Talk:S.S. Total Drama

Winner Guessing Contest
One guess per user. The winner may create a character for a possible next season. In case there isn't a next season, I still have to think of a decent prize.

Anamaria-  Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese!  04:32, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

Antonio-

Carlos-

Cillian- Reddy: Awesomer Than You -- All Fan Mail Goes Here! -- SHAMELESS ADVERTISING 22:56, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Cleo- You can blow my whistle baby,   whistle baby...   here we go!  17:34, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dominic- For the lolz. Toadgamer80 We ain't gotta rush, just take it slow. 22:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Foreman- Howzaboudit. Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 15:34, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Halle- It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  21:31, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Inna- BFDI Is the best  Animated series ever!  09:43, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lana-  Forever Young  Talk 22:28, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lance-Eh..I like him -w- Got it memorized? Got what memorized?  I have no idea.  23:20, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lizzie-

Louie-  Music's The Rhythm Of My Body!   16:38, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mallory- --You shoot me down,  but I won't fall   I am titanium!  11:48, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mathew- Suta is so awesome, And your luckyHe is even talking to you. 19:09, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Meredith- Jay JLOM Things turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 02:56, September 10, 2012 (UTC)

Patricia- The good ones are taken >_>  Jkl9817 (Talk) 18:22, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ryan- ~ RPs & Writes! ♪  Dakota    ♫  Talks & Edits! 19:41, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Terry- Back to normal siggy for the JoFan XD 11:12, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Xavier- We found dove in   a soapless place...  00:16, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Final 3 Guessing Contest
The winner gets to create a character for a possible next season, or fanart if he/she prefers. In case one of the contestants on your guesses is eliminated, you can guess again.

Mallory, Ryan, Patricia. "The best part is  when we go   to the whale!"  02:53, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Halle, Louie, and Meredith Toadgamer80 GRAH-GOOGLY! 23:11, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Carlos, Lana, Meredith. "The best part is  when we go   to the whale!"  22:13, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Louie, Meredith and Inna Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You!  17:28, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lance, Inna and Meredith  Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 16:14, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Chat
Yay. Finally you revelead this :P Can't wait to see the characters, and for the story. :D It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  19:00, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the first chapter. :D My favorites are Lizzie, Halle, Mallory, Cillian, Lance, Anamaria, Xavier, Cleo and Inna. :D And Chris is awesome as always. xD I also loved Gull's team. :D Can't wait for the next chapter. :D It's a me, Bruno!   And I don't have anything   to say!  21:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I got so happy I got a completely unexpected reader I forgot to reply you. I have plots for all of those characters (or have I?), so I can't wait to see how you will like them as it goes. Manatee12 "That's a "step"-ladder." 00:05, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

I read this for randomness, and I absolutely loved it! :D :o I rarely comment on stories...xD This chapter was great, I really loved all the interesting characters. :3 My faves are Lance, Xavier, and Terry for sure! I can't wait to see how this story goes! :3 Got it memorized? <font color="Green">Got what memorized?  <font color="Orange">I have no idea.  23:22, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

