Talk:Total Drama: Superstar Showdown

Winner Guessing Contest
Pick a contestant who you think will win. The winner will get a character of their creation to be in the sixth season. :D Guess away! Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 23:30, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Alex - You can blow my whistle baby,   whistle baby...  here we go!  10:45, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Arthur - Let me stress that this was a completely random decision between the two remaining contestants.  Jkl9817 (Talk) 18:42, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Chelsey - "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light!"   "Surrender now or prepare to fight!"  23:30, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Chelsey 2.0 - She was mine Bruno D: 17:24, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Chrissy - Manatee12 "All hail the Funyarinpa!" 23:31, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Devin - --Radical M I was going to make song lyrics as my signature  but that's too mainstream 03:44, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Elena - -- Taters is  quite   in love this year!  17:31, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Estrella - YOLO,   so I'm gonna screw up   the only life I have.  23:57, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Flora - Sunslicer2   Slicing the sun  since 1997. 00:03, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Helga -  Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese!  23:31, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Julia - ~CK11~  Good morning and good night... I'll wake up at twilight... 00:00, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Kavren -~ Reddy  is blue.  Got a problem with it?!  00:59, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Layla - ~ RPs & Writes! ♪  Dakota    ♫  Talks & Edits! 01:05, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

MacKenzie - 'Cause she deserves to do well. Frank15 (talk) 01:05, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Nic - Jay JLOM Things turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 01:24, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ori -  Music's The Rhythm Of My Body!   16:30, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

PJ - I should get a job, But I'm, like, Way too lazy.  00:38, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Puck - Tomorrow morning, we'll be leavin'   Let's keep it rockin' till daylight  02:06, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Tolkien - I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure.  But if you can't handle me at my worse, you sure as hell don't deserve my best. 00:32, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Trey - I pick me! Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 18:11, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Trick - ~Jake R: Welcome...  stalkers!  15:40, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Veronica - -- When the moonlight brightens up your evening, you must show me your true strength.  17:31, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wolfgang - <font color="OrangeRed">Drink cactus juice! <font color="Coral">It'll quench 'ya! 23:31, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Chat
Finally, the season title has been revealed! :D I'm looking forward to this season. All-Star seasons always rock. :D <font color="DarkRed">Oweguy <font color="Teal">Wanted a new sig  <font color="DarkGreen">So he changed it  15:36, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Owe! :D I also love all-star stories, so I'm really looking forward to writing this one. :P I love you like a Cops marathon on TV, I love you more than the original Star Wars trilogy, I am the walrus, you are the goo goo gajoob, I’m a whole lot of nothing, you are the much ado. 15:39, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Same here. In case you didn't know, Total Drama Vegas City is an all-star story. <font color="DarkRed">Oweguy <font color="Teal">Wanted a new sig  <font color="DarkGreen">So he changed it  15:44, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, I did know, and I'm reading it, I just haven't commented yet, but I'll be sure to comment soon. :P I love you like a Cops marathon on TV, I love you more than the original Star Wars trilogy, I am the walrus, you are the goo goo gajoob, I’m a whole lot of nothing, you are the much ado. 15:47, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

You do that, and I'll comment on this when it starts. Make sure to keep checking Tales from the Contestants as well. <font color="DarkRed">Oweguy <font color="Teal">Wanted a new sig  <font color="DarkGreen">So he changed it  16:18, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

ASDFGHJKL. This will be epic. I'm excited. :D <font color="#ebebeb">If you have found this, you are a stealth ninja. Where'd my signature go? 16:53, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Zoomy, I'm glad you're excited! :D And Owe, I'll do that. :P I love you like a Cops marathon on TV, I love you more than the original Star Wars trilogy, I am the walrus, you are the goo goo gajoob, I’m a whole lot of nothing, you are the much ado. 16:55, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I wonder who is hosting... Kavren and Abbey? I'll have to wait and see. And... Final story? What will I read after this ends, Sprink's stories? Wait, I already do that :P <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 17:33, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Nice title, Toaders! I love the characters so far. <font color="DarkBlue">Jake R <font color="Grey">So Gone... <font color="Black">Solo Soul 18:00, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

It may or may not be my final story. At least, in my main series, there's Mythology and my collabs, and if I have enough ideas, I'll make a season six. XD I love you like a Cops marathon on TV, I love you more than the original Star Wars trilogy, I am the walrus, you are the goo goo gajoob, I’m a whole lot of nothing, you are the much ado. 18:03, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Finally. :D I love the title, and it seems a interesting story. I love it. :D I wonder who's the dynamic duo... Can't wait to see it, and to see the rest of the cast. And one more thing, go Chelsey! :P Bruno...    he has the spirit    of a wolf!  23:17, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I read the first chapter, and it was without doubt your best first chapter ever, partially because I didnb't like the other ones, but mostly because it already made me laugh quite some times. Those times include Arthur eating Kavren's fish, and... Well, I have a short memory, teehee? Veronica should totally be the new Charles, unless you have plans for her. Also, how can someone interrupt a person by saying "..."? XD I'm liking Arthur more than I thought I would, and Chelsey is much better like this. Julia and Chrissy are my favorites for now. Wolfgang sure is talking more, and a lot more! I loved the first chapter, and I hope the whole season will be as good as that :D <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 00:28, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Mana. :D I agree that it was one of my best first chapters, if not the best. I loved the Arthur eating Kavren's fish line, too. xD And about the "..." thing, I have no idea. :P I'm glad you like Arthur, Chelsey, Julia, Chrissy, and Wolfgang, they're definitely some of my favorites. :D I have really awesome plans for this season, so I hope you enjoyed it! Glad you liked the chappy! Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 00:37, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! XD I'll stop talking in caps but I really loved this chapter. Like, me and this chapter are getting married and have babies. XD That is weird but it was really good and makes me excited to see what happens. It is your best first chapter yet (Like Mana said :P).

I can't even begin to pick who is my favorite. XDDD I'll just start from the beginning :P So Roz is an awesome host. I wasn't sure how I felt about her, but I'm loving her hosting gig! XDD I'm actually glad she replaced Chris. Ari's guest spot was funny and was more enjoyable than I thought.

Glad to see Arthur is awesome as always. He was as funny as I remember, and I liked his interactions with Kavern and Julia! And I loved how he describes teaching sex ed. "Yeah, it's very fun, and I get to say crude and dirty things, and not get in trouble." XD Also love how Roz laughs like a Brazilian.

Chelsey, she is so hilarious and awesome! Love her focus on popularity. It was so funny and true to her character! I particularly love when she says scarfs get you major popularity. Yes they do. I loved her rivalry with Elena and her liking of Layla. Bruno will be pleased!

Wolfgang was awesome! I'm so glad he is in, he is hilarious as well as dressed nice :P I loved his insulting, he is super funny. His interactions were great and I'm curious to see more of them in depth. I also loved if he asked if Dolph carried him away :P

Helga was great! Funny as always. I love Helga and Estrella as friends. Hope that develops. Loved her comments to Trick at the end particularly.

