User blog comment:Sprinklemist/New Story/@comment-1636990-20120110114645/@comment-1153194-20120110232742

You did try, but I tried to explain why it's difficult for me. What offended me was that you kept saying the same thing when I was trying to explain why it was so difficult, and not saying exactly what you meant, just using vague terms. I'm not offended, nor was I then. Plus, you apologized, so it's all good. It just takes extra explaining for me to understand things that might seem simple. For example, 'showing instead of telling', I don't understand that. In the context of writing, that's the same thing, to me. XD Plus, there's descriptive writers and not so descriptive ones. It's hard for me to think of things like location and surroundings in a descriptive way. Also, sometimes I do get a little... bored with too much description. That's not what I like to read IRL. When I do get to that, I usually roll my eyes, IRL. XD

So you basically mean to add more adjectives? I can do that, I guess. The only issue I have with that is telling the reader exactly what to think, in a way. As when I read, sometimes it's not exactly how I view what's being said, or it seems ridiculous, as in 'Joe said, goofily, "huuuurrr!" Well... What I mean is like, it's kind of obvious that that is said 'goofily'. I usually try to add those adjectives where I see fit, as opposed to overusing them.