Talk:Emergency Love, Stat!

The level of profanity in this story requires an R rating. (Type   at the top of the page.) Also, your story is in serious need of proper paragraphing. Walls of text are hard to read because they make it so easy to lose one's place, so they tend to scare off potential readers. Likewise, putting author's notes in the middle of the story disrupts immersion and throws readers out of the story. If you must include author's notes, they should go at the beginning or the end of a chapter, not in the middle. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  20:37, January 2, 2015 (UTC)