User blog comment:Bocaj910/Bocaj's Halloween Blog: A Furthur Look Into His Future Works, Including A Tentative Thanksgiving Special/@comment-1874924-20101101050827

So far, so good. I like the way you aren't just blowing through the introductions like so many competition stories do. (By the bye, will you be using separate character pages?) As I noted in the latest previews for my own story, I'm also spending a fair amount of time on the intros.