OMG, I got a completely unexpected reader! Thanks for reading it, Alfan ^_^ I'm glad you liked it, as I wanted to use some pretty unique characters, even though there are some clichés. You will see what I have planned for those three. If you want to be notified about new chapters, I have a subscriber list. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 23:30, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I don't really read a lot of fic's XDDD on here, because I'm always busy and stuff, but I really love this fic. I love almost every character and only Anamaria (scary much?), Carl (d-bag -_-), and Louise (...creepy as hell D:) are the character's I no likey. I LOVED LOVED Terry (A WRITER LIKE WE ARE :D), Lance (funny as hell!), Patricia (who reminds me of Courtney LMAO), Lana (who is a lot like me at times, IK IK it's sad LOL), Lizzie (WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!...sorry LMAO), Foreman (male Eva all grown up LMAO), Antonio (he could be used for comic relief XDD), Halle (Jo 2.0 I hope >:D), Xavier (unique sauce :3), Inna (EXCERCISE 1, 2, 3! LMAO XDDD), and Cleo (please have her be a video gamer epic sauce character LMAO). I just love ALL OF THESE PEOPLE :D They are so unique :D, all I ask is that...Louise leaves D:...he's creepy ;( Back to normal siggy for the JoFan XD 04:51, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, JoFan. I'm glad you liked all those characters, and I understand why you dislike the other ones, Anamaria was much less popular than I thought XD Lana is a lot like me at times too, so don't worry. I tried to make the cast unique, even though characters like Inna, for example, already exist. As for Louie, he is creepy but he doesn't mean to... Or does he? <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 12:40, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Mana. I loved this! I mean, I expected a story by you to be terrible, (jk) and this is really good. I hope you can keep these chapters comin', and make Foreman win (for me). Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 15:37, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Trey, I'm glad you liked it. I will certanily not cancel it, I planned this story too much to just give up. As for Foreman, we will see... <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 15:50, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, great chapter. :D Patricia really hates Carlos. I'm looking fowad to this conflict. >:3 I laughed at the Mallory's spying Lance scene. Mallory is such a pervy. xD Anamaria is awesome. It seems I'm the only one who likes her, though. :( Boring challenge. :p Poor Terry, it wasn't her fault. I didn't expected Cillian to be eliminated so early. :O I thought he was going to be kind of a antagonist. xD And just one more thing... Chicken! :D <font color="Blue">I <font color="Red">am  <font color="Limegreen">awesome!  03:15, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Bruno! It looks like you're the only Anamaria fan out there. The challenge was boring, but I suck at writing sports themed challenges. Cillian's elimination was a surprise? Yay! :D Chicken <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 01:46, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Just read chapter two and needless to say, I liked it XDDD. I'm a bit sad that Cillian is gone, though it is a surprise DX XDDD. Eh, I'll live LMAO. Carlos....must go >~> I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure.   But if you can't handle me at my worse, you sure as hell don't deserve my best.  04:06, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks JoFan. It was quite a surprise for me to know that people liked Cillian, I thought he would be one of those middle-of-the-road characters in people's rankings. We'll see about Carlos... ;) <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 14:18, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Great chapter. :D I really liked all the stuff in the beggining, and I loved the challenge. :D xD at the reference. And the challenge, it was just awesome. Reference again? :P I like Inna and Foreman, and now I'm shipping FxI. xD Now that I could see more of them, my top five is currently Anamaria, Mallory, Lance, Inna and Xavier. I thought Anamaria was going to be eliminated. Then, I thought it was going to be Patricia. :P Antonio, I thought he was going to have a bigger plot with the girls. :P I liked him, but he wasn't my favorite, so I don't really care about his elimination. And I felt bad for Anamaria... why there's no chicken arcade? :( "I'm Selfish,   impatient and   a little insecure."  22:28, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Bruno, that was my favorite chapter to write so far. I'm a big fan of the reference, I just hope the creator of Alex never reads this story :P The challenge wasn't much of a reference, but I asked O and Toad for permission. I hope you're happy you can see more of Anamaria, oh Anamaria's sole fan :P Antonio would have a plot, but I found a good reason for his elimination and went with it. And there really should be a chicken arcade... Chickener? <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 22:39, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

I liek Anamaria, too! But of course, I'm liking Carlos's strategicalnessability. I also am shipping Finna. (ForemanxInna) Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 23:23, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Anamaria got two fans! Knowing Rhonda, she might get a third XD I didn't expect people shipping Finna. Maybe I'll do something about it... Maybe. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Chocolate">"That's a "step"-ladder." 23:34, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

I liked the first chapter very much. Can’t tell who is my favorite yet, but they all seem like a very enjoyable cast. I loved the messed up cue cards XD

Ryan was pretty nice, Mallory was pretty ok, and I like Mathew. Meredith was funny and enjoyable. I’m interested to see what Cillain will do that is mischievous. I feel bad for Lana and was funny, but I also find her a little awkward :P Not sure how I feel about Lance, he was funny but a bully. I like Halle’s confidence and Dominic was pretty hilarious.

Lizzie was pretty hilarious and Louie…made me feel uncomfortable. Inna seems pretty nice, and I loved Foreman being right behind her to give her a scare. Terry was nice, and Antonio was funny too. Glad everyone wasn’t affected by his looks.

Loved Patricia’s honesty about Chris. Why doesn’t he raise his eyebrows? Xavier is hilarious and I HAVE to know what is in that box. XDD Anamaria is super funny! Ok, Carlos is so a parody of Boston Rob. I love Patricia’s reaction to him. Cleo seems likable, and I like Dominic’s attraction to her :P

Love the Gull reference in the team name. And I love how Cleo breaks the fourth wall with that line; “They get an awesome name complete with a reference and we are clam chowders?” I love the fake ship too :P Classic Chris indeed. XD And yay Total Drama Tokyo reference.

