Talk:You're Gonna Hear Me Roar

I actually really enjoyed the first chunk of the story. That being when 'Sandy' was in her class room. It actually read and felt like a real life stituation, so good on that! I had to read the last two-three lines a number of times over to actually grab the sense from them, so you may want to double check those lines over. It could just be that I don't know how to read!

Asides from all of that, this story isn't exactly a one-shot. A one-shot would be more of a short story, while no one-shot on here actually reaches the legnth of a full length short story, and most range from 6000-10000 words- again I could be off on the actual word count. Another thing that seperates a one-shot from most stories is the fact that it is literally a ONE-Shot, with only one chapter. This story seems to be better suited as a Drama story :)     Z a c  A tt a c k     Rawr 22:21, September 23, 2013 (UTC)