Talk:Total Drama Losers

Polls
Rate Chapter Eight on a scale of 1-5 1 - Awful 2 - Okay 3 - Decent 4 - Great 5 - Perfect

Which team do you like better? Losing Locusts Globetrotting Grizzlies

Which team will lose next week? Losing Locusts Globetrotting Grizzlies

Who should have been eliminated? Deb - Lost the challenge Cecil - Liability in challenges One of the Globetrotting Grizzlies Other

Chat
EEEEEEE! First comment! - Copper5

Congrats. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary  Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:02, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Will you let people decide some players? Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary  Unison buddies!!!   BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE!  00:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Only 12 people O_O-- Ken zen   Elev  en!  00:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I've already picked the twelve. Yes, kenzen, only 12 returning contestants. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:23, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

AWESOME!!! I hope Audrey is in this!!!! And is the prize for the TDAS final three guessing contest like you get to see 11 (i think tht it's 11) of these contestants????? Cards777 LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶00:34, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure Audrey would be the twelfth. XD I look forward to this. I may write a blog about it... Sprinklemist Cyan is the new green. 00:36, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The winner of the final three guessing (somebody is already right XD) will get to see the 12 Losers! Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:41, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I can't wait for this!!! (I already posted like AWESOME!! but i don't care!) Cards777 LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶00:44, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure to read this! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I already did :) Cards777 LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶00:48, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Whoot! Season five! I take it this season it's contestants who did poorly in the other seasons. Oweguy is somewhere on Plastic Beach - Or not  Or maybe I am  21:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't even see this page was created!? I'm slow! Anyway, I'm pumped! Jason   Talk To Me!   04:27, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah Total Drama Losers!! I am psyched for this season! The return of Hank, Frasier and Elvis, what's good!! Oh yeah, and Audrey also.- The Anonymous User 14:51, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Jess? Interesting choice. She was a big fave of mine. 8D Sprinklemist Cyan is the new green. 00:18, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Interesting cast! I think that I would like Audrey, Jess, Martha, or elvis to win. Sierra: But who needs friends when you have a CODY?!LOL00:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I worked hard picking this cast, no fails like Bruno in TDAS. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm also glad that Bozo is back. Bruno could have been awesome. XD Sprinklemist Cyan is the new green. 00:53, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Bruno was fail. XD Also, I really wish I could do songs for this story... Ah well I guess. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 01:10, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

You could always the change the title to Total Drama Singing Losers. 8D Sprinklemist Cyan is the new green. 01:13, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

IDK, they travel around the world, so it would be too much like TDWT. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary  Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 01:15, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well, um... Make it stationary. Sprinklemist Cyan is the new green. 01:16, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I've got some great ideas with this one. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary  Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 01:18, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

kk. I look forward to it. :) Sprinklemist Cyan is the new green. 01:21, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I always considered a Singing gerne in it but if i did that with my second story it would be to world toury with the fact they are traveling the world because world travel is awesome and i can chris it and do little research on locations XD-- Ken zen   Elev  en!  01:22, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

LOL, thansk guys. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary  Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 01:29, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I am pleasantly surprised at the cast of this one! I think I want to see Frasier or Elvis win, and some more development from Martha, Hank, Sally and Audrey. I look forward to the start of this story!- The Anonymous User 01:46, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like this cast...GO MARTHA! Goldenshane 02:23, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guys! I'm really hoping I can start this by September, but its looking impossible, I'll be gone from right now until Monday on vacation. Bye guys! Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really excited for this since Audreys in it! Turnertang 12:43, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm a bit disappointed that there's no Sam, Bulldog, and Fuega; however, I do love the inclusion of Bozo, Elvis, Hank, The Hobo, Rob, and Sally. -- Now the party  don't start   'til Koops   logs in! 

