User blog comment:Tdiandrockmusic2/New Story Preview/@comment-1874924-20101128234851

Interesting. Your writing technique is really coming along, and Izzy's "squirrel" monologue sounds just like her. I'm not familiar with the "Federation of Central Usea", though. Is this story set in a fantasy world of some kind? Is the story perhaps a crossover with some other franchise you're familiar with?