Winner Guessing Contest
1 guess per person, can't change your guess unless I say so, winner gets to make a character for next story. You know the routine.
Cammy- Cool nerds FTW! :D. Jake says"Peace, Love, Friendship." 18:39, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
MacKenzie- Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 21:08, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
Mattie- Last Of The Gophers!!! 03:08, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
PJ-They call me the Hiphopopotamus My lyrics are bottomless Flows that glow like phoshorus Poppin' this eshophagus Rockin' this metropolis I'm not a water-dwelling mammal from Africa that's moved to the montropolis DID STEVE TELL YOU THAT?......Steve..... 19:38, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
Vincent- Dramatic Kracko 13:54, June 10, 2011 (UTC) Why did I choose him? He has a Polish surname, and I'm from Poland. I wanted to choose Antoine, but he's taken.
Final 3 Guessing Contest
Anotoine Ori and Kavern Holden is my name and winning camps is my game 17:45, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
Vincent, Chelsey and Donny. Dramatic Kracko 16:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)
Tasia, Elle and Donny Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 01:03, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
Donny, Chelsey, Tasia. Dramatic Kracko 15:15, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
Blade won. (Fanny won originally, but his guess had to be taken down, and Blade was the first one to claim the guess) I just messaged him in Chatango, and you can guess who he picked to return. XD I really wish you could all be California boys. 01:36, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Chat here. Oh, cranky Josh. He's gettin' so cranky. Oh, so very cranky. And now he's breakin' things... 20:56, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
=D I loved Chapter 1! Ori and Abbey and MacKenzie pwn! Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 21:09, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks SG! I'm glad you liked it! Oh, cranky Josh. He's gettin' so cranky. Oh, so very cranky. And now he's breakin' things... 21:10, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
XD this was hilarous!!! I can't tell who I like most XD I don't want any to be voted out. I had the hardest time picking who to vote for. I picked Mattie cause she has a cool design and seems nice but I don't think she'll make it far. XD I can't wait for me. Last Of The Gophers!!! 03:08, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Rhonda, I'm glad you liked it. :D We'll see if Mattie makes it far or not... :P Oh, cranky Josh. He's gettin' so cranky. Oh, so very cranky. And now he's breakin' things... 19:45, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
A really fun and well-made episode. The castmates seem to be very likeable. My favourites have to be Northworth (Even though he talks a little too much), Vincent and....Lizza. XD Dramatic Kracko 16:10, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks so much, Kracko. Northworth isn't always that chatty, he just had rude things to say about everyone. XD Glad that the castmates are likable. Oh, cranky Josh. He's gettin' so cranky. Oh, so very cranky. And now he's breakin' things... 16:17, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
Lizza leaving was predictable, and she went really annoying. Glad she left. ~ Dramatic Kracko 20:59, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
Wow... lot of bathroom humor in this chapter. :P Anyway, the challenge was a total fail for the Dancing Bugs. I like Donny and MacKenzie most of all right now, and Ori and Abbey. Lizza leaving was predictable, because you already told me she would. :P Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 21:52, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Kracko and SG. Lizza was predictable? Well, you both thought she was annoying, so I guess it wasn't that bad. xD Thanks for the comments. And the bathroom humor was intentional. It was kind of meant to show how immature some of the characters are. XDDD Oh, cranky Josh. He's gettin' so cranky. Oh, so very cranky. And now he's breakin' things... 13:28, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
Well the new chapter was interesting. I liked how the customers were all other characters you came up with. And I found a lot of things funny. Elle and Chesley were very funny. I found Toad was super pervy. And I skipped over the whole part about bathroom humor. Lizza was kinda an obvious out but I liked she drank a lot of caffiene. Last Of The Gophers!!! 12:01, June 28, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Rhonda. :P Elle and Chelsey were really fun to write for this chapter, and Toad was too. XD Sorry about the potty stuff, again, it was just that time. Glad you thought Lizza was obvious. XDD Oh, cranky Josh. He's gettin' so cranky. Oh, so very cranky. And now he's breakin' things... 22:10, June 29, 2011 (UTC)
Aww. I liked PJ. Oh well. I liked the favorite color scene. I find it funny how all your different characters pop up everywhere. I remember reading somewhere that most (or all) of the contestants come from two cities. Is this one of those cities. Last Of The Gophers!!! 00:21, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