Im getting excited! - Copper5

Me too! :D Nalyd Renrut - Legendary  Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 14:28, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Go Hobo, Ugly, Bozo, Jess, and Sally! - Copper5

Great first chapter.-user:lindsaysbiggestfan

Thanks! :D -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 19:04, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

LOL great chapter!!!!! <font color="SpringGreen">Tdi <font color="Cyan">Hi<font color="HotPink">I isn't Alejandro 19:14, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reading Tdi! :D -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 19:18, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

So that's what the new cast was for! I like the idea of a twisted "fans vs. faves" theme, and this story so far is just that! I liked the first chapter, and Rob definitely got what he deserved for his failed strategy. I appreciate the effort, but he should leave the strategy to the smart ones. Keep up the good work!- The Anonymous User 23:11, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Great first chapter Nalyd. I would say Sarge is my favorite newbie. TotalDramaAddict I got one!!! Wait... What was it 00:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Epic Nalyd. xD I loved the scene where everyone threw Fraiser out of the plane. I'm rooting for the Globetrotting fans, particularly Salvatore and Chicken. Keep up the good work! PS: Rob leaving wasfine, didn't like him too much. ♚ Prince Reddude the FIRST ♚   Slicing the enemy  'til the night falls short... 00:49, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much for commenting guys! I wanted to do fans vs faves, TAU, but I already did a fave season, and a full season of 22 losers would be fail. So I took fans and losers. XD Thanks, TDAddict, I thought Sarge would be strongly disliked. :p Thanks for reading Reddy, and that was one of my fave scenes too. XD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 01:36, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Epic first chappy Nal! :D *le gasp! did MTDM finally comment on a NalydStory? :o xD.* -- mtdm  doz knot no   hoe 2 spill  02:17, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

OMG, I think he just did! :o Thanks! :p -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:07, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

EEEEEEEEEE! It's up! Ill read it when I get home from school today then comment! - Copper5

XD, love the first chapter! Great idea including Maulik and those other characters! I want Ugly, Hobo, Bozo, Jess, Sally, Maulik, or Chicken to win! - Copper5

Thanks Copper! Glad you enjoyed it! Oh, and guess what guys! Rob wasn't originally going to go! *dramatic music* Who do you think it was? ;) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe!  Master of epic pwnage 21:26, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hank. We probably would have quit. - Copper5

Oh, and I can't confirm or deny, sorry. XD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:49, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm excited you posted the first chapter. I hope Audrey is as awkward as she was last time and Chicken and Maulik are pretty awesome people too! Turnertang 02:51, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry, there's plenty of Audrey coming up! Thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:11, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Epic season. Epic episode. I'm rooting for Audrey, Chicken, Elka, Elvis, Frasier, James, Katheryn, Maulik, Rosalinda, Sally and Sarge. It's really on now. Just you wait! 05:59, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reading! :D I'm gonna work on chapter two today and hopefully get it posted tonight/tomorrow. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 14:42, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

I can't wait for my specialized summary of chapter 2. 8D <font color="Green">Sprinklemist <font color="Orange">hasn't changed his signature in a long time. 03:28, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

That was a really great chapter, Nalyd. I liked it, a lot!! I think Bozo is my favorite of the returning characters, although I do like Jess and Frasier (or however it's spelled), too. And of course, Audrey. For the newcomers, I like Salvatore, Maulik and Sarge. -- Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi!It's nothing illegal! I swear! 03:40, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Great chapter two! I'm hoping for Audrey, Sally, Rosalinda, and Elvis. <font color="SpringGreen">Tdi <font color="Cyan">Hi<font color="HotPink">I isn't Alejandro 05:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, you guys. I'm glad you liked it. :D -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 12:40, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Epic chappy Nalyd. 8D Was the chllenge a parody of that Survivor one... with the pirate shapes? xD. I loved Bozo's parody of Dynamite. 8P Gooooo Bozo! :D -- mtdm  doz knot no   hoe 2 spill  13:15, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. This chapter was good. I really thought that Salvator would go since many people dissed him in the beginning. I liked the elimination with using the puppets. That's a really unique idea. James gone this early? I definetly didn't see that coming. Good stuff Nalyd! 13:31, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guys! No, MTDM, I thought this up on my own. XD Thanks Fanny, it was partially inspired by the puppets in "This is How We Will End It." James' elimination, like Rob's, was a last minute idea. I think if I do eliminations like that, they'll be more surprising. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 14:48, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

