I was never really serious with that one, it was more of a response to you saying the F3 was obvious XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 09:22, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, most of the characters will start to stand on their own two feet starting from chapter four and on, which will hopefully led to better interactions and friendships. Ivy's long confessional... She sure does like to complain :P. And I suppose your F3. Does need to be remade, but I understand the last one being a joke, xD Who knows maybe you'll get it right this time!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 10:26, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 5-7
Looky looky! I posted chapter five!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 01:20, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yay, new chapter! Poor Brandon, but at least Zania and Lexi made the introduction good. Speaking of Zania, sometimes I forget she exists XD I'm sure I would get most references in this challenge if I watched Madagascar, but since I didn't... Yeah. Mitchel's remark about his friends being eliminated <3 I guess he should become Ivy's friend if you want her out soon XD Ooh, and about the characters based on existing characters, I have a guess. Would Rosalie be based on Bella from Twilight? Aww, you don't have to be sorry for posting the chapter late just for eliminating Emmet :3 <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 12:31, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

... XD I did not change the names of the characters who I referenced from. But yeah, the penguins made their first appearance, maybe not their last in chapter five. I tried to make it easy to follow whether or not you've seen the films, but that's never easy when you're talking about penguins. I never really planned for Brandon or Lindsay to be "good" hosts, but there are differences between the two, such as Lindsay can actually control the contestants and has (some) respect, while Brandon is teased. Zaina and Lexi :D I needed to have some newer friendships due to the Frosty-Emmett friendship dying, so I tried out a number of odd pairings this chapter (Mitchel and Ivy anyone?). Yeah... I decided to put Mitchel's comment in there if only to hint towards Emmett being eliminated, but I'm pretty sure based off of other things it was rather obvious his time was coming to an end (that tie!!). And finally (so long!), Zaina will have more to do starting in the next chapter, she's finally getting some real "story", I'm not exactly sure you can call it that though, aha. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 13:53, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Isn't it ironical how I'm the only one to read it, yet each episode someone I guessed is eliminated? >_< I loved the tribute to Lavigne, and I wish I had read it, why was it cancelled anyway? Ivy did seem less vilanious in this chapter, maybe because Dania is not there anymore, and also for Vishal to step up as a bigger villain. Speaking of that, I'm starting to see Britt in a better light, he seemed a bit vilannious in the first chapter, but now he is even pitiable sometimes. Aww, Lexi is out. I have to admit I thought I'd like her a lot more than I did, but I'll still miss her D: <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 14:43, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

