User blog comment:JERealize/Adio (Montenegrin for "Goodbye")/@comment-4936114-20150809054143/@comment-2228839-20150816001538

Here's some now: Work on dialogue to make it more realistic and less robotic. If you need reference, remember a conversation you've had in real life and work with that.

That's the advice I gave you before and I'll give it you again now.