User blog comment:Mroddy/Reading List/@comment-3483396-20150708233314/@comment-3483396-20150708233833

I used to believe my story had some credit. It kickstarted the idea of dividing lengthy chapters into three parts each (which is nice, because my chapters were pretty long), and the spelling and grammer was fluid. The stories were pretty exciting and insightful as well. The only issue is, after the review I receined in LNTAT, I may need to start a new big massive edit for show-not-tell, he-said-she-said and more character emotion. But at the very least I do think the character intros on this page, despite being lengthy, were better than the intros for LNTAT. And there are a strong amount of character dynamics to choose from and enjoy. Episode 10 is currently in development, but the first nine chapters have stories to tell.