I'm starting to think you're cursed!! Aha. Yeah, I hope people enjoyed the chapter- the only issue was it was slightly shorty and ergo a tad choppy, but I think it worked, to create a more surprising, hopefully, elimination. Lavigne was cancelled due to me finding out some information at the time in regards to an ex of mine, and I just couldn't bring myself to write. Ivy was never really intended to be a villain, but we shall see her story evolve more soon. Vishal... well I have no comment... Britt wasn't ever meant to seem like a villain O_o he was always just meant to be Hannah's boy friend, even though they really shouldn't be together in the first place- though it seems I failed to build on their relationship as much as I would have wanted... Originally, Britt was going to convince Saber to ask Hannah out... #Awks. Lexi.... I don't know how I feel towards her. At first I adored her, but then I tossed out her story- as it would have been too many couples.... Zaina x Lexi. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:35, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, it took some time but I read! I loved Brandon's bit in the intro, complete with that moment that will be forever dubbed as a VonKarma moment in my head XD And Vishal is still teaching Puck ball to Britt? I wonder when he will realize it'a hockey :P Hannah and the birds remind me of this disturbing movie I saw... Oh God, why? >_< I also love the random point giveaway in the challenge, Lindsay is a great host, at least for our entertainment XD  I'm enjoying this love triangle, even though I'm not a fan of them. It's that unlike the cleché ones, the original lover is the handsome guy, and the guy who replaces him is the nerd... Wait, Hannah is out? Yeah, I guess Saber went back to being the underdog. Well, one more reason for me to enjoy this plot! XD Oh, and in the whip cream scene of this chapter, I think you wrote "Mitchell" instead of Frosty :P <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 20:28, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, atleast you read it :D I rather it later than never! As for Brandon... I have no clue where I was going with that- but I;m glad you enjoyed him xD No clue who or what VonKarma is though? Yes.... Puck (wink wink) ball. I thought it would be nice for them to continue their interesting story of sports... aha. Hannah... Oh Hannah, you see, her story was never meant to be like this, never. But once I changed it to be more of a "bad" girl, I decided she should play with the birdies :D And I like Lindsay as host aswell, though she's not exactly as fun, personally as Chris was but I am working on it! I have no clue what I was doing with this love triangle type-thing. Like I said before it was NEVER meant to go like that, Britt was always meant to just, kind of catch on to Saber liking Hannah and kind of letting him date her instead- though I like how it ended up better... But yes, Hannah is OUT. She was...Meh. And ty I will adjust that now!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 21:48, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 8-10
A mini-comment for a mini-chapter :P Losers chapter! Those can be either incredibly boring or awesome if written right, and you did it! I loved Hannah-Emmet-Kaleb interactions, and Sierra taught about Beth about getting boys? I guess that wasn't a good idea of Beth :P By the way, you mentioned the jello reminded Trent of his girlfriend, if I'm not mistaken, that was a reference to TDI. However, the jello pool was Courtney's fear, not Gwen. If it wasn't a reference, you can completely ignore this part of the comment XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:49, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, yeah I adored the outed contestants, so I knew I had to have atleast one chapter just for them! Hannah-Emmett-Kaleb, this was again, just a random interaction session, due to me not really knowing what to do with the three, but I do agree, the end result was unique. Sierra and Beth... xD Aha yeah, I always wondered what would have happened if the two were to meet and get together, I guess I... found out? Trent and his fiance ;) Not girlfriend... aha. But it is a refeference, however it is not a mistake... take that as you will :) Thanks for reading, as always!! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 16:58, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Loved the losers chapter and I'm happy there was one. Usually, in a lot of stories (other than Sprink's) a loser's chapter was never included, so doing one was a great idea and a recently brought-back idea. I love Hannah and Emmet (except, unlike Mana, I didn't like Kaleb so much... I never have but...). Anywho, the chapter was amazing (short, but still packed with information) and I can't wait for the next chapter. Ivy all the way. ;3<font face="Arial">-- Where <span style="color:mintcream; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">have <span style="color:palegreen; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">I been <span style="color:lightgreen; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">all this <span style="color:darkseagreen; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">ti-i-i-ime?  22:24, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for (finally <3) commenting, Jess! Yeah, like I said I love-love-love all my contestants, and knew I just had to have one or more.... ) chapters just for them, plus a recent poll was posted, and it seemed the readers wanted somebody to return, so I had to update everyone, on everyone. Hannah and Emmett's interactions, to be honest, before I wrote the chapter, I never-ever planned for them to interact for squat all, but now that they have, I have many ideas for how things could play out! But I agree, at first Kaleb was the only character I did NOT like, and that's why he was an early out, but by the time I posted his elimination I had just started to like him. Aha, Ivy <3 We shall see how far she goes!!      Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 10:49, February 27, 2013 (UTC)

I read it yesterday while hiding from TAR spoilers in chat, and I'm still not sure why you didn't like this chapter, it was great! Britt and Saber's rivalry is still amusing me, and Mitchell walking in to top it off was even better XD I'm loving Jade now, mostly because I love her plot, but I'm also glad Ivy stayed, I really like her and can't wait to see how will she react to being "voted off" by her friend. In my opinion, Twilight and Frosty's plot needs something else, I just don't get easily entertained by over-the-top love stories, but I'm pretty sure something will happen next episode ;\ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 19:16, March 4, 2013 (UTC)