You were right Nalyd. This chapter was awesome! -- D J   Spen  star!  15:56, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Spenny! Glad you liked it. XD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 18:01, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Salvatore! Go, yah! Salvatore is fooling theLosers like they were born yesterday. Seriously, the losers need to step it up, but they didn't do so good in their original seasons, and they voted out their highest ranking members.... Do they have brains? D: Challenge was awesome. I seriously want Bozo to make the merge, dude. Bozo and Salvatore FTW! ☃ Worker Elf Reddy ☃  Making presents  For all! 18:11, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you liked it Reddy! I agree, the Losers aren't being too impressive yet. XD Maybe they'll get it together soon. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 18:19, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes! Jess stayed! She's one of my favorites and good ridance to James who tried to eliminate her! - Copper5

The Dynamite part killed me. Why? I had to do a parody for spanish congregations. My group did Dynamite XD <font color="SpringGreen">Tdi <font color="Cyan">Hi<font color="HotPink">I isn't Alejandro 20:01, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you liked it Copper, I know you've been waiting. XD The Dynamite part was a last minute idea, I didn't think anybody would get it. XD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 21:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for there to be a fantasy league of this on the camps wiki? That'd be cool! 13:31, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'll start one when we're down to 20 people, make sure I remember. XD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 21:44, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I like these new characters especially Maulik but bozo was the best this chapter because of her song! Turnertang 02:23, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D I think the third chapter will be even better. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 18:32, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

“Audrey exposed you,” Elvis said. -- *prints quote out, hangs on bedroom wall*

Glad you liked it, KG. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 20:32, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

This has been my favorite chapter so far! I liked Audrey being all strategic. I also think there will be an alliance war between Elvis's and Jess's alliances. - Copper5

Glad you liked it, Copper! :D This was another favorite of mine. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 20:39, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

I am beginning to get annoyed with the Globetrotting Fans. Their winning streak is causing more and more Losers to be eliminated, and they are the reasons that I really want to read this story. I don't have a problem with the new characters for what they are, but I don't like the whole Fans vs. Faves thing; it's just a personal preference thing, no offense to you and your writing. I will continue to read this, but I love the Losers, and want them to turn it around.- The Anonymous User 22:01, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, man, I knew some people wouldn't be happy about it. I had to eliminate Losers first so that the new characters could get screentime. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:05, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is the second Nalyd story I've read, the first one being Amazon, and I already love it. I do agree about the Fans' winning streak, and I sort of wanted Sally to get far, since she was first voted out in World, but who cares? It's a great story. XD Gotta get pants! Go get your pants! Button, fly! 22:19, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man! I wanted her to go far too, but I needed a female Loser, and I have plans for all the others. :p -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:23, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

A new chapter should be up by the 29th. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 13:36, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. I'm begining to really like Sarge! :D Him and Bozo ftw! ☃ Worker Elf Reddy ☃  Making presents  For all! 13:38, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

You're not supposed to like Sarge, he's an antagonist! xD Thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 14:03, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice chapter! :D While I'd rather have some of the fans eliminated, I understand why they keep on winning <font color="SpringGreen">Tdi <font color="Cyan">Hi<font color="HotPink">I isn't Alejandro 02:01, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Tdi! I appreciate it. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 14:12, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

If I get a snowday tomorrow or Friday I'll write some. And if anyone has a challenge idea I'd appreciate it! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 20:26, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

How about making gingerbread, dressing chickens, or snowboarding on mud? XD I don't know, totally random. Gotta get pants! Go get your pants! Button, fly! 20:29, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well that's certainly original. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 20:39, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know. XD I just sort of thought of it, I don't really know how. It's mostly a joke, but if you want to use them, go ahead. XD Gotta get pants! Go get your pants! Button, fly! 20:42, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ha, thanks anyway. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 20:58, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe they can fish and make dinner for Nalyd! IDK just throwing ideas out :P <font color="SpringGreen">Tdi <font color="Cyan">Hi<font color="HotPink">I isn't Alejandro 03:24, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should have them do a fighting challenge! those are always fun! - Copper5

