User blog:DJ Spenstar/Total Drama Amazon: fan-made alternate ending

When Niles eliminated Susan, I became really sad about the whole thing. I don't think I've been more sad about any fanfiction I've ever read prior to this, LOL. Even now, after re-reading that chapter, I still found it unbelievable. So I actually fantasized about what should have happened, in my opinion. And then it hit me: I could write my version of what happened in a blog post! It'd be a great gift from me to all of you before I end up leaving for a while. Just a reminder: this is purely fan-made, and TDAmazon is the property of Nalyd Renrut, blah blah blah.

Niles found Susan alone in the woods. “Hey, Susan,” Niles said.

Susan turned to Niles. Her face had dried tears. “Hey.”

“What’s wrong?” Niles asked.

“I just know you’re voting me off tonight,” Susan said. “I can tell.”

“What makes you say that?” Niles asked.

“Isn’t it obvious? Niles you’ve been in love with Jocelyn since day one! She doesn’t even know your name! She’s been using you the whole time! She’s made you blind to…” Susan trailed off.

“Blind to what?” Niles asked.

Susan stood up so she was face-to-face with Niles. “Blind to me.” She kissed Niles on the lips, and walked away, sulking. Tears fell to the ground behind her with every step she took. Niles could only stand there, in shock.

"Susan..." he whispered to himself, "How could I not have noticed...?" Niles fell to his knees and began to cry. After a few seconds, he got up and ran after Susan.

Niles, Susan, and Jocelyn went to tribal council that night. They sat down before Nalyd. “Now bringing in the members of our jury,” Nalyd said. As each jury member came in and took a seat, Nalyd said their name, “Nathaniel, Rocky, Ed, Bozo, Lacey, Ace, James, and Hillary.” Hillary looked at the final three derisively. “Okay, final three, go vote.”

Susan voted for Jocelyn, but said nothing.

Jocelyn voted for Susan. “Nice girls finish last.”

Niles cast his vote. “I will make things right. I promise.”

“I’ll tally the votes,” Nalyd said. He pulled out one vote. “Susan.” He pulled out a second vote. “Jocelyn. That’s one vote for Susan and one for Jocelyn. This next vote is Niles’ vote and it is the tie-breaker.” The Tribal Council area went silent as Nalyd pulled the last name from the ballot bow. “The twenty-second person voted off of Total Drama Amazon and the final member of our jury is…” Nalyd revealed the name.

"Jocelyn. Jocelyn, that's enough votes."

The jury gasped in shock. Susan smiled.

"Niles, I thought..." she began.

"I'm sorry," finished Niles, "I'm sorry for not noticing you before, Susan. But now... now I know the truth."

Susan hugged Niles and cried in his arms, but these were tears of joy. Meanwhile Jocelyn sulked her way to Nalyd and handed him her torch.

"Jocelyn," said Nalyd, "The tribe has spoken." Nalyd snuffed her torch, and Jocelyn left the tribal area.

"Final two, head back to camp," said Nalid. Niles and Susan got up, and hand-in-hand, returned to camp for the final time.

That's for all the SusanXNiles supporters like me! Toodles!