I liked PJ, too... :( Arthur, Gary, Devin, and Nic showing up was really funny. XD And Rhonda, I think I said that on a character talkpage. I just noticed that they all seem to know each other. :P Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 00:28, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, guys. PJ was a good character, but I couldn't think of anyone else to be eliminated... in this chapter. :P I'm glad you liked the gentlemen, too. This isn't one of the cities, Rhonda, it's just another city where lots of TDS and TDTJ contestants pop in. Trust me, there will be more cameo appearances. XD I'll be a troll or evil queen. I'll be a human jelly bean. 'Cause every day is Halloween, for me... 12:55, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
That chapter was... horrifying. O_O Vincent Mackiewitz... O_O :P I actually loved the chapter. XD California Gurls was hot, but then Kavren made it all freaky. :P Donny being the rapper was hilarious, and I was kind of surprised to see Northworth go. I thought he would make it much farther. Don't be a rainbow, be a flag. -Lady Gaga. 02:29, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
I loved that chapter! Cammy was so epic! She reminds me of my cool friend. Plus Cammy said XD. XD. I say XD all the time. That is my favorite face to make. The challenge was very funny. I loved all of Donny's references. And Toad dressing up was great too. I'm surprised that the Dancing Bugs won. They were singing Friday. I think that means you should lose. XD JK And I was so happy to see Helga! I missed her. I'm excited for chapter 4! Baby could we make a home in the stars, Baby somewhere in a galaxy far, Ohh, ohhh, ohh you're my future love <3 03:21, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, SG and Rhonda. Northworth was always meant to be an early out, even in the original draft, where the first three voted out were the only ones who didn't change placing. But he did get a lot of screentime, or page-time, or whatever. XD Glad you liked rappin' Donny, and Vincent Mackiewicz was pretty horrifying. O_O XD Rhonda, glad that you liked Cammy, and that's not the last we'll see of Helga. :P I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 21:37, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
I just read thelast three chapters and have gotta say...................... I LOVED them! :D Lizza got really annoying in the cooking challenge, so I'm glad she's out. PJ was okay, and Northworth was a little better than I expected from him. I love Donny and Vincent's friendship and Toad hitting on MacKenzie. XD And I REALLY wanted to see the California Gurls parody (why, Kavren, why?)! My fave characters so far are Antoine (forever and always <3), Toad, and MacKenzie. I also like Trick, even if you haven't focused on him very much. --Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 03:43, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Reddy! I'm so glad you liked it! :D Vincent and Donny's friendship is awesome to write about, and ToadKenzie (that's what I'm calling it xD) is fun too. Sorry about the California Gurls. xDD And Trick will be focused on more, that's all I'll tell you. ;) I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 21:03, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
...You changed it to PG-13 just to have a bathroom humor-filled chapter five with a title that can be considered a cuss word? XD But, srsly, I loved CammyxTrick. ...And Sonicxlove64. XD Christina Grimmie FTW. :P I hated Dolph since... forever, so I was glad to see him go. :P And the smoothie/pretzel guy is epic. :D ...The end of the chapter worried me. XD Don't be a rainbow, be a flag. -Lady Gaga. 16:52, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks SG. Yeah, the PG-13 is kinda just for that. XD Glad you liked the Christina reference. :B Dolph's exit was... Interesting. XD And the smoothie/pretzel guy has more jobs. ;) I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 17:12, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
The chapter was interesting. I seem not to know enough memes to understand everything but I understood most. I offically dislike Kraven. The challenge was werid but I loved seeing the smoothie guy again. I don't miss Dolph but his exit was funny. And yay Cammy x Trick! Of course this means one of them will probably be voted off soon. If so don't let it be Cammy! I'm excited for the next chapter. Be prepared for the murkiest scam! Meticulous planning, Tenacity spanning, Decades of denial, Is simply why I'll, Be queen undisputed! Respected, saluted, And seen for the wonder I am! 05:43, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Rhonda! I never saw this comment for some reason. xD I'm so glad you liked Cammy x Trick. Smoothie guy will pop up again and again and again. ;) Glad you loved the chap. I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 14:42, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Poor Lizza =(. Poor, misunderstood Lizza. I mean, I can see how she could be annoying in real life, and how it was mostly her fault her team lost that challenge, but she was fun! And just had so much energy. And she saved Tasia from Ori doodling on her! So she's like a hero, sorta' kinda'.
