User blog comment:Owenandheatherfan/Total Drama Writer/@comment-3222773-20120716010807/@comment-3222773-20120716012220

The plot could 've been a bit more developed, however,  I do understand her dislike of her mother using her hair to get down from the balcony, and I felt like that was amusing,  but I felt that the boy was just thrown in the excerpt for dramatic effect.