Talk:Total Drama Isle of Terror

Who do YOU think will win?:

 * 1) Trey - The Ambitious Filmer ~ The wasted years, the wasted youth. The pretty lies, the ugly truth.  13:01, November 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Bobby - The Inapropiriate Childish Idiot ~
 * 3) Craig - The RPG Larper ~  XTeardrops 16:14, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) Joel - The Puppet Master ~  GalaxyRemixZ   10:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) Layson Wright - The Lawyer ~ I liek undefined  MUDK  style="color:#0000FF;">IPZ
 * 6) Franklin - The Pushover Forgettable Guy ~
 * 7) Adam - The Shy Brainiac. ~ Love, Love, Love and ... Love? - Rosenbottom (talk) 21:43, December 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 8) K.C - The Handsome Wiseacre. ~
 * 9) Misery - The Over-ly Dramatic Girl ~ Ok, I&#39;m on..... hufflepuff... HUFFLEPUFF!! (talk) 21:41, November 29, 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) Valen - The All Daredevil. ~
 * 11) Hannah - The Cheerful Beauty. ~ Russelrules44 (And that&#39;s the bottom line) (Cause Stone Cold said so!) (talk) 18:19, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
 * 12) Chelsea - The Living Barbie. ~ My name is Peko Pekoyama. It is nice  to meet you.  10:56, November 30, 2014 (UTC)
 * 13) Eleanoria - The Maternal Foolish. ~
 * 14) Zara - The Wannabe Evil-Girl. ~ ×LynnWashingtonn× (talk) 21:46, November 29, 2014 (UTC)
 * 15) Zoey - The Mean Best Friend. ~
 * 16) Chloe - The Sweet Best Friend. ~ You can call me Rose,   but to be honest my name is Spy 001  11:43, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Episode 1:
You guys might want to forgive me cause i'm not really that good at reviews. Anyways, I thought that this was a solid start to what sure looks like to be one hell of a story. And i'm going to explain why.

Writing
It's very well written, better than some fanfictions. You guys also make it seem like i'm in the story with how you use your adjectives. That being said; If you keep up the writing, it will be a great fanfic. (17/20)

Characters
Plus, the characters. Oh boy, the characters. Hannah is so lovable you'd just want to hug her, Plus; there's Zoey and Chloe. Chloe being the sweet happy-go-lucky girl and Zoey being the more strict and sarcastic one. This can make great chemistry as the story goes on.

Then we have Joel. My goodness, Joel looks to be what Russel Hantz was in Survivor. That could either be good or bad depending on how you write him. And plus; as a law it seems that the main antagnogist is a part of the final 4.

Misery (if you can get over the ridiculous name) could prove to be a solid comedy character. Zara may also get some big props for her attempts to be "bad".

Of course, you can't win them all, and i'm sorry to say that some characters are not so hot. Like Franklin, Who while means well; is so far a wannabe Cody.

K.C is also someone I don't like as much; not because he's bad but he could prove to be a bit unlikable because of his character.

Then you have Bobby..........Why? We don't know why. But Bobby is possibly the most unlikable character in the story so far which makes him "The Scrappy" of the fanfic. And when you are known as a Scrappy, that's never good news....luckily for him, I don't think he's the worst, there's one I think is worse than him and she's.....

CHELSEA.......She's exactly like Dakota only without the fun in it. Dakota wanted the fame because she wanted her own reality show; sure she may be a bit of a brat at times but she can also be a rather cool person to hang out with. (Plus, she has her own paparazzi, Let that sink in your brain) Chelsea on the other-hand sounds like the high school queen bee you had to deal with. And that's never good news. I know this feels a bit like obviousness, But Dakota also was transformed into a MUTANT! A MUTANT! Chelsea doesn't look like to do that! All in all, she's just......shallow.

Of course Chris is his same old self and I can't really rate the others yet. (16/20)

Comedy
And finally, the comedy.....Chris was hillairious in this and you've gotta hand it to Misery, Craig and Elenoria for being funny in this one. And plus; what is UP with the 2 dorks that failed to make the cut? They could have gone so far in this game........NOT! (16/20)

Overall Score
I'd say this deserves a passing grade of 49/60 (or a 81% for short) This has all the potential in the world to be as good or maybe even better than the actual show, as long as you keep doing what you're doing you'll do great with the fanfic! Good luck guys and keep moving forward! Russelrules44 (And that&#39;s the bottom line) (Cause Stone Cold said so!) (talk) 23:25, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Forget score systems, I liked it the first episodes usually aren't that funny due to introducing the characters but you took an original twist on it by actually showing the audition tapes which is a plus overall well done.

