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EEEEEEE! First comment! - Copper5

Congrats. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:02, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Will you let people decide some players? Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 00:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Only 12 people O_O--Kenzen Eleven! 00:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I've already picked the twelve. Yes, kenzen, only 12 returning contestants. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:23, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

AWESOME!!! I hope Audrey is in this!!!! And is the prize for the TDAS final three guessing contest like you get to see 11 (i think tht it's 11) of these contestants????? Cards777^{LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶} 00:34, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure Audrey would be the twelfth. XD I look forward to this. I may write a blog about it... Sprinklemist^{Cyan is the new green.} 00:36, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The winner of the final three guessing (somebody is already right XD) will get to see the 12 Losers! Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:41, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I can't wait for this!!! (I already posted like AWESOME!! but i don't care!) Cards777^{LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶} 00:44, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure to read this! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I already did :) Cards777^{LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶} 00:48, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Whoot! Season five! I take it this season it's contestants who did poorly in the other seasons. Oweguy is somewhere on Plastic Beach - Or not Or maybe I am 21:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't even see this page was created!? I'm slow! Anyway, I'm pumped! Jason Talk To Me! 04:27, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah Total Drama Losers!! I am psyched for this season! The return of Hank, Frasier and Elvis, what's good!! Oh yeah, and Audrey also.- The Anonymous User 14:51, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Jess? Interesting choice. She was a big fave of mine. 8D Sprinklemist^{Cyan is the new green.} 00:18, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Interesting cast! I think that I would like Audrey, Jess, Martha, or elvis to win. Sierra:^{But who needs friends when you have a CODY?!LOL} 00:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I worked hard picking this cast, no fails like Bruno in TDAS. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm also glad that Bozo is back. Bruno could have been awesome. XD Sprinklemist^{Cyan is the new green.} 00:53, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Bruno was fail. XD Also, I really wish I could do songs for this story... Ah well I guess. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:10, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

You could always the change the title to Total Drama Singing Losers. 8D Sprinklemist^{Cyan is the new green.} 01:13, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

IDK, they travel around the world, so it would be too much like TDWT. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:15, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well, um... Make it stationary. Sprinklemist^{Cyan is the new green.} 01:16, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I've got some great ideas with this one. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:18, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

kk. I look forward to it. :) Sprinklemist^{Cyan is the new green.} 01:21, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I always considered a Singing gerne in it but if i did that with my second story it would be to world toury with the fact they are traveling the world because world travel is awesome and i can chris it and do little research on locations XD--Kenzen Eleven! 01:22, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

LOL, thansk guys. XD Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:29, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I am pleasantly surprised at the cast of this one! I think I want to see Frasier or Elvis win, and some more development from Martha, Hank, Sally and Audrey. I look forward to the start of this story!- The Anonymous User 01:46, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like this cast...GO MARTHA! Goldenshane 02:23, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guys! I'm really hoping I can start this by September, but its looking impossible, I'll be gone from right now until Monday on vacation. Bye guys! Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really excited for this since Audreys in it! Turnertang 12:43, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm a bit disappointed that there's no Sam, Bulldog, and Fuega; however, I do love the inclusion of Bozo, Elvis, Hank, The Hobo, Rob, and Sally. --Now the party don't start 'til Koops logs in!

Im getting excited! - Copper5

Me too! :D Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 14:28, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Go Hobo, Ugly, Bozo, Jess, and Sally! - Copper5

Great first chapter.-user:lindsaysbiggestfan

Thanks! :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:04, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

LOL great chapter!!!!! Tdi ^{Hi I isn't Alejandro} 19:14, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reading Tdi! :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:18, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

So that's what the new cast was for! I like the idea of a twisted "fans vs. faves" theme, and this story so far is just that! I liked the first chapter, and Rob definitely got what he deserved for his failed strategy. I appreciate the effort, but he should leave the strategy to the smart ones. Keep up the good work!- The Anonymous User 23:11, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Great first chapter Nalyd. I would say Sarge is my favorite newbie.TotalDramaAddict^{I got one!!!}Wait... What was it 00:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Epic Nalyd. xD I loved the scene where everyone threw Fraiser out of the plane. I'm rooting for the Globetrotting fans, particularly Salvatore and Chicken. Keep up the good work! PS: Rob leaving wasfine, didn't like him too much.♚Prince Reddude the FIRST♚ ^{Slicing the enemy 'til the night falls short...} 00:49, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much for commenting guys! I wanted to do fans vs faves, TAU, but I already did a fave season, and a full season of 22 losers would be fail. So I took fans and losers. XD Thanks, TDAddict, I thought Sarge would be strongly disliked. :p Thanks for reading Reddy, and that was one of my fave scenes too. XD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:36, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Epic first chappy Nal! :D *le gasp! did MTDM finally comment on a NalydStory? :o xD.* --mtdm doz knot no hoe 2 spill 02:17, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

OMG, I think he just did! :o Thanks! :p --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:07, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

EEEEEEEEEE! It's up! Ill read it when I get home from school today then comment! - Copper5

XD, love the first chapter! Great idea including Maulik and those other characters! I want Ugly, Hobo, Bozo, Jess, Sally, Maulik, or Chicken to win! - Copper5

Thanks Copper! Glad you enjoyed it! Oh, and guess what guys! Rob wasn't originally going to go! *dramatic music* Who do you think it was? ;) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:26, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hank. We probably would have quit. - Copper5

