User blog:Bonkilemonster/Total Drama Gone Wild: Progress! (No.6)

''How you doin'? :P My name is Jake and I might have said already (like, maybe 6 times >.<) but this is the sixth episode of the progress of my ANIMATED Total-Drama Styled series! Today we have 2 new character, some o' dat general progress and more! Let's go!''

'''Attention - if you want to skip the long paragraphs, then go to the "fast recap" section in the end of every few paragraphs! This will be easier and faster to read (: Enjoy!!'''

General
Last blog problems solutions: So, last blog I've shown you 3 new characters (Daniel (or Danielle - however you wanna call her), Sandy and Brandon), and you guys (not only in the comments) helped me find problems at the characters, for example: Rotation problems, pose or 3/4 view problems and more.

WE ARE HALF WAY THROUGH! There is a total of 20 characters to design (19 contestants and host) and we already have 10! It may not seem like a lot but for the animator which sees them 24/7, half way through is a lot (: As usual, I have no spoiler-free progress, BUT I do have some episodes names for you guys! Those are not in any specific order, just to prevent any spoilers;

"Begginer's Luck" (ep.1), "Love is NOT All You Need", "A Buddy From Another Body" and lastly "Can U C The Way I Can C? (Can You See The Way I Can See?) :D Not all episodes are named, and those are those that are named (: What do you think? Say everything in the comments! :D

Fast recap:
and you guys helped me find problems at the characters I've showed last week! Thanks (: There is a total of 20 characters to design and we already have 10! It may not seem like a lot but for the animator which sees them 24/7, half way through is a lot (: Just for fun, here are some episodes names: "Begginer's Luck" (ep.1), "Love is NOT All You Need", "A Buddy From Another Body" and lastly "Can U C The Way I Can C? (Can You See The Way I Can See?)... What do you think? Say everything in the comments! :D

"The Fun Guy to Have Around" - Bobby Joe
Bobby Joe (or Bobby Jo) is one of my favourite characters in the cast, he's funny. sweet and not even 1% harmdul. Now don't think ALL the characters are naive and so "happy and stupid" characters, mean and not so naive characters will appear very soon :D

General info: Bobby Joe is the type of people which always has exciting, smart, funny and mostly awesome stories to tell. He's funny, friendly, and sometimes even a good friend for a long long talk about life problems XD Thoguh, he's not naive and he could be a really good player in Total Drama. Well, enough said, let's move on to the design!

Design: Bobby Joe is the big guy of the group, while it doesn't hold him from being a great character. He wears a short-sleeves jacket and a red T-shirt under it, a pair of golden sports shoes and grey short pants. His design, in my opinion, makes him more friendly and likeable. What do you think? You think the design Matches the character? Tell me everything wrong and good about Bobby Joe in the comments! :D



Fast recap:
Bobby Joe is the type of people which always has exciting, smart, funny and mostly awesome stories to tell. He's funny and friendly, he is the big guy of the group, He wears a short-sleeves jacket and a red T-shirt under it, a pair of golden sports shoes and grey short pants. What do you think? Tell me everything about Bobby Joe in the comments! :D

"Been in juvie, it's great there" - Nicole (re-design)
Here's Nicole, a girl who has a lot of knowledge of how the world works and has a lot of expirience in crimes and sitting a little bit in juvie.

General info: Meet Nicole, a well known criminal in the local police station. She is cinycal, Indifferent, grumpy, cold and hates any social relationships. She has never and will never follow any rules, and espicially not Chris' rules. What will happen with her?

Re-design: Nicole has changed a lot in her new design, her body style, colors, face and even a little bit in the hair. Her crow on hand tank-top has changed a lot, in every way :D All of her outfit it just to show her very not-caring attidute to her outer looks and everything that happens around her. What do you think? How far do you think Nicole will get? Do you like the re-design?

Fast recap:


Here's Nicole, a girl who has a lot of knowledge of how the world works and has a lot of expirience in crimes and sitting a little bit in juvie. She is cinycal, Indifferent, grumpy, cold and hates any social relationships. All of her outfit it just to show her very not-caring attidute to her outer looks and everything that happens around her. What do you think? How far do you think Nicole will get? Do you like the re-design?

Hahahaha XD
This subject is about the writing and script - but, I don't have any problems with the writing, but I do have a problems with a very special part of it. It's not drama, not relatioships, not order nore timing, it's COMEDY.

So, I'm not the funniest guy in the world, neither the wittiest... How do I write comedy? Though comedy isn't the most important part in a script, it is a very special part and it is kind off what Total Drama is based of.

There are 5 types of comedies I would like to adress in the series; Stupid comedy - comedy told by one of the stupid characters, or generally not so smart sentences. How to make a character not smart? How to not make it too stupid? Irony; comedy involving ironic sentences, ironic reactions, or generally ironic situations and jokes. How to make a good irony as a joke? Physical comedy; between those comedy styles, this one is the easiest. It involved people beeing injured because of dumbness, an accident or just injured... How to make an injury funny (and not to laugh at a horrible, brutal injury)? Inside comedy; this is a type of comedy which includes laughing or irony that is related and understanded only by people who watch the show for a while or know the characters. How to make not to much of this type of jokes? How to even make those jokes? Lastly - outside comedy: this type is very general, it includes all comedy that anyone that hasn't watched the show can understand. '''How do I write those types of comedy? Please tell me all your ways, thoughts, ideas and more in the comments! :D'''

Fast recap:
This subject is about the writing and script - but, I don't have any problems with the writing, but I do have a problems with a very special part of it. It's not drama, not relatioships, not order nore timing, it's COMEDY. There are 5 types of comedies I would like to adress in the series; dumb comedy, irony, physical comedy, inside and outside comedy. How to write each one of them? How to write comedy in general? XD

Well this is it for this time, hope it wa interesting and you liked the characters and progress :D Please remember to comment, it helps so so much and makes my day :D Thanks for reading!

Have a sparkling day!