User blog comment:Sprinklemist/Questions for a Sprink Writer's Workshop?/@comment-1153194-20100418163120

Shane, I think you can learn more about that from Gideon, as he probably thinks my stories are script like, too. Just subtle things like, "Nice to meet you," Jimmy said with no hint of insincerity in his voice. (or) "What are you doing?" asks an annoyed LeShawna. As opposed to constant 'says' or 'said'. While it would get a little old to have too much description in how someone says something. I honestly didn't feel that TD:TP was script-like, so I don't think you have too much to worry about.