User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/Run for the hills! The unthinkable has happened./@comment-1398015-20110302225919

Hey, writing out wars between fictional countries is MY thing! XD LOL.

I do agree with one of the commenters, some of the wording and sentence length was definitely a bit awkward. Otherwise, nice cliff-hanger-y start, which is atypical of you.

LAL, finished? That's preposterous, it always been alwyas will be! Speaking of fictional countries and neverending tales, the second chapter of WoC is winding down. I think I'll ask Gid to look over it too. Otheriwise, nice to know Chapter 18 is almost done.