Talk:Total Drama Island...?

If you don't get Chapter 2 done, I'm going to die. Anyways, it was a great chapter. I enjoyed Chris the most, to be honest. Owen seems a lot more sane in this fanfiction than in the series, which is a relief. Kevin may be my favorite so far, because he just seems interesting to me (sort of like a Geoff-Trent mix or something). Anyways, keep up the great work, Kg. --TDIFan13 (My Talk andMy Contributions! ) 05:59, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * Awesome chapter. Lindsay was great throughout it. I was laughing in the beginning with Edward Cullen. I didn't expect Izzy to go home, but the way she did was also funny. Nice job Kg, looking forward for more chappies!  Webkinz Mania   (talk)   11:46, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Loved Chapter 7! I especially loved the elimination. While I was unhappy at Sadie's elimination, the "230 pound deadweight" really made me laugh. Sadie and Katie's separation was sad, but I really loved their lines, too. "Do I have a choice?" was such a Sadie thing to say. And, well, I also loved the cherry popcorn. The challenge was good, as well, but somewhat hard to read (maybe it's just because I'm an idiot when it comes to dodgeball). Nevertheless, awesome chapter, keep up the good work. --TDIFan13 (My Talk andMy Contributions! ) 20:30, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I didn't really know how to write the challenge section. I'll admit, it's hard to follow.

Did anyone notice the elimination pattern goes boy,girl,boy,girl,boy,girl.

I've seen this being updated occasionally, but this was the first time I've actually checked it out. And, before I start commenting, I'm a little sad that Noah is the one replaced. That seems to be a trend on stories like this, which is a shame. Anyway, to get back on track, I'd like to say that your story is very enjoyable. While reading the first chapter, I laughed a few times (a chuckle here and there), and I liked how you seem to be portraying the characters accurately. I'll write more later. Nice job! UltimateTORINOR And the quest for the Ultimate continues... 13:14, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Sorry about the whole Noah thing; I created the fanfiction before Total Drama World Tour, which is when I realized how great Noah is. Again, thanks for the positive feedback. :)

I haven't commented on the last three chapters; so I will. Chapter 8 was hilarious. The challenge was interesting, and original. I felt like it was focused on Gwen, which was good, since you write her really well. Ezekiel's elimination saddened me, especially since I like him better in this fanfiction. Chapter 9 was funny from the beginning. For some reason, I didn't like it as much as Chapter 8, but that doesn't mean it was bad...I got some vibe from it. Anyways, it was funny, especially Heather and Lindsay, and Beth and Geoff's so-called cooperation. Chapter 10 was short (not as short as Chapter 9, from what I can remember, though), but I still enjoyed it. I'm glad Katie got eliminated; not because I didn't like her, but at least now she can be with Sadie. One side-note; for some reason, I don't see too much focus on Kevin. It's weird, I wonder if he's just got little lines, or...maybe you're not trying to focus on him too much since he's your character, but I swear, for like a minute I forgot he was even in the fanfiction. XD Besides the Kevin thing, I think your last three chapters were perfect, as always. Keep up the awesome work. I do look forward to reading more. :D --TDIFan13 (My Talk andMy Contributions! ) 03:31, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I don't want it to seem like I focus on him too much. And, yes, those last two chapters were a bit short. I typed them on my iPod, and it seemed so long there. I didn't know what to do with Ezekiel besides add "eh" at the end of every sentence, so I had to let him go.

Nooooooooooooo! Gwen! She could've voted off Courtney with Kevin and LeShawna, not quit! Gah...I hate Courtney and her blackmail. Gwen was an awesome character. I didn't want her or LeShawna to go, but...I guess it's what builds up the drama, right? Awesome challenge. I hope I'm not being bias by saying this, but I really hope I see more Heather in future chapters. She had like, two lines in this one. Only one that I can remember, "Horribly" or "Horrible" or something. Anyways, keep up the great work. --TDIFan13 (My Talk andMy Contributions! ) 05:39, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Don't worry, you're not being biased. I noticed that I seem to be making Courtney a lot more antagonistic than Heather. But, her time will come.

I stand corrected; Chapter 15 was Heather-tastic. I loved it. I thought I'd get bored of reading it since it was a non-elimination, but I read it 'til the end!! ^_^ Awesome chapter. Beth's gonna get jumped for not choosing Heather to go with her. --TDIFan13 (My Talk andMy Contributions! ) 05:54, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yay! Glad you like it!