User blog comment:TDALindsayfan1/A New Fan Fiction...a Collab!/@comment-2135146-20101222231607/@comment-1636990-20101223001329

Katrina, once a new person speaks, that is when you make a new paragraph. I'll edit your above paragraph as an example.

"Okay, so then I walked up to the ugly witch," said Jenny.

"The one with purple hair?" Fred asked Jenny.

"No, the one with pink hair," Jenny answered Fred.

"I've never seen the pink-haired witch before, can you describe her more?" Fred asked Jenny.

"Well... she's fat, has gray skin, purple hair, red eyes, sharp teeth, lot's of moles-" is all Jenny answered before that witch knocked down the door. Jenny and Fred were never seen again... until Jack cut open that witch and found them. The End.