User blog:Comicstrip2000/Bryan; Total Drama Super Powered Upcoming Story (Possibly, plz read)

Well ever since Sprink wrote his new TDSP chapter I've been compelled to write a story about Bryan and his life after the competition and explore Bryans evil side, family issues and his school (at the start of the story any way) So here is the first chapter I wrote (WARNING: I AM NOT A VERY GOOD WRITER, but the story is kinda boring at the start I have alot planned) So tell me if you think I should continue it...or not xD

I stared down the road and scanned the old run down house that stood before me. I looked out the window and there I saw her staring lovingly at me through the window, she had no idea what I had done.....what I had become.

“Hello, darling” yells Grandma

“Hey, grandma” says Bryan unenthusiastically

“Come here and give me a hug”

At first I acted like nothing had happened, I smiled as she sat me down and told me everything that had happened while I was gone, I smiled when she followed me to my room, but when the door shut I couldn’t pretend anymore, I cried for hours on end just thinking about her.....thinking about the sleaze that was with her.

Grandma barges in “What's wrong darling?”

I quickly wipes away the tears “Nothing Grandma”

“Okay..... well Cheryl is coming over for dinner in an hour so get ready and get out of that costume for now”

I got ready for dinner immediately to take my mind off everything that had happened. While in the shower I thought about what was going to happen at dinner, I knew it would happen it does every time Cheryl comes over.

There’s a knock at the door and Grandma opens the door.

“Hello Jane” shouts Cheryl

“Hello Cheryl” shouts Jane as she hugs Cheryl

Cheryl hangs up her coat and sits down around the dinner table “Oh it’s so good to see you”

“I know, it feels like forever”

I began getting dressed and heard them talking and cackling at the top of their lungs, I heard Cheryl comment on the show and how awful I had been doing on it, Grandma ofcourse agreed like the little follower she is. I entered the kitchen and Cheryl gave me a glare. I sat and glared back.

“Just plating dinner, now” Jane told Cheryl

“Oh it looks yummy doesn’t it Bryan”

“Yeah sure” I said while rolling his eyes.

Grandma frantically runs around the table and gives everyone their dinner.

“And dinner is served” says Cheryl while shoving her mouth full of carrots.

I look is disgust as Cheryl scoughs down dinner in about a minute.

“mmm, that was delicious” says Cheryl

“Im surprised you actually got to taste any eating so quickly” I say smugly.

“Don’t speak to Cheryl like that please Bryan” says Grandma

“Don’t worry Jane, im used to it, the sarcastic little asshole never liked me” said Cheryl while glaring back at me

“Well no, because you’re a drunk, psycho alcoholic who never knows when to stop talking” I yelled across the table

Grandma looks at me in embarrassment, “Go to your room NOW!”

“My pleasure”

I walk slowly back to my room trying not to cry, as I walk back I hear Cheryl talking to Grandma

“Ugh, I don’t know why you keep him in your house that little smart ass”

“I know, but he has nowhere else to go”

“Who cares, if he’s going to talk like that then let him rot in hell for all I care”

I slam the door and burst into tears, I don’t care what Cheryl says but I’ve never understood why Grandma always just goes along with what Cheryl says and when she leaves she as sweet as ever to me.

I wake up the next morning with Grandma asleep, I realise it’s Monday morning and I have school. I quickly get dressed and leave the house.

“Crap what’s the time” I ask myself while running down my street”

I look down at my watch and it’s 11:00am

“Oh Crap” I begin to run faster and I finally reach my school

I enter at the school gate and realise it’s lunch. Everyone stares at me as I enter with my bag, I run up to my locker and see a million flyers with the river incident up on my locked saying “Welcome back, loser” I rip them down from my locker, angry as hell. Lockers all down the hall begin bursting open and papers fly into the air and fall slowly back down to the ground.

I look wide eyed at the locker door...every single one open. Little did I know that was just the beginning.

So yeah thats it^^ I hope you liked it, as I said above please tell me if you think I should continue oh and if yes, I want a possible title for this story!...best one win! BTW this is more of a sample, cause as I said nothing really interesting happened and Im going to make it alot longer and alot more eventful, lol. Advice Needed.

Edit:Please Look at the Total Drama Super Powered talk page for Evil Bryan Picture, thanx.