User blog comment:Rhonda the stalker fan!/Hooray, I Made 5000 Edits!/@comment-1874924-20190902022003/@comment-3350823-20191018064606

(Sorry for such a late reply, school decided to kick into gear just as I was trying to be more active).

I'm glad I'm not alone on car troubles. I actually had to get a new transmission a few years ago for this same car. It's a clunker, but still more affordable than a new car. It's exciting we're both going to be achieve life milestones at the same time. Early congratulations again on reaching retirement!

"...even if it's not as much as I could have done or should have done". I don't that's very fair or accurate. I appreciate how much feedback you have given, more than a lot of people. Not to mention if you hadn't been only reader and encouraging me during WTH?, I wouldn't be at this point. It means a lot to me.

I want to say I've improved more about writing mechanics simply because college has forced me. I ocassionally re-read sections of past TDG chapters to refresh my memory for current chapters and...I can see how it might not be easy to avoid all the mistakes. After TDG's final chapter I want to comb through each chapter, fixing grammar and finding an trivia I missed. After that I want to start uploading it to other fanficton websites.

I'm glad you've been enjoying it though. I can't wait to hear what you think of the end and your overall thoughts on it when it happens (along with the past chapters of course, but I also want more LTDI, so I can't ask for all of that xD)

A Kalino vibe from Giovanni is interesting and maybe accurate? Giovanni defintely reminds me of someone from Genesis. I think Shawn is accurate for the Skunk Ape hunter, they're defintely the same archetype. I don't know enough about TDI:FYE to say if the comparison is accurate, but I can see the assocation.

I think you hit the nail on the head with Cassidy. She's very like those two and whether she'll take that role or be too much for it is hard to say. It's hard to be sneaky if you are over the top.