I'd almost swear there was something physically wrong with Tasia. It doesn't seem like she's trying to act drunk all the time on purpose. She seems like she's trying to be nice and friendly, too, but just, for whatever reason, is in a weird state all the time.
Smoothie Guy seemed to wake up on the wrong side of the bed. Doesn't seem to like having paying customers o_O Frank15 21:59, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the comments, Frank! I saw you on DeviantArt and now I know who you are. Smoothie Guy is kinda weird. xD Sorry about Lizza, and Tasia has a very mysterious past. We'll see... ;) I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 14:42, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
XD I loved the new chapter. I was right about Toad asking out Mattie! I can't wait to see how this unfolds. And I was glad to see Abbey mention her mom. Antoine and MacKenzie was cute but I don't think it will work out. And Donny is right Tasia does look like Friday. I really liked Elle and Chelsey in this chapter and I'm starting to love Elle even more now! The challenge was a good idea and I liked how Elle changed the channel to Nebraska Shore and the team won! Also Twinklefog and Total Drama School Fan Story Wiki is very funny. Karvan was less irrating this chapter but Gustavo's voting choice was dumb. >:( Hello, hello! It's me Picasso! I will spray my words of love. With your name on every wall. <3 01:18, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Rhonda! Elle was a blast to write for in this chapter, and I'm glad you liked Nebraska Shore. I kinda like Antoine and MacKenzie but I'm thinking of pairing Antoine with another girl. :B I tried to make Kavren less irritating and Gustavo will get his just desserts. :p I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 12:14, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Nice job on the latest chap! Elle's love for snooki XD I hate Gustavo, he's a racist viatch. I kinda was hoping Kim would gfo farther, but oh well. Nice work. --Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 17:13, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Reddy. I love Elle's snooki love. xD Gustavo being hated... Sorry. D: Well, there was nowhere else to put Kim, but thanks. :D I'm sure my critics will say it's a grotesque display! Well, they can bite me, baby, I perform this way! 17:16, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Like the new challenge. I was so glad Elle didn't go. Toad and his cupcake was creepy. But I felt bad that no one wanted to be Tasia's friend :( The challenge was funny. And I certainly didn't see a double elimination coming. I was glad Gustavo left though I was shocked MacKenzie left. But like Chris said she was just a slot filler. But I did except I thought she might have more character devolopment. But the reason she left was pretty good. XD I did find it funny Chris said Elle should start seducing. But on another note I was wondering. Who voted out Kim? I know Vincent and Donny thought it (though they may have been thinking about Tasia) and Gustavo did but at least one more person had to? Kim and Tasia either voted for each other or someone else and since Tasia misses Kim, I don't think they voted for one another. Mattie and Abbey probably voted for Tasia which means Ori voted for Kim. I'm not sure which side did but I'm sure either had a reason. I know that question was kinda pointless and I might have just answered it but I like knowing the votes so I was just curious. Also I'm excited to see who Antoine will hook up with. I have a few ideas but I guess I'll have to wait... Hello, hello! It's me Picasso! I will spray my words of love. With your name on every wall. <3 18:39, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Rhonda. I'm glad you loved the chap. I think Mattie and Abbey were the others who voted for Kim, because they were creeped out of her, and Ori voted her out in his grumpy mood. XD I have ideas for Antoine too, you'll have to wait and see... It's fun to spray yourself with mace, it's fun to squeeze your mother's face, it's fun to mow your daddy's grass, it's fun to break things made of glass! 18:53, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
That does make sense. Sorry I asked that but I hate how TDI's eliminations aren't very clear. And I can't wait to see what ideas. I'm interested to see who is eliminated next because they're all so liked. Hello, hello! It's me Picasso! I will spray my words of love. With your name on every wall. <3 19:06, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
No Gustavo D: This chapter wasn't too surprising since I knew a lot of what would happen. XD Fann Y. Fiction the 2010th ☆ Legendary Schadenfreude! UNISON BUDDIES EVERYWHERE!!! 20:05, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
MacKenzie wasn't my favorite, really, but still, voting her out for being "too nice" is a pretty stupid reason in the team phase of the game. Things change when merge time comes, but until then, you have to work with these people, and it's almost always beneficial to be working with people who are, indeed, nice. That was surprisingly poorly thought out on Cammy's part (less surprising on Chelsey's part).
What the heck was with Abbey's strange outburst toward Tasia? They've barely interacted before, and now, from out of nowhere, Abbey wants Tasia arrested for... um, existing in her presence, I guess? Getting annoyed by the guys hitting on her is one thing, but getting so angry at Tasia for no obvious reason doesn't exactly endear me to Abbey.
