User blog:Indi26/Summer Schedule Week Two Grades

So, with Mrodd out of the competition and two of my remaining three using their freebies, that leaves one story for me to judge and grade. So, without further ado, my review of Total Drama, Used Mini Van!

So, first off, I love the natural dynamic between the hosts. Their lines were some of the funniest I've read in a long time with how they interact. I also love the natural feel of the concept. That being said, almost all of the contestants were exceedingly unrealistic, which isn't a bad thing per se, but it felt odd with such a realistic host cast and setup. In future chapters, I would either bring some of the cast members closer to earth, or go all the way and make the plot more unrealistic. The disparity between realism and fantasy is the primary reason for a lesser amount of points, which come out to 16/20.