User blog comment:Jaxswim/Jax's Reviews/@comment-32154022-20121203232318

Thank you for the review, Jax!

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. The reason I made the challenge of the second chapter so short is because I knew it was an extremelly monotonous one, and there was no way I could make it interesting. Writing action is just not for me.

Your opinion on Inna-Foreman's dynamics really surprised me, since it's most reader's (at least that I know of) favorite bits, some even ship them XD The cruise ship starts sailing a few chapters ahead, so you can see the theme better explored later.