Talk:Total Drama Explosion

Feel free to predict a winner! You may predict up to 2!

Winner Predictions

 * 1) Alejandro- ★ Mikey    ☮   Beware of the neon  ★  00:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Anne Maria- --CK11 decided he should change his sig  to commemorate 2012.  00:06, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) B-  We ride with kings on mighty steeds   Across the devil's plane!   Tenacious D, we reign!  17:25, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Beth- JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  08:15, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Blaineley- -- If your undies are tight, it's uncomfortable.   If you're a boy and your bra is tight, I'm uncomfortable  00:55, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Brick- You Can Keep Your Romantic Comedies &amp; Girly Drinks... We Don&#39;t Need Them. 00:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) Bridgette- If you have found this, you are a stealth ninja. Where'd my signature go? 16:28, January 30, 2012 (UTC),
 * 8) Cameron- None
 * 9) Cody- Jaxswim   is Haunted  00:33, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) Courtney- ★ Mikey    ☮   Beware of the neon  ★  00:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) Dakota- ~ RPs & Writes! ♪   Dakota    ♫  Talks & Edits! 23:52, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) Dawn-Raritydawn427 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC), Jaxswim   is Haunted  00:33, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) DJ- If you have found this, you are a stealth ninja. Where'd my signature go? 16:28, January 30, 2012 (UTC),
 * 14) Duncan-
 * 15) Eva-  Sunslicer2   Slicing the sun  since 1997.  00:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) Ezekiel- Not Guessed
 * 17) Geoff- This is the part of me   that your never gonna ever take away from me!  01:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 18) Gwen-Raritydawn427 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19) Harold- --Radical M  My New Year's resolution is to not die in the apocolypse! 01:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20) Heather- Bruno:   Can't Think   Of a Good Sign!  20:14, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21) Izzy- JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  18:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22) Jo- I am  Jo , be very afraid!  21:16, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 23) Joe-
 * 24) Justin- Not Guessed
 * 25) Katie--- You can  call me   Taters!  17:36, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 26) Leshawna- Nduke's   talking, writing,   and contributing, all at the same time!  20:14, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 27) Lightning---You shoot me down,  but I won't fall   I am titanium!  22:12, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 28) Lindsay- You Can Keep Your Romantic Comedies &amp; Girly Drinks... We Don&#39;t Need Them. 21:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 29) Mike- This is the part of me   that your never gonna ever take away from me!  01:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 30) Noah- Bruno:   Can't Think   Of a Good Sign!  20:14, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 31) Owen- Not Guessed
 * 32) Sadie- JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  08:15, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 33) Sam- We ride with kings on mighty steeds   Across the devil's plane!   Tenacious D, we reign!  17:25, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 34) Scott- Nduke's   talking, writing,   and contributing, all at the same time!  20:14, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 35) Staci- -- If your undies are tight,  it's uncomfortable.   If you're a boy and your bra is tight, I'm uncomfortable  00:55, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 36) Sierra-Gotta love, the awesomeness that is Sierra ;) [[File:mroddy_toddles.png]] Forever Young  Talk 19:21, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 37) Suki--- You can  call me   Taters!  17:36, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 38) Trent- --Radical M My New Year's resolution <font color="#B2FFFF">is to not die in the apocolypse! 01:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 39) Tyler- --<font color="#9370DB">CK11 <font color="#FA9B00">decided he should change his sig  <font color="#0A78FA">to commemorate 2012.  00:06, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 40) Zoey---<font color="mediumturquoise">You shoot me down,  but I won't fall   I am titanium!  22:12, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Chapters 1 and 2: Welcome Back to Wawanakwa- Part 1, Welcome Back to Wawanakwa- Part 2
Gosh, that was really good. I'm not kidding. I love your writing style, if I imagine the voices, it really feels like I'm watching Total Drama! I laughed at the end with the "Better than being called a grip" "or a maggot" "or a rat." part. Really good, AJ! I'll make sure to tune in for the rest of the season! :) Jaxswim   is Haunted  01:31, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, I really liked this! I mean, the Heather-Leshawna-Suki line made me lol and I loved how all the contestants are back! Blaineley has already caught my eye and I am excited to see how the TD:ROTI contestants interact with everyone else! 4.5/5 <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 21:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is fun. I'm enjoying how the old and new characters interact, and you're keeping their personalities intact! Like Jax said, the "better than being called a grip" "or a maggot" "or a rat" was really good! JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  08:27, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I really like this chapter, it's plenty of funny lines and you can really see some stuff you describe really happening. Keep going, I've read the rest, and you're doing an awesome job. Try to give other characters more lines, as you're missing some cool interactions that could happen (Sam and Harold, for an instance) but I know it's because you're handeling a lot of characters, and they can't all be featured at the same time. Just keep this in mind, and keep writing as you're doing a fantastic job. <font face="Lucida Handwriting"> DJ_Fan Sing to Yourself♪ For Hold On 02:06, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm glad that all the originals are in character, and I also liked that part that Jax mentioned about the "better than being called a grip. or a maggot. or a rat." XD I also like how you're writing style is a mix of regular and script (for the confessionals). I wonder who's gonna win... We don&#39;t need your commentary. 19:53, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Omnom. Epic chapters. Loving some of the dynamics in the relationships... Jo-Eva, & Dj-Katie for example. The characters sound so much like their originals, and it shows you actually care about what you're writing. It has the same kind of feeling Total Drama always gave me, so I can't wait to read the rest and get more of those bubbles poppin inside of my little head--- Asides from that O_o Anne Marie has some pervy confessionals... Forever Young Talk 19:17, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I’ve finally gotten caught up with this story (through chapter 10). Since you have separate headings for each chapter, I’ll split up my comments accordingly. I'll post additional comments over the next few days.