Oh, and I can't confirm or deny, sorry. XD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:49, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm excited you posted the first chapter. I hope Audrey is as awkward as she was last time and Chicken and Maulik are pretty awesome people too! Turnertang 02:51, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry, there's plenty of Audrey coming up! Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:11, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Epic season. Epic episode. I'm rooting for Audrey, Chicken, Elka, Elvis, Frasier, James, Katheryn, Maulik, Rosalinda, Sally and Sarge. It's really on now. Just you wait! 05:59, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reading! :D I'm gonna work on chapter two today and hopefully get it posted tonight/tomorrow. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 14:42, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

I can't wait for my specialized summary of chapter 2. 8D Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 03:28, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

That was a really great chapter, Nalyd. I liked it, a lot!! I think Bozo is my favorite of the returning characters, although I do like Jess and Frasier (or however it's spelled), too. And of course, Audrey. For the newcomers, I like Salvatore, Maulik and Sarge. --Hey, it's Anonymos! ^{Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear!} 03:40, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Great chapter two! I'm hoping for Audrey, Sally, Rosalinda, and Elvis. Tdi ^{Hi I isn't Alejandro} 05:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, you guys. I'm glad you liked it. :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:40, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Epic chappy Nalyd. 8D Was the chllenge a parody of that Survivor one... with the pirate shapes? xD. I loved Bozo's parody of Dynamite. 8P Gooooo Bozo! :D --mtdm doz knot no hoe 2 spill 13:15, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. This chapter was good. I really thought that Salvator would go since many people dissed him in the beginning. I liked the elimination with using the puppets. That's a really unique idea. James gone this early? I definetly didn't see that coming. Good stuff Nalyd! Fann Y. Fiction the 2010th ☆ Legendary Schadenfreude! UNISON BUDDIES EVERYWHERE!!! 13:31, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guys! No, MTDM, I thought this up on my own. XD Thanks Fanny, it was partially inspired by the puppets in "This is How We Will End It." James' elimination, like Rob's, was a last minute idea. I think if I do eliminations like that, they'll be more surprising. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 14:48, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

You were right Nalyd. This chapter was awesome! --DJ Spenstar! 15:56, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Spenny! Glad you liked it. XD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 18:01, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Salvatore! Go, yah! Salvatore is fooling theLosers like they were born yesterday. Seriously, the losers need to step it up, but they didn't do so good in their original seasons, and they voted out their highest ranking members.... Do they have brains? D: Challenge was awesome. I seriously want Bozo to make the merge, dude. Bozo and Salvatore FTW! ☃Worker Elf Reddy☃ ^{Making presents For all!} 18:11, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you liked it Reddy! I agree, the Losers aren't being too impressive yet. XD Maybe they'll get it together soon. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 18:19, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes! Jess stayed! She's one of my favorites and good ridance to James who tried to eliminate her! - Copper5

The Dynamite part killed me. Why? I had to do a parody for spanish congregations. My group did Dynamite XD Tdi ^{Hi I isn't Alejandro} 20:01, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you liked it Copper, I know you've been waiting. XD The Dynamite part was a last minute idea, I didn't think anybody would get it. XD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for there to be a fantasy league of this on the camps wiki? That'd be cool! Fann Y. Fiction the 2010th ☆ Legendary Schadenfreude! UNISON BUDDIES EVERYWHERE!!! 13:31, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'll start one when we're down to 20 people, make sure I remember. XD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:44, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I like these new characters especially Maulik but bozo was the best this chapter because of her song! Turnertang 02:23, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D I think the third chapter will be even better. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 18:32, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

“Audrey exposed you,” Elvis said. -- *prints quote out, hangs on bedroom wall*   Kgman04    talk    contribs  

Glad you liked it, KG. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:32, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

This has been my favorite chapter so far! I liked Audrey being all strategic. I also think there will be an alliance war between Elvis's and Jess's alliances. - Copper5

Glad you liked it, Copper! :D This was another favorite of mine. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:39, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

I am beginning to get annoyed with the Globetrotting Fans. Their winning streak is causing more and more Losers to be eliminated, and they are the reasons that I really want to read this story. I don't have a problem with the new characters for what they are, but I don't like the whole Fans vs. Faves thing; it's just a personal preference thing, no offense to you and your writing. I will continue to read this, but I love the Losers, and want them to turn it around.- The Anonymous User 22:01, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, man, I knew some people wouldn't be happy about it. I had to eliminate Losers first so that the new characters could get screentime. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:05, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is the second Nalyd story I've read, the first one being Amazon, and I already love it. I do agree about the Fans' winning streak, and I sort of wanted Sally to get far, since she was first voted out in World, but who cares? It's a great story. XD Gotta get pants! Go get your pants! Button, fly! 22:19, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man! I wanted her to go far too, but I needed a female Loser, and I have plans for all the others. :p --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:23, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

A new chapter should be up by the 29th. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 13:36, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. I'm begining to really like Sarge! :D Him and Bozo ftw! ☃Worker Elf Reddy☃ ^{Making presents For all!} 13:38, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

You're not supposed to like Sarge, he's an antagonist! xD Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 14:03, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice chapter! :D While I'd rather have some of the fans eliminated, I understand why they keep on winning Tdi ^{Hi I isn't Alejandro} 02:01, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Tdi! I appreciate it. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 14:12, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

If I get a snowday tomorrow or Friday I'll write some. And if anyone has a challenge idea I'd appreciate it! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:26, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