And chapter two was just great! I MUST know what is in Xavier’s box. Please tell me we will find out :P XDD at Dominic calling him a nerd and the Over Nine Thousand reference.

Yay Meredith and Patricia forming an alliance! They are going to need it. XDD at the scene of Mallory and Lance. I didn’t realize Lance was gay. I mean his biography said women weren’t is thing…but somehow I did not jump to the conclusion he was gay. …I’m really slow :P

But what was even more hilarious then Mallory and Lance at the hot tub was Mallory overhearing them. XDDDD Her jumping to that conclusion is too funny. "I knew there was something going on between these two, but Carlos? I can't accept it, he is a married man!" XDDDD That is a hilarious conclusion to jump too.

XDD Again, for Anamaria getting sick when the boat isn’t moving. And her crazy dead fish. She should name her dead fish :P Cillian is up to trouble. Putting glue in shampoo is classic though. I love how it seems like the towel is going to get stuck then…her hair fine :P

Why does Lana keep calling Terry the wrong name? Is it plot important or just a joke? I would say maybe just a joke, but it is someone specific so maybe not? Was not expecting the bottle to be hand lotion. XD Poor Terry and her hands :P

The boat getting stuck was pretty funny. The challenge was somewhat anti-climatic, but in the beginning it had plenty of tension. I’m glad Cleo pointed out it was anti-climatic though :P

Louie was awkward. And nice shameless advertising with Illana Santana :P As creepy as Louie is, I did feel bad when Mallory made fun of him.

The elimination was cool. The Lifesaver Of Losers, I like it! I figured Cillian would go when he was in the final 2, since Terry seemed to have plot importance. Still didn’t expect him to go yet though. Curious to figure out Halle knew it was him. It was probably just that obvious :P

And as you can tell from feelings about the past two chapters, I thought three…was bad. JK of course, I loved it!

I like your intro. It was very funny, a lot funnier than most intros in Total Drama fanfics.

Who is VelvetCupcakes? I am seriously suspicious now.

The male alliance seems to be interesting. Getting Mallory to join seems super funny based on her reaction. So Mathew knew Lance was gay? I’m curious as to why that makes Carlos uncomfortable. I wonder if it is a specific reason or he is just uncomfortable.

Inna trying to help was both sweet, and utterly hilarious. I can’t wait to see how this goes :) Ryan wanting to help Lana was soooo sweet! I’m totally pairing them now, so you have been warned.

Poor Antonio. Women are so crazy :P Mallory didn’t react like I thought, but I guess she knew it was an alliance so it was ok. I love how she assumes he has a secret lair too.

Dominic and Cleo are pretty funny interacting together. XDD at the comic and manga references. And at the phrase son of monkey’s uncle. I’m so going to use that!

Is the arcade challenge a reference to Total Drama Arcade? Either way I liked it! Dominic would chose Cammy Carly. The crane challenge was funny! Meredith going for the biggest prize was very funny, partially because it is true. And of course Xavier’s box tells him how. What is in that box? Quimberly?

XDDDD I love Anamaria. Her love of chicken is awesome. Can’t believe Louie beat someone, though Ryan probably just let him win. Lance says that happens all the time to build climax but it actually didn’t in the basketball challenge :P

Well Patricia had a meltdown. A professional skee ball player would be an awesome job though.

What does Foreman mean he can’t run? Like physically it is impossible? I thought he ran in the basketball challenge. Carlos is a pretty strategic player, I’ll give him that. I wasn’t sure who to expect to go. I’m glad it wasn’t Anamaira though. But her putting her marshmallow in her bra was weird.

I’m glad Patricia stayed. No offense to Antiono, but he seems like he would get old soon.

Anyway, the chapter was really great Mana! I’m loving the story :D You are seriously talented!  Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese!  05:09, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yay, my first huge Rhonda's comment! Thank you for writing it, I'm glad you liked the story. It seems like Louie makes everyone uncomfortable, the funny thing is that he is based on someone, and that person makes people uncomfortable all the time. Lana calls Terry VelvetCupcakes because she is used to it, since it's her screen name for writing mystery novels. I also love the "son of a monkey's uncle" expression, I heard it somewhere and I found it really funny. The second challenge wasn't exactly a reference, but it was obviously inspired by TDArcade, I even asked O and Toad for permission... Silly me :P Foreman can't run because it's mentioned in his bio that he has a pin in his left leg, he is able to run, but he has problems. I try to make Anamaria do some crazy unexpected stuff, she is fun to write for. Onec again, thank you for the comment and the nice things you said! ^_^ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 14:28, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY? D: I hate you, Mana. >_> Jk :p But yeah, you knew Anamaria was my fave. D: Now I'm just sad. Hmm... as for the actual chapter, it was pretty good. I liekd the challenge, and the recap with Chef. :PI liked Mallory more this chapter, and Lizzie is just hilarious. xD I just hated the elimination. This will be officially the Chicken Month, in memory of Anamaria. :P "I'm Brazilian, I love Chelsey,   and my last name is really hard to pronounce."   — Bruno  00:22, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

