User blog:JasonAlexande08/MY NEW STORY!

Okay: I'm SERIOUSLY proud of myself! :D I've FINALLY written! Heres the preview I will provide for ya'll.

“Congratulations, Cody, you've won today's challenge. Your reward is to go on a romantic date with someone here.” Chris said. Due to what Cody said to Sierra earlier in the day, Sierra was still mopey. Cody looked around him. The Eiffel Tower's lights seemed to blind him as he looked around.

DJ was standing next to Sierra. He saw Cody looking in his direction. DJ made eye contact with Cody then pointed to his left where Sierra was standing. Sierra briefly looked up at Cody then looked back down. “I'll pick Sierra,” Cody decided. Sierra still looked upset. LeShawna walked up to her left side and put her arm around Sierra. Due to Sierra's height, she couldn't fully her arm around.

“Trust me, building bridges is easier then breaking them,” LeShawna said to Sierra. She nodded her head, took a breath and looked at LeShawna. “Thanks, girl friend.” She said. “So do you accept?” Chris asked. “I guess so,” “You have a hour until your date, so you better deodorize, spiffy up, and look good. Everyone to the plane.” He commanded. The Travelers all walked back to the plane.

“You know it's really weird to see Sierra upset,” Harold said to the other boys in his living quarters. “Kinda, but not really.” DJ commented. “Hey, who do you guys think will go home? Gwen? Courtney? “ Owen changed the subject. “What about Izzy?” Alejandro asked, making a kissy face. “I don't know.” Owen responded, with a frown. “If she does,” He started, as if he was doing a speech. “Then I'd be pretty upset.”

The confessional's static came up and skipped to Owen in the confessional. “Um, you know this is a confessional and all? Well, I would like to confess something...” He paused, farted, giggled and returned to being all serious. He started playing with his fingers. “I kinda like Sierra. I mean she's really pretty and all...but If she doesn't forgive Cody...I'm always available!” He said in the confessional.

Please, please, PLEASE comment and tell me if My writing has improved or worsend! And if you dont... :@ !