User blog:Kota1875/To Risky??

Okay so I am in the process of writing my new fanfic Drama Royale, which is an inspiration of hunger games and battle royale. So yeah, the plot of course has a very serious and semi-violent tone to it with the contestants killing each other and all that, but I've tried to keep the story well written and entertaining, and at the same time not to overly violent. But based on what I have so far, I would like some opinions, since I am just starting out on the story.

Do you think I should tone down the violence? Is it too over the top?

I would love some feedback. Thanks!