User blog comment:Freefalling Lilacs/FYE: Episode Nine Needs YOUR Help!/@comment-1874924-20120422205654/@comment-1874924-20120423023948

Several of these folks look rather emaciated, but I think that's partly because of the "thin necks" element of your drawing style, i.e. thinner than real life but thick enough that they're (usually) not obviously caricature like the TD style. (Another factor is the some of the girls could conceivably be undernourished, although I don't think that's been mentioned in the story.) Cara, Ophelia and Allison look fetching, and Rachel looks like a courtesan. I can barely see Risty, let alone her hair.