User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/That was fast, huh?/@comment-1324135-20090925155120

I know. I actually was kind of kicking myself after posting it because it came to me that description really depends on style. I always thought that making the readers see the character's actions and their surroundings and their circumstances and their words help the reader develop an emotional connection with them. Of course, being overly poetic can bore readers to death, but putting an image into their heads can help pull them in. Like I said, it really depends on style, and as far as that goes there is nothing wrong with your style or Blonde Date.

And yes, maybe I should take a hint with the whole bluntness thing and try to be more straightforward. It makes me feel like I've been spewing purple prose and scaring my readers away. V.V