User blog comment:Goldenshane/Some News/@comment-1153194-20110719153805/@comment-1153194-20110719155103

Yeah, and always have a purpose with your scenes. Character development/airtime/bonding/foreshadowing. Try not to just have a random conversation that has little to do with anything. I actually think having a halfway point for chapters would be a good idea for you. There would be more to read (presumably), but smaller doses would make it easier to digest.