Kavren was hilarious and his and Arthur's interactions were great along with Julia. Still see he is dating Abbey >_> Interested to see how he will interact with Tolky and his girlfriend Roz. XDD I found his almost cuss words super funny!

Yay Flora! :DDDD Really hope she interacts well and gets that boyfriend ;) And PJ and Flora= Awesomest Friendship Ever! Also wanna see her interact with MacKenzie and Veronica. I love how Veronica is one of her idols!

Alex slept a lot but he was funny! Still don't like him and Sharrisa breaking up but whatever :P I forgot Roz and her were related so I did like that acknowledgement. I have a hard time seeing Sharissa doing the breaking up and Alex calling her a babe. But he was still funny :P

Elena is nasty as ever. Even she and her interactions were funny. I'm loving her as a buttmonkey. And her rivalry with Chelsey is awesome. Chelsey wins though.

Interested to see where Trey goes. He didn't do much. I love how Nic is all tall, and apparently attractive and he is rubbing it in Trey's face.

"..." All you can say about PJ :P Actually she was super funny and I love her telling off Alex. And I love her thanking the fans. She is so humble :3 And again, a friendship between her and Flora would be like the friendships of Ensemble Darkhorses :3

Puck was funny as always (unless your Mana :P). I like his and Wolfgang's interactions. And I'm glad he and Casey are still dating! And I love his interactions with Chelsey based on that. And I laughed at Kavren's line about Puck.

Estrella is still humorous as ever. I love her dry humor, her gothness and her friendship with Helga! They are similar but I don't think they are the exact same. I don't want them to fight personally.

Devin was funny though I admit it is was a bit hard to understand what he said :P But he sounds more gangsta. I love Ori's intro with his dad showing up and dropping him off. I'm really loving Ori so far actually XDD. And I love the acknowledgement to Casey.

Chrissy is still super awesome! I love hipsters and I love hipster characters. I wish I was a hipster but I'm way too mainstream :P Glad she is still tough and has her trusty knife! Glad her and Julia still have some friendship.

Yay Julia! I really like her. She is still angry and threatening but has a love for 1E that I find simply hilarious. I am seriously loving her and glad she is the same. I loved her interactions with Chrissy, Arthur and Kavren. And as you know, PJ interrupting by saying "..." is super funny. And I love the bowling ball line!

Tolkien seemed awfully awkward around Roz. They are still dating right? Is something up? Anyway, kinda glad he is back, interested in seeing more from him and more of him befriending the others and interacting with his cousin.

MacKenzie was kinda quiet but she came late :P Love she wears a scarf though! Can't wait to see what she does though. Wonder what she is going to do and can't wait for it! Her backstory was mentioned. I wonder if that will play any part in the story. A rivalry with Elena would make sense to me :P

So Nic is attractive now, with muscles and actual pecs? Miracles really do happen :P Does this mean Abby (the abs) are actual abs? XDDD If not, I still find this transformation so hysterical. I love how he actual knows Spanish and rubs his good fortune in Trey's face. Wonder how he'll interact with Arthur and his pals :P

Layla's back and buter-less D: I'm going to miss Charles. I thinking I'm starting to tear up :( I'm happy for him but I miss him. Wonder how long Layla will last now? I liked Chelsey complimenting her, and think if Bruno likes a third girl here, they form Bruno's Angels :P

XDDD I love everyones reactions to Veronica. Especially Flora seeing her as a role model. Somehow I don't think Veronica will recuperate those feelings. XDDD And I love Alex's line about having a neck :P

As for Trick, not sure how I feel but he seems better. I'll need more time to say.

I loved the team names! I liked Swagged Out Citrus Fruit for some reason, maybe cause it said Citrus :P I do like Hopalong Ralphcakes though. And I love how Elena points out the rules for winning this show. I never noticed that before XD

I am seriously loving this so far! The characters are at there core but have new factors that are super funny, the interactions are extremely incredible and enjoyable, everything is making me laugh, and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens, BLARGH, I'm so excited! '''CAN. NOT. WAIT. FOR. MORE!  Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese!  03:55, August 18, 2012 (UTC)'''

Lol, I loved this comment, Rhonda. :P I'm so glad that this chapter has been really well-received, I really worked hard on it and I'm glad you loved it. :D I would take the time to comment on every character, but I would be tempted to give out spoilers, so yeah. We already talked a lot last night on chat about it, too, so yeah :P Alex's neck line was hilarious, I loved that. Bruno's Angels... I should do that in a future chapter. XDD So yeah, thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed the chapter. :D Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 18:08, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. :D It's the best first chapter from all of your stories. Roz is great as a hostess, and I liked Ari's cameo. :D And the way Roz laughed. SAUHSUAHSUA Arthur is still awesome, and hilarious. Next, we have CHELSEY. :D your best character ever, and I' loving her way more, if it's even possible. I just hope a random guy named Bruno appears and they date. :P I like that Wolfgang is more talkative. I like him way more this time. Helga is still pretty awesome too, with her rude comments and book-loving. Kavren... I'm glad that he's back. :D He's so random and hilarious. xD Flora is so boring, yet I love her, and I'm glad she's back for more average moments. :3 Being one of the few people who liked Alex, I was glad to see him back, and sleeping a lot. xD Yay for Oompa Loompa... Oh, wait. That's Elena. :p I like her, but she's not one of my faves. Though, her clash with Chelsey will definitely be epic. You know who I'm rooting for. :P Poor Trey. I kinda felt bad for him. I laughed so much when PJ said "..." and everybody cheered. xD Words can't describe PJ, so I'll jusat say "..." Puck is still funny. He's still dating Casey? That means I'll date a female version of him? D: Estrella... she's more epic than before. :D Rhonda, there's the last girl for Bruno's Angels. :P What the heck did Devin said? xD He's still fun. Ori and Mr. Gerard FTW. :D I hope he makes more cameos, and Ori makes it far. :P I like that Chrissy is a hipster, yet she's still a though girl. I'm also glad Julia's still the same girl, and the 1E obssesion makes her funnier. xD I also liked Tolkien. Is he still sating Roz? I liked MacKenzie more this time, even if she hasn't done much. She has a scarf now, though. :P Nic is attractive and has muscles? :O I never thought this day would come. I loved when he was speaking Spanish. xD Awww, I'm glad to see Layla again, but I'll miss Charles. D: But he is in a better place now... I guess in a cruise ship or something. I'm so happy to see Veronica back. :D She was one of my faves, and I liked that she was inspiration to other boring characters. :P I liked Emilee being mentioned also. xD And Trick... idk, he haven't had a lot of time this chapter, being the last introduced. But he's semi-likeable, I guess. :P I found the mention of the winner's rules both funny and interesting. O_o Does that works with the boys? They must have six-letter names ending with N? Kavren has a chance at winning this season too? :P OH, well, I just hope Chelsey breaks the pattern. :P I loved the team names too. :D Can't wait for the next chapter. "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light!"  "Surrender now or prepare to fight!"  18:10, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for this epic/long comment, Bruno! IDC that it was a wall of text, I can still read them XD Estrella can complete the Bruno's Angels trio, and I'll probably use that for a future chapter. xDD I'm so glad that Chelsey didn't disappoint, while I was writing for her I was thinking "What would Bruno think?" XD I'm glad that you like Chrissy and Julia too, since even though they've changed a lot, they still have remnants of their old personality, which is cool. Charles is probably in a cruise ship, yeah. :P Wolfgang was definitely a favorite to write for too, so I'm happy you liked him. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad it was an awesome chapter. :D Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 18:19, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Oh my gosh. I am speechless. This was... amazing. I don't know what to say, Toad. Are you sure that you are a mere mortal, or are you something greater? Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 20:57, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lol, thanks, Trey. And who knows? Maybe I'm a god or something. ;\ Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 21:24, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Really liked the chapter. Roz is an epic host. :P I also liekd the chapter. CHELSEY! :D I wonder who's that Bruno guy who kept texting Chelsey. :P Elena Jane? Patricia Jane is better name. >_> xD Oh, well, I liked Ori. Devin, how could you? You have an epic hair, and I can't understand what you say. :( OH, well, at least it wasn't Layla. :D "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light!"   "Surrender now or prepare to fight!"  21:32, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Great chapter Toad! I'm really liking Wolfgang, he is proving to be a really good character. I'm actually loving the interactions between the returning characters, and I have to say your writing (as well as ense of humour) has really improved. And yay, Athur made a Foreman reference... Or was that a coincidence? I thought Layla was going because you lacked ideas for a Charles-less Layla. I'm glad it was Ori, I couldn't handle two Devins. I'm still not sure about a thing though, does Nic have abs now? <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 20:32, August 30, 2012 (UTC)