Tarada, Tarada hee dee dee humdie dumdie dumdie dumdie dah 18:27, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

From what I read this is very very good! I really like the characters and I agree with RR that if you two continue what you're doing this will be an enjoyable fanfiction. ACTN's the name, ASVU's my game 22:23, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Episode 2 & 3
So, I was given some good advice earlier about not using score systems, so i'm going to give you a more detailed review from here on in.....I'll still be doing an overall scoring.

For starters, Episode 2 was a great way to develop characters, Craig and Zoey would make for fun interactions, and so would K.C and Misery, we also learn a bit about Franklin; it turns out that he's had a major crush on Zoey since the time they were pair up in ballroom dancing. Since then; he's been desperatley trying to get Zoey to notice him.

Of course, Zoey turns him down cold. That sort of makes me feel bad for the poor guy; (he's starting to grow to me, but he still needs some more development.) Chloe however seems to be taking a liking to him. (I wouldn't mind seeing Frhloe myself.)

Elenoisia starts to gain respect from me too for being so gosh darn nice! (Huzzah!) Hannah (who I picked to be the winner of the show) and Trey would make for a great main protagnigist couple of the season. They seem to play each other off quite well. Zara and Joel would also make for a solid antagnogist couple of the season.......of course, Joel IS a puppet-master; so we'll see how that goes. (I give it until the 5th episode.)

Then we have some negative.....Wa, wa, waaaaa.

I said it once, and i'll say it again...Chelsa....is....shallow......she says she's so hot, and she must look hot, but that's just it! Instead of being all bark, no bite; let her show SOME feistyness in her. And then we have Bobby who while is getting better is still not Mr. Popular and I don't expect him to last too long in the comepition.

Now, the big elephant in the room........Valen is a jerk. I don't like jerks. I understand that it's because she's supposed to be a daredevil, but let her have SOME heart!

Back to the postives.

The story is (again) well-written and it really does make you feel like your in the story. I hope to see as the story goes on that we can see more improvement on characters, comedy and maybe even writing itself.

Episode 2: A-

Russelrules44 (And that&#39;s the bottom line) (Cause Stone Cold said so!) (talk) 23:26, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Episode 3- In Which our Gaggle of Geese Build Homes!

I'm still reading this story so forgive me if i'm a bit off in some parts, but Episode 3 seems to be following up on Episode 2. (of course it is.)

As I said before, the story is very well written. I did however see a typo on one spot. But i'll get to that later.

Chloe and Franklin continues to blossom, Chloe seems to really like to poor guy. Of course Franklin in crushing on Zoey, Zoey is friends with Chloe, (Zoe-Zoe is an amazing nickname) Franklin is friends with both of them. Joel and Zara continue to be a most interesting couple themselves. And luckily for them, the development continues. Hannah and Trey also have potential to be the next protagnogist couple.

Elenosia is one of my favorites, and when she is wrongfully accused; it made me hate Valen more than last time. I first thought Joel would be the big bad of the story, but it appears I was wrong. Layton is someone i've never talked about before. That is because i'm not sure what to say about him. He's basically a nicer version of Courtney....Yeah, that's basically it.

I also LOVE that they use the Survivor way to eliminate people now, Makes it seem more suspenful that way.

Negatives time.......

There was one typo I saw in this story. And that was the part where Chelsea walked....apparently she didn't want to waist her energy. Now the right word is "waste". Of course this is only a minor mistake so i'll let that one go.

What I will NOT let go is that Valen blantley BURNED down her team's home and blamed Elenosia for the dirty deed, And they believed her.....THAT'S DESPICABLE! Like I said, I thought Joel was going to be the main antagnogist of the story. But at least he has a heart and soul in him, Valen has NO heart....NO soul....NO part of kindness in her, and personally I can't wait to see her gone.

I'm also a bit bummed that Zoey turns down Franklin like cold turkey. Oh yeah, and the challenge is the same as Pakhitew Island...That's alright I guess.....But i've seen it before, give us something new.

So, what's the score? Well despite a typo, a undeserved elimination and Valen herself; This is a great 3rd episode with more development, comedy and drama to add it in. I look forward to the next installment, and the rest that follow.

