User blog comment:Information Box/Miami Update 2/@comment-3222773-20120506215829

Well I think that you should consider revamping it with some new characters and with some old, that's what I've done with Total Drama Oahu, and I think it will perform better. The problem I had with my story is that some of the characters were too similar, and that possibly could be the case with Miami. Don't give up on writing this story, because I see it having potential. Contionously writing improves your writing. A year and a half ago when I first joined this wiki in December 2010, I was a terrible writer, but then I kept going at it, and then we started going over punctuation and writing in Reading and Language Arts class, and I realize I really do enjoy writing, and I want to perspire as an author in the near future. My writing was horrible, trust me, I wrote most of the chapters of Total Drama World Tour II, and they were awful, but I kept writing, and then this year, my class had an oppurtunity to get into an Honors English course at my city's high school next year, and I got in, which gave me a lot more confidence in my writing, and it motivated me even more to have sucsessful stories. I really do hope you consider what I've said, and possibly it'll give you some motivation as well. :)