User blog comment:DJ Spenstar/Total Fanfiction Hangout!/@comment-1153194-20090917021435

I think you did a good job. I liked Belle a lot in the story. The only thing I didn't like about Missy was the fact that she appeared in that particular article, as I've implied that her beauty pageant days were over, because of her confessional sessions. I guess she could still compete, but it would be a million times more obvious in that case. But I think I'm being too picky about that small aspect of the story, and overall her personality was spot on (don't change it on that account, though). She's pretty much just evil where competition is involved, and can turn it on and off, though, she probably always feels differently on the inside than she expresses.

So, in summary... >_< Great job, and I look forward to more. Missy and Craig would be a good couple. I'm very curious as what you have in mind for Levi and Lequisha. I always thought Levi and Missy were a very good pair, and may match them in a future story. It's because of Levi's good/confused character coming across as arrogant, and Missy's false comfort coming off as well-intentioned.