Gra-bargle-fargle.

Bruno: IKR? Patricia Jane > Elena Jane. Their middle names are really both something similar to Jane, I think, so they do share a middle name irl :P I have more ideas for Layla, and I couldn't stand two Devins, but glad you liked the chapter. :D

Mana: Thanks for reading, Mana! I love Wolfgang too, he's really proving to be one of my favorites to write for in this season. I agree about this season being funnier than my past few, I really like it so far. XD Yeah, that was a Foreman reference. :P And yep, Nic has abs, I should really make a swimwear picture for him. XD I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 02:58, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

So, here's a boring comment because I forgot to comment when I read it. :P I liked the chapter and challenge and stuff. It had hilarious moments I can't remember. :P I'm glad Chelsey's team won again. :D Awww, PJ? All I have to say about her elimination is "...". But she was fun this time, more than she was in TDRev. "The best part is  when we go   to the whale!"  22:46, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Bruno. :D I'm glad you read it. :P Anyway, about PJ's elim, it was a last-minute thing, it was either her or ___, and I didn't want to boot out ___ because s/he has a plot coming up. But yeah, Chelsey's team is doing pretty well XD (boring reply to a boring comment) Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 22:51, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Finally read the new chapter, and I really like it :D I know how you feel by creating a challenge just for interactions, I also hate action scenes. At least you managed to make the challenge not boring. Arthur's loose peanuts are making me laugh, still. They will never get old XD Roz's phone saying she has interests in dentures, and her name is Gertrude? Gertrude = old lady XD PJ's elimination wan't that bad, don't get me wrong, she had her moments, but "..." would get old after the 69th time. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkRed">"What the heck was that wriggling piece of plywood?" 21:54, September 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet!! I've just found out from peeps on Chat that you've got a new story!! :D I've been away, some, so I'm glad to have found out about this!! =) Jay JLOM <font color="Red">Things turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 00:18, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, Mana! I'm glad you like the chappy, I was hoping that it would be well-received. I do hate action scenes, they're pretty boring to write. :P Gertrude isn't her name, it's the name that she got when her phone was hacked, and yes, it's an old lady name XD Right after I decided on PJ being eliminated, I had realized that I had eliminated two TDRev peeps in a row... Ah, well. And thanks, Jay! Can't wait to see you read it! :D Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 01:33, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Just finished this chapter! Yeah, you were right, the past ones were funnier, but this one also had its moments. Layla saying "OI am not a hobo" reminded me of a Marina song ;\ And Arthur dressing as RC will make me look at her in another way now... Even though she has been a "female dog" in Ponderosa :P Puck saying 'stumes reminded me off TDTokyo and the 'za... Who uses this slangs anyway? I also loved Smoothie Guy's line about Alex's dance simulating a drunken teenager movement XD The elimination was predicatble, and it wasn't bad. Tolkie was boring, and was unusually weird this episode. My only complaint is the uneven screentime, you have to balance it better, but I think you've noticed that by the self-deprecation joke at the end :P <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 17:37, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Heh... sorry if this is the first out of the five stories I've read, but hey, it'll probably happen to other people participating in Read About! Anyway, your story is very interesting from the chapters I've read so far... keep up the good work, Toad, my man! BadAsp No matter what, a fake is a fake, and no matter how much you try to dress it up, the real thing always wins! 01:06, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is really a thrilling story Toad, and I enjoy every moment, and I have now got a commenting bonus for RA! But keep up the good work, and I'd love to see more development for each character! -- Tis the season  to be writing!   Falalala, la, la, la, la!  19:51, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, thanks, guys! I'm glad that you're reading (even if it is only for RA ;\) and that you guys like the story. And Mana, nobody uses the za and stumes slang XDD IKR? about the Marina song. I thought of that too. xD And yeah, I'm definitely going to balance the screentime, and also give Arthur and whoever less funny lines so I can spread them out or whatever. Thanks for reading! Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 20:17, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Finally read it, and loved it as always. xD There's a long time I haven't left a comment, so... CHELSEY! :D :P Yay for Smoothie Guy's cameo, and stuff. My only complaint is the uneven screentime. Though, Chelsey is the only one who can be a screenhog. In fact, I demand this season's name to be changed to "Total Drama: Chelseyg.oddess and a bunch of people whose nobody cares". Jk :P "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  23:51, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

This story is very interesting and has a lot of potential. I do see a lot of strengths but also a few weaknesses, in my opinion. I think what you work on and utilize well is your writing skills. i think the chapters, albeit lengthy, are interesting to read and I am not disappointed. I think many of the characters do have interesting traits that I would like to see developed (Trey, Wolfgang, Elena, and Julia to name a few). However I do see a flaw in that their are a lot of pointless characters like Flora who in my honest opinion bring no real substantiality to the story and can be removed entirely. I understand the point of adding filler characters but it makes the story a bit longer than it needs to be. Some of the chapters can also be cut length wise as they get a bit too long to read in time crunches. Overall, I am definitely interested in reading more and I do have some characters that I am rooting for to win: Kavren, Wolfgang, Julia, and Trick in particular. Artur is plain gross and I can't stand him though but I assume that is a matter of preference. I wish you the best of luck in continuing this story! <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 05:00, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