I'm sorry no one there likes you, Tasia. I like you, anyway =) Frank15 09:35, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, guys. Glad you liked the chapter. Abbey doesn't like Tasia for some reason that might be explained later... And MacKenzie's reason of being voted out was kind of supposed to be stupid... :P It's fun to spray yourself with mace, it's fun to squeeze your mother's face, it's fun to mow your daddy's grass, it's fun to break things made of glass! 14:40, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
O.O Woah... what just happened?! MacKenzie was eliminated?! That's upsetting... T.T... anyway, I can't wait to see what will happen next time... :P BTW, if you're having challenge idea problems, I thought of a challenge... how 'bout they have to run two miles and then swim through a dirty river... or maybe a dance competition... Possible chapter titles could be: Just a Run and a Swim Away or Dance, Dance Total Drama Revolution Style--Excusez-moi, qui a pété? 14:54, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, Jess. D: Those are really good challenge ideas, though, and I'll be sure to use at least one of them. :P It's fun to spray yourself with mace, it's fun to squeeze your mother's face, it's fun to mow your daddy's grass, it's fun to break things made of glass! 15:32, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
Well, well, well... I kinda guessed that Toad would be eliminated after all that he did, today. Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, it was an interesting way to end the chapter, Toad pulling Chelsey's shirt off revealing her bra. Trick will probably pay for being happy about shirtless Chelsey. :P--Excusez-moi, qui a pété? 16:42, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, he will pay. :P Glad you liked the chapter. :D It's fun to spray yourself with mace, it's fun to squeeze your mother's face, it's fun to mow your daddy's grass, it's fun to break things made of glass! 16:46, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
The new chapter was hilarious. I loved the KRP and all the Total Drama School jokes. And Elle "seducing" was funny. I felt bad for Antoine but I'm glad he didn't get the boot. But I knew he wouldn't since you said he is gonna get a girlfriend. I was surprised to see Toad get the boot. But was even more surprised to see him rip Chelsey's shirt. XD Toad is so prevy. I'm curious to see how Trick staring at Chelsey will affect his and Cammy's relationship. Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 19:20, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Wikia contributor who I'm assuming is Rhonda, due to the length of her comment. XD Glad you liked the chapter. Cammy will not be happy. Glad you liked Elle's seducing and KRP. I loved writing that part. It's fun to spray yourself with mace, it's fun to squeeze your mother's face, it's fun to mow your daddy's grass, it's fun to break things made of glass! 19:23, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
XD, I loved this chapter. The KRP scene was hilarious, and I didn't expect you to use the things I contributed. :P I was hoping for a parody name on the TDS Wiki, but they were still hilarious. Suzuki's butt just pretty much scarred me. Herbert's hilarious I loved him. I didn't want Toad to get yet, but I guess it was his time. And the shirt ripping was for mine or Oat's doing, not Toad's :@ Fann Y. Fiction the 2010th ☆ Legendary Schadenfreude! UNISON BUDDIES EVERYWHERE!!! 12:49, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Fanny. xD I needed for the chap to be longer, so I used the stuff you contributed. xD Yeah, the shirt rip was basically for that reason only. ;) Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 01:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
"Snookiiiiii?" Hehe... poor clueless Elle.