How about making gingerbread, dressing chickens, or snowboarding on mud? XD I don't know, totally random. Gotta get pants! Go get your pants! Button, fly! 20:29, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well that's certainly original. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:39, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know. XD I just sort of thought of it, I don't really know how. It's mostly a joke, but if you want to use them, go ahead. XD Gotta get pants! Go get your pants! Button, fly! 20:42, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ha, thanks anyway. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:58, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe they can fish and make dinner for Nalyd! IDK just throwing ideas out :P Tdi ^{Hi I isn't Alejandro} 03:24, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should have them do a fighting challenge! those are always fun! - Copper5

Ha, I like it Tdi. xD I'd love a fighting challenge, Copper, any ideas for a location? --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:30, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

maybe they should have a swordfish sword fight like cody and alejandro had in TDWT, since it's in the water.-user:lindsaysbiggestfan

Im not sure. L.A. maybe? Somewhere violent. - Copper5

Ha, the Cody vs. Alejandro fight was epic, maybe I'll do something like that, thanks for the idea! Probably not LA, Copper, they just left California. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:23, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

China? It could be kung-fu style, I guess...... Tdi ^{Hi I isn't Alejandro} 04:02, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hm... Maybe! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

China! Maybe they should have to find the evil Tobi there. XD. And instead of any regular game of hide-n-seek, Tobi has aligned the place with bombs, landmines,etc. That would be awesome! -user:lindsaysbiggestfan

I have to say, the first five chapters were great, I'm surely looking forward to the other three chapters in stored. TDAR ^{is Excellent! ♥} 13:34, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ha, a hide-and-seek game in China would be epic. ROCKS, I think you mean first three chapters, unless I wrote some chapters I didn't know about. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 16:02, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

XD love this story! Can't wait to see what your cooking up >:) I love the globetrotting fans but thats cause I don't know the losing losers well. I love Gretal! ID why but I do. I also love BOZO! I was wondering if you could update the globetrotting fans bios with pics of them. I don't have many challnge ideas but they are in calforina so they could do some type of fame based challnge. Or they could go to washington D.C and do some political challnge or reanact a war. Doing either one will result in traveling highways I think. They could try and hitch a ride and meet a contesant from another version. The globetrotting fans could meet Juilo and we could find out about Deb and Julio's breakup! OOO please do that! If you want to change contientants you could have contestants ride boats from Calofrina to somewhere. You could do the same at Washington cause its at the coast. Anyway Im a huge fan of the story and can't wait for more! P.S. Iv'e been singing Bozo's song for days :) - Rhonda the stalker fan

WOW! Thanks for commenting! :D I'm having a super secret artist make the character pics, it turns out I don't have the time or ability. xD Thanks for reading, I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much. :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:12, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the new chapter. :) I was sad about Rosalinda leaving. She never got to prove she was a hypnotist. :( But I can't wait to see the drama unfold. - Rhonda the stalker fan!

Thanks! Yeah, I had trouble coming up for a plot for her, so the failed hypnotist kinda worked out. xD Oh, trust me, next chapter will be the most explosively dramatic yet. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:59, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

There might be a new chapter this week too. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:37, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. For some strange reason I predict that their will be a huge conflict between Jess and Martha. Maybe im like Elka! XD. - Copper5

Thanks for reading Copper! Maybe you are, haha! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 23:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I have a question about Rosalinda. In the rough draft of the characters was she the girl in the rainbow skirt? - Copper5

It's about time the Losers won a challenge! The Fans were getting on my nerves, and still are a bit. I like your other casts better than them for some reason, especially the TDP and TDAm ones. Therefore, I'm not too busted up about Rosalinda leaving, though I would like Maulik or Chicken to hit the road soon as well. They both seem pretty useless.- The Anonymous User 23:18, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Dont diss meh Chicken! XD - Copper5

No, Rosalinda was not one of the original characters. Thanks for reading, TAU. Some of the Fans, like Rosalinda, are just there to be voted off early. Once we get closer to the merge only the Fans with big parts will remain. Do you not like all the Fans, TAU, or just Chicken and Maulik? --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 23:20, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I thought Malik should've fought because he said he was going to prove to everyone he was tough. He's my favorite character. He's awesomeness! Turnertang 00:37, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Turnertang! Maybe he'll get a chance next time. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:38, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Guess what guys! Next chapter is a... double elimination. :O --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:16, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Liked the challenge, especially Bozo randomly speaking Japanese. XD I was sad about the eliminations, though. "The Hobo", I really wanted to get with Martha, and Elka was one of my faves. :( Team switch? Coolio! Can't wait :D Sarge and salvatore may seperate! :o Ⓡⓔⓓⓓⓤⓓⓔ--✎Talk to me✎--☮Peace, man☮ 16:19, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Sarge would let himself be separated from Salvatore. xD Thanks for reading, glad you liked the challenge. Bozo is definitely a favorite of mine. xD The Hobo might get her still. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 17:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think I know why you wanted ,me to read this chapter. XD I liked it, a lot. I was just remembering what it was like to read a Nalyd fic. XD I'm glad Elka is gone... and The Hobo, too, actually. Now I can read it, without being bothered. I think it's kind of cool that Elvis has amnesia. That's new in these stories, right? ALso... Why is Bozo randomly speaking Japanese? Did I miss something I should know? XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 17:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Glad you liked it! :D And now you can freely read my stories. xD Bozo speaking Japanese started this chapter, IDK why. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 17:55, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