In the early episodes, it seemed to be something of a running gag that whenever somebody did something noteworthy—or even just competent—one of the villains (usually Joe) would put them on the hit list.

I noticed a curious error that’s been recurring throughout the story. Various characters say, “if so-and-so thinks that X, he has another thing coming” when you presumably mean, “has another think coming,” since that’s how the saying goes. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  04:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 3: Capture the Mascot
Poor mascots. xD But that was fun! I love that Katie and Sadie are such dimbulbs when it comes to the game! xD Thanks for getting rid of one of them. They seem smarter when there's only one. ;) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  22:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Really happy Katie makes it farther than Sadie this time, after all Katie is my number one. Jo is starting to bug me, but she did in the show, so I guess you're doing a good job?!? Sierra, my loveable idol,she's doing amazing, and being the best she can be, if only Noah would stup being such a jealous butt-head! As for Trent, Courtney, and Gwen... I'm curious! Forever Young Talk 00:43, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

In the “capture the mascot” challenge, I’m not sure why the fox would run to the Pheonixes attackers. If it was indeed alarmed, as the narrative said, it seems to me that it would more likely run away from them instead of toward them when it sees a large number of people charging at it. Even if it’s tame, which seems likely, foxes are skittish creatures. Granted, this wouldn’t necessarily have changed the outcome of the challenge, but might have significantly altered its course.

I must confess that I was disappointed in seeing Ezekiel and Sadie be the first two eliminated. Although neither has ever been among my favorite characters (and are, in fact, well down the list) they and Katie got so little development on the show that fanfic writers have a lot of room to run with them, so I tend to see it as a wasted opportunity when any of them are among the first two or three out. (Fourth or fifth out is cool, if the writer does something with them in the meantime.) Of course I get the common joke of Ezekiel always being the first out, but still. It’s not as bad with Eva or Staci because, while they may be one-joke characters, their one joke was reasonably well developed.

Just so there’s no misunderstanding, since my comments so far have tended to be on the critical side, I’ve been enjoying this story and I plan to stick with it. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  04:39, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 4: Don't Be Afraid of the Dark
This was fantastic!! I loved all of the challenges, and I laughed at how perfect each one was. Great story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  03:52, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

That was fantastic! The usage of fears was non-stop laughs! Then when they were discussing who to vote off, that was very strongly written. A mix of strategy with Lightning's hilarious quips gave this chapter a satisfying edge. My one criticism is how B went home as that did not make much sense to me. However, I did find the chapter very enjoyable! Here's to many more! <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 22:16, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Unlike Jeffy-boy, I'm actually really liking how B being sent home as random, gives me the feeling we have a secret antagonist playing the game, and the cast is just too blind to notice it. Along those lines, loving how the cast is being "Rotated" in a sense with that meaning not one character is focused on every chapter, but they each have their own time to shine, if not in one chapter but the next... Courtney and Alejandro, again? Poor Heather, but I'm sure she will find a way to take out her pain on Lindsay- Maybe they will finally become true friends? Forever Young Talk  00:56, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 5: Return to the Film Lot
I Love <3 the picture of Bridgette in the beginning of this chapter! And you've captured the Izzy essence perfectly!! xDD I can't wait to see more, and the beginning is great! :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  05:13, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

