User blog:Bridgette dj10/AJ's Judging for Week 2

Hey everyone! It's AJ here, sorry for the judging being so late, I just have had a ton going on, socially and athletically, plus my computer decided it didn't like me anymore so it spazzed a bit. But since I heard Dystopia quit, and the Totally Dramatic FInal Battle has been eliminated, here are my two stories.

Total Drama Fortune
Good chapter Sunny! It had some improvements, and some unimprovements from last week's chapter. The team picking was interesting to read, and had some witty interactions, and I enjoyed how the little "captain-choosing" pre-challenge, that was clever! I also liked how you put a little bit more depth into the challenge. I would like to see it go a little further, but excellent job improving the challenge. I also liked the character interaction's, your characters never fail to entertain. The biggest downfall this week for you was grammar and spelling. There were noticably more grammar and spelling errors then their were last week, for example missing quotation marks, and misplaced words (for example one time you put 'felt' instead of 'fell'). Just make sure that when the characters are conversing, you place commas, quotation marks, and periods in the right place (which I'm sure you know how to do so I'm not going to bore you on that). Aside from that, awesome work Sunny, just really focus on upping the challenge, keeping your character interactions fun, and making sure it is void of spelling and grammar errors. 16/20

Total Drama Showdown
Awesome work again BB and KG! I love reading Total Drama Showdown, because it is so unique. I always took a liking towards unique stories, such as Total Drama Mole and Legacy. This chapter had a few downfalls for me, but they were minor. The first was that, when Chris said they were going to have to work together, I thought that all four teams would have to put their elemental powers to the test, but only the fire and air teams really had. They could have easily completed the maze with the water or earth teams. It would have been a bit more interesting had all four teams needed to further master their elemental powers and help the time. On a different note, there was a slight consistency error. Hilda said that she had found the ring on the farm, but then how would the ring have revealed itself in the maze area? Wouldn't Chris have known it revealed itself either on the farm or in the D.O.J.O itself? I could have taken this the wrong way, but that seemed a bit confusing to me. Aside from that, I loved the challenge, character development, and everything else about this chapter. The spelling and grammar were solid as well. I also liked the twist that all teams ended up getting their elemental Shen Gong Wu, that should definitely make things more interesting. Keep up the good work. 18/20