And poor Tasia. Probably didn't even realize she was grossing people out with the bunion talk. She did seem to have the presence of mind to realize Ori was making things up, anyway, so gotta' give her props for that! Frank15 01:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
Finally caught up. XD I read chapters 6-9 today. :P I liked the chapters, even though MacKenzie, my pic for the WGC, got out. TBH, I got bored of her after Chapter 4. :P I never really noticed Gustavo and Kim though. XD And... Toad, Trick! D: Cammy's all alone now. I liked all the cameos in Chapter 7, and the Chapter 8 and 6 challenge. The Chapter 9 challenge was kind of lame, though. XD Can't wait for more. :P SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 01:58, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, the chapter 9 challenge was super lame... Couldn't think of anything else. XD But glad you liked all the chapters! Gustavo and Kim were just.... there. XDD Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 02:14, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
I liked the new chapter. I love Elle so much :D Karvan was much more acceptable in this chapter. I liked Vincent trying to get back in and I liked the PJ joke. If anyone will return it will be PJ. I feel bad for Tasia being all alone D: She's so awesome. But the challenge was interesting :P I wasn't to sad Trick left (and I already knew he was gonna leave) but I'm sad Cammy is all alone. She could be a target. Also if you want any challenge ideas tell me and I can help. Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 23:26, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, I'm glad you loved the chapter. You love Elle? She's hilarious. XD The merge will be after this next chapter, so Cammy and Tasia will find others to hang out with. And I'll send you a PM if I need challenge ideas, which I most likely will. :P Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 23:33, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
Chapter 10 was... interesting. XD As well as gross, funny, and weird. :P I still liked Cammy despite how she acted this chapter, and Ori's little tantrum was funny. XD As for Mattie going... she was a little bland. XD SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 22:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Esjee. Definitely one of the stranger chapters. XD Cammy will be back to normal next chapter. ;) And yeah, Mattie wasn't as great as I thought she'd be, but I have some interesting things planned for her in the Aftermath Special... Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 22:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
XD Great new chapter. The opening sequence was funny. Traveling through different fanfics and meeting characters from them? And getting trampled by animals in Australia? Where have I seen this before :P XD I loved that you said What the heck? The challenge was funny and Dolph's appearances were so hilarious. The glass joke was funny. Where did you come up with it? I felt bad for Cammy but I'm glad she was safe. Though poor Mattie D:. She was bland but now I'm out of the winner guessing contest. Her elimination feels so unfair. Like Courtney's. But I'm excited to see her in your Aftermath Speical! Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 23:42, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
I got the opening sequence from you, and glad you liked it. XD The broken glass song is from victorious. I love that show. :P Sorry about Mattie, but she'll be major in the aftermath... Which is hosted by... Never mind xD Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 23:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
I'm sorry, Mattie, but as far as I'm concerned, that is the greatest reason ever to eliminate someone! And in fairness, it's not exactly Ori's fault that the rest of you forgot to vote. Probably Dolph's fault, but still, Ori didn't exactly do anything unfair.
And yay, from out of nowhere, Elle randomly stuck in a tree! Who cares how or why =D Frank15 00:50, August 24, 2011 (UTC)
YAY! That was an epic chappy! I really loved it! I kinda hated how Mattie was eliminated because she was an epic character... I kinda wanted to see more of her... I'm still supporting Abbey ATM!--I will vogue like Madonna. 14:29, August 26, 2011 (UTC)
I liked the chapter. XD The challenge was funny, especially with the Justin Bieber parody. XD Ori's song was definately epic. :P I wasn't too disappointed to see Abbey go, as I often forgot about her. XD KavrenxAbbey... O.o SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 22:53, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, SG. KavrenxAbbey isn't quite a relationship yet, and you'll have to wait and see what happens. Dustin and Ori's song were epic. :P Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 22:56, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
And what, Kavren, is wrong with Chelsey hanging out with Elle? What, jealous because Elle's so awesome =P?
Tasia's awfully nice to Abbey for someone who hates her guts for not much reason, what with trying to help Kavren and Abbey get together.
Though Abbey got voted out anyway. Ah well. I won't miss her too much. Her over-the-top hatred of Tasia merely for being annoying was, ironically, kinda' annoying on her part.
Elle has an understandable reason for hating Tasia now, at least ;)
Took me a bit to figure out who Dustin's real life counterpart was. Frank15 23:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
Ha, thanks. I really enjoy these in depth comments. :P Kavren probably got sick of Elle, I would too if I had her on my team... Wait, the girl who inspired her was in three of my classes... Abbey's hatred of Tasia was weird. XD Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 23:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
Boo-yah! I'm so happy Ori went home... he was getting on my last nerve... Toad, you are an epic writer! I can't wait until the next chapter is posted!--I will vogue like Madonna. 16:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)
....:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!! I loved the new chapter! It was hilarious just like I knew it would be! But first let me comment on the episode before that:
Chapter 11 My World 2.n0: It was a funny chapter and I love the Like A Boss parody at the begging. XD Dustin was funny. I love Tasia for hitting him in the head :3 And I found Dustin's true identity very clever. As for Abbey and Kavern well i've decided to show you my opinion in a satiric manner so please don't be offended (P.S. I don't know what satiric means :P)
Kavern: I'm gonna ask out some girl, I'm super bored.
Rhonda's Mind: So basically to have some plot in this chapter Kavern is gonna ask out a girl and his reason is he's super bored. True love is dead :/
Tasia and Kavern talk (didn't feel like being satiric here).