This was fun, and I'm one of the folks who doesn't like Staci much. So good riddance! And, by the way, Owen is probably the strongest player, even though he doesn't look it. He couldn't possibly have outrun that boulder, though, so good choice on him sitting it out! :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  22:07, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I thoroughly enjoyed this episode! From the many witty remarks of the contestants' (Justin and Courtney in particular) to the strategy and Staci's quips, it was very entertaining. I do have to say the one flaw I found was that Cameron's line about Scott + Jo = Joe threw me off because as I was imagining it in my head, Joe and Jo sound exactly the same so imagine that slight confusion. Other than that this was very strongly written! Good job! <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 22:08, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sad to see Staci go, actually. Between her and Owen, I actually much prefer her- Would have been fun to see some more conversations between her and Lindsay. Joe and Dawn... Not sure what to make of the two, I actually think they would be cute together, as if Dawn could help better Joe's aura? But meh, IDK. Suki? I can't recall her name atm, is pretty funny, and I just love her shyness, much more than Joe's complaining. Jo, well she is still on my nerves, but in a funny sense... :D  Forever Young  Talk 01:14, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 5 has a continuity gap. After Owen’s vine breaks and he falls, he’s dragged off to an uncertain fate; but when the teams reach the temple set for the second part of the challenge, Owen has rejoined his team without explanation. As for the elimination, I can't say who I would rather have seen go. Owen is one of the characters I like least in the canon (in the first two seasons, anyway), but in this story he's been relatively inoffensive, if only because he's mostly staying out of the spotlight. In any case, it was an interesting elimination method, albeit probably of the "only works once" variety, because it insures getting rid of deadwood and gives everyone else a breather from all the intrigue. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  03:37, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 6: Puzzle it Up
AJ writes 5 chapters, many great comments on each one.

Jax writes 1 chapter, no comments at all.

FOREVER ALONE </3 Jaxswim   is Haunted  04:41, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

This was a totally awesome chapter, Jax!! I LOVED <3 all the team in-fighting! It really helped to develop the characters! And Dakota and Justin's paparazzi-off was phenomenal! xDD Thanks for having Dawn talk to the butterfly. xDD Butterflys are fortune tellers... xDDD I love <3 that!! :D I'm a Dawn lover! ;) Your lack of telling us about the clues was actually great, since there were obviously many clues, and telling us about finding them and what they were would've taken away from the character development, not to mention bog down the story, since you'd have to explain how each clue led to Scott. :P Great call!

Just FYI, I'm behind on all my reading, so don't get discouraged if no comments occur for a time. After all, I'm one of those readers that generally comments after every chapter! :D Great job, Jax!!! I hope you write some more chapters for this! :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  18:54, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

"lol" Haha not xD This episode was really funny....een though Jax of all people wrote it >.> Justin going home was interesting and I loved Dawn in the beginning. (For me I sensed a bit of sarcasm in the writing about Dawn which I liked but that might have been accidental). <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 21:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Really liked the whole Dawn and Dakota scenes they both really showed just how unique and worth-while they are. While, Beth and Noah made some smaller, but still good additions to the plot. Asides from both of them, loving Cody and the whole scheme to get Gwen back. Rather short comment, but meh, not much to say.... :o  Forever Young  Talk 04:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 6 has present tense narrative, whereas the rest of the story has past tense narrative. I don’t recommend mixing tenses like that, and it's something to keep in mind if this story has multiple authors going forward. That’s as may be, I liked the way that Dakota had it in for Justin out of jealousy over “her” paparazzi. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  14:26, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 7: Harry Potter and the Gilded Chris Award
Thought I'd bring to your attention that Chris mentioned Mary Potter, but the title is Harry Potter. Just FYI. ;) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  19:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Thinking about it, I think I actually prefer Mary Potter! xDD I hope school is out for you soon, so you can add to this! :) Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Any good or kindness I can show to any human being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.-Author Unknown 20:59, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Eva is out?????????? D:< How dare you ;( </3 She's one of my favorites ;( :P XDD I am  Jo , be very afraid!  22:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

