User blog comment:Sprinklemist/New Story/@comment-1636990-20120110114645/@comment-1153194-20120111003212

Thanks, Gideon. I really appreciate that, as it helped me understand better. I do try the latter, at least recently. There's not much damage in mixing the two, right? Like, at one point saying Joyce looked sad, for example, and another time her being all droopy lookin' and stuff?