User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/That was fast, huh?/@comment-1153194-20090925145908

LOL at microphone dropping.

Thanks so much for the review! You said so much nice things (between the awkward silence, lol), and I completely understand your criticisms. I appreciate what you said, because I never thought of myself as even remotely a good writer. I'll try to fix the story where I can (that's what editing is for). I don't like being overly poetic in my writing, so that's why I try to avoid too much description. I lurve bluntness, and flat out, this is what happened. But I see what you mean with the two lines that need a little fixing. I can't believe you said you think I'm better than you, of all people. O_O