JoFan, at least Jo is still in!! ;) xDD <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  16:54, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I meant to say this before, but I somehow forgot, I love Blainley in this story! She super-fantastic, and I liked her before, but I mean here, I just adore her, she has a nice touch. Kind of depressed about Eva being eliminating, in a similiar fashion to Staci- In the sense I just start to love how they are interacting with a character (Izzy and Eva, Lindsay and Staci) and then they get the boot. Love how you keep hinting toward DjxKatie, without actually forcing it on the reader. As for Noco, not to sure how I feel about this, the two are funny, but I'm starting to think it might lead to the end of Sierra... :(  Forever Young  Talk 04:34, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I liked Eva’s relationship with Jo. (Eva is my favorite minor character, and Jo is my favorite Season 4 character.) I half-expected that those two might come to blows at some point, but it looked like they were well on their way to becoming friends, or at least friendly rivals, by the end of Eva’s tenure. That makes sense, since they’re pretty similar, but it was certainly a bumpy road, as is likely to be the case with pretty much anyone who has dealings with Eva. Speaking of whom, Eva’s temper getting the better of her is certainly a logical reason for her to come to grief, but it wasn’t clear to me why she was mad at Chef/Voldemort.

As for Joe (who, as an undisguised villain, shouldn’t have a realistic chance of reaching the final few in a game like this unless the rules are tilted to favor villains—something that Survivor has done before), he admits that he’s not very good at manipulating or befriending. This would seem to be at odds with how Chris described him when he arrived. Then again, it was Chris saying those things, and we all know how reliable his word is. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  12:00, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 8: Remember that Big Plane?
Cameron's fun, but I'm kind of glad he's out. xDD I love that they got to be in the Grand Canyon, and that was great that Chris got to kick Cam out of the plane! xDDD Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Any good or kindness I can show to any human being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.-Author Unknown 00:22, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Longer comment this time! I LOVE all your character interactions! They're VERY interesting and true to the characters! I love how Harold "mysteriously" fell out of the raft, and how LaShawna is sticking up for him. That's fun, too, that Duncan wants Joe gone also! Hmmmm! Who voted how? Does Joe have his own alliance? Is Lightning a part of it? What does Dawn really know. All these questions and more shall be asked in the next episode of Total. Drama. Explosion! :D xDDD Actually, I'm loving your character interactions as much as the challenging adventures! Awesome writing!! Great characterizations! :) Keep up the great work! :D <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  16:52, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can't say I'm sad to see Cameron go... I love the whole idea of the chapter it was a fun scene, and interesting to read. (Liked the fact that the song was on a seperate page, which bwt was really well written.) I find it funny how basically the only time we see Dawn is when she warns the others of the upcoming danger, and because of that she scares me... Beth-Noah-Sierrax Cody, eh? Interesting love shape thing you have going on there, wouldn't surprise me if one of them get sthe boot soon, due to the others seeing them as threats, the only thing I would like to add onto that, is I would love to see some Cody-Heather scenes, after the finale of TDWT, it just seems they would atleast talk? Speaking of Heather, glad to see she hasn't gone soft! And Jo, get a life, please. Forever Young Talk 23:16, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Jo’s behavior during the challenge seems a little sketchy to me. I get the “sight” gag of Jo pulling a megaphone out of hyperspace and playing coxswain, but I honestly think she should be paddling with the others, which incidentally would give her an additional reason to ignore Suki. Although I haven’t seen all of TDROTI yet, Jo strikes me as a hands-on person who likes to lead by example with a “this is how it’s done” attitude. Likewise, I would expect Jo to express displeasure with a glare or a snarl, rather than by sticking out her tongue. Speaking of which, in Heather’s confrontation with Joe, it seems that she should have been the one sticking out her tongue, because she’s done it in the canon and such a petulant gesture seems beneath a Prince of Darkness like Joe. (Joe seems more like the sneering type.) Gideoncrawle  I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  03:36, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 9: Vegas, Baby
I got soooo engaged in this chapter ._. like...I don't even know that ending was stunning. Seeing that Joe confessional at the end, my jaw dropped a little and I fell back in my chair, satisfied and shocked at the Lightning/Scott/Joe alliance. tbh, the challenge was a little weak, but that wasn't the focus of the episode. Great one, AJ! Jaxswim  is Haunted  17:22, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty much the same as Jax. That was fun!! :D I adore your character interactions, and that confessional at the end was epic!! Of course, I'm left wondering if Joe said the names Lightning and Scott to confuse us, since they didn't actually say anything. I wouldn't be at all surprised if they were in on it with Joe, but we can't be sure, ...yet! >:D I'm really glad Harold knows who pushed him out of the raft in Chapter 8, anyway. And what's Katie doing? I thought she was smarter than that. Oh well. :P Jay JLOM <font color="Fuchsia">Any good or kindness I can show to any human being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.-Author Unknown 21:54, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with all that was said above. AJ, this is a truly amazing story. I love all the twists and turns. Personally, I hope to see more of some of the characters that were "spot fillers" in their canon season. Can't wait for more! :D--<font color="mediumturquoise">You shoot me down,  but I won't fall   I am titanium!  22:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

