Winner Guessing Contest
Eh?
Adonis - Space was here some time ago and he wrote stuff. 15:44, July 9, 2013 (UTC)
Brian -
CeCe - I'm gonna stay at home by myself and masterbaking cake 02:09, July 9, 2013 (UTC)
Daniel - But in that moment, I swear, we were infinite. 01:35, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
Diamond - The road to success is always under construction 14:58, July 9, 2013 (UTC)
Diana -ZacAttack Rawr 01:36, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
Jaime -
Jake -
James -I Cannot Believe My Eyes... 02:03, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
Mary - Who? If you have time to think of a beautiful end, then live beautifully until the end." 19:48, July 13, 2013 (UTC)
Melody - Can't block me and all of that jazz, cause y'all don't want none of this Ozamataaaaaz. 01:33, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
Mikayla - Anne Maria: I was on Canada's Next Top Model! 18:35, July 13, 2013 (UTC)
Sergeant McKee -
Trish - CK11 Hrey! ^_^ 02:03, September 8, 2013 (UTC)`
Victor - Girls are not meant to fight dirty, never look a day past thirty... 01:39, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
Wista - It was a plane ride from LAX to O'Hare And what happened next was a series of unfortnate events 06:28, November 18, 2013 (UTC)
Discussion (Feedback Wanted!)
I liked the map thing. I'm gonna stay at home by myself and masterbaking cake 04:32, July 14, 2013 (UTC)
Really liked this episode. :P The end surprised me. xD Oh, CeCe the mastermind. I can see a lot of potential on her, and I think the "dumb girl who's actually evil" idea is original, so looking foward to see her antagonism. :P I love Diana and her constant moodswings. <3 xD WTF was up with Chris at the reward challenge? Was he high? Oh, Daniel's freaking out... is he gonna burn the shelter down? ;\ Mikayla after the challenge. <3 And I loved the trigger word line. :P Oh, Trish is gonna be nicer? Looking foward for this. Anyway, I died at the end. The OTTN1 Mary is something I never expected. xD If you have time to think of a beautiful end, then live beautifully until the end." 06:12, November 18, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for that helpful feedback, Bruno! You're so OTTP. Jaxswim knows exactly what he wants and who he wants to be. 22:31, December 28, 2013 (UTC)
Just read chapter three. It's great! :D That Wista/Daniel moment in the beggining was cute. I sense a relationship. Or maybe just a friendship. :P James is fun. I wonder if his alliance is gonna work, or his antics will cause his fall. Trish trying to be nicer is hilarious. xD Can't wait to see how much is takes until she rages and goes OTTN mode. lol I love CeCe, as I said, the whole thing about her pretending to be dumb but being ruthless and cunning is pretty interesting. The challenge was really fun. I kinda felt really bad for Melody, but later I think she overreacted. I dunno. I liked her but she wasn't my favorites, so her elimination wasn't that sad to me. :P Valar Morghulis - Valar Dohaeris 02:57, June 29, 2014 (UTC)
TrishXBrian! <3 I ship them. :P Oh, CeCe is really a HBIC... except no one else knows it. lol People know Wista is an alien? I thought it was a secret or something, I might have missed something. xD Aw, poor Daniel. I like what you are doing with him and his pyromania. I kinda died at Jamie's alphabet strategy. xD "Who Killed Lividmanda?" reference. <3333 Good job at the whole bird thing, it worked both for the challenge and for plot stuff too. And the TDRI reference. :P I felt bad for Daniel. At least he found Wista. <3 Surprised James is gone. After his confessional about splitting up Wista and Daniel, I expected Daniel to go. Then I expected Victor to go and expose the alliance's plan. :P Glad James left though, he was kinda douchey. xD Valar Morghulis - Valar Dohaeris 04:07, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Zactastic Corner
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So I read the first chapter! I am thinking you misnamed this season though and that bothers me A LOT! I did not sign up to read a Survivor fic, I really, really can't stand them. They are just irkful, but I will try my best to stick it out.
The cast is really, really interesting! I know more of the characters than I normally would! Well, I know the ~personalities~ I don't really know who is who, just yet! But I will evernutally I bet! But as it stans, my fav--fav -fav is Wista! I am a massive sucker for characters like her.They're positive outlook and their wide open eyes to world is great! I am also a massive fan of how characters liek them manage to get onn everyone's nerves! So fingers crossed! Close runner ups are Agent Rond? And Vic my Vamper <3 These three along with....
Cece! Who I loved before her ~reveal~ and now Im not sure about how I feel about are the most memorable characters, and thus the ones I like the most as of now. But things can change... they always so. But I am looing forward to seeing Cece develope now, and if anyone catches on...
OMG I FORGOT ABOUT DIAMOND. She seems like she could be an early out, or an amazing character! I love her outlook on the game, and her thought process! Also Adodis? Basically ignoring her 247 is great too!
The challenge was meh, it seemed like it was just there and I don't even think any one actually participated in it? Oh well. I look forward to reading more :) ZacAttack Rawr 01:59, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
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Merp. What just happened exactly? I am really, really dead. tbh. (That is how you youngsters speak, yes?) Mary just kind of exploded... Which I think was amazing, especially since I don't think any one really knew she existed, like at all... The bad thing is that she may have ruined Diana's chances at winning this thing </3 R.I.P.
The challenge was really good! I think that the entire thing was amazing and helped Total Dramaify your story, but more on that later >_>. I liked that the F team tried to throw the challenge, and the way that it went down was great! I'm really enjoying the team dynamics on that team, in particular. The fact that everyone basically agreed to throw the challenge,, and did so in such a painfully obvious way, and James still didn't realize? Yeah I think he might need a new career.
...Jake? I'm not really sure what is up with this grumpy pants. But I am hoping that he leaves next. Him and Melody I think are the only two who don't really ~fit~ so they don't have much to offer their team.. SO I was actually pretty stoked when he left the first time, and then he came back- :(.
Wista and Daniel. This is now my OTP for your story. Sorry not sorry at all. They both are really strong characters in my eyes! They aren't be forced into an undersog spot. They just kind of are. I worry for them both. Will Wista be able to survive so far away from home.... Wherever home is. And will Daniel be able to not become a crazed pyromaniac? I am worried for my OTP, but I have faith they will be able to manage this tugh competition together!
And now for the Total Drama blurb. There are a number of things that make this story feel ~Survivor~esque. Tree mail, the names of the teams (then again TDPI), the seperate beaches, collecting water etc. The setup of the story is very survivor like. But I think it is, without a doubt a Total Drama Fiction. The humour, the challenges, the host, and the contestants are all very ~TD~ like. And they are in the in what really make a difference, your setting just has more of a Survivor feel than most would... But I think it gives you more room to parody the genre.
I can't wait to read more <3 ! ZacAttack Rawr 19:56, July 29, 2014 (UTC)