User blog comment:Fadingsilverstar16/Everyone!!/@comment-2186558-20110817210353

Congrats on having your story made fun of...? xD Joking, I know why you're happy about it, and congrats. That begs me to ask a question though: Have you just been stalking the wiki without doing anything? xD Cause I don't know how you'd get his message about the parody if you weren't. =P

And I'd love to see the original stuff (although I know you can't post them), being a huge LAL fan. =P Which brings me to say, I think that Chap. 18 should be the final chapter. Not only is the story already novel length (although most novels are about 80 K instead of your 40 K, it's still enough to be a novel), but the last line of the chapter is a good way to end the story. I mean, look me dead in the eye, and tell me that:

''And when I really thought about it, I realized that after everything, being alive was really all we could ask for. ''

isn't a good way to end a story. <-< =P And this isn't just me skipping to the end of the fic by the way, I'm a big fan of LAL, it's my favorite non-comp on wiki. xD