User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/Quick update thingy!/@comment-1324135-20091014015044

I know what you mean there, but that was sort of my intention. I considered changing the periods to commas, but I really wanted to get the point across that Heather's half asleep and her thoughts are not as clear, but you still have a point. I was going moment by moment there, like those thoughts were running through her mind right as it was all happening. I might go back and change it later, though, because I see what you mean. That was an enjoyable yet hard scene to write because I was on an emotional high. xD Thanks for the feedback!