Talk:Total Drama Woods

I must say that I enjoy some of your character names, especially 7-Up, Oprah, and Harpo. XD Sprinklemist Send me a message.Or not... 04:12, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Since you were the first to ask, I will the first to read through all of your stories. I must say, the names of your teams for this story are somehow familiar to me... I don't know how... :P Cheers for sarcasm. :) BocaJacob!  I was a child of the Golden Age; Bring on the Platinum Age! 02:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

XD. For the record, I came up with the names before I found that out XD. You don't have to waste your time reading this story though. It was my first fanfic and it isn't very good. You still can if you want to though.-- Radicalm18 "Nice guys finish last,  that's why I'll treat you like trash." 04:51, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, I'll review this story anyway. I love seeing the growth of a writer with my own two eyes. :)

Here and Now? - Part 1
While I definitely see a lot of mistakes and imperfections, this chapter certainly reminds me of my earliest Total Drama Survivor writing days, so, I see a lot of potential for your other stories already. :) Some characters stood out to me, while others seemed plain. My favorite scene is Vivian's entrance, and, so far, she's my favorite, based on first-impressions.

Rating: 1.25 out of 10 for some smiles forming on my face due to some of the jokes.

Here and Now? - Part 2
"Hey, where's Vivian?" Michael asked.

"There she is" Eric said, pointing out the door. "She teleported into the middle ring."

Ha, I haven't even finished the chapter but the moment I read that I knew it was my favorite scene. xD I also liked Carol's line, "I've always wanted to jump out of a plane." I don't know why it was hilarious, it just was. :P And when you revealed Harpo and Oprah's last name, Hopra, I laughed a little. :) This chapter wasn't too shabby, actually. I found it very entertaining, very clever, and very interesting. It really reminds me of TDS, a lot, comedic style and all. So far my favorites would have to be Faith, Vivian and Tanya. I also love the idea of an inter-team alliance.

Rating: 5 out of 10 for humorous lines and a unique idea I haven't seen before; I hope it works out for Adam.

Fame is the Name of the Game
Fond of the title. :)

Chapter 3 was okay. Kind of a neutral chapter for me. I enjoyed Vivian's parts, and I'm fond of Adam's role in the story as of now. Michael is probably my least favorite as of now, due to his rude personality. The best part in my opinion was the beginning, where Oscar's skateboard disappeared. xD

Rating: 1.75 out of 10 for one or two minor LOL moments.

Canoewrecked
Aw, I love that Tanya showed compassion in this episode. She's definitely one of my favorites. And Michael... is still my least-favorite. Harpo and Oprah are just hilarious, only because of their names. Their bickering is a common type of relationship on the wiki, but it's comedic nonetheless. Overall, this chapter was pretty plain for me. Nothing too exciting, hilarious, or shocking. Hey, brutal honesty is one way to win at life. :P

Rating: 0.75 for lack of originality and surprise.

The Gold Meddle
I'll review this chapter later, but I love your chapter titles. xD BocaJacob!  I was a child of the Golden Age; Bring on the Platinum Age! 00:43, October 12, 2011 (UTC)