User blog comment:Sunshineandravioli/The Process of Shattering - Chapter 1/@comment-2186558-20120223214804

Another great job, Sunshine- also, I love Maria's 2.5 year old pic. xP I loved Layton's briefly mentioned- yet oh-so-clear- conflict about not believing whether or not Maria's mother is really dead, I liked how you never actually referred to Layton as Layton, I loved the ambiguity of what happened to her- although I'm gonna go ahead and guess that they got hit by a car- and long story short, I loved the chapter. XP Can't wait for more.