Talk:Total Drama Moonlight Island

Hi, I'm Benjamin and I have just read the story so far and it is really good! I really like the addition of putting in the theme song! Your characters are really diverse, and that is really good. If I had to pick out something to do better on, I would say that the first chapter was quite short. I think it would be better if maybe the first two chapters were combined. But if the second chapter is quite big, I would just say to add a little more description of the island maybe. Thats really all I have to say so far, but I can't wait to read more!

Benjabolt (talk) 18:50, August 21, 2017 (UTC)Benjabolt