The reason why she was eliminated is simple, she would eventually get old, and her jokes would get repetitive. Chef doing the recap was a way not to make them boring, and I'm glad you klike Mallory even more now, I hope she fills the empty space Anamaria left in your heart </3 <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 00:30, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

So, the first chapter without Anamaria... Lana is so obssesed with Terry. It's like if me and Chelsea were in a reality show. :P I sense drama. And I'm still shipping Inna and Foreman. I loved the challenge, those truth or dare challenges are always fun. xD Halle's dare... O_o Dominic is pretty cray-cray. :P And I still don't know what was in that box. >_> I was surprised by that, I thought Xavier would go far with his box. Though, I always thought it would be a mystery that would never be solved, and I was right. :P I'm sad Xavier left, but I'm also scared of him. D: I feel this story isn't over, though. And... ancestral spirits? *faints* :P Dominic's elimination was predictable after he went cray-cray over the box. So, that was a great chapter, and by far, the biggest twist yet. ;) "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light!"   "Surrender now or prepare to fight!"  21:23, August 22, 2012 (UTC)

Halle's dare was ment to be disturbing at least XD Yeah, Xavier's box's contents were always meant to be a mystery that may or may not be revealed ;) Dominic was meat to be eliminated on the next episode, but I felt that eliminating him now wouldn't make any difference. I wrote a twist, yay! I hope I can keep twists coming... Or maybe the twist is that there won't be twists anymore :O <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 21:37, August 22, 2012 (UTC)

I really loved these past chapters Mana! This is such good writing!

XDD I loved Chef giving the intro. It was spot on to his character, and I love how he forgets the title of the show XDD.

Poor Lizzie, she wants to be loved D: And sadly, she is out of options, because Foreman is going to hook up with Inna :P And speaking of couples I wish would happen, Ryan asking Lana to come in was so cute! And hilarious.

Man, Patrica really is a pessimist. I can be too and I often say I am being realistic, so I guess a realist and a pessimist are the same thing :P Which I guess means life is really negative D:

I admit Louie is creepy, but I think he doesn’t know what sexy means or he at least didn’t mean to offend Mallory. …I can’t believe I’m actually siding with Louie on this O-o

Ok, no need to yell at Lana. I mean, if you would have let her explain it was because they were all sleeping you might think twice. I can only imagine how Lana will feel with Terry against her and Halle agreeing.

Wonder how Lizzie and Mallory got to talking about Lizzie’s cousins. And I don’t think alliances are necessarily evil. I mean some things aren’t called alliances but could be classified as them. Like a group of friends won’t vote for each other and will vote together to make sure they stay. That is technically an alliance. And an alliance for voting off bad guys is good right? Just wondering if Lizzie has ever thought that :P

XDDD Of course the challenge is to make Chris breakfast :P Mango chicken juice sounds tasty actually. And Dominic, Y U No agree with the box? The box knows all. The box for president!

Patricia seems like she has a hard time being friends with Meredith, or being friendly in general. I kinda feel bad for her, but at the same time, I feel she is being hurtful to Meredith. And XDDD at accidently stabbing with the knife :P

XDD Chris being Jewish. I could see that if he was a stereotypical Jew. Stereotypical Jews do love to save money. And for some reason I don’t like Halle. Maybe it is because she seems against Lana, and I’m relating way too much with Lana. Is relating to Lana a bad thing? :/

Either way, I kind of felt like Halle’s comment about who needs two people to make a milkshake maybe sort of a reference or jab towards how in other fics, sometimes people will work on activities together when they really wouldn’t need to (Though it maybe done for a scene of humor or plot). XDD Maybe I’m overthinking that comment, but if it was I think that was really clever. If not, then I need to stop thinking so much :P

The scene between Carlos, Mathew and Lance felt awkward to me :P I think it did feel that way to them too though. I guess what Lance said about himself is true, “I'm not here to break all the stereotypes or any crap like that, I'm here for the million dollar prize." That is actually another clever reference or jab to how if a character in Total Drama fanfictions represent some demographic or has a disability they usually join Total Drama to break stereotypes or show they can do things as any regular person can. Again, not sure if it was suppose to be taken that way but that is what I got. You are very clever Mana :P

Foreman and Inna are super funny together. XDD When Foreman said health is mainstream, I thought of him dressed as Diamond from Total Drama: Pacific Island. And oh my god, Foreman did express happiness :O XDD I love how he tells Inna to just shut up. And of course Inna makes a health shake.

