User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/Still not dead!/@comment-1324135-20090919043418

Okay. I really, really want to give a page long explanation on why exactly I decided that scene was necessary, but I will only ask you all questions instead.

How did you how did you feel when you read that? I wanna know real bad! Ooh, even better! What was the most powerful reaction you had when reading the story? Any chapter. Any moment. Like...say...you actually cried at this one scene or gasped at another. Something like that. (gets out pen and paper) This will be for future reference, and I'll be asking you guys questions like these to study what does and doesn't get reactions out of my readers. Don't skimp on the details! :D