I absolutely loved this! You portrayed me perfectly! Well, in the cheerful part, that is. This is perhaps your best work yet! Goldenshane 19:04, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
This sure was awesome, Sunshine! And I'm the random child that was nearly traumatized by a crazy, heartless old maniac that forced me to buy a goose for a poor man? Awesome! Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 20:42, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
This is delightful, Sunshine. You really ought to write complete stories more often. I do have a couple of technical quibbles, though. First, you generally altered (or simply replaced) the original character names to incorporate the wiki users or TWE characters that are filling those roles, but you neglected to do this with Fan/Gigi. Thus Fan should have been something like Fangi or Fangigi. (The former is pretty close to "fangirl", which may or may not be a bad thing in the context in which she appears.) The other detail is that you tend to use "disinterested" when you presumably mean "uninterested". These words are not synonyms. "Uninterested" means "bored", "not paying attention", and so on, whereas "disinterested" means "impartial". Gideoncrawle I have a song to sing, O! Sing me your song, O! A wandering minstrel, I-- 00:14, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks so much, everyone! :D My best work yet, Shane? I never thought of it that way, but I suppose it could qualify as my best work posted here (as I have written one other fanfiction in particular that I currently consider my best, but I currently have no plans to post it here or elsewhere). I'm glad you liked it so much! ^^ Sorry about your non-inclusion, Radi; I was using the current Total Wikia Elementary cast on this particular occasion. I'm glad you liked your part, TBTDIF. XD Initially I considered casting Greg as Ignorance, but I figured Zak's bitter character fit the part more, and that it would be fun having the sarcastic Greg play the unnamed traumatized child. XDD Many thanks for your critiques, Gideon. I left Fan unchanged partially due to difficulty coming up with a natural combination and partially due to my affinity for the name, whereas the "un/dis" error was simply because I never knew that little tidbit. (I always thought "disinterested" was just a smarter-sounding way of saying "uninterested" XD). I'm so glad you all enjoyed the story, guys! :DD --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 23:11, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
GREAT job here, Sunny. This is a classic! And sometimes, I do feel a little Crachit-y.
Even though it's too late to say this, nice work!
Enjoy! Barbie... eat your heart out.♥ 16:27, February 19, 2011 (UTC)