User blog comment:Owen Hardy/Total Drama Island Survival Endings/@comment-3483396-20131121183839/@comment-26157209-20131121201202

~Zac draws a card and plays it~ http://24.media.tumblr.com/bdbe4e7a5a2c14cdd6b51827153bb025/tumblr_mwgy34Z1xt1r8brruo1_500.jpg

Honestly JE, there is a way to be nice about things, this obviously isn't the way to go about it :) If you want to help Owe just take him through his mistakes, and explain why they are faults. On top of that you should only comment on the spelling if you comment on the actual content first, honestly it's not incredibly difficult.

If you want more users to read your story you might want them to actually like you first.