Ha, I like it Tdi. xD I'd love a fighting challenge, Copper, any ideas for a location? -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:30, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

maybe they should have a swordfish sword fight like cody and alejandro had in TDWT, since it's in the water.-user:lindsaysbiggestfan

Im not sure. L.A. maybe? Somewhere violent. - Copper5

Ha, the Cody vs. Alejandro fight was epic, maybe I'll do something like that, thanks for the idea! Probably not LA, Copper, they just left California. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:23, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

China? It could be kung-fu style, I guess...... <font color="SpringGreen">Tdi <font color="Cyan">Hi<font color="HotPink">I isn't Alejandro 04:02, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hm... Maybe! :) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe!  Master of epic pwnage 11:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

China! Maybe they should have to find the evil Tobi there. XD. And instead of any regular game of hide-n-seek, Tobi has aligned the place with bombs, landmines,etc. That would be awesome! -user:lindsaysbiggestfan

I have to say, the first five chapters were great, I'm surely looking forward to the other three chapters in stored.  TDAR  is Excellent! ♥ 13:34, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ha, a hide-and-seek game in China would be epic. ROCKS, I think you mean first three chapters, unless I wrote some chapters I didn't know about. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 16:02, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

XD love this story! Can't wait to see what your cooking up >:) I love the globetrotting fans but thats cause I don't know the losing losers well. I love Gretal! ID why but I do. I also love BOZO! I was wondering if you could update the globetrotting fans bios with pics of them. I don't have many challnge ideas but they are in calforina so they could do some type of fame based challnge. Or they could go to washington D.C and do some political challnge or reanact a war. Doing either one will result in traveling highways I think. They could try and hitch a ride and meet a contesant from another version. The globetrotting fans could meet Juilo and we could find out about Deb and Julio's breakup! OOO please do that! If you want to change contientants you could have contestants ride boats from Calofrina to somewhere. You could do the same at Washington cause its at the coast. Anyway Im a huge fan of the story and can't wait for more! P.S. Iv'e been singing Bozo's song for days :) - Rhonda the stalker fan

WOW! Thanks for commenting! :D I'm having a super secret artist make the character pics, it turns out I don't have the time or ability. xD Thanks for reading, I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much. :D -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:12, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the new chapter. :) I was sad about Rosalinda leaving. She never got to prove she was a hypnotist. :( But I can't wait to see the drama unfold. - Rhonda the stalker fan!

Thanks! Yeah, I had trouble coming up for a plot for her, so the failed hypnotist kinda worked out. xD Oh, trust me, next chapter will be the most explosively dramatic yet. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:59, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

There might be a new chapter this week too. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:37, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. For some strange reason I predict that their will be a huge conflict between Jess and Martha. Maybe im like Elka! XD. - Copper5

Thanks for reading Copper! Maybe you are, haha! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 23:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I have a question about Rosalinda. In the rough draft of the characters was she the girl in the rainbow skirt? - Copper5

It's about time the Losers won a challenge! The Fans were getting on my nerves, and still are a bit. I like your other casts better than them for some reason, especially the TDP and TDAm ones. Therefore, I'm not too busted up about Rosalinda leaving, though I would like Maulik or Chicken to hit the road soon as well. They both seem pretty useless.- The Anonymous User 23:18, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Dont diss meh Chicken! XD - Copper5

