Talk:Random tdi

The first thing I would suggest is that you break up you chapters into paragraphs. Walls of Text are hard to read, because it's so easy for the reader to lose his place. The rule is that you should start a new paragraph whenever the subject changes. For example, changing speakers constitutes a change of subject, so you shouldn't have two people speaking in the same paragraph. (And yes, this can mean a lot of one-line paragraphs in sections that have a lot of dialogue.) Most paragraphs will be 5-6 lines or less, but paragraphs of up to 10-12 lines are okay. If you have a paragraph longer than that, you should look for a place to divide it. Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O!  Sing me your song, O!  A wandering minstrel, I--  04:21, November 29, 2010 (UTC)