(Gasp!) It was "Chicken" who eliminated Elka! Why did he do that? - Copper5

It will be revealed in the next chapter, Copper. Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:06, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great chapter, I loved the challenge ideas. My favorite thing was when Maulik said "Thank you don't coma again." I'm thinking it was based on Apu's catchphrase but I may be wrong. Anyways, great chapter Maulik and Chicken are my favorite. Turnertang 23:33, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was based on Apu's famous line! Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 23:35, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks everyone for the feedback, I appreciate it. :D (And wouldn't mind some more xD) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:38, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

YAY! I loved this chapter. Gretel's my favorite right now. That and "Chicken"... poor Chicken... Goldenshane 16:59, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think we all knew Chicken wasn't long for the game. xD Thanks for reading Shane. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 17:38, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't suppose anybody else read this?...--Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:29, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did, but I forgot to comment since it was late. XD I laughed at the broken Chicken, and I really want Martha and Elvis to hook-up (Unl;ess I missed something and they already have... O.o) I Wonder how Sarge is gonna react to facing Salvatore on opposing teams. XD Good chapter. :) Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 12:36, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, Martha just likes Elvis because Audrey said Elvis likes Martha even though it was actually The Hobo who liked her. I'm sure Sarge is furious. xD Thanks for reading!--Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 13:03, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I read the chapter, and it was pretty good. I am soooooooooooooooooooooo glad that Chicken was voted out. >_< I can't really think of much else to mention. Sorry... Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 14:16, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Sprink, kind of an uneventful chapter I'll admit. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 03:20, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I think I was the only person to like "Chicken". He was my favorite new person. I also loved Bozo talking to Frasier. - Copper5

Oh yeah. The part about 'it was like a bucket to me' was pretty funny. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 15:42, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guys! Bozo's definitely one of my favorites to write this season. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:50, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

The chapter was awesome, "Ze Plane! Ze Plane!" XD I liked the little moment with Martha and Elvis, and getting to know a little more about both of them. For a second, I actually thought Maulik was gonna be voted out instead of Gretel. TDAddict Well... He's better than nothing. 21:15, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading TDAddict! Glad I was able to trick you on the elimination. xD I usually don't do touchy moments like Elvis and Martha, but I felt it was necessary. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:17, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

So, guys, was I able to fix some of the problems with the story? --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:01, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yay new chapter! Yay Kathryn x Hank! Yay Cecil x "Ugly"! Yay Jess x Fraiser! Yay Elvis x Martha! YAY ROMANCE!!!! But aww... Gretel. I liked her but they all have to go sometime right? And she was getting a little minor. This chapter was really funny! I loved Maulik's line about IGadget and electric doo-dads. And this chapter was a shocker! I'm gonna guess the mystrey figure is a former contestant. In short Yay!Rhonda the stalker fan! 00:22, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading Rhonda! Glad you liked the romances that started this chapter. xD And who knows? The mystery person is a mystery! ;) Haha. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:43, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I never really got to know Gretel, so I didn't get so "emotional" when she was voted out. Anyway, I love Hankryn and Marvis. Oh, and also Ugcil. Most of all, I love Audatore, because I was the one who suggested an Audrey-Salvatore storyline. Taylor! She was homeschooled. Taio! He loves his autotunes. Miley! Her dad's a has-been. Triple H! He'll beat your face in. 00:58, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wow! I love the relationship names! xD Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:04, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I really liked this chapter, a lot. Nice work on it. I liked Cecil and Ugly the most. They were so sweet. <3 I'll miss Gretel, though I didn't remember her too well. XD She was amusing in this chapter. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 01:43, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Sprink! Cecil and Ugly were actually paired together in my mind recently. xD I was worried they wouldn't work, but I'm glad you liked it! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:46, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Is that shadowy figure at the end from The Matrix?-- Mygeto ^{likes to STEAL your edits} 03:30, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, nope, I've actually never seen the Matrix, so sorry. xD Good guess though, and thanks for reading! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 03:34, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do you guys have any suggestions for the next chapter? (Or the story in general :p) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:34, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great Chapter! I loved the growing relationships bewtween Ugly and Cecil, and Martha and Elvis. I found Gretel to shine this episode! Also Nalyd did you confuse the Gretel and Deb during the helicopter scene? Something didnt seem right when I read that part. - Copper5

They might have been switched. They sort of melt together into one character in my mind. xD Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 18:12, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the new chappy! Can't wait to read the next chappy! I liked Gretel, but she was sorta gettin' on my nerves! xD--I was born this way! 18:54, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading Jessica! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 18:56, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 8 is about half way done, so maybe I'll post that later this week! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 10:14, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Fun, fun, fun, fun! Friday, friday! XDDD I loved this chapter, and love that song. xDDDDD Aren't you a little too old to be playing in the ball pit? Yes. Yes I am. 21:30, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Glad you liked it. xD Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:38, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Great chapter Nalyd, I even rated it perfect! :D I love seeing all these relationships form, Maulik getting some good attention, but the question of who Gretel was with was never answered, and was barely mentioned. D:< I liked the Globetrotting Grizzlies finally winning, 'cause I like seeing the losing team overcome the odds and win. TDAddict Well... He's better than nothing. 22:42, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, thanks for reading TDAddict! The mystery with Gretel will be addressed soon, don't worry. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:52, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good chapter. I liked the challenge and Deb's elimination, I never really cared for her. When is her character image getting uploaded? - Copper5

Reddy's doing the pics so IDK. Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 23:50, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

