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Hey Dekneese! I saw you posted your first chapter and I remember reading the cast list and being excited to read it. So I went ahead and read the first chapter! I thought I'd leave a comment, so I hope it's okay I went ahead and made a Chat here on the Talk Page. If you want it changed, just let me know!

Honestly, I think Chris literally says that every season xD

I do have to say I’m excited about the two recurring intern characters. Recurring interns tend to be some of my favorite characters, and these two seem like they have some kind of history together. I also can see the network only giving Chris two interns; with how many they go through it was probably to spare expenses and encourage him not to waste them.

I like the idea of dividing the cast by their popularity. It really ties into how in the first season the characters were stereotypes.

Hmm...I hate to judge right away, but I get the feeling that Bree maybe some kind of antagonist or not as nice as she seems. I got the feeling she was trying to weed out potential alliance members. Or something else…

I also like you acknowledged they were all on the same boat. I never actually thought about how crazy it was having all these boats deliver everyone was till I read another fic and it pointed it out.

You can never have enough dumb blondes! Lindsay is proof of that (and a total fan fave <3).

I can’t remember Midsummers Night’s Dream that well, though I definitely remember reading it. I’ll take Peter’s word on it, he seems to know what he’s talking about.

Jesse is too innocent. Although I don’t know what to make of Bree just yet either Lyla (also, she has a great name for a character who is the songwriter xD).

I mean, Digit has a fair point about TD doing twins, but this is just after PI, so we haven’t had male twins! (Plus there’s just so much easy drama in having twins Digit, trust me…)

Okay, can I ship Ramona and Bree? Cause I kinda do :3 (At least friendship them).

I admit I usually don’t find Jokester characters very funny, but I do like Dominic. Him pretending to be Wayne was clever.

Lol, Violet is not even pretending to play nice. Hopefully that doesn’t backfire cause I like her mischief! I also like the joke about journalists at Casey’s expense (that it comes from Brittney, even if I suspect she didn’t intend it as a dig, makes it twice as hilarious).

Woah! My computer’s dictionary didn’t even recognize the word contronym so I had to google it. That’s how big a word that was...which makes Britney very suspicious…

Having a handicapped contestant is interesting. I’ve only seen it once before in a fic along time ago, that’s no longer here. I do wonder if it’ll hurt Quinn in competing or make her a target to be eliminated. Like I said, I’m interested to see how it plays off.

xD Lyla and Peter have a good point. I enjoy sassy casts to their hosts.

Hmm...Chris has a strange call and Chef is nowhere to be seen? Me thinks something is off…

Nice to get know the cast a little bit more as we walk over there. Garrett seems like a nice guy; I have a weak spot for shy people in TD fanfics. Quinn seems kind of vague...curious what she’s thinking or planning.

Brittney is hilarious. I died when she didn’t reply with what her hobbies were.

I didn’t get the vibe Will was interested at first, but he sure seems so now. I think I may have been wrong about Bree, Natalia maybe more antagonistic. She certainly has the name of a femme fatale.

Hmm...that’s oddly specific about the cast files in there cabin...I have a feeling we’ll see that again…

Jesse, you really shouldn’t have said that xD So Lyla and Jesse are already crushing on each other. Good, I was already shipping them. (Fair warning, I ship a lot).

The Confused Freaks? Geez, Chris is not even subtle about what he thinks of them. I guess that’s not new. Naturally, I feel for the underdog team. They seem like a funny, off-beat group. Honestly a lot of characters with similar stereotypes were early outs, so I’m glad to see a lot of them on the same team.

Natalia wastes no time in asserting her plans and roles. I guess Queen Bee’s aren’t known for their subtly. Most of them see to not be putting up that much of a fight to her leading, but that makes sense. Their popular people; they don’t want to go against the status quo. They follow.

“Not anymore?” Veronica has a backstory…

xDDDD Brittney is killing me! Like girl, what’s up? Are you pretending to be dumb? Cause it kind seems that why...but you kind of seem a little naturally dumb too xD Ramona’s reaction was also great!

The first challenge involves lots of papers? That’s curious. I’m not sure what to predict it to be…

A two part special! Those are the best <3 Digit and Brady really seem to not know anything going on. Normally that would make sense for an intern, but they clearly have a bigger role helping out.

A cliffhanger? Aww D: I want to know what’s going on too!

Overall, this was a great first chapter! I feel like a got a good feel for a majority of the cast. I usually struggle with that with big casts. The pace felt good; it never felt slow. And it was very funny! There were some interesting dynamics already on display, especially with Digit and Brady. Those two were hilarious xD I laughed a lot throughout this chapter.

Chris was written very in-character for canon too. We didn’t see as much of Chef, but he seemed pretty in character too. And most of all, you did a great job hooking me in. The running plot thread of the mystery Chris is hiding really drew me and the suspense of it is killing me! I have a couple theories of what, but I’m just not sure…

I can’t wait to read more!  Now to find out who this monster really is...*gasp* Old man Rhonda!  07:35, January 3, 2018 (UTC)