XDDD I love how Chris treats himself with his cabin. It is exactly in character. The whole scene was funny! I wasn’t surprised when Chris liked the health shake. Oh Anamaria, why? Why did you reveal you were in a secret alliance and were voting off Carlos? It was a hilarious scene, but WHY? XDDD That whole alliance scene between them was really funny though :P

Anamaria is so my spirit animal. I have decided that.

I wasn’t going to comment on the other chapter yet, but I couldn’t help myself, I love this story! :3

Poor Lana :( She clearly is a fan of Terry’s writing, who must be that alter ego she was obsessed with. Is that alter ego a fanfic writer? XD For some reason I reached that conclusion. Anyway, now Halle is living the dream Lana most likely would have loved.

XDDD Yay more Inna and Foreman! They are too funny together! I do feel bad that Foreman crashed through the floor though. It shattered the dock and his self-confidence D:

XDDD The hot tub scene was very funny. I can see why Patricia got upset about Lance not being ranked, her being bisexual. XDDD I love how silly Meredith is, especially during this scene. And that joke about Lance at the end was funny :P

I must know what is in that box too! It’s probably Quimberly :P And I kind of wanted to see what Carlos was going to say. Oh well. At least the ship has finally left!Truth and Dare? I always get nervous about these challenges because you know something big is going to be revealed. But you have to read through it all to find out, while the tension builds. It’s still pretty clever challenge, and I do like them, I just get so nervous for some reason :P

Carlos’ strategy about choosing dares was pretty smart. XD And I had no idea what a bault is. But now it kind sounds tasty. That was actually a pretty clever question for Lance. I didn’t think it could be part of his strategy.

XDDD Xavier gave such a clever answer. O-o and Halle’s challenge was so weird. But Xavier is gone :O I still don’t get what is in the box nor what Xavier means by ancestral sprits. But I still want too really know.

Ok, so Terry is a popular mystery writer on a mystery website, and Lana really admires her work. I kind of get where Lana is coming from, and feel bad for her D: I’m curious to see why Terry fainted though…

And Dominic left…Eh, I don’t really care as much as about Xavier leaving. I can’t wait to see where this leads! I’m so excited for the next chapter Mana :D!  Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese!  03:50, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Mana... I hate you... Xavier too? Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 03:52, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Rhonda! People tell me I'm a pessimist too, I used to say I was just a realist, but I got tired of that and just agreed with them XD The "alliances are evil" comment was more of a reference to how most happy-go-lucky characters see them as that. I'm glad you can relate to Lana, because I didn't want to make her exaggeratedly tragic. Yeah, Halle's comment about the milkshake was a reference to that, but what would be the fun of a scene with just one person making milkshake? XD The line about breaking stereotypes was another reference, I feel that way too towards minorities characters, so I tried to make something different with him. Foreman dressed as Diamond would make a hilarious image, I guess I'll try that later XD Sorry for Anamaria, but she didn't have any relevance to plot, and relied only on one joke, so she had to go.

Yay for loving this story! ^_^ Terry's alter ego is not a fanfic writer, it was chosen because it sounded really unfitting with a mystery novel writer. I'm glad you like Foreman and Inna scenes, they are a lot of fun to write. I considered removing that joke about Lance, but it was a great ending to the scene, I'm glad you liked it. If you think a balut is tasty, google it, I don't know about the flavor, but jus by looking at it I get nauseous XD Lance's question was a reference to Edward from TD Status Quo, since Reddy thought about him not really being gay at one point. Halle's challenge was quite disturbing, but I tried to make make it less weird by removing the men around and making Inna awkwardly stop the filming. I'm glad you are enjoying the story, Rhonda, I'm enjoying your comments too! :D

