User blog:DJ Spenstar/Infinity Chapter 1 Preview SPOILER ALERT!!

Before I begin with the preview, I'd liek to mention one change to the way I'll be writing from here on in. Confessionals will now be scripted, in bold. Nothing else will be in script format, just confessionals. Now, enjoy your preview!

The sun shone bright in the afternoon sky. The sun’s rays made the waters of Lake Wawanakwa look as beautiful as ever, and the view of such a beautiful sight was perfect for the 21 passengers on a Luxury boat called SS Insanity. However, for reasons unknown, things just didn’t feel right.

A small African boy by the name of Richard stood at the deck with a small Asian girl by the name of Patricia. They both gazed at the beautiful lake. Richard sighed. “Why do I feel like this?” he asked, “Everything’s so perfect. Why do I feel that something’s going to go horribly wrong?”

“I don’t understand why,” said Patricia, “But I feel the same way. Too bad I can’t forget about this and enjoy the ride like the others,”

“Yeah, it sucks,” said Richard. “Maybe if I head back inside and hand with my brother Seto, I’ll feel better. Seto always has a way of cheering me up when I’m blue.” Richard turned around and walked away.

“Good idea,” whispered Patricia, “If only I had brought family with me.”

Inside the ship, in a small room, a skinny, blue-haired, nerdy boy sat playing a video game. On the back of his video game system read his name, written in permanent ink. The words read, “Lee”.

“Today I’ll finally beat the evil fiend!” Lee proudly exclaimed, even though nobody else was in the room to hear or care. “I’m so close!” he continued. Suddenly, Lee heard a knock on the door to his room. “Come in,” he said.

A large, brown haired boy opened the door and walked in. “Why are you here alone?” he asked.

“Because I want to be,” said Lee. There was no emotion in his voice.

“Hey,” said the other boy, “Why don’t you come join the party with the rest of us? It’s lots of fun.”

“Sure,” said Lee, “Just give me one second to,” Lee interrupted his own sentence by putting his video game down and jumping up in joy. “I won! I beat the game! Okay, Timmy, I’m right behind you!”

“Cool,” said Timmy, “You head in. I’ll go get Richard and Patricia. It’s just not complete without them.”

“Okay,” said Lee. His signature dorky smile on his face, Lee left the room and headed for a nearby room, where you could hear the loud music coming from there from a mile away.

In the large room, a pretty brunette walked up to a black, tough-looking guy and sat down next to him. “Hi!” she said, “What’s your name?”

“Spike,” said the boy, “What’s yours?”

“Luciana,” said the girl, “Want to dance with me? The music’s perfect, and you’re cute.”

“Really?” asked Spike. He was shocked.

'''Mike: Nobody’s ever called me cute before, especially not hot girls like Luciana! This may be the start of a really good summer. '''

'''Luciana: Sucker! I knew it! The boys here are just as easy as the boys back home. I’ll be dominating this game in no time! '''