No, Rosalinda was not one of the original characters. Thanks for reading, TAU. Some of the Fans, like Rosalinda, are just there to be voted off early. Once we get closer to the merge only the Fans with big parts will remain. Do you not like all the Fans, TAU, or just Chicken and Maulik? -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 23:20, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I thought Malik should've fought because he said he was going to prove to everyone he was tough. He's my favorite character. He's awesomeness! Turnertang 00:37, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Turnertang! Maybe he'll get a chance next time. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:38, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Guess what guys! Next chapter is a... double elimination. :O -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 21:16, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Liked the challenge, especially Bozo randomly speaking Japanese. XD I was sad about the eliminations, though. "The Hobo", I really wanted to get with Martha, and Elka was one of my faves. :( Team switch? Coolio! Can't wait :D Sarge and salvatore may seperate! :o   Ⓡⓔⓓⓓⓤⓓⓔ   --   ✎  Talk to me  ✎   --   ☮  Peace, man  ☮    16:19, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Sarge would let himself be separated from Salvatore. xD Thanks for reading, glad you liked the challenge. Bozo is definitely a favorite of mine. xD The Hobo might get her still. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 17:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think I know why you wanted ,me to read this chapter. XD I liked it, a lot. I was just remembering what it was like to read a Nalyd fic. XD I'm glad Elka is gone... and The Hobo, too, actually. Now I can read it, without being bothered. I think it's kind of cool that Elvis has amnesia. That's new in these stories, right? ALso... Why is Bozo randomly speaking Japanese? Did I miss something I should know? XD <font color="Green">Sprinklemist <font color="Orange">hasn't changed his signature in a long time. 17:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Glad you liked it! :D And now you can freely read my stories. xD Bozo speaking Japanese started this chapter, IDK why. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 17:55, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

(Gasp!) It was "Chicken" who eliminated Elka! Why did he do that? - Copper5

It will be revealed in the next chapter, Copper. Thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:06, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great chapter, I loved the challenge ideas. My favorite thing was when Maulik said "Thank you don't coma again." I'm thinking it was based on Apu's catchphrase but I may be wrong. Anyways, great chapter Maulik and Chicken are my favorite. Turnertang 23:33, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was based on Apu's famous line! Thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 23:35, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks everyone for the feedback, I appreciate it. :D (And wouldn't mind some more xD) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 21:38, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

YAY! I loved this chapter. Gretel's my favorite right now. That and "Chicken"... poor Chicken... Goldenshane 16:59, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think we all knew Chicken wasn't long for the game. xD Thanks for reading Shane. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 17:38, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't suppose anybody else read this?...-- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 12:29, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did, but I forgot to comment since it was late. XD I laughed at the broken Chicken, and I really want Martha and Elvis to hook-up (Unl;ess I missed something and they already have... O.o) I Wonder how Sarge is gonna react to facing Salvatore on opposing teams. XD Good chapter. :) Spotted at the hottest shows,  interview on Charlie Rose,  they all want a piece of you!  12:36, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, Martha just likes Elvis because Audrey said Elvis likes Martha even though it was actually The Hobo who liked her. I'm sure Sarge is furious. xD Thanks for reading!-- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 13:03, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I read the chapter, and it was pretty good. I am soooooooooooooooooooooo glad that Chicken was voted out. >_< I can't really think of much else to mention. Sorry... <font color="Green">Sprinklemist <font color="Orange">hasn't changed his signature in a long time. 14:16, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Sprink, kind of an uneventful chapter I'll admit. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 03:20, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I think I was the only person to like "Chicken". He was my favorite new person. I also loved Bozo talking to Frasier. - Copper5

Oh yeah. The part about 'it was like a bucket to me' was pretty funny. <font color="Green">Sprinklemist <font color="Orange">hasn't changed his signature in a long time. 15:42, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guys! Bozo's definitely one of my favorites to write this season. xD -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 19:50, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

The chapter was awesome, "Ze Plane! Ze Plane!" XD I liked the little moment with Martha and Elvis, and getting to know a little more about both of them. For a second, I actually thought Maulik was gonna be voted out instead of Gretel. TDAddict  Well...   He's better than nothing.  21:15, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading TDAddict! Glad I was able to trick you on the elimination. xD I usually don't do touchy moments like Elvis and Martha, but I felt it was necessary. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 21:17, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