"New rule. Anyone who sings 'Friday' will be immediately eliminated." XD I never really liked Deb, so I wasn't sad to see her go. XD at both plays and at "Hold my red rubber nose!" Can you parents my phone and tell them not to worry Santa? 03:12, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, I really needed to eliminate Deb but I was basically out of ideas. xD Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:04, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also, one more thing: Are Maulik's numerous names based on Apu from the Simpsons, and M. Night Shyamalan? xD Aren't you a little too old to be playing in the ball pit? Yes. Yes I am. 13:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and Raj from Big Bang Theory. xD Good eye! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 13:34, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks to all for reading, chapter nine should be out Saturday. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:19, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

I liked this chapter, twas one of the better ones, partly because it was funny! YAY BOZO! Goldenshane 17:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, Bozo is definitely one of my favorite characters. xD Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 10:20, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work on the chapter. I feel like the story is getting better, though I didn't read earlyh chapters. XD I have a question. Do they kiss in Bolllywood movies? I thought that was taboo in INdia, or whatever. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 14:51, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't know, I based this off a dance scene on a TV show and bits of an Indian movie I saw in an Indian restaurant once. xD Thanks for reading, Sprink! Glad you think it's getting better. :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 18:51, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter Eight was awesome, Renny! It was really funny. See, I finally commented on one of your stories! :P --Tdifan1234 22:43, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! I liked this chapter! Goldenshane 01:16, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

XD @ The Super Power Alliance (or whatever) California Gurl, she's undeniable, Daisy Duke, bikini on top! I really wanted Cecil to stay over Sarge so Ugcil could last. Marvis pwns! xD Can you parents my phone and tell them not to worry Santa? 02:15, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mixed Emotions. I loved the new chapter. I read the last one with Deb and tried to leave a comment that was super long but when I finshed my computer went to a different page. I would have retyped it but I forgot it and get really upset when I write something with all my heart and then its gone. Forever. Anyway I loved Bozo's movie! I think in the comment that I lost, I said I compare myself most to Bozo cause she is always crazy (though I'm not anywhere close to as funny as her). I also found it ironic that as I was reading Deb singing, the news was doing a story/interview about the "Friday" song. I loved this chapter too. Bozo was so funny. XD I loved her eating popocorn and saying I promised myself I wouldn't cry. XD XD XD Plus I'm starting to like Lois. And I love Hank. And Kathryn. And them as a couple. I loved it when they joined Lois. And there little romantic scence with the maybe. And I loved how Martha was bringing girl power! And loved that no one is being fooled by Sal anymore. It took people a while to realize how bad Al was in TDWT. I did not love everything. Cecil!!! I love blind people!!!! I didn't expect Esteban to out last him. I was thinking Ugly. XD Everyone notices when Sarge loses in the finals but no one notices when Ugly lost to an old man. But I miss Cecil. I don't think anyone saw him leaving yet, which is probably why you sent him home. And courious as to what Ugly said at the end. Anyway, Yay New Chapter!98.94.153.51 03:42, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. I forgot to log in. Rhonda the stalker fan! 03:44, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Shadowgeoff and Shane! :) Oh wow! EPIC comment Rhonda! xD I'm glad you liked the last two chapters. Ugly's last line was thrown in for dramatic effect, and I'll try to explain it next chapter. xD Thanks all for reading and commenting! :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 10:32, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

XD, I loved this whole chapter, The challenge was awaome as was Audrey, and Bozo. Im kinda glad Cecil and Ugly got together they seem like they were designed for each other! XD, I loved that part. - Copper5

They kind of were, Copper. xD I needed a plot for them, so I decided to mix up the teams and put them together. Thanks for reading! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:06, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I couldn't comment last night, I had to get off, anyway, loved the chapter, IMO, the best one of the story so far. I loved that among all the strategy, some relationships have time to shine, and Maulik proving he's just as good as those young whippersnappers. >.> TDAddict - ^{You know who he is, and don't forget it.} 19:13, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, thanks TDAddict! xD It became apparent to me that one of the reasons TDAS was kinda weak was the lack of relationships, so I figured I'd make some. Thanks for reading! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:19, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, I really liked the chapter. I'm glad Maulik did well in the challenge. I liked Cecil, but I prefer Sarge being in rather than him, for conflict and such. I feel like Cecil filled his role as well as he was going to, and I'm glad he and Ugly wound up together. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:04, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, Sprink! I had a tough time eliminating Cecil over Sarge, but I figured there was nothing new I could do with Cecil. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:10, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

This story is, simply put, amazing. The drama, suspense, and absolutely drop-dead funny lines are all factors that make me love this story. In my opinion, one of the best on the wiki at the moment. Keep up the great work, Nalyd. You have no idea how outstanding your story really is. --TDIFan13 ^{(My Talk and My Contributions!)} 00:51, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

You can't name a single character, can you, Ryan? :p --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:59, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

This chapter was hilarious! I loved Frasier, and Bozo the best. Also a cliffhanger ending. I really hope we will find out the identidy of the tall hooded figure soon! - Copper5

Thanks for reading Copper, I'm glad you liked it! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 17:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

