User blog comment:TDIwriter/Brandon's Blog of Blogginess/@comment-1153194-20090712033502

I honestly like all of your characters for that story, which makes me sad every time someone is eliminated. Except for Gerald... I seriously forgot about him in chapter 2, and then he was eliminated. When I read his opening scene I knew he'd be eliminated first, and then forgot about it, immediately. >_< I noticed the spike in Shannon's writing in the chapter she was eliminated, so I sort of had that as a hint to her elimination.