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 * Alejandro's ending makes no sense whatsoever

Conversely, the stinger (the Darth Vader riff) makes no sense with the Heather Wins ending, so it's lose-lose. With the Al Wins ending, he asks if "my million dollars" is safe; but with the Heather Wins ending, he asks if "the million dollars" is safe. This seems like blatant shoehorning (incidentally strengthening the case that Al was meant to be the official winner) because his character development (such as it was) to that point had nothing to suggest that he would care about the safety of money that wasn't his.

It gets worse. In combination with the stinger, Al winning comes across as a pyrhhic victory (i.e. a victory that's not worth the price); whereas with Heather winning, Al's fate comes across as kicking him when he's down.