YES! I've been waiting for a new chapter! Not to be rude, just wanted you to know that you I really love TDL! And this chapter was great! It was all about romance. And though "Ugly" is gone ( sad face ) this chapter was great. And it was romantic! Tell me straight up front, Is Sarge and Lois going anywhere or was it just a one time thing? And Kathryn don't give up on Hank! Unless that makes him want you. THEN DO IT!! I really love the opposites attract kind couples. And that was a really great couple idea! And I love how protective Elvis was of Martha. I felt bad for Bozo though. She didn't get much screen time. I LOLed at her Jimmy thing. I'll never forget u Bozo!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do u have a userbox for her? If so, how do I get those userboxes and where do I get Bozos!!! Anyway, the ending was great! And didn't think the mysterious cloaked person would recruit another person. I wonder how Cecil will react? Will Cecil forgive Ugly for trying to send home Esteban? Will Cecil be made that Esteban didn't take care of Ugly? Will Cecil and Ugly ever be together? EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! I want to know but I don't want that mean to end of the story!!! So, GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hiding Oreos in her bra. 21:46, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

WHOA! SUPER COMMENT! :O You'll have to wait and see what becomes of LoisXSarge. Bozo will get a userbox if she makes the final five, so you'll have to wait a while. And we'll have to wait for the final for CecilXUgly drama. xD Thanks very much for reading, Rhonda, and thanks for the epic comment! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:44, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

So, did anybody else happen to read this? xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:06, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Great chapter, Nalyd. I liked the challenge, though I'm not a fan of pop songs. XD I can't wait to see what the hooded figure society have up their hoodies. XD Should be interesting. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 14:05, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

XD, Nalyd thats what you should call them! The Hooded Figure Society! - Copper5

That was a really funny chapter. All the characters were funny except Ugly who kind of bugged me but everyone else, especially Bozo, Hank, and Fraiser, were funny. I like the thing at the end with Ugly because I feel like it's going to turn into some crazy plan and I also liked the FraiserRoll. Overall, great chapter! Turnertang 00:18, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, guys! I really enjoyed writing this chapter cause of all the funny moments so I'm glad you guys liked them. xD I'm gonna be in the car for a few more hours tomorrow and I've been writing on my laptop so you might get another chapter this weekend! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 02:00, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Another epic Bozo chapter! Yay the bucket is back!!!!!! Whay arent as many people reading this as they did for All-Stars? We need to get this story more readers! - Copper5

Haha, Copper, thanks for reading. xD The glorious return of Bozo's Bucket! I agree, I did notice a lower amount of readership. :P I dunno, it might be the new cast, who knows. Kinda disappointing, I consider this one of my best works. xD But I know a lot of people read but don't comment, they tell me in chatango.--Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

They probably are reading, they just don't comment. Great chapter/story BTW. --Not witch, warlock! It's a robe! Not a dress!

Yeah, I just wish my writing could be so epic, people would feel compelled to comment. xD Thanks KKJ! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:39, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

"Elvis' puppet is just like big Elvis." O_O Really tasteless, Nalyd. Just tasteless. XD Anyway, I really liked the chapter. I like the situation between Hank and Kathryn, as well as Jess and Frasier's dads. Bozo's reunion was touching. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:02, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Glad you included the XD, I thought you were really upset over that line! xD Haha, I'm glad you're enjoying Hank-Katheryn. And, I'll admit it, I think Bozo's bucket will have to be a contestant. xD Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 23:03, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the chapter. :D I was sad to see Elvis go, but my 3 faves are still in. Plus, Bozo got her bucket back. The Bucket should debut. :@ :P xDGot it memorized? Got what memorized? I have no idea. 02:42, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, glad you liked it, thanks for reading Alfan! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:17, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Love the new chapter! Bozo won another challenge! A challenge I really liked. And Sarge being nice? Didn't know he could. But poor Elvis :( First his mom comed from nowhere and depresses him and the he is elimanated! He was awesome. I wanted him to sing a song for Martha. But XD on Nayld's comment on his puppet. Jess and Fraiser's dads are jerks.I wouldn't mind Fraiser leaving. He is ok but not that funny (maybe I just don't get it XD). But now it seems he is a probable winner. What if he defeats Bozo!!!! He better not >:( I love Bozo!!!!!!!!!!!!! Salvatore trying to keep his secret was interesting. But clearly the best most heart warming reunion was... Bozo and her bucket. I tried to hold back my tears but I couldn't. Of course the next sweetest was Maulik and his wife. It was pretty sweet too. :3 Last Of The Gophers!!! 00:25, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, I've been waiting for you to comment, Rhonda. xD Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it. IDK who's gonna go next, it's really up in the air at this point. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:27, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

I got it all read. 8D Nice work on the chapter. I thought that Maulik might be eliminated, as he kept mentioning that he wouldn't be eliminated. I actually liked Bozo this time, not that I don't usually like her, but she is fairly prominent. I knew she wouldn't be eliminated, though. :P As for Frasier versus Salvatore... I hope Frasier beats him somehow, but the declaration of 'I will win the war' isn't usually a good sign. There was a typo toward the end that I can't remember what it was, but when Salvatore talks about how he'll win the war, he says 'I won this time'. Just a heads up. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:58, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! New chapter!!!!!! Im so sad that Bozo lost her buckit :'(. Also, Nalyd when will the black hoodie society (as I have now officialy named them) make their in the flesh appearance? - Copper5