I've read the first 3 chapters so far, and this is a pretty good story. I haven't read TDRev or TDTokyo (sorry D:) and I'm not sure, but I don't exactly agree with some of the returning contestants. Like, if you specifically reference that they're a 'boring girl' or whatever then what's the point of bringing them back? Maybe I'm missing a joke or something, not sure. I like your writing style, though, and Roz <33 but yeah, cool story overall  We found dove in  a soapless place  ...  05:35, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

I love that you're doing an all-star season with your characters, considering this is one of the only canons I still read xD. GO DEVIN! <font color="Red"> Freaked out, dropped <font color="Blue"> my pool in the phone again.  <font color="Silver">FireFlameVG  05:59, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, guys, thanks for the comments. I hope you'll continue to comment on this story, even after the RA week is over. ;\ Aimers, I know what you mean, the four you mentioned are some of my favorites to write for and you'll definitely be seeing more of them. :P Arthur is gross? Aww. He's one of my favorites, too, but he'll have less screentime, so yeah. XD And about the boring character stuff, the reason why Flora, Veronica, and MacKenzie are back is because I wanted to give them personality... I don't think that's happened yet, though, because of how I've kind of had uneven screentime. I think I'll work on that, though, so thanks for the constructive criticism. Jax, you need to read TDRev/TDTokyo. >.> Really, the only reason why I didn't bring people like Cammy back instead of MacKenzie was... there would be too many people with the same first letter of their names. :| I hate that, and I'm really OCD about it, so yeah. But I'll definitely have more cameos. And Fire, thanks, I'm glad you love my stories and are still reading my canon. You should comment more or I'll kill you >.> Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 16:58, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

ohmygod, Toad. ohmygod. This story is actually great so far but then again i said that about survivor one world. Everything flows well, from the random joke-dropping characters to the team names. Kavren's rsrs line was genious. And I love the Swagged Out Citrus Fruits. xD Ori trying to fit in and then the ballet reference was hilarious. And PJ needs to return kthx. And when does Ari debut? She obviously needs to, and it'd be hilarious if she Blaineley'd. Arthur's morbidly obese PuberT persona is weird. :s rsrs -- o wate u men blo ive?  yes sory i get dem mixed up,  i did perchese ur coluered child  20:09, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

so, I just now noticed this comment. Anyway, thanks for the comment, CK. :D Ari debuting... I actually haven't thought of that, but we'll have to see what happens ;\ PuberT is... yeah, weird. thanks for the comment, anyway! Green eyes glare,  pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  16:41, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Toad, this chapter was <333333. Red <3333. Polonium <333333. Anyway, I loved how balanced the screentime was, everyone had their moments, except Chrissy. But being places is too mainstream >_> Flora actually being good at something and winning the challenge was shocking. :o Arthur and Julia being on the same team.....that's gonna be fun. Puck and Wolfgang are so amazing <3.Devin was cool, but I couldn'tunderstand him half the time, so not a huge loss to the story. But he's him and he's real! /JLK Anyway,  I can't wait for ,ore! :DThe saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 00:27, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Chelsey g.oddessing in this chapter. <3 :P And another amazing chapter. <3 Arthur on the cellphone... I wonder who Todd is. ;\ I love Wolfgang. xD Chelsey. <3 Crystal Cox's "Forget you. Go home. Goodbye." reference. <3 Julia getting pissed! <33 I died with Devin saying " I ain't talkin' bout chicken n' gravy, dawg." xDDDD Arthur also being a g.oddess this chapter. <3 Chappy. <33 Poetry. <33 Tribal swap. :O So... LIZZA? :O Working at "Red's Coffee & Poetry Hangout"? :O Andshe'snottalkinglikethisanymore. :O And her name is Elizabeth? :O That's what I call development. ;\ xD The hipsters Hippo and Polonium. <3 I died with the poems, specially Polonium's. "I have forgotten something large, and my girlfriend who is named Marge... will get mad at me." xDDDD And Puber-T. :D Flora having an awesome underdog story. <3333 GET THAT G.ODDESS STATUS, FLORA. And... the Citrus are really Terrible Tikis 2.0. xD I hope they don't get Ulonged. ;\ Layla being Layla, and Veronica being Charles. <3 The Smoothie Guy! Yay! <3 xDD Aww, Devin's out. Tbh, I wanted Veronica to stay, so whatever. :P So happy the chapter was posted. :P Can't wait for more. <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  04:29, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, guys! :D Epic, I'm glad the screentime was balanced, I tried to make it that way because all the characters really do have potential. I have so many ideas for Arthur and Julia now, so that'll be amazing. :P You got the JLK reference! XDD But yeah, Devin was meant to be an early out, he's a funny character but you can only do so much with him. And thanks for the comment, Bruno! Chelsey was amazing to write for in this chapter. I actually forgot about the cell phone scene, I wrote that like 5 months ago. XD I loved writing Polonium's poem too. ;\ And hmm... I don't think they'll get Ulonged. XD That may or may not be a s00plar, but the Ralphcakes will lose... At some point. ;\ And I'm glad I kept Veronica, she still has plotlines coming up. ;\ Thanks for reading, guys! Green eyes glare,  pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  11:50, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

I just read the chapter, and I'M SO GLAD YOU DIDN'T CANCEL THIS THING! Yay, you did the team swap we talked about ^^ Can't wait for more Julia-Arthur interactions. Speaking of Arthur, I loved his talk about the guy who looked like a watermelon XD Lizza's cameo was interesting, and I also loved the poets, especially Hippo's multiple references tro Marina <3 I also died at the end of his poem XD Any chance you'll draw them? ;\ Veronica being a charles became true, yay! And did Mackenzie even speak this chapter? o_O Meh, I don't care about Devin's elimination at all, he was better this time, but still pretty repetitive. Can't wait for the next chapter! jk, I'll have to wait five more months for it  <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:01, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Mana, I'm so glad you found time to read this. :DDD And yeah, the team swap created so many possible new interactions that I had to do it. The watermelon was one of my favorite parts of the chapter. XD And I already drawed Polonium, and showed you. Hippo will be drawn soon ;\ Veronica's Charles plot is amazing so far, it won't disappoint. (and actually, I've started writing the next chapter so yeah XD) Green eyes glare,   pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  23:00, May 2, 2013 (UTC)