...Katie? Tsk.Tsk. Nah, I trust my home-girl, that or I trust Dawn's feelings, I really hope that she is playing Alejandro I think it would be neat for her to finally "play" the game. Love how Beth took charge, actually, I just love Beth in general, glad to see Jo finally backed down for once... Out of all the things I could think of for Suki, I did NOT see that coming, but I actually really like it, would be interestin to know if others start to notice her- Or if one ot the contestants already knows it's her, are keeping their mouths shut. Joe, I hate you, but I find it neat how he's a mix or cock-tail of all the villains of Total Drama... Forever Young Talk 23:35, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Alejandro complains that he can’t manipulate anyone because people will know what he’s up to, but that doesn’t seem to bother “undisguised villain” Joe. Speaking of villainy, Joe’s scheme to silence Harold doesn’t really seem consistent with the way he was introduced, given that even if Harold denounced him, it would just be Harold’s word against Joe’s, since there were no apparent witnesses. Perhaps Joe has realized that he overreached with the whole “I’m a villain and I don’t care who knows it” schtick? I can see him allying with Scott, since both are antagonists and both presumably expect their foreknowledge of the other to protect them from a backstab, but I’m not sure what Lightning is doing in this rogue’s alliance. Again with the disclaimer that I haven’t seen all of TDROTI yet, it doesn’t seem to me that he would be likely to condone any form of cheating, since he’s so full of himself that he’s undoubtedly convinced that he can win fairly. True, he’s ticked that the veterans aren’t giving him the respect that he thinks he deserves, but that hardly seems sufficient justification for the kind of person that he seems to be.

If Joe doesn’t have a large supply of extra passports—and frankly, he’d better not, because that would basically render everything else about the World Tour phase irrelevant—I quite frankly think that Joe blundered by railroading Harold instead of a far greater threat: Dawn. Her aura reading power, which at times seems just one step short of outright mind reading, makes Dawn a serious threat to the success of any underhanded scheme. It seems to me that any player with devious leanings would want her gone at the first opportunity. I like Dawn and don’t particularly like Scott in the canon, but I have to admit that he had the right idea in Season 4.

In the Vegas challenge, Blaineley seems to have a point for once. Being (even) better known than the other contestants, her presence probably is helping her team this time. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  04:36, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

CHICKEN PERFUME XDDDDD Oh god AJ I love you...Suki is so amazing with that Youbox thing....and also....I hate Joe -.- Even though he got rid of Harold who I really don't like....This whole villain cheating attitude is going to be like my arch enemy of the story xD Alright nothing I said makes any sense soooo Good day! <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 16:40, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 10: Baby It's Cold Outside
That was fun! I'm sad to see Beth go, though. Awesome "volleyball" challenge! xD <font color="mediumslateblue">JustLittleOlMe  Lil   Jay JLOM   Jay-Z  Jay-cobb   Jayneneh  Lady Gideon  15:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Suki... I'm actually starting to really like her, atleast more than Joe anywho, now I'm curious as to what she made videos about. Blainley, I love you darlin' I really do, you write perfectly, and her lines always make me laugh the most, "Cody playing for the other team" for example, and her making an alliance seems very Blainley, and I'm glad because maybe she might make it somewhere, but Beth? Eh, who knows what's going on in her head. I'm starting to feel bad for Sierra all over again, I hope something goes right for her... On the same note, loving the NoCo. Courtney and Gwen, still screen hogs, but I don't mind it now, because it's not just about them and their love life, it's just so much more realisitc and I hope the two ladies can get the drama over with before someone gets hit in the cross-fire. As for Katie... I feel bad for her too, and I think if both her and Sierra make it far the two would make a kick-A$$ duo of the heart-broken. Forever Young Talk 23:57, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I’ve never understood why so many people think that the canon Noah and/or Cody are homo- or bisexual. The evidence for Noah is flimsy at best (kissing Cody while asleep during the Awake-a-thon) and there’s even less for Cody. (Being kissed in your sleep means you’re bi? Seriously, people?) And let's not forget that both Noah and Cody were appalled, to put it mildly, when they realized what had happened. In any case, there was no followup in TDWT. Oh, well, some people will see what they want to see. Personally, unless/until I see something clearer in an actual episode, I’m inclined to regard any show of romantic/sexual attraction between Cody and Noah as OOC in stories that acknowledge the entire canon. (In reimaginings or “TDI never happened” stories, on the other hand, pretty much anything is fair game.)

