User blog comment:Tdiandrockmusic2/Frankly, I have no idea what to do./@comment-1874924-20110511024321

I think part of the problem WoC hasn't generated more interest is that its blurb in the "Recently Started Stories" section has no description at all. Reddy or Shane, if you would be so kind, I suggest adding a description something like this:

This "TDI never happened" story places the TDI characters in the world of the flight simulator game, Ace Combat 4: Shattered Skies.

TDIRM, WoC may be getting more eyeballs than you think. The visit counter shows a little over 100 views (including your own support work, of course) and it's likely that the true total is a good deal higher than that, given the "heads, it's working today; tails, it isn't" functionality of the visit counter. By comparison, CatVoD, which is popular enough that it won FS honors a couple of months ago, has a little over 200 official views.

I'll say a mea culpa on chapter 2 taking 5 months, since I had it almost 2 months whilst writing my 13,000-word commentary (which was almost twice the length of the chapter). If you want me to review any more chapters, I will have to try to be less thorough with them (easier said than done, considering how anal I am about such things) both for the sake of timeliness and for the sake of having time to work on my own story. I wanted to pull out all the stops for the first chapter I reviewed, though, with the idea that you might find some of my comments useful as a reference when writing later chapters.