Trey, I couldn't make him last longer in order to the plot to go on. I guess he lasted as much as he could. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 11:18, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Mana! ;3. Great job on the new chapter. I really enjoyed the challenge, it was quite interesante with all the Survivor references and Rhonda's love of breaking the fourth wall and Reddy's constant cancellation. Also, I really expected Lizzie to go, but I didn't expect Louie to be in the bottom. Overall, a great chapter with little to no grammar errors. 9/10. ;3<font face="Arial">-- <span style="color:lightcyan; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">When the moonlight brightens up your evening, <span style="color:aliceblue; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">you must <span style="color:powderblue; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">show me <span style="color:lightblue; background-color:black; padding:2px; font-size:8pt; border:thin solid white;">your true strength.  01:57, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Someone read it already? :O Thanks Jess, I'm glad I didn't make many grammar mistakes. I love making subtle references to the Wiki, especially since theywill not make much difference if you don't get them. Lizzie's elimination was quite clear, but I tried to mask it in a way or another, guess I failed :P Thanks for reading! ^_^ <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 02:06, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

I WANNA CREATE A CHARA- Oh my choices were already taken xDD <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 14:12, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Great chapter. :D I loved the recap, with the Brazilian dude. xD Carlos' alliance is dominating the game right now... I wonder where it's gonna end. :P Patricia is so realist. :P Yay for the first destination... except we didn't saw enough of that. xD I laguhed at the 4th-wall joke, and Rhonda' cameo. :P Only Rhonda can do 4th-wall jokes. xD And what a patriot you are. xD I loved how the "cancelled" linked to Reddy's talkpage. xD Ah, the challenge... Brazil and Carnival, it will always be linked. :P I liked the challenge, though. Aww, poor Louie. I like him. :) Lana is selfish, impatient and a little insecure, but I love her anyway. xD How is she supposed to compete against Halle for Terry's heart? Halle is so bladvass. :P Awww, I loved Lizzie. D: I'll miss her... and that made me hate Carlos even more. >_> And Patricia's hatred against him makes me like her more. :P "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light!"   "Surrender now or prepare to fight!"  01:27, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reading,Bruno. Yeah, i'm a real patriot, people staeling tourists, prision breaks... :3 I loved that link to Reddy's page too, I consider it an extra joke. I'm glad you like Lana, as I tried not to make her overly depressive or anything. And bladvass is an awesome word XD Carlos is a love/hate kind of character, kinda like Boston Rob, that was purposefully similar, though. And I guess it's either like Carlos, or like Patricia... or hate both XD <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 01:39, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

After reading Chapter 7...I have to say, my opinion of Foreman has changed. He just became one of my favorites for this story nice work :) <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 15:41, September 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'm glad you like Foreman now, seeing someone like him after this episode makes me more confident in writing drama scenes. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 16:39, September 8, 2012 (UTC)

yepp xD I have to say he has grown on me xD I was a bit surprised by the elimination and now I'm STILL waiting for Carlos to go home >___> hahah I love how he forgets Patricia though ;__; she aint forgettable >_> I TOTALLY SHIP INNAxFOREMAN BTW <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 17:40, September 8, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. :D Is that wrong that I ship Lance and Mathew? xD And yeah, I still hate Carlos. >_> Awww, poor Lana... it's not her fault that Halle is so awesome. **cough**Quimberly-wannabe**cough** I loved Danny L.'s reference. xD And... Jersey Shore. :p I was predicting a Snooki or Anamaria cameo. Awww, I loved Cleo... but the elimination was predictable. :P "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  23:28, September 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it's wrong, get some therapy! loljk. I knew the Danny L. reference would please you, as I like those extra jokes I add to the story. And I hung the lampshade about her predictable elimination, your argument is invalid >:| <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkSlateGray">"All hail the Funyarinpa!" 23:31, September 10, 2012 (UTC)

