User blog:Omg.Chacha/Opinions on my story?

Reunion Help?!
So I'm writing this story called Reunion. It's about what the title implies. It's all about what happens when the contestants go in for a reunion 10 years after TDI. TDA and TDWT do exist, but Alehandro hasn't been heard from, and didn't attend. I'm sorry but I cannot stand writing for him. Anyways, my main concern is the pairings of characters. I have Lindsay and Tyler happily married, as I feel they would be the type of couple to elope at a young age. I also have Gwen and Trent in a relationship, but are not currently living together, also Cody and Sierra are implied to have a "thing." The thing I am really asking is what should I do about Courtney and Duncan? I am very picky about the way I pair them up. They are currently in a relathionship, but not living together in my story, however I'm thinking of changing it. I have this idea of them not being together AT ALL before the relathionship, as if him cheating on her with Gwen ended it. Later in the story I was thinking of having Courtney almost "crushing" on him a little, but denies it. Almost a "tables are turned" type thing. Duncan would definatly be interested and they will start up a relathionship. Another idea would be the same as my original idea, but Duncan proposing or something along those lines. Did I mention Bridgette and Geoff are together and living together? Please help me out by commenting on the pairings!

The Writing Style?!
I'm currently trying to change up the writing style, and may completely abandon my POV switching and have an unnamed narrator, in 3d person omnipresent view (He/she can hear/see/everything, and even knows what the characters are feeling.) However, I havesome parts of the story semi-finished, or framed out. It's a large upset between Duncan/Gwen/Trent/Courtney, mostly involving a misunderstanding on Courtney's part. Trent is really just an info dump for this part. In this part, the POV switching works very well, and it requires the first Courtney/Duncan storyline. Another part of the story that I feel would be best using the POV switching would be what I think is a very interesting story line between Izzy and Owen. Owen is somewhat responsible for the downfall of Izzy's character. It's kind of an off screen Break The Cutie trope, or maybe even Break the CRAZY when we're talking about Izzy. She isn't nearly as crazy as normal, and if the storyline remains unchanged, you will see why. If it gets changed in the process I would possibly include it as an "extra." I definatly need advice from an expirienced writer. If you have an idea thats totally off-the-wall involving relationships that would be a great shocker or very interesting in your mind, please tell me. You will get credit for the idea of course! I would love input! And stay tuned as I have another interesting idea involving the original characters. It may follow the same "reunion" or "Haven't I seen you before?" story line.