User blog:Webly/Clarification on Idiots Character Revamp

Anyways on story revamp, this is not much of a story revamp as much as it is a grammatical revamp. The thing is I had no idea what a comma splice or any kind of clause was before writing this story. Now, I actually know how to check where I need a comma.

On the stuff that people care about. The characters will have personality checks. Every character will have their own distinct characterization. DO NOT WORRY ALL CHARACTERS ARE STILL OTTPP5 OR CPP3 BUT NO MORE UTR1 OR MOR2. So, lemme explain just exactly what is up with the characters remaining. Adele will sing songs that are some of her own personal songs and her favorite songs in real life. April will be much more of an awful liar rather than a sarcastic character. Everything she says will be a lie almost but don't worry it's not like Staci. Channary’s drama problems will seem more drama-filled rather than boring moment-filled. Chloe won’t be 3 characters inside of one body anymore, if you know what I am trying to imply (NOTHING DRASTIC, just easier to understand). Django won’t have any tweaking although I think he should mention some of his favorite fashion designers. Discuss fashion topics and be more authentic. Ferguson’s love and knowledge of TV will be expressed in more references and through a TV related dream job of his. Fred will be more of an advocate for his Twitter account focused on making friends for followers. Not just like his youtube persona. Kim won’t be tweaked. Kourtney won’t be tweaked. Khloe won't be streaked. I just want to explain her revealed anorexic struggles with more professionalism, if that makes some sense. Lilly won’t be tweaked. Perry will be more mysterious and interesting! Newton will have drastic changes being more of a nerd and more scientific. Shelly won’t be tweaked. Tree won’t be tweaked. Wonka will be more chocolate-obsessed.

There. That's the difference. :)