So, guys, was I able to fix some of the problems with the story? -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 00:01, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yay new chapter! Yay Kathryn x Hank! Yay Cecil x "Ugly"! Yay Jess x Fraiser! Yay Elvis x Martha! YAY ROMANCE!!!! But aww... Gretel. I liked her but they all have to go sometime right? And she was getting a little minor. This chapter was really funny! I loved Maulik's line about IGadget and electric doo-dads. And this chapter was a shocker! I'm gonna guess the mystrey figure is a former contestant. In short Yay!Rhonda the stalker fan! 00:22, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading Rhonda! Glad you liked the romances that started this chapter. xD And who knows? The mystery person is a mystery! ;) Haha. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe!  Master of epic pwnage 00:43, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I never really got to know Gretel, so I didn't get so "emotional" when she was voted out. Anyway, I love Hankryn and Marvis. Oh, and also Ugcil. Most of all, I love Audatore, because I was the one who suggested an Audrey-Salvatore storyline. Taylor! She was homeschooled. Taio! He loves his autotunes. Miley! Her dad&#39;s a has-been. Triple H! He&#39;ll beat your face in. 00:58, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wow! I love the relationship names! xD Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it! :) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe!  Master of epic pwnage 01:04, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I really liked this chapter, a lot. Nice work on it. I liked Cecil and Ugly the most. They were so sweet. <3 I'll miss Gretel, though I didn't remember her too well. XD She was amusing in this chapter. <font color="Green">Sprinklemist <font color="Orange">hasn't changed his signature in a long time. 01:43, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Sprink! Cecil and Ugly were actually paired together in my mind recently. xD I was worried they wouldn't work, but I'm glad you liked it! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 01:46, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Is that shadowy figure at the end from The Matrix?-- <font color="MediumBlue">Mygeto <font color="RoyalBlue">likes to <font color="Red">STEAL <font color="DodgerBlue">your edits 03:30, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, nope, I've actually never seen the Matrix, so sorry. xD Good guess though, and thanks for reading! :) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe!  Master of epic pwnage 03:34, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do you guys have any suggestions for the next chapter? (Or the story in general :p) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 12:34, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great Chapter! I loved the growing relationships bewtween Ugly and Cecil, and Martha and Elvis. I found Gretel to shine this episode! Also Nalyd did you confuse the Gretel and Deb during the helicopter scene? Something didnt seem right when I read that part. - Copper5

They might have been switched. They sort of melt together into one character in my mind. xD Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 18:12, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the new chappy! Can't wait to read the next chappy! I liked Gretel, but she was sorta gettin' on my nerves! xD-- I was  born   this way!  18:54, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading Jessica! :) -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe!  Master of epic pwnage 18:56, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 8 is about half way done, so maybe I'll post that later this week! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 10:14, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Fun, fun, fun, fun! Friday, friday! XDDD I loved this chapter, and love that song. xDDDDD Aren't you a little too old to be playing in the ball pit?   Yes.   Yes I am.  21:30, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Glad you liked it. xD Thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:38, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Great chapter Nalyd, I even rated it perfect! :D I love seeing all these relationships form, Maulik getting some good attention, but the question of who Gretel was with was never answered, and was barely mentioned. D:< I liked the Globetrotting Grizzlies finally winning, 'cause I like seeing the losing team overcome the odds and win. TDAddict  Well...   He's better than nothing.  22:42, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, thanks for reading TDAddict! The mystery with Gretel will be addressed soon, don't worry. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 22:52, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good chapter. I liked the challenge and Deb's elimination, I never really cared for her. When is her character image getting uploaded? - Copper5

Reddy's doing the pics so IDK. Thanks for reading! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 23:50, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

"New rule. Anyone who sings 'Friday' will be immediately eliminated." XD I never really liked Deb, so I wasn't sad to see her go. XD at both plays and at "Hold my red rubber nose!" Can you parents my phone and tell them not to worry Santa? 03:12, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, I really needed to eliminate Deb but I was basically out of ideas. xD Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:04, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also, one more thing: Are Maulik's numerous names based on Apu from the Simpsons, and M. Night Shyamalan? xD Aren't you a little too old to be playing in the ball pit?   Yes.   Yes I am.  13:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and Raj from Big Bang Theory. xD Good eye! -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 13:34, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks to all for reading, chapter nine should be out Saturday. -- Nalyd Renrut - Legendary Snipe! Master of epic pwnage 11:19, March 20, 2011 (UTC)