User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/Hey guys, guess what!?/@comment-1153194-20090925003404

Blonde Date is shorter if you want to do that one, although I didn't put it on the list for reviews. Not sure what else I could suggest, as TD:BI is super long (as it's a whole story [complete, now, yay!]), and I wouldn't suggest someone else's story without their permission.