OMG. Toad updated within a month of his last chapter! :o :p. Anyway, loved the new chapter. I love how everyone had screentime this episode (I think I said that last time too. xD) Anyway, the signature Toad skit challenge <333. Only season it wasn't in was Tiki Jungle, I think. #trivia. Anyway, loved the interactions this ep. "You're a weirdo, Wolfie!" I love Puck so much. <3. Chelsey getting more screentime was amazing. Elena really is a leech on society. >_> . The Citrus Fruits won? :o. I liked Kavren, but there were a lot of comic releif random guys this season, so I guess he had to go. Can't wait for more!The saddest part is we&#39;re not getting paid that much! They never even buy us lunch! (talk) 19:25, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Epic. :D it was actually a week >.> But yeah, I definitely thought the screentime was better, I'm trying to work on it. :P And there wasn't anything in Tiki, there was a music video challenge, but that's kind of different. I knew someone would love that Puck line, I'm glad you found it funny. XD And yeah, Kavren getting out was kind of sad, but he was hard to characterize this season and was mostly an Arthur follower. Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you read :D Green eyes glare,   pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  21:23, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

I finally read it. Sorry for the lateness. ;\ xD Anyway... I LOVED IT. <333 xD I'm liking Puck way more this time than on Tokyo. :P And Wolfgang is just amazing tho. I died at the "Like if you like pancakes, ignore if you want angry sex with the devil" quote for some reason. ;\ xD The Toad's skit challenge. <3 I love them. xD This one was just hilarious. When I saw the song they were singing, Nissim came into my mind... AND THEN COMES ARTHUR. <33333 xDD I died at this scene. Well, the Citrus Fruits finally won a challenge? :O I thought they'd be Ulonged Team Victory-ed (since it's Total Drama ;\). Aww, I liked Kavren. xD But I think I love all those characters, so I knew eliminations would be sad. :P Can't wait for more! :D <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!" <font color="A4C639">"Don't tell me to do nothin'."  <font color="A32638">"Eat yo' rice!"  22:47, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

So, I read it some time ago but never had time to comment, so I'll comment on what comes to my mind now :P I'm loving the random interaction scenes this season, and arthur is surprisingly not unbearable at times this season. Oh, and also, ERB reference from Puck <3 Oh God, I hated the skt challenge in TDRev, and was afraid this one was going to be incredibly random, but I loved it XD Layla wearing the legendary banana suit! Arthur's part with the whale got me, I wasn't expecting that XD Oh, and I loved that The State Of Julia part, and after googling it, I discovered what's a Gulia XD So, the Ralphcase lost! I could see the vote going either way, Elena is kinda Fodder-ish this time around (maybe due to the similarity to Chelsey), and I noticed your growing dislike of writing for Kavren lately. I'm satisfied with the elimination, and I'm glad to say he wasn't as horrible as he was in TDRev, can't wait for more! (or India, IDC what's next) ;\  <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 20:17, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments! :D Bruno, I'm glad you like Puck a lot more, I think he's been pretty funny to write for. I love the pancaes comment. XDD And I knew you'd appreciate the Nissim scene <3 Kavren was hard to eliminate, but I felt like I could have more/different interactions. Mana, I loved Puck's reference <333 The skit was probably my favorite skit challenge so far, so I'm glad you loved it. :D I actually just said Gulia as like something that rhymed, but evidently it's an Indian thing ;\ I've been noticing Elena's similarities to Chelsey, but they'll act different, I'll try. I might make a new chapter of India. XD But thanks for reading, guys. :D Green eyes glare,   pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  01:31, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

YES, I FINALLY HAVE GOTTEN MYSELF FULLY CAUGHT UP ON YOUR STORIES TOAD! The skit challenge has been my favorite so far and was pretty damn funny. But yeah the Ralphcakes finally lost a challenge, woot! Kavren's elimination was a bit of a mixed bag for me, because I actually enjoyed him (for the most part) but in the end it just felt right for him to go early. I'm looking forward to the next chapter dude! THEONETRUEGOD IS SMILING DOWN UPON YOU ALL 12:09, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, I'm glad you've gotten caught up, Space! :D I liked writing for Kavren, even though he was hard to write for, but I'm glad you thought it was written right. I'm working on the next chapter, and it should be up soon. :P Thanks! Green eyes glare,  pirates sitting in the captain's chair.  19:57, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Another great chappy! :P First, as always, I gotta show my appreciation for Chelsey, and her being a CPN/OTTN g.oddess. <3 xD The Survivor challenge too. <3 And Chelsey waving her finger in Arthur's face and NakedChelsey giving Veronica two middle fingers. <3 Veronica is becoming a g.oddess too. :P Anyway, I wanted Mackenzie to go far and have development/screentime, and I don't really like Trey either. :c Anyway, she wasn't one of my faves, so idc that much. ;\ <font color="00B7EB">If you have time to think of a beautiful end, <font color="87CEFA">then live beautifully  <font color="6699CC">until the end."  01:21, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Read! Okay, so, I laughed at some parts in this chapter, it was pretty funny. Layla's dying whale noise was among those moments. Puck making random Marina reference <3 And I really like the Chelsey/Elena conflict. I also see plots developing as oppose to the cluster- err, convolution that was TDRev. Also, GET DAT SUGAR STATUS, CHELSEY. As for elimination, MacKenzie didn't really do much, and I still don't get why you chose her, so I don't really care. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 01:30, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, guys! :D I really wanted MacKenzie to get far too, but she's... really not a good character for this kind of story. Mana, I chose her mostly because there weren't any other good TDRev girls, and Cammy would have returned (with like Donny or something returning instead of Trick) but my OCD prevented me from having three characters with C names that ended in Y ;\ Bruno, I'm glad you really like Chelsey, I love writing for her this season <3 Veronica was great this chapter, too. :P I'm trying to make plots develop, and hopefully you'll like them. Thanks for reading! :D Now that the shoe's on the other foot,   you suddenly decided to knock on wood.  01:39, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Reddy reads a story #plottwist. I've read up to chapter one so far Toad, and I love it <3 It's really comedic, lots of the characters retain their quick wit from their previous seasons and I have no doubt that your all-star story will bring some all-star comedy to the wiki. I loved Chelsey so much, words can't describe. I love how people still call Kavren Karen (did they do that in Rev? I'm not too sure). I also love Nice (he hasn't changed a bit <3) and Wolfgang/Puck's relationship (I haven't read Tokyo, but it sounds hilarious so far). I also really hope Chelsey turns Flora into an alpha bitch, since that's what I thought of when I saw Chelsey commenting on her. <3 And I would also die to see Layla enslave Devin because he's so desperate to score with a girl. xD

Thoughts on each character:


