User blog comment:Sprinklemist/New Story/@comment-1636990-20120110114645/@comment-1153194-20120110153821

I'm glad you like it,, so far. I think the weaker dialogue must have been from having more normal characters the last two seasons. I don't always want zany characters. Personally, I don't love reading too much detail, so I'm trying to keep it balanced. Just saying 'more detail' is not too specific for me to understand what you mean, though. If you did lose faith in my writing, I wish you had given me more feedback. Staying quiet about it doesn't really help me much.