Rating: B+

Russelrules44 (And that&#39;s the bottom line) (Cause Stone Cold said so!) (talk) 23:26, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Dear Amber & Conker, as first I love it. Amber you know I'm always saying you can write better and better but you developed yourself. Conker, we had so much drama on camps but now I hope you will forgive me. Anyway, I'd like to share my ranking and review.

The audition tape episode was original. And really smart. You can see how everyone will be in the show and not how everyone arrives on a island. So that is a +. Second, the way you made the characters are great. All characters has developement and much screen time. So every character is loveable. Hard to choose who is going to home as first. All plots are great for now, like in TDPI the story of Sky and Dave was sooooo boring. But now I like the story with Chelsea and Trey, Hannah, Bobby, Zara and Joel. And the story with Zoey, Chloe and Franklin. Team B is my favorite and I hope they will make it all far. Team C second and Team A is my least favorite. As I love scary characters I dont like Adam. He is not a main character so I guess he is going to be eliminated soon. K.C is just the same as always. Misery is great. She is random, crazy and dramatic. Eleanoria was one of my favorites. In the begin I thought wow she is like the loser of the show and will be the first boot. Well, she is the first boot but she is not crazy. I really like her. Valen is a jerk. But a original character. She has a little bit of Sugar but I like Valen more. Craig is funny but he is for now my least favorite character. He doesnt say much so I hope he is going to be likeable in the future. Bobby was a little bit boring but came back as a hero. He wanted to help Hannah and I think he is going to be in the top 10. I hope so. Hannah, defently the best character in this story. I know it's just a story but WOW. Hannah is writed as a princess in a good way. Is not ordinairy and is very sweet. Always happy. I am rooting for her but I think Zara has a great change too. She is like hypnozited by Joel. I like them both and reminds me on a earlier story of you. Zero and May in Exposion Island. Layson is great too. And then the members of team B. Trey, Chelsea, Zoey, Chloe and Franklin are the best 5 characters I guess and if I'm not wrong I bet they all will make the final 10. Easy.

Rating. ×LynnWashingtonn× (talk) 22:16, November 29, 2014 (UTC)
 * 1)  Hannah
 * 2)  Zara
 * 3)   Franklin
 * 4)  Zoey
 * 5)  Trey
 * 6)  Chloe
 * 7)  Chelsea
 * 8)  Eleanoria
 * 9)  Bobby
 * 10)  Joel
 * 11)  Layson
 * 12)  Misery
 * 13)  K.C
 * 14)  Adam
 * 15)  Valen
 * 16) Craig

Positive: I love the characters, they are all different from each other. Their storylines are great too. I'm a great fan of Hannah, Chloe and Misery. I love the writing style. All characters has a part in the show and in like Total Drama: Pahkitew Island we didn't saw much of Beardo. The audition tape episode was fun and I it was original. Episode 2 was great too and Episode 3 was the best for now. You feel sorry for Franklin and Hannah and I think I'm a great fan of Hannah. I really hope she will win. And I've seen she is the favorite of everyone. But keep writing like this cause it's amazing.

Negative: Some characters are too angry and mean. Like Valen who I really dislike. She is so mean to Eleanoria and she doesn't deserve it to be eliminated as first. Then we have Joel the puppet master. For now we haven't seen much of him but I really don't like him for now. I hope he's going to be much more evil. His 'sidekick' Zara is just hilarious and evil. So she is really great. (Zara is not bad). And then we have Chelsea. Chelsea is maybe the worst character. She is really annoying but beside that she is original. She reminds me to Dakota, but Dakota was réally annoying. Chelsea has something great in her and I guess we will see it soon.