Eh, maybe I'm just starting to get picky, who knows? Britt and Saber Omnom :O I think that when Dania was eliminated, I knew I needed some type of rivalry, so I think that's why I ended up destroying the friendship, may it dream well <3. But I do agree, I enjoy their fights more than Ivy-Dania, it seems more brotherly, to me anywho- Mitchel... He just has some terrible luck! Ah, thanks for liking Jade's plot. I tried to hint at it as much as possible without actually saying it, aha, so I was very excited when I could finally start up her story arc! I'm also very glad Ivy stayed, like Jade, she finally, indirectly revealed her true character. But who knows what being "voted off" can do to a person? Twilight and Frosty... I don't know how they ended up to where they are now honestly. They were always meant to just be buddies, but I blame the books I need to read for French, they are all romance, and I suppose I may have added that into the actual story-- But I actually like them. HOWEVER, I do agree, they need something else in their plot, if only because they actually have done barely anything rather than see one another the entire season, thus far... As for next episode, who knows what might happen.... <3 Thanks for reading :D     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 19:25, March 4, 2013 (UTC)

I read it yesterday while hiding from TAR spoilers! After seeing some of their alliance talks, I just realized something, did they reach the merge? I don't think you've evenb mentioned that. I'm surprised Ivy didn't get mad at Jade for voting for her, but I'm very glad to see Dania helping her after that. Even though I was a big fan of Frosty and Twilight as individuals, their plot wasn't my favorite, so their "elimination" had its pros and cons for me. Now that they're back to the game (not that they werent, but the Christmas theme kinda drive away the competition feeling), I can't wait to see how this will turn out. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 15:07, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Aha, yes the teams were dissolved, as shown with ' “And with Lindsay’s return, all teams are dissolved!,” Lindsay announced, as Zaina and Lexi broke down crying, followed by the used-Ivy. ' The final line of chapter 9. Ivy not getting mad at Jade was more or less due to Jade making it seem like; Mitchel, Rosalie and Frosty had voted her out, rather than the entire team. Though I now realize I didn't make that very clear... Yes, I was very excited to reintroduce Dania to Ivy. I felt it brought their entire story full-circle, while introducing the true Ivy, and more-so how I had always invisioned Dania, minus her feud. I do agree with the entire Frosty and Twilight idea, I do enjoy both characters, however the love story got iffy... Originally, Twilight was never meant to leave with Frosty. I had planned it, so that she stays on the island, but other stories made the idea not viable! So that's why I think I pushed the couple, I couldn't find a way for them as solo characters to add to the story I want to tell. On the final point, I do agree. I can't wait to see how people react to the upcoming chapters! I do think, they will be an improvement from the pre-merge chapters, if only because the plot is more driven and I have.... wait for it... REAL challenges! I also agree the Christmas special pulled the story away from the competition feeling, but I kind of needed/wanted the feeling to be there. Besides, Lindsay isn't the grinch! Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 20:33, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 11-14
Comment away :D     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 07:33, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Awww Mitchel </3 Ivy is so lucky to still be in! I'm loving this story, although I had to re-read all of it to remember the storyline, its all worth it though! Maybe you'll make Britt win? :P (Oh and I'm rocking the Final three guessing competition btw xD)  The road to success is always under construction   14:51, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Out of all of the original story-lines, I managed to stick to Mitchel's at least partially. Every single interaction he's had with Ivy was never exactly meant to happen, but they ended up happening for one reason or another, though I did like how it all played out. I've been slowly dropping hints ever since the first chapter that we would be seeing Mitchel's dad come into the story, and I was glad that I could finally have him and his son reconcile! Thanks for reading Jordan, it means loads! And maybe Britt will win ;) Who knows!     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 14:57, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