Thanks for reading guys! Thanks Sprink, the word thing I have on my laptop doesn't have spell check. IDK why. The thing is, none of the next couple eliminations have been planned out, all I know for sure is the final six. xD Thanks for commenting! And Copper, I dunno yet. Read and find out. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:13, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome new chappy, Nalyd! Merge finally occured, so YAYZ! Anyway, I think Esteban should've gone... finally thinking and voting off a physical threat was a good idea... Can't wait 'til next chappy when *cough* hopefully Jess *cough* someone goes home... --He still cries when he poops. Thanks for being cool, guys. Wait up, Finn! - Jake 19:31, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, not a Jess fan? xD Thanks for reading/commenting Jessica! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 23:41, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the last chapter and Jess and Bozo just regularly. I was excited for the merge. And, I'm glad Esteban left he annoyed me after not sticking up to 'Ugly' who was my favorite character. --HINT:A AWESOME USER,that loves Chatango and Chatting but wonders,what's with Cyan? 01:28, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading/commenting Webly! I guess Esteban won't be missed. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:47, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I probably should have asked this earlier but is Salvatore still charming anyone? I know that Lois, and Kathryn dont like him anymore and Jess is only acting like she is. But what about the other girls? I dont think Bozo, and Martha like him because of their boyfriends (The Buckit and Elvis). I still think Deb, Rosalinda, and Gretel still have a crush on him. Also, dosent he and Audrey have a thing? They didnt really interact at all this last chapter. - Copper5

Yes, he is. There's still a few girls he hasn't worked his magic on. Audrey still likes him; there's a deleted scene from this chapter with them. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:14, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY! I'm so happy!!! A new chapter! But I'm so sad for Bozo. Her poor bucket. :( But I'm glad she wasn't eliminated. And I loved her kick the bucket joke. I voted for her to win naturally. I was't sad to see Esteban leave. Thats what he got for betraying Ugly. After I read the new chapter I realized that when he said it can't get worse you were forshading it would by him being voted off. I also have a new super big love for Audrey. I loved the TGIF referance. And I'm glad to see Hank x Kathryn isn't gone yet! And Lois and Sarge is becoming super cute. I loved Sarge's answers to the British trivia. I can't wait for more! Last Of The Gophers!!! 01:14, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Rhonda! Glad to hear from ya again. I'm glad you liked the chapter, hopefully you'll like chapter 13 too. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:44, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

I loved this chapter too! I also am extremaly interested to see the budding relationship between Bozo and Salvatore. As for elimination, Im kinda happy to see Martha go. She was being kind of mean to Maulik. - Copper5

Glad you liked it, Copper! Thanks for commenting! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 17:53, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really liked this chapter. Bozo is my favorite. And I love her relationship with Salvatore. Martha was really mean to Malik and kinda annoying, I'm glad to see her go. I loved Audrey's hillarious moments in this chapter, and her story about get dropped when she was a children. Bob leprechaun isn't a leprechaun? No, Hank, you killed my dreams. )`: Bruno is my name! Talk! My editcount! 18:48, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Glad that you liked it Bruno. Agreed, Bozo and Audrey were certainly the stars of the chapter. xD Thanks for reading! :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yay new chapter! Bozo was awesome! But she is smarter than falling for Salvatore. Don't do it Bozo! He eliminate you! Taken Audrey instead! XD But Audrey has to be my second favorite. I laughed so hard at how she got dropped on the head. I kinda feel bad for Martha. First Elvis goes. Then Kathryn doesn't accept her (I thought you were all making friends Kathryn!) Then she accidentally hurts Malik and she gets sent home for it. And to top it all off she was told Elvis didn't really like her. I think it was right to try and vote Malik off. If you don't wanna be here when many other people who auditioned or voted off did then you should go home. Especially if you have made it so far. I hate people who quit reality shows after Survivor Nicaragua. Oh well. Poor Sarge and Hank. By the time they ask out the girl either them or the girl will be voted off. I can't wait for the next chapter. Baby could we make a home in the stars, Baby somewhere in a galaxy far, Ohh, ohhh, ohh you're my future love <3 04:24, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Bozo's smart? xD It's funny you mention it, the Maulik quitting plot was based off Dan from Survivor Nicaragua. xD Thanks for reading Rhonda, as always, I get excited when I see your epic comments. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 12:17, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks to everyone who read and voted in polls! :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:35, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be in New Jersey until Thursday, so Chapter 14 could take a bit. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:03, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY.
*mourns for all of eternity* ~ Kgman04! ♪ _Talk! ♫ ^Contribs! 01:02, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry KG! I figured a few people would miss ol' Audrey. :p Thanks for reading! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

D I'm so excited to see the new chapter! I have had 3 new siggys since the last. This episode was great. I feel bad for Sarge. I feel bad for Lois being told she wasn't a real hero too. Bozo was fantastic :D I loved her line "yay democracy!" XD I love Bozo :3 Kathryn and Hank need to hook up! I voted for them as favorite couple. I felt so sad Maulik left. But his ending speech was so sweet. I'm gonna miss him D: Will he be on the jury? The elimination was tragic. Audrey was loved by many. I found her super funny last chapter. But I liked she told Sal off. If you do an all stars 2 she should be in it. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work Nayld! Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 02:23, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you very much, Rhonda! No, Maulik is not on the jury. I never really understood why everyone liked Audrey so much, but they did, so I needed to give her a proper elimination, as if to thank her for her contribution to my fanfics. Thanks for reading!! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 10:08, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! New Chapter! Maulik leaving wasent a big shock, but im kinda sad to see Audrey go. I liked her more this time then when she was in Total Drama Amazon. - Copper5

Thanks for reading and commenting Copper! Glad ya liked it! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:14, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. Nalyd judging the pizzas was hilarious. I'm sad with both of the eliminations. Maulik was just awesome, and Audrey was hilarious. I don't like Hank, he's so annoying. BozoxSalvatore is just epic. xD Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 01:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting Bruno! Glad you guys liked this chapter so much, worth the wait? :p --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 19:21, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Read the new one, finally. It was enjoyable. I liked the challenge, though. I didn't mind Maulik's elimination, so much. He can get pretty... I don't know, like too melodramatic for me (like with his wife and after he got eliminated). XD As for Audrey, I was slightly disappointed at her elimination, but I did like what she said to Salvatore after her elimination. I actually thought Hank might be out, even though he was in the alliance. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 13:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Is this ever gonna be updated? -Koops