So I give it a B+ and with points I'll give it 9/10. You can call me Rose,  but to be honest my name is Spy 001  11:52, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

I keep it short, it was a great episode the elimination didn't do much for me tbh, my favorite in Hannah I don't have a least favorite one. Tarada, Tarada hee dee dee humdie dumdie dumdie dumdie dah 18:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Episode 4
Great episode, guys! You can be proud on yourself. I wanna say a few things about it. Valen is still awful but she is less angrier then Eleanoria was in the game. K.C barely talked in this episode, that was sad but K.C is not one of my faves. Misery is still one of my faves but she has no real plot. Only falling in love with Adam which is a really jerk. He thought he was going to be funny and nice. But he isn't at all. Bobby ... he tried to keep him in the game but Joel is too strong now. Joel and Zara belongs to my top 5 most disliked characters. Zara wants to be evil but she isn't without Joel. Joel is relaxed and evil but I still dislike him. (He is great but I dislike him). Hannah is the most perfect contestant ever. I can't wait to see more of her. I love Hannah please she has come far. Craig is weird, I don't like him and is still my least fave. Layson is coming away from the background finally cause I wanted to see more of him. Chloe, Zoey and Franklin <3 <3. They are awesome!! The best plot so far. I love the read about them. Chelsea is going to be great and I'm starting to like her as I'm liking Trey too.

Challenge was amazing, elimination ceremony was amazing and the plots were incredible. I'll give this episode a A+. Great work. ×LynnWashingtonn× (talk) 21:29, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Really great job, guys! I'll give two positives and a negative:

✰ Great character development, especially between Zoey, Chloe and Franklin. Their relationship is really interesting to read, and I hope you continue to develop it in the coming episodes.

✰  I loved the challenge, it was very creative, and the elimination was quite unexpected; I was expecting Zara to leave, so great job on that!

× There were some spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing too  serious!

Great job guys!

<font color="Turquoise">My name is Peko <font color="Cadetblue">Pekoyama. It is nice  <font color="Teal">to meet you.  22:55, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

You know me I am not a man of many words but it's hard for me to make a ranking at this stage of the characters at this point because there has only been 4 episodes but I can tell you my favorites are so far Franklin, Hannah, Zara and Trey. The characters I dislike the most are Chloe, Zoey and Valen. The episode itselfs was quite funny and the right person went home Bye bye bobby. Keep up the good work. --Jack and Jill went up a hill Jack burn down on booze and pill, Mary had a little lamb, Mary just don't give a damn no more! 21:21, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Hey Amber. I saw you were active on this wikia on my hotmail so I was looking at your edits and saw this fanfiction. Girl, you totally rock this fanfiction. And I remember Conker too. I love your fanfiction both. Great characters. Hannah, Adam and Valen are incredible. I dont know why people dislike Valen. She has a great personality. And I dislike Bobby, Craig and Zara. Zara is really annoying and is my least favorite character. Zoey-Chloe-Franklin plot is really likeable and hope it will continue for a long time. Hannah is my favorite character and almost everyone loves her. I understand why. But Adam is great too. I honestly think Hannah is going to win with K.C in the finale. Zara or Layson will be the next. Can't wait to read more, and please tell me when you posted another episode of this. It's awesome! And BTW I told Chaff Potter about this on the Therendill fan media wiki XDDDD So he's going to be stalking you :p :p. Great job ! Love, Love, Love and ... Love? - Rosenbottom (talk) 21:48, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

This is the best story I've read on this wikia so far. I already gave a review but after episode 4 I would like to share my opinions with you.

10 points: The story, Hannah, Joel, Zoey, Chloe, Franklin, Adam & Misery. The story is just perfect there are many plots what I really like. It develops again and again and it's going to be a incredible story. I love the alliances and conflicts for so far and the elimination ceremonies are magnefic! Hannah is still my favorite character. She's a princess and I can't wait to see her design. She's like Ella/Lindsay. A perfect combination. Joel is the main antagonist of the show and he's really quiet and polite. Beside his sidekick Zara which is incredibly insane. Zoey and Chloe are the best characters of this season to be honst. Of course Hannah is my favorite, I like this two best friends a lot. I guess they will be the main characters same as Franklin. My favorite male character. He is sooo cute and funny. I love Franklin. And then Adam and Misery. I can't wait to see more of them. They are great!

9 points: Chris, challenge. Chris is played really well and is exactly the same as the real Chris McLean. I love to read about him and he's really funny too. The challenge was great! It was also very exciting and was reading it on my iPad while I had diner! I just wanted to read more and more. So great job!

8 points: ....

I will continue later with this! <3. You can call me Rose,  <font color="MediumSlateBlue"> but to be honest my name is Spy 001  15:19, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

I can't wait to see the pictures. It is a great story. xTeardrops 16:13, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Who are you? @above. ×LynnWashingtonn× (talk) 16:16, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

me? i'm xTeardrops and you are? x3. xTeardrops (talk) 15:38, December 12, 2014 (UTC)