First of all... oh my God, I have to redo my F3Guess once again, that section looks hilarious XD Okay, now, first I ship BethxSnow, best couple ever. I thought MIKA would have been just a guest appearance, ut he was actually relevant to the plot :o I guess Ivy could pull off an uderdog win, but you don't seem like the author who would make it predicatble. And I'm looking forward to seeing ways Vishal will incorporate Kaleb's name on his speech XD Now excuse me, while I guess for my 53th time >_< Oh, and I almost forgot, Indi cameo <3 I miss Indi, where has she been ;-; <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 03:20, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

... Maybe you just need to get better at guessing... *Shrugs* But yes, it does look kind of silly!! Aha. BethxSnow is an adorkable couple, I do agree on that! Too bad we won't be seeing Beth again until the finale ;(. MIKA <3 Yes he was always meant to show up at some point and take his son away. Though it was meant to be more of a Mitchel begging people for votes kind of thing, but I decided this way would be better for the "new plot". Who knows what I'm planning to do with Ivy.... asides from me of course. But I think asides from the next elimination, all of the stories should wrap up nicely... If not, well there's season two :P. Aha, Kaleb and Vishy!! Indi :D Well, I'm not really sure, she's gone radio-silent on me :(     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 03:40, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I'm trying to catch up, just read Chappy12! I really loved this chapter for some reason, maybe it was because the eliminated contestants were gone, making it less cluttered, maybe it were the new intereactions, I'm not sure. Oh, and a real challenge! XD The challenge was great, Britt finally discovered Puck Ball is a lie :o Oh, and remember when I said I thought Rosalie was based on Bella from Twilight... well, I guess she is based on someone from that series after all... am I right? Speaking of Rosalie, I thought she would be gone this episode, Vishal's elimination was quite surprising. Good, job, now I'll try to read chapter 13! ^^ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 01:04, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Meep sorry about racing ahead! Just trying to finish the story up is all! I actually liked the chapter too! I think it's more of a, I finally figured out how to write a comp. fic, kind of thing!! But the new interactions, <3! I was glad I finally put in a real challenge, i feel like that's the major flaw with the story >+<  But there's always season two.... Mhm, a lot of story lines that were started, but never finished are finally coming together, which means secrets shall be revealed!! And Yes Rosalie is based off of someone from Twilight... I wonder who *shrugs* !! The eliminations from this point on, should be.... interesting, with the final 7/6 not knowing who they can trust. I feel bad for eliminating Vishal since we didn't really do much, but I had no ideas on what to do with his character any more. Z a c A tt a c k     Rawr 04:35, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Just read the Fashion chapter, and I loved it! Many great interactions, and a surprising elimination. It's the second time in a row I expected Rosalie to go and she doesn't. Good, because I really like her character. Speaking of that, I like pretty much everyone left ^^ Poor Zaina, but I guess she became a little too paranoid with Rosalie, and aww, her plot with lexi was abandoned </3. I'm really enjoying the plots of this story, which is really making me consider making an overhaul in my TDRanch plots, since it is really weak as it is. Also, expect some fanart soon ;D <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 20:09, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Woo! I love it when people love my story! It makes me happy!! Aha. The interactions are definatley getting more fun, to me anyways. Rosalie is definatley a scape goat right now, not really sure how that happened, aha. I guess the secrets of the season are start to melt... Or so you could say. (I like Rosalie too <3) I like the final 6 as well. I feel bad that some of the characters never really got a major story in this season, but there's always the second season for things to change (or not). Zaina :( Her elimination was never ever meant to happen like that. But when Vishal ended up going before Zaina did, her story had to change, and I figured having her leave would make the most sense, with everything that had happened. This way, I also put her character where I wanted for her to be for this story, so I can write her character how I wanted in the second season. (or not.) I'm glad I was able to help with Ranch? In a weird way, aha. I would love fan art :O So my eyes are now peeled! Thanks for reading!!     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 20:25, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Just finished chapter 14! As of lately, Saber has been my least favorite by default, but I loved him this chapter, especially his interactions with the three girls, they worked great together. Too bad he left </3 I will now use this comment to rank the final 5:

5th: Ivy - Currently my least favorite, maybe because the "girl we are supposed to feel bad about" gets tiring after some time.