I forgot to comment yesterday... and now I forgot everything about the chapter. :P Jk I liked the chapter. It was funny and stuff. I'm liking Lana more and more as the season progresses. She's my new favorite (though I haven't forget Anamaria. :P) And Halle... so awesome. D: So, yeah, the challenge was a lame excuse for interactions. :P I'm also liking Mathew, Lance, and specially Ryan, way more. Mathew and Lance are hilarious, and Ryan is so nice. :) And new shipping... LanaXRyan. xD I was so afraid that Lana or Inna would leave, as they are two of my faves (if not my faves). I was surprised by Foreman taking their place. :D That made me like him way more, and he's now one of my faves. That ending was so cute. AWWW. How could Halle not "AWWWW"? She's so heartless. D: xD Can't wait for more. :D "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  00:53, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm glad you're liking all those characters more, that was agood chapter to explore the interactions a bit. I see you like shippings, maybe it will happen, maybe it won't, I'm not giving hints >:D You have to thank Foreman for letting your favorites stay (well, actually thank me since I wrote it, but whatever). I liked the ending too, and I actually wrote it before I started the chapter XD Thank you for your comment! <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkRed">"What the heck was that wriggling piece of plywood?" 03:10, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Great chapter. :D I loved it. :3 Build a snowman in an Moroccan desert? Very creative. :P You don't have idea how I laughed at "Wow, the snow is fake, but looks so real!" and "He could only be more of a jerk if he wore a shirt with 'jerk' written on it." xDDDD I love Patricia, she's so psycho sometimes. xD And Yay for Lana and Terry. :3 I'm glad that Terry thinks she's cool. And I'm shiping LanaXRyan. <3 :P Awww, Mathew's gone? Without a last kiss with Lance? :P Jk Well, he was funny, but he was, like, my second least-favorite from the remaining contestants. :P "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  22:07, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Bruno! I love making these references, because it still makes sense if people don't get them. Terry doesn't hate Lana, that's a step up, I think XD We'll see about LanaxRyan *shifts eyes* And yes, Mathew is gone, so sad huh? Mathew and Lance were meant to have some moments, but I love teasing the readers into hoping for a relationship, so sorry to tell you Mathew is straight :P Since you liked him and he was your second least favorite, i guess the cast is likable as a whole. Mission accomplished! :D <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="DarkRed">"What the heck was that wriggling piece of plywood?" 22:26, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. :P I love Carlos' alliance moments, and strategic-Patricia moments. I loved the challenge, and Heather's cameo. But I expected the real Psy, and the whole cast singing "Total Drama Style". :P Awww, Ryan? I was starting to love Ryan. :( I also was hoping for LanaXRyan. D: "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  22:09, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Merge is closer, so you will see more strategic moments you apparently like. I thought about including Psy, but I had the Heather idea and liked it better since it allowed more comedy. Aww, sorry for Ryan, but I particularily loved the ending I gave him, I'm sorry for breaking your shipping heart D: <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="MidnightBlue">"And our friend Zeke is really nice, he likes Asian rice." 22:23, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

That episode was so adorable haha. I feel so bad for the ending though but at least the Clam Chowders won one for once. Love patricia haha. <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 16:28, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yay, I love to remember I have a reader other than Bruno! XD The ending was my favorite part of this chapter, myabe I'm secretly evil. The funny thing is... The Clam Chowders actually won more times than the Seagulls XD And I really like writing for Patricia, but I enjoy most of the remeining contestants. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="MidnightBlue">"And our friend Zeke is really nice, he likes Asian rice." 16:44, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

wait wait wait....wat.....I thought the clam chowders lost like every challenge lol cause they SUUUUUCKKKKK but I still love them ahah <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 15:17, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

And another great chapter. Illana Santana. <3 Well, I loved the merge. There are way more interactions now. :D I love Lana, and feel bad for her, that actually makes me want to punch Halle and Terry. :P Aww, Mexico... I wanted an "El Chavo" challenge. :P But burritos are okay. I expected that Carlos would win immunity. Well, I actually really liked Mallory, she was entertainment, in a funny way. :( But I'm glad to see that Chef's not dead. :P Can't wait for more. :D "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  00:36, November 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tandks Bruno! I thought of an El Chavo challenge, but I couldn't make it work in individual format. I see you're still on Lana's side, but since I don't have other people who comment I'll never know if I'm making my interpretations ambiguous D: I enjoyed writing for mallory while she lasted, she had her moments (I particularily loved the hockey puck line XD). And I should try to incorporate Chef in the story more, it's so difficult! <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="MidnightBlue">"And our friend Zeke is really nice, he likes Asian rice." 00:52, November 15, 2012 (UTC)

