User blog comment:Goldenshane/Some Questions/@comment-1153194-20110209145803

I haven't read the finale, yet. I've been a tad busy... But you know I'll get to it. As for advice, I do have some. Sometimes, I feel like your phrasing doesn't really suit these characters that are supposed to be teens. Some of it would work if the character was really intelligent or something, but that's not usually the case. Words like 'sought' could be replaced with something more contemporary. That kind of wording would work fine with narration, but dialogue it seems a little awkward. Anyway, it's just a little difficult to imagine all the characters being so wordy.

As for pics, I just suggest studying the Total Drama characters more while keeping yours your own. I think they can have really long torsos and legs at times, but I do like your style.