 * Alex - Not much to say on him, he just seems really relaxed right now, I'm interested to see where the story takes him.
 * Arthur - I loved him, can't wait to see what misfortunes are coming his way trying to seduce the girls though. xD
 * Chelsey - Straight-up goddess.
 * Chrissy - She's cool, I read a little of Tiki jungle but don't remember her much. Hopefully she does more. :P
 * Devin - I loooooove Devin <3 He's always been one of my favorites. Hope he goes far, even though I'm pretty sure he doesn't.
 * Elena - Bahaha, I love her, get that butt monkey status <3 I can just tell something dreadful's going to happen to her, and I can't wait.
 * Estrella - I like her, she reminds me of pre-TDA Gwen <3
 * Flora - Chelsey please corrupt her. That is all.
 * Helga - Same as Estrella, except less Gothic. And I can image Helga being a strategic brain if you ever want to work in some cool strategy moves xD
 * Julia - I like her, she's so negative it's funny. :P
 * Kavren - Another one of my weird faves from your stories, as long as he doesn't get too annoying he should stay that way XD He's great, and such an outcast I can't help but like him.
 * Layla - Love. I hope she can operate well without Charles (I saw something in Tokyo between them) Hopefully she stays the same rich b*tch though. :D
 * MacKenzie - Meh, no real comment on her. Not too interesting imo.
 * Nic - I've always liked Nic, it'd be hilarious to see him mastermind the entire game and wind up winning <3
 * Ori - I don't like red.
 * PJ - ...
 * Puck - He seems cool, I'm interested in his relationship with Wolfgang. They seem like great foils. xD
 * Tolkien - I like him, he's a likable dork. Hope to see him go far and get the girl this time. :P
 * Trey - I'm actually really hoping Trey redeems himself form Tiki and proves he's a hero. XD
 * Trick - I was never a big Trick fan, for some reason. Just never liked him.
 * Veronica - The little sheep who could. <3
 * Wolfgang - Same as Puck, only I'm more so on Wolfgang's side cuz he's epic. <3

All in all, great first chapter Toad, I plan on reading more. :D I know you said you had some writer's block, so if you want any ideas I could always help. This is long enough already, Reddy out. <3 -- I Cannot Believe  My Eyes...  16:01, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for this so much, Reddy, I appreciate it. :D I don't think anyone called Kavren Karen before, but it always showed up in my suggestions in google search, so I had to include it. XD I actually got some new ideas for plots just from reading this comment, so I'm glad about that. I can't say much about the characters without possibly inadvertently spoiling you, but I really like how you did a thought for each character, it's cool to see which characters are good. The reason I brought Trick back was exactly that, I'm trying to make him semi-interesting but he's mostly really UTR. Wolfgang and Puck's relationship is hilarious and I love writing for it, but I'm also trying to have them interact with the others, so that's something to look forward to, since I have something big planned later. ;\ thanks for the comment, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story so far! Now that the shoe's on the other foot,  you suddenly decided to knock on wood.  21:56, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

XD I've been so behind, so I'm going to try and do a super update! So here's my thoughts on all the characters [totally didn't steal this from Reddy's previous comment];
 * Alex- He really hasn’t stood out to me yet, though I loved his role in the skit challenge. His alliance with Trick seems interesting and I’m curious to see if it goes anywhere. I’m also seeing him interact with Layla somewhat often, and I like that.
 * Arthur- He’s still pretty comical so I like him. I loved his interactions with Kavren, and his and Julia’s were good as well. And I love the Marina and The Diamonds references.
 * Chelsey- She’s still awesome and incredible. I like the more personality she demonstrates here, being sort of a mean queen. I also like the kind of strategist angle she kind has going. Also on a side note; is Smellelena actually Ellie? :O
 * Chrissy- Chrissy’s still funny, and her interactions with Nic are great. She does seem less present now that Julia isn’t on her team, so I think some more interactions would be good for her.
 * Devin- I’m honestly glad Devin left. He wasn’t too funny to me, and I couldn’t really understand him much.
 * Elena- Elena’s hilarious. I love her being the butt monkey. I like the friend/enemy relationship she and Chelsey have and interested to see where the alliance they kind of have goes. I’m curious if she’s gonna do antagonistic things like I kinda thought she might. I also like how you used Trey to spy on others and help her strategize.
 * Estrella- Estrella’s hasn’t been to present, but she’s still been very funny when she’s here. And now that Helga is on the separate team, I thing she’s standing out more on her own.
 * Flora- My love for Flora is still strong! I think she does kind of have a stronger personality, being very nice and accepting. I also love her winning the poetry/rap battle and the way it was played out. I don’t know if I’m using the term right, but I think Flora is a g.oddess to me. I hope to see her interact more. Maybe with Wolfgang or Julia, her niceness would be a good foil.
 * Helga- Helga’s still pretty hilarious, but a little underdeveloped. But you can’t share spotlight as equally and she’s gotta a fair amount, so it’s fine for her, though hopefully we’ll see more of her.
 * Julia- She’s still really great and funny. Her core character from Tiki is still there, but the 1E fan and social media quirks are also really hilarious.
 * Kavren- I’m kinda shocked to see Kavren go, but I suppose a shocking elimination is great. I find him pretty funny now, probably funnier than TDREV. Still, I don’t think he had that big a part so I don’t mind him going. And him leaving with the bannana was really cheesy in a sweet way :3
 * Layla- Layla’s still pretty funny, she’s having some interactions with Veronica and Alex, and I’m loving her lazy attitude [I literally laughed out loud when I read her making a dying whale noise].
 * MacKenzie- I’m not too surprised MacKenzie had to go, I suspected she would be the first out of labeled the boring girls. She did seem like she was taking a very serious, kind of straight man role to her team, so I’m kinda sad that dynamic didn’t get to go very far.
 * Nic- Nic’s pretty funny, his hitting on Chrissy has been funny, and his attempts at being sexy are funny, though kinda creepy.
 * Ori- I’m kinda glad Ori went, he was annoying, and not his usually funny self.
 * PJ- I hate to see PJ go, but I can understand why she’s not there anymore. She’s not that developed and I do think I won’t miss her that much. But I’ll always love her.
 * Puck- Puck is still super hilarious! He and Wolfie’s interactions are still funny, especially now that Wolfgang is talking more. And his kind of alliance with Arthur, Julia and Helga is funny too. Also, I love Puck’s twerking. He’s officially the Twerk King. Also, I know this is a joke, but did Puck and Casey break up? I hope not :o
 * Tolkien- I’m not too devastated to see him go, I do feel bad for him and the fact he’s lost Roz :(
 * Trey- I think Trey’s presence has become bigger as the story has gone on, and I like that, so I‘m glad he has. He’s been kind of funny. I’m also interested to see where this crush with Elena goes.
 * Trick- I don’t know why, I just don’t think I like Trick. He’s kind of a jerk, and you do have jerks realistically, but he’s not that funny, and kind of there. I do like the fighting scene between him and Wolfgang, and I could see a rivalry between them.
 * Veronica- Veronica’s role as Layla’s butler were funny, but I’m glad she is trying to interact with other people, and I’m seeing this dumb personality coming out, which is great.
 * Wolfgang- Wolfie’s still very funny, and I like the bigger role that’s he gotten, it works. And his attitude is great. I’m curious to see if he’s gonna hook up with anyone, or if that plan has changed.

The challenges have been pretty awesome. I liked the dressing up challenge, as well as the Poetry challenge, mostly cause I find hipsters hilarious. And Lizza had a cameo :D I wish Frank could’ve seen. I also liked seeing the ‘Take A Skit’ challenge, it’s a fav so hooray. And the chapter was really hilarious I think. The skits were both great, I loved Alex’s character as I said, and the comical outbursts and singing in the Ralphcakes were great.