Bad Choice!!!!! Jk I love the story really ^_'^  Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 16:01, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you Jordan! Sorry for Louie's elimination, he had to go now. By the way, you can guess again in the Final Three Guessing Contest. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 16:05, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Thanks!! :D  Dakota Is The Best, Way Better Than You! 16:12, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. One of the best. And one of, if not the, funiest chapter. Kellyg.oddess made some pretty good and lol moments. I laughed so much at her "fights" with Lance. xDDD I also liked the challenge, and I expected Halle's victory. I mean, she's just that awesome. :P I also loved the end. As for the elimination, Louie was funny. D: But he didn't do much, and I liked most of the contestants better... except for Carlos. >_> I LOVE this fanfiction. <3 "The best part is   when we go   to the whale!"  19:24, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you! I missed writing for Kelly, she is so entertaining tow rite for. her fights with Lance were fun as they have similar personalities (except kelly is much more one-dimentional). Yeah, I noticed Louie had been pretty much a filler the whole story. Still, he ended up being the only "based on an existing person" character who managed to keep similar to said person :P <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 19:35, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I reread the first three chapters. I have to say, I am really a fan of Halle, mostly due to her willingness to go around naked. Appreesh. My winner pick, Foreman, (who I know is an early out) depresses me with his lack of athletic skill, yet I ship him with Inna. Luv u mana. Trey. It's short for Treyquisha. 18:57, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Halle going naked was added to reflect her lack of self-consciousness, but It's good it make people like her. You will see what if I have something planned for Inna and Foreman... If you stick with the story, that is :3 <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 19:19, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. My. God. Mana I need to catch up with this. xD The humor is perfect, Anamaria being a chicken wanting goddess, Inna's skee-ball fit, the 3-0 win... It works so well :O I only read like 3 chapters for RA but I'll need to read the rest cus yolo. It's so good D: Carlos being Boston Rob omg </3 How did you come up with this? -- o wate u men blo ive?  yes sory i get dem mixed up,  i did perchese ur coluered child  20:00, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Great story Mana, I really enjoy this! -- Tis the season  to be writing!   Falalala, la, la, la, la!  20:05, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

So I'm always been an avid reader of this story LOL so i guess this will be fun. I love this story. It is one of the few Fanfics I regularly read and actually enjoy to be honest. The humour is spot on, the characters are relatable yet so outrageous, and the plot is touching at times. I absolutely love so many characters but I will list some now. Patricia is absolutely amazing. Her underdog personality and absolute love of Reality shows is really cool and super fun to see in action. I am so rooting her on throughout this haha. Carlos, as much as I DESPISE HIM makes a great villain of the serious. I love all the blindsides he pulls off ;). Lana is sooooo adorable and I just feel for her every time she slips up and looks like a fool <3 Halle and Terry are so fun to read and I love The "triangular admiring" between Lana, Terry, and Halle (she is one cocky girl, FIERY XD). Umm....To be honest, Xavier was my pic to win and I LOVED him until...well you know. No spoiler. awkssss.... Lance is soo fun to watch and Foreman and Inna was quite possibly my favorite part of this whole story. I SHIP IT!!! There are a couple characters who felt like wasted afterthoughts like Cleo (who was invisible the whole time) or Dominick who was just a failure in so many ways. I did love Anamaria though even though her time was short. Soo can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work buddy! <span style="background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(skyblue), to(indianred)); border:2px ridge #3D5229;"> Aimers talk 20:53, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yay! Comments, and no one had to force you guys to read! *shifts eyes* So I'm answering each one if anyone cares:

CK: Thank you CK! I was worried about the humour when I started writing, but I guess I can come up with something funny. I hope you really stick with it, because i enjoy people's opinions. And I came up with Carlos' personality even though I've never watched Boston Rob on Survivor, and believe it or not, the Ralph line was a complete coincidence XD

Duke: Nothing to reply here besides a thanks! :D

Aimers: Thank you Aimers! I enjoy your... Umm.. Avidness. Once again, I'm gald I could pull off a good humour, as that was one of my biggest concerns. About Patricia and Carlos, I tried to make them ambiguously villains/heroes, but I guess everyone ended up hating Carlos instead XD I'm glad Lana didn't end up like a sappy depressive cliché as I feared. About the triangle, I tried to come up with a triangle that doesn't involve romance for once, as it's one very overused plot point. Foreman and Inna were meant to just have funny interactions together, but maybe the readers influenced me a little bit XD I also enjoy the critics, because no one can find my story THAT perfect XD Cleo was definitely the most irrelevant character of the story, and Dominic... Well, he looks like an afterthought because he was one. I put him in the last minute to replace the first-out who was basically a one-joke characters only Brazilians would understand. <font color="LightSeaGreen">Manatee12 <font color="Indigo">"The crackers were probably bad luck anyway." 21:47, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Really nice story, it's a lot more unique than most. Like...so much detail x_x. <font color="Red"> Freaked out, dropped <font color="Blue"> my pool in the phone again.  <font color="Silver">FireFlameVG  01:59, December 3, 2012 (UTC)