User blog comment:Bridgette dj10/AJ's Judging for Week 1/@comment-995188-20120721041201/@comment-2185447-20120721041520

Yeah, but it seemed as if the other stories had more "oomf" put in to them. I know size shouldn't be a deciding factor, but this was shorter than the others, had less depth, and wasn't as "hard-hitting." The TD related wasn't what brought it down, that was just a point. I still enjoyed the plot a lot, good job Reddy :), just not as much as some of the other stories!

And alright :3 @Webly, I will specify next time