I love the sandbag fighting challenge as well, the pairs participating were really great and hilarious, and the fight scenes were great too! And of course Chelesy’s top gets torn off XD

I like the team swap, I think it’s created some great interactions and allowed more focus to be spread.

I think you’ve done a pretty fair job at sharing focus among the contestants, there a few I’d like to see more from, but this is an All-Stars so that’s hard and I don’t think the focus has been on a specific group of characters too much every chapter, so in short, great focus on characters all around!

So hopefully my comment helps and now I can try to get comment more regularly. I’m sorry it’s so late!  Best TD pairing? Heather x Staci. You know there were subtle hints in the canon!   01:56, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ooh, thanks for this huge comment, Rhonda :D I'm glad you finally caught up, and that you seem to enjoy the story. It'd take forever to respond to all of this, but I'll try to see what I can do. So, Alex's character in the Take a Skit challenge was hilarious to write for, I'm glad you enjoyed Arthur's Marina reference. XD Chelsey is a favorite to write for, and I feel like I've given her more personality and funny lines too. I'm gonna have Chrissy interact with more people soon, so stay tuned for that ;\ Puck and Casey are still together, I just haven't referenced her much, but I'm gonna have old characters make appearances, so I could fit in a Casey appearance. I haven't done much with Trick yet, I admit, but I think I can do more with him, I just have to figure out what it is. Veronica's one of my favorites and I love how she was such a minor character and I've developed her. And Wolfgang, you never know what's gonna happen... ;D I'm gonna try to make some less focused on characters have bigger parts, so I hope you enjoy what I have to come. Thanks for the comment! Now that the shoe's on the other foot,  you suddenly decided to knock on wood.  04:22, July 19, 2013 (UTC)


 * I agree, I think Chelsey has developed and I think she ofically went up in popularity. I was just curious if Puck and Casey were still together cause Wolfgang sent a bunch of texts but I'm glad they are, their relationship worked well for a comedy and still went somewhere after it was formed, it may be one of my fav couples. I'm interested to see what happens with Trick, and even though I personally don't like him don't want that to affect your plans. I think TD:SS has done a great job at both using and bringing out the best of the most popular of your characters but also using lesser known characters and making them lovable and memorable. Veronica is a great example, and I agree I loved how you've developed her!  Best TD pairing? Heather x Staci. You know there were subtle hints in the canon!   06:11, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Another hilarious chapter Toad!

I didn't comment on Roz as the host on big comment, but I think she really works. She's funny and crazy so she can say crazy things or be blantant as she wants, and can interact on the cast with a good level in a humorous way Chris couldn't. She also takes such a cheerful attitude that I like, being happy to instruct a crappy challenge.

I thought it was kind of weird that Chelesy went and interacted with Wolfgang at first, but it actually does fit her character I think [she's that person who thinks she's so kind because she's helping you while berating you, and I know people like that]. It was certainly a funny moment.

I don't know if I agree with Alex or not, but Nic is creepier to me too. Although watching Dogfish to get tips to pick up women is creepy O-o He's still hilarious though, I espeically laughed when he made out with Estrella.

I liked Chrissy and Estrella interacting more, I think it was good for both of their characters, along with just interesting. I do feel bad for poor Estrella and her Cammy woes.

"“Hey. Girl. I don’t go around insulting your methods of doin’ stuff, do I?” Roz says." This made laugh out so much. And again, it's a great example of why Roz works as a host and Chris couldn't.

I like how Roz lampshades this isn't a complicated challenge and just fishin. I found this chapter's name funny too. I think this isn't the first time you've done a fishing challenge, I know at least one was done in Jungle. But it's a good challenge for team interactions.

Go Flora! Not only are you being hit on [kind of and by Puck] but Chelesy thinks you're kind of popular! The biggest thing that I think happened for Flora here was how she was generally getting mad at her team, and mad at Chelesy wanting her to stop being boring, like she can.

Her personality isn't boring as much as it is kind, and I like that and find it kind of funny, considering her teammates aren't exactly nice people. So go Flora, you g.oddess you ;D Hope you contiune to shine [I probably just jinxed it :P].

Julia's issues with 'Zane and Perry' were funny to me, but it might be because I know what it is, I have friends who talk about that stuff all the time.

''That was totes a throwaway challenge,” Chelsey says. “If you want good ratings, you have to do cool stuff. Like drama. Someone could get murdered, then we could start receiving messages from an anonymous person, and then we could solve mysteries and crap. That’d be so perf.” ''I feel like that's a reference to a story on here but I can't tell XD

The strategy aspect was really good this episode, and it did make the elimination more suspenseful I think. And XDDDD at Nic's joke to gravity.

I'm kinda sad to see Alex go. I liked him and that he didn't do much. I guess that's what I thought was pretty funny about him making it far in TDS. I do think that end line where Alex being an inspiration to lazy people was a reference to somone, can't remember who :P

I'm dissapointed to see Trick still in, I guess I just don't like the guy. I wanna see him and Estrella fight for some reason. I do think it would've been funny if Trick was eliminated and Nic successfully manged to make it happen.

So, great chapter Toad. With the merge coming, I'm excited to see what happens, as I really can't tell who will go next!  Best TD pairing? Heather x Staci. You know there were subtle hints in the canon!   06:11, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'm glad you read the chapter, Rhonda! :D First of all, I was hoping someone would get the Zane and Perry reference, because I know a lot of girls at camp who talk about that kind of stuff. I really like writing for Roz this season too, I think I have more variety for her because she can't be OOC unlike Chris. Chelsey is definitely the type of character you described, and I loved that scene. The fishing chapter in Tiki was really fun to write, and I was too lazy to come up with something cool, so yeah, I decided to bring it back. XD I'm glad the elimination was suspenseful, too. But yeah, glad you liked the chapter, and I'll be sure to write more soon! Now that the shoe's on the other foot,  you suddenly decided to knock on wood.  01:26, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I FINALLY read it (a little late but oh well). I loved Chrissy's conversation with Nick in the beginning, it's a kind of jumour I like, funny but not over-the-top. Kind of like Sprink's, take that as a compliment XD Smoothie Guy and Layla were also amazing, and I was worried she would go for a minute when she had the miss-Charles confessional. But Trick went, yay! MaleSlaughter <3 Well, I guess a girl goes next, probably Helga, Estrella or Elena. I wonder, though, why did you return people like Trick and MacKenzie over other more all-star-worthy Revolution people if they were just early outs who did basically nothing? XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:25, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for finally reading, Mana! :D Even if I bothered you to do it over and over Chrissy/Nic's conversation was pretty much my favorite part to write of the chapter, I love writing for both of those two :P And Trick was actually supposed to get far originally, and have some sort of a redemption plot, but the readers didn't exactly like him and I couldn't think of a way to make him nice without it being kinda OOC. And MacKenzie... I don't know why I brought her in instead of Cammy, maybe because Trick was already there. Cammy would have returned, though. <font color="FF1493">Welcome to the inner workings of my mind, <font color="00FFFF">so dark and foul I can't decide  00:42, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Read the new chapter, and I loved it! R.I.P Puber T. :( I love the Helga/Julia interaction, they're really funny together and I hope we get more of it. <3. The challenge was simple, but good. Versace <3 I loved when Puck fed Wolfgang's food to it. xD Trey pretending to be gay was an interesting plot, and I hope it carries over into other episodes. Veronica won't be a doormat, anymore. :o Elena was pretty good, but probably one of the worst ones left, so I'm glad she's gone. CHRISSY ROBBAGE </3. I loved her plots and dynamics with Nic/Estrella. :( Anyway, you said you were excited for next chapter, so now I am, too. :o Can't wait for more! Girls are not meant to fight dirty,  never look a day past thirty...  22:51, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for reading! Puber T will be back. ;\ Helga and Julia are great to write for, especially together, so I'm glad you enjoy them. Veronica was originally gonna be booted, but I felt like I could do more with her, so I kept her in ;\ Also, I felt awful getting Chrissy out, she's an awesome character ;_; I guess she's the token robbed g.oddess of the season or something, though. Elena was awesome, too, but kinda similar to Chelsey so I felt a little better getting her out. Glad you enjoyed it. ^_^ <font color="FF1493">Welcome to the inner workings of my mind, <font color="00FFFF">so dark and foul I can't decide  23:09, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

