User blog comment:DJ Spenstar/An apology, and a little something I just picked up on./@comment-1153194-20091018171053

I can't decide which answer to choose. As long as you feel that you can take time to change the story, I'm sure it could be better (like everything). I think the story is good as is, though. That's why I can't make a decision in the poll. All I can say is... Do what you want to do.