4th: Lexi - It's hard to pick a favorite out of the four remaining, but Lexi stays in 4th place, maybe due to lack of a plot. I do love her bubbly peresonality, though <3

3rd: Britt - I really liked Britt since the beginning, and he works great as a pawn to Jade and also has his peculiarities and British-ness. I have doubts if he is weary of Jade's true self, since sometimes it seems like he does, but not other times. Is this something I should know or are you keeping it a mystery? XD

2nd: Jade - It was hard chosing the 1st between Jade and Rosalie, but I decided on that order. Jade is an amazing villain for two reasons: her background as a follower, and her quirks. My favorite kind of villain is the eccentric one, and Jade pulls this out amazingly. So far she is 2nd place on my rankings for being too 100% villainous, but as soon as she sows her human side, I'll be glad to put her in spot number 1.

1st: Rosalie - I felt like Rosalie would have gone a long time ago, but she's surprising me by making it this far. She works really well as The Averagewoman, which is ironic since she may be a vampire. Speaking of that, I also love this sub-plot, and I'm curious as to how this will turn out now that Saber isn't there anymore to investigate.

That's it for my mini-rankings, will read the latest chapter when I have time! ^^ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 20:39, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Out of the final 6, Saber was my least favourite for the majority of the story, but when it came to more recent chapters I wasn't sure if I still wanted to eliminate him, but there wasn't much choice I think. So I tried to give him a fitting end for a prince. Ivy <3 Her plot is her plot. I'm not really sure what her plot is though, it's just kind of there. Lexi though, after Zaina's elimination her plot was kind of thrown away, but who knows what the rest of the season will have in store for her? Britt!! His story has always been there, whether or not it was the main attraction is very debateable, His relationship with Jade, on his part anyways is very cerealz, he's not very attentive of who Jade really is, asides from a few things she says... Speaking of the devil, Jade is definately one of my fav. characters out of the final five. Her story was always meant to be the one she has now, so I think out of the final five it was able to translate over to the new plot the most. Though some things were changed... As for her morality, you see more of that in chapter 15 :)  ROSALIE!! Similiar to how Lexi's plot was thrown away without Jade, (in part) Rosalie's vampire story is being tossed away without Saber there to pressure her, as the other four contestants are not aware of her possible vampireism. Rosalie was always meant to make it to the final five (as were Britt and Jade.). She's definatley meant to be more of the normal girl, rather than bubbley, or snarky, or just plain evil. But really, with this as the final five who knows for sure who will be standing when it comes to the finale?     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 20:59, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments: Chapters 15-17
Finally caught up! Okay, the challenge was... weid, but the chapter itself wasn't XD At first I thought it was just some crazy dream of Jade XD Speaking of her, why must she go now? D: I really enjoyed her stay, she was a geat villain, I just feel like her plot could use some closure, but I guess that's coming in upcoming chapters. Speaking of plot, I wonder what will happen now that the major plot point is gone. If Britt gets immunity, the girls will have to turn on themselves :o Looking forward to next chapter! <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 15:55, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

XD Like I said I don't really know what was going on in that last chapter! Making it Jade's dream prolly would have been a good idea, aha. It was either Jade or Britt going, I saw no way of managing to make the Holy Trinity to turn on one another... in that chapter anyways. I aso couldn't make Britt win the third challenge in a row, and having Jade win would just be awkward. So I ended up cutting Jade. Many characters still need closure, but the season isn't over yet! Plot, is a wonderous thing in Frozen :O Just when it seems the main plot point is gone, you discover that it wasn't actually the main attraction! As for who wins immunity, it's anyones game :) Thanks for reading, as always!     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 19:24, August 9, 2013 (UTC)