OH MY GAWD. I need to comment on the prior chapter, and I will soon, but...OH MY GAWD, I had like such a big fangirl moment throughout this whole chapter XDDDD So while it's still fresh in mind, I thought I'd comment.

So Nic's trying to put the moves on Veronica eh? Interesting, certainly a funny interaction for Veronica. Also love how Nic said '#NIC.'  The reactions to Chrissy being gone were nice, and Arthur's were particularly funny. I liked how the truffles were referenced again, I thought maybe they were only a one-time joke but I like the way they came back.

I feel really bad for Wolfie. His pleas about wanting to socialize I think were kind of a good way to kind of show what was going to happen. Like, he's complaining about Puck but at the same time it shows his loneliness and ties in later as well.

The Trey and Flora scene struck me as interesting for some reason. Maybe it's because Flora got so many lines. Either way, I did find it funny, it was kind of awkward but also jokingly boring.

I felt all of Flora's lines this chapter just really fit her, being kind of trivial and boring with either not much or very clear, simple emotions. It works for her, and her lines kind of characterized her.

I love how the challenge is just to go to Mickey Ds. That's just honestly great. I love the jokes that come from this situation, whether it be the fat jokes, Hippo's cameo or the Giant Macs.

Poor Versace. He was a pretty funny creature, and I like he was referenced to. Puck's jokes were great, there like jokes that are so unfunny it's funny, and fits his character.

Estrella's sarcasm was really great this chapter. Like everything she said had me laugh out loud for some reason. Chelsey getting her phone back from Arthur and later Helga were pretty hilarious too.

So Gary reappears! I was expecting Gary to be the one to return [I knew someone would based on the description in the tropes pages :P]. Interested to see what happens with him...and my hopeless romantic nature has me already thinking of shipping ideas for him...

Hippo's cameo was great. I didn't take this thought to seriously, but I did think he could've debuted as a contestant. Then I wrote it off as too crazy. XD, I could literally see the scene of Wolfgang throwing Versace out the window, slow motion and everything. And then Chelsey just interrupting it.

Arthur and Puck's scene was great, and Puber T showing up was pretty funny too. ...And oh my gosh, Casey :D I'm slightly disappointed at the tease of a Casey return...but I don't see any actual plot or stuff she could do so I understand.

Her cameo was great, worked really with her interactions with Puck and Chelsey. It was very in character for her and work. I'm glad her cameo also confirmed her and Puck's relationship status still worked. They are like the anti Karven and Abbey for me- I just adore them as a couple XD

On a completely pointless not, Chelsey likes Riley [or Miley]. Her popularity just dropped :P

And...'''OH MY GAWD. THE SCENE YOU HAVE TEASED ME ABOUT IN CHAT I SWEAR LIKE TWO SUMMERS AGO. IT HAPPENED :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD <3 SCHNITZELSHIPPING <3'''

It was a pretty good scene. I don't know if it was that built, but I really liked it. It had some humor [love this line, "You know, it isn't easy being sarcastic and rude all the time."] and was also really deep with character.

I like how Wolfgang wishes kids weren't afraid of him. I thought it was extremely sweet, and showed more than he lets out. I actually work at my school's daycare now, so I really love this angle. I also like how you tried to add a little more to the Wolfgang and Puck conflict by making Puck Wolfie's neighbor.

One thing I did notice is that Helga wishes they could be on the same team, when they are. I know you've had this planned for awhile, so I bet this was before a teamswap was planned.

I'm guessing who Helga is talking about being boring is Matie? It's left blank, which I'm not sure was or wasn't the point. And the dialogue about seeing a new light of Wolfie and friendship was just too sweet. And OH MY GAWD, that kiss. I like how you make it semi-awkward, because I can see it being that in reality. Helga's confessional was interesting, both realistic for her character and makes me question how there relationship will develop...

I am so looking forward to seeing how this develops! It makes me really excited!

I had a feeling Puck would go. It works best for Schnitzelshipping, and seemed to kind be hinted at with annoying people and doing bad at the challenge. And Casey and Puck together in that boat was too cute <3

I feel spoiled a little bit, like you made this chapter for me. Because it appeased my inner fangirl. There was a lot of great moments and twists, great humor, great romance, and a good, working elimination. I feel I saw so more from characters I wanted to, and every character really had great moments that just worked for them. So thanks Toad ;)  Code Red. Code Red Mountain Dew. It was pretty popular back then. Some might argue that it's popularity usurped that of regular Mountain Dew. I would argue...  02:57, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the amazing comment, Rhonda. ^^ First of all, yeah that was supposed to link to Mattie's page, but I copy and pasted it from Google Docs and the format derped. I'm really glad you liked the chapter, because I think it was one of my best ones yet, I loved how I turned a mundane task into a challenge. Flora was also particularly fun to write for this chapter, so I'm glad you enjoyed her. :P I did strongly consider Casey debuting, but since I had planned Puck to get out for so long I thought her interactions would just be with Chelsey, while Gary is a pretty versatile character. I LOVE the Wolfgang/Helga pairing and I'm glad you finally saw it. :D Also, you were right about the same team goof, I fixed that. I'm flattered that you loved the chapter so much, I agree the elimination was super fitting. And you're welcome! :D Can't wait to write more. <font color="FF1493">Welcome to the inner workings of my mind, <font color="00FFFF">so dark and foul I can't decide   01:04, September 10, 2013 (UTC)