User blog comment:LightningandDakotaFan6/Total drama Sweden!/@comment-5518362-20120403073300/@comment-1874924-20120403171218

The shortest competition story ever to be Featured (which is presumably what you mean by "voted one of the best stories on the wiki"), to the best of my knowledge, is Total Drama Isle in November 2009. It had about 17,000 words in 24 chapters, for an average of about 700 words per chapter, and it's most definitely not "only summaries". There were also far fewer stories to choose from then than there are now. By the time I joined the wiki, most of the better competition stories were in the range of 40-70K words when finished, although stories of 100K+ words are becoming more common as the veteran writers mature and their skills improve.

If you want your stories to get noticed in a positive way, then you need more than what you've put in so far. While there's no rule against such short chapters as you have, I don't think something like 300-400 words per chapter is too much to ask when you're dealing with so many characters.

One more thing: Don't take criticism so personally. We're trying to help you improve.