User blog comment:TDIwriter/TDIwriter wants your help./@comment-1153194-20110924214311/@comment-1874924-20110924220852

In your example, you might want to include a notation of which "season" (i.e. which story) Brent was in, for the benefit of TD:PI readers who aren't familiar with the referenced story, e.g. "...getting him the very average rank of 15th in ".

Technical tidbit: although you can spell out larger numbers, the convention in most situations is to use numerals for numbers larger than ten, and to spell out smaller numbers. One exception is that a number beginning a sentence should always be spelled out.