If anybody happens to read chapter fifteen, I desperately need feedback. I feel like this was one of the worse chapters I've ever posted in any of my stories, solely because I felt so disconnected from the characters due to the time it took to write. So if I made any sort of continuity error somewhere or you have other feedback, please please please let me know. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:09, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Soo if anybody read this I'd still really appreciate any feedback at all. :p --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 00:53, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't knew the new chapter have been posted. xD So, anyway, not a bad chapter. It was just as fun and enjoyable as all the others chapters. xD Well, I loved the challenge. I miss Epic Rap Battles of Wikia. xD So, I guess I was expecting Frasier to leave... but not Salvatore. I liked Frasier, but he wasn't my favorite. As for Salvatore, he is the kind of villain that you hate to hate or love to love or whatever. xD At least Bozo's in, so... BOZO FTW! :p Bruno... he has the spirit of a wolf! 02:43, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Haha thanks for reading Bruno! The original plan wasn't for Salvatore to go, just Frasier. But I was running out of ways for Salvatore to stay in, and I was having a hard time justifying voting Frasier out. Thanks for reading and commenting! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 11:54, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

K so I know this is getting more and more desperate but I really need to know if anybody is still reading this. :p Even if it's all you say, I just need people who read it to let me know. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 02:06, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

I've gotten really behind on reading things on the site, unfortunately. I've had to spend more time on my own stories, lately... I do plan to read the latest chapter/want to read it, so I hope you don't feel discouraged. I haven't had the time, yet. Sorry about that, man. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:15, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Actually... I'mma read right now. My curiosity is getting to me, and I'm too tired to work on pics/chapters, atm. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:27, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

I read it... and... I liked it, a lot. It's one of my favorite chapters from you, too. I liked the challenge, and the Old Spice reference. XD I've got some speculation going around in my head, so I'm wondering if I'm right. Anyway, I liked Katheryn and Hank's raps the most. XD Those were the early outs of the first part, right? I remember liking Katheryn's and then knowing that Hank would lose his round because he started the opposite of Katheryn. XD I will admit that I accidentally spoiled myself by looking at the end of the chapter. It was an accident, but that made me shocked when I saw Frasier's elimination. XD I was thinking he might be in the final two, too. o_O Anyway, nice work on the chapter. It was worth the wait/reading. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 03:02, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Sprink! I really thought this was one of my worst chapters so I'm glad you liked it. xD And yeah, the thing with the raps is that's what I spent so much time on. There was a lot of staring at the screen blankly and giving up. Thanks very much for reading and commenting! :D --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 13:09, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sure. I will say I'm shocked you thought it was one of your worst, though. I really liked it. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:13, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Haha thanks Sprink. xD --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 22:31, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

To those interested; not sure when the next chapter will be up. Haven't started but I have a few ideas. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 14:21, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Commenting because you asked me to, but anyway, I really liked the chapter. It's understandable that the rap battles took you a long time, but they turned out great. I expected Frasier to go but the double elimination caught me off guard. I knew Salvatore would go then, though, and I found Bozo's voting comment particularly humorous. Any one of the six could win at this point, except maybe "Sarge." TDAddict ^{He's just that guy}_{you might know} 01:18, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reading a commenting! :D And yeah, even I'm not entirely sure who's gonna win now haha. --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 01:19, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Good news everyone! Writing of chapter 16 has begun! --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 21:26, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I'm behind on commenting Nalyd. But this chapter was awesome! Poor Jess has no one without Audrey and the other girls are just ignoring her. And Sarge crying over Sal is so hilarious! But Sal's strategy to take down Frasier was brilliant. I like Lois's attempt to strategize while still fighting evil. And Bozo has been super funny, (but what is new?)

The raps were awesome! Out of each round I would say my favorite rap was, Lois', Sarge's, Jess', Sal's, Sarge's and Bozo's. Poor Frasier having his feelings revealed though. It really his tragic. I love it Frasier says; "Whenever I look at you, it hurts," It really shows the mood and makes me feel so bad for Frasier. I really can't explain why I love that line, but I do!

And a second vote? I didn't see that coming. Very clever. And Sal going home? I didn't see that coming out all! I can not wait to see where this goes next time. It is kind of sad this story is coming to an end, but it is fantastic. This was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one :) Aw, your simple innocence is one of the most attractive things about you! You're like a kitten! A kitten that doesn't speak Japanese! 18:10, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Excellent promo pic done by OHF!

Thanks so much for reading/commenting Rhonda! I'm very glad that you liked it so much haha. I think I'm gonna get on the next chapter right now, your comment has put me in such a good mood. :) --Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:51, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

To those wondering, I have had some trouble lately with writing this chapter. I got a new laptop and it's word program is annoying to use, and the keyboard's quotation mark button is messed up for some reason, which is inconvenient for a story with dialogue. So I just wanted to update everyone, and I thank you for your continued support. Nalyd Renrut - Legendary ^{Snipe! Master of epic pwnage} 20:09, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

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This was a wonderful story. Shame it never got an ending. Hopefully someone will pick up the torch one day and finish the final two chapters. - Copper5