User blog comment:Kenzen11/I NEED TIPS ON WRITING/@comment-1418526-20091128033653

Well, I'm guessing that the reason you weren't in TDA3 is this: "Kenzen11- I am going to start with the positives. Katie and Sadie hosting was a good idea and I liked having DJ's mom come out. Now, the negatives, and there are a lot. Your grammar is, PLEASE NO OFFENSE, horrible. Your sentences run into each other. You don't use capitalization correctly. You don't use punctuation at all. Your spelling is poor too. You used script form when asked not to (in parts). STORIES NEED GOOD GRAMMAR TO MAKE THEM WORK!!! Lastly, I saw little effort in this story. I think you are out. I am sorry this was very mean, but honesty is the best policy. I can't sugar it up and say this was better than everyone else's, because it wasn't. I can't sugar it up and say it was just OK. If you want to learn to be a good writer, I need to give constructive criticism, which tends to be harsh. Bottom 8" Yes, I did copy paste that whole thing. I think that Nalyd might have been a bit harsh, but I agree. Sentance structure is very important, but on this wiki, script format or not is ok.