Noah's awesome!!  This is a nice story.  I don't believe that Heather would actaully change, but she might be able to talk with Noah and DJ afterwards.  :)  After all, Heather gave up her friendship with Gilliam permanantly.  Jay JLOMYou've got to be sure of yourself before you can ever win a prize. -Author Unknown 01:24, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah I kinda left the ending open for interpretation.  This story was just a spur of the moment type thing that ended up taking about 4 hours to write but was totally worth it in every way.  Thanks for reading Jay :) Space was here and he left something real special for ya! 02:22, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I liked the story, but I once wrote a spur-of-the-moment story once. It received its share of criticism. Let's hope Gideon isn't too cruel on you. I've always loved JER. (Talk | Blogs | Contributions) 03:59, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I know this story is imperfect and I'm happy to hear any criticisms anyone has about it, no matter how "cruel" they are.  I'm glad you liked it though JE :D Space was here and he left something real special for ya! 21:24, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

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