On a related note, at this point it’s incorrect usage to say that Sierra is “in denial”, let alone “obvious denial”, regarding the prospect of something going on between Cody and Noah, because that implies clear and convincing evidence that Sierra simply refuses to see. The evidence at this point—at least as far as Sierra would reasonably know—is ambiguous, so Sierra’s reaction is properly described as skepticism and/or fear, not denial.

Apart from the NoCo, which (as I mentioned) I consider out of character, I’m still enjoying this story. You’re doing a good job with the politics. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  04:17, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 11: Lost in Wawanakwa
(Move this to Chapter 11 when you post the heading?) Anywho, as promised I read the tad bit you have posted and I really do enjoy it. As per usual, let's start with Suki? I love the whole autograph scene near the "End" I think it would be interesting to see Blainley start to grow weary of her, and her "Secret" maybe going as far as to go all detective and find out everything she can about her-Perhaps enlisting Noah's help. As for the others, Scott/Dawn I find really adoreable and I do hope Scott ends up helping her and that she doesn't have to leave... Maybe even the really bad thing could happen to him and she ends up saving him instead (Role reversal ftw?) As for finishing the challenge, since they all seem to be sleeping, or going to be anywho, maybe have someone tell a bedtime story? In the morning, it could be an all-out footrace back to camp? Forever Young Talk 04:27, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

So I read the chapter and I'm loving Blainley, everything about her is just omnom. Her and Noah teaming up can only lead to trouble, but I can't wait to see how it plays out... And her evil plans for the Final two contestants, only shows how smart she is. On the other team, Trent and Alejandro.. Seems, interesting. Would be cool to see what would happen if the duo teamed up and Trent brought out the softer side of him, much like Heather started to do in the third season. The smaller couples are being hinted at again this episode and I can't wait for the "Pop" that is sure to come in a chapter soon!! Forever Young Talk  21:38, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Votes
Also, please vote on some things here!

Three:

 * 1) Easier to follow with smaller teams. Jaxswim   is Haunted  00:33, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) They wouldn't be evened, but I like three team better. xD Maybe someone can be voted off~before the teams get formed. *cough*Duncan*cough* :P Bruno:   Can't Think   Of a Good Sign!  16:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Two

 * 1) Considering the number of contestants, I'd say 2. You Can Keep Your Romantic Comedies &amp; Girly Drinks... We Don&#39;t Need Them. 22:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) With this many contestants, I don't know if I could keep them all straight as 3 teams. With 3, you'd also have to have 3 different sets of action and 3 different plotlines for "how to win" each challenge. Too much for me. JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  08:34, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Script

 * 1) Personally, I don't think script is "noobish". But that might be because I'm writing a school play. Anyways, I think it keeps more in touch with the actual Total Drama, in my opinion. You Can Keep Your Romantic Comedies &amp; Girly Drinks... We Don&#39;t Need Them. 00:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) With this many contestants, this style could be easier for you and us, but it doesn't matter much to me either way. JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  08:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Story

 * 1) Script is n00bish. >.> Jaxswim   is Haunted  00:33, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) I totally loved your story-style writing, Jax! It flows better than script, actually. For me, anyway. :) JustLittleOlMe Lil   Jay JLOM   Lady Gideon  19:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)