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TDI Aftermath I (Day 13)

The camera reveals a dark room. The lights turn on to reveal a studio. It has two couches and one chair. A tall, African teenager walks onto the stage as an audience cheers. The teen is wearing a grey hat and grey cloths, along with maroon hoop earrings. She sits down on one of the couches.

The girl introduces herself saying, “Hello y’all people at home. I’m LeShaniqua. If you all can’t tell, I’m LeShawna’s cuz. This is a little show I like to call TDI Aftermath.” LeShaniqua is interrupted by a voice behind her. The camera pans out to reveal Chris on the TV screen.

“How in the world did you get your own show!?” He asked sounding shocked and angry.

“Well it all started before TDI started,” LeShaniqua begins. “I tried out for the show along with LeShawna. The dang show said that I made it, but they lied. They mistook me as LeShawna. I sued the show and now I’m here with my forgiveness present.”

“Fine,” Chris begins, “but I still think someone more famous should host. Like that Shane guy or maybe that weird guy that thinks he’s Red.”

LeShaniqua looks like her ego’s been broken. “Don’t you dare say I’m not famous!” She shouts sounding irritated. “I’m going to make big bucks for my family with this gig.”

“Whatever you say.” Chris says in disbelief.

LeShaniqua asks sounding irritated, “Can someone please get him off the screen?” Chris’ face suddenly turns to static. “Thank you.” LeShaniqua gets an excited smile on her face. “Let’s get this show started! Here’s how it works. Every five eliminations we’re going to have an aftermath. Today we have Owen, Beth, Courtney, and Geoff with us ready to be interviewed. Izzy’s also going to be interviewed via satellite. She couldn’t be here due to her injuries.”

Some rude person from the audience shouts, “Just get on with it!”

LeShaniqua looks angry. She shouts, “You don’t ever tell me what to do! Come up here right now!” The guy reluctantly walks onto the stage. He is wearing a red shirt, along with a white undershirt. He is obviously fit. He’s tan. LeShaniqua drools over the boy. “So… beautiful.” LeShaniqua says.

“Thank you.” The boy says. “Can I sit down now?”

“Sure, but what’s your name?” LeShaniqua asked.

“Alejandro.” The boy answers. “I wish to be on the show next season.”

LeShaniqua says, “I hope you are. You can sit down now.” Alejandro does such. LeShaniqua comes back to reality. “Anyway, it’s time to learn about our first guest.” LeShaniqua says as the TV screen turns back on showing an image of Owen.

An football announcer sounding voice says, “Owen was fat, nice, annoying, and positive, but that didn’t stop him from being useless, which lead to his elimination.”

LeShaniqua looks surprised, “That was a little short.” She says. “Oh well. Everyone welcome Owen!” The audience starts clapping and cheering as Owen comes out waving at everyone.

“Hi everyone!” Owen says as he sits down in the chair, which collapses under his weight. “Oops.” Owen mumbles sounding embarrassed.

“Oh crap!” LeShaniqua yells. “That chair was rented.”

Owen says, “Sorry.”

“I guess it’s fine.” LeShaniqua says as she stops Owen from getting up. “Sorry, but you’re going to have to sit in the collapsed chair.”

Owen says, “Fine,” and then he sits down on the rubble.

“So, first question,” LeShaniqua says, “What did you think when you were the first one eliminated?”

Owen thinks for a moment on this question. “I was thinking a lot of things,” Owen starts, “but I was mostly thinking about cheese.”

“Why cheese?” LeShaniqua asked.

“I like cheese.” Owen answers as he pulls cheese out of his pocket. He starts eating it.

“Umm, Owen,” LeShaniqua says, “you aren’t supposed to bring food to the studio.”

“Oh, sorry.” Owen says as he puts the cheese back in his pocket. “What’s the next question?”

LeShaniqua grabs something from her pocket and then she pulls out a list. She answers, “Do you miss Izzy?”

Owen looks sad, “Yes, very much. I watched what happened to her. It was so sad.” Tears start to form in Owen’s eyes.

LeShaniqua glances at her list and then at Owen. “How much do you currently weigh?” She asked.

Owen thinks for a moment and then answers, “Last time I checked I was 253 pounds.”

LeShaniqua asks, “How long ago was it when you checked?”

Owen thinks for another moment and then answers, “When I was eleven.” Everyone in the audience gasps.

LeShaniqua looks surprised as she asks, “Do you plan to try to lose weight?”

Owen has no hesitation as he answers, “Yes. I’ve tried ever since I was a kid. I think I might have bulimia, but I never bothered to find out.”

“Time for your final question.” LeShaniqua says. “How would you react if people voted for you to return to the game?”

Owen thinks for a long moment and then answers, “I would be ecstatic if I was chosen to return. I would try to be more useful and less annoying. I’ve had a problem of being too loud and it’s what makes me so unpopular sometimes, but sometimes I can be popular. Most of the guys liked me, but the girls were disgusted by my farting.”

“Thanks for that kind of lovely speech Owen,” LeShaniqua says, “but we need to move on. It’s time to meet Owen’s brother, Johnny!” A boy shows up on the screen. Only his face is showing. He has blond hair and is obviously underweight. Owen looks surprised to see his brother.

“Hello LeShaniqua.” Johnny says politely. “Hello Owen.”

“Hi Johnny.” Owen says.

LeShaniqua says, “So Johnny. I read that you and your brother don’t see eye-to-eye. While you’re skinny, he’s fat. While he’s fun, you’re boring.”

Johnny and Owen look hurt by her comments. “Hey, that’s not nice.” Owen and Johnny say in unison.

“I’m not paid to be nice.” LeShaniqua says. “Anywho, I have a question for Johnny. Why are you so ashamed of your brother?”

Owen looks saddened when he’s reminded of this. Johnny answers, “Well, it all started when we were younger. He would be so gross by doing things such as farting and running around the street naked.” Owen interrupted Johnny.

“It was a very hot day.” He says.

Johnny continues, “We were just always complete opposites. He’s the yang and I’m the yin.”

“Would you ever consider to try to get closer to your brother?” LeShaniqua asked.

Johnny thinks for a second. “I guess I would try, but I’ve been trying to do that my whole life. It just doesn’t work out.” He explains.

“Well we loved having you as a video guest Johnny,” LeShaniqua begins, “but we’ve got to carry on with the show.” Suddenly the TV screen turns to static. “It’s time to see Owen’s never-before seen confessional. This is on Day 1.”

The TV screen reveals Owen in confessional. He says, “I’ve got a secret that I’ve never told anyone else. You wanna hear?” Owen shakes the camera in a nodding motion. “Okay. Here it is.” Owen farts and laughs.

Some ewws are heard from the audience. Owen looks embarrassed. “Yeah, I’m trying to work on my grossness.” Owen says.

LeShaniqua says, “Well it’s been fun talking to you Owen, but now I need to move on to our second guest.”