Talk:Total Drama Teens

Episode 1-? Discussion
Alright, you've got a pretty good story going on here, and I don't think the chapters finished, but, allow me to review it anyway. You've get a pretty solid cast, and if I had to pick a favourite so far, I'd definitely chose Lluvy. I love those types of characters, and her name! It's unique! I really do like what you've got so far, but here's a bit of constructive criticism. The story is in a giant wall, which makes it harder to read, and turns off viewers. Space it out, use paragraphs, and a new line for when someone different talks! ^^ It could use a bit more description, and longer dialogue! Keep up the good writing! I'll look forward to more!  I'd do anything for you guys... Except for running, jogging or climbing stairs. 04:39, October 13, 2013 (UTC)