Tasia: Pleeeeease excuse my grammar, maaaan.
Rhonda's Mind: No Tasia! Don't become obsessed with good grammar!!! O-o Tasia: Abbey?
Kavren starts to blush.
Tasia: Whaaaat? (She starts poking Kavren.) You liiiike her.
Rhonda's Mind: He's a perv. Who doesn't he like?
Abbey: I'm the hard to get girl. Karvern: Hey, Abbey.. You're hot.
Abbey: (blushes) Thanks...
Rhonda's Mind: Wow. :| Wait to be the hard to get girl.
Kavern: I'ma do this survey.
(Later at Final 2)
Rhonda's Mind: So just as she got a real plot she was voted out...
Chris: And Kavern was the deciding vote!
Karvern: HEY CHRIS. DID YOU DISGUISE THIS AS THE VOTING DEVICE?
Rhonda's Mind: What Chris doing something dirty handed? It's not like he is a jerk who gets enjoyment out of torturing children on live TV. Oh wait. :|
XD Sorry if that seemed rude. I just found KavernxAbbey very funny in a sarcastic way. And sorry that took a lot of room in the talk page. Anyway I'm gonna comment on the next chapter.
Chapter 12: :DDDDDDDDDDD I love this chapter! The challenge was a great idea :P XD I loved I was mentioned. My life is now complete :3 XD I loved the Doyce quote. I was surprised Arthur lost weight. I feel like that will come up in The All Stars Season :P XD Ori picking Helga was gold! I loved Tasia picked Sharissa. I love them both and they kinda look similar. I love Sharissa got taller. But I like her hair purple (as you might have guessed I love purple). I missed Sharissa so much :D She was funny. I was really just happy to see everyone. I was kinda sad Ori left but not that sad. I really loved this chapter! And I think the next one will be good too!
XDDD I loved this. Arthur's weight loss will be mentioned in allstars definitely. The Doyce quote was fun too. I loved Dustin's true identity. And Sharissa seems like she would change her hair back to purple. And the Kabbey thing wasn't rude, it was funny. :P Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 02:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)
Dolph, I curse-eth thee! I liked Ori! :c Otherwise, I liked it. XD Kavren's line "We're not exclusive." cracked me up. XD --Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 03:30, September 2, 2011 (UTC)
ANTOINE WENT??? I'm very surprise that you chose to eliminate Antoine... I totally thought that Tasia was gonna go... anyway, that was a really awesome chapter! LET'S GO, CAMMY!--I wanna go all the way, Takin' out my freak tonight. 17:17, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Jess. I had no more ideas for Antoine, and a few more for Tasia, so I chose to eliminate him. Glad you liked the chapter. I really wish you could all be California boys. 17:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
...Yay for Antoine finally getting out. XD I like both Tasia and Cammy, but, TBH, I actually would rather have Cammy go than Tasia go. Shocking, right? :O I liked the challenge, especially since Vincent and Tasia ended up the finalists. XDD SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 18:02, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
I'm so glad I suggested that challenge! It was hilarious! I love Chelsey's line about purple and glitter. I love it! The cars were so funny. And Elle trying to seduce was funny. I love Karvan's line about that and the name if his siblings XD I was shocked to see Antonie go. Mostly because someone told me he would be hooking up with a girl. But better him than Tasia. Why was Vincent and Tasia being the last two ironic? Unless they're the final 2! Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Rhonda! As for Antoine and a girl, there's always the aftermath special. That'll be chapter 16. I'm glad you liked the cars, and thanks for suggesting the challenge. It was super fun to write for. Vincent and Tasia were ironic because Vincent had nothing but a pillow on wheels and Tasia had..... Well, nothing. XD I really wish you could all be California boys. 00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, yeah, Elle was supposed to be a seductress. I seriously forgot about that until it was mentioned in the last chapter! Ah well, I rather enjoy her "airhead Nebraska Shore fanatic" personality.
Yay, explosions! Who knows why the cars all exploded, and who cares! Explosions! And yay for pillows on wheels... I don't even know how that stays together!
And hooray for the contrived coincidence that lets Tasia stay longer! Frank15 02:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Frank. :P Glad you liked it. And I must agree, Elle's Nebraska Shore personality is better. And who doesn't love explosions?! :D I really wish you could all be California boys. 00:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
- | I'm not sure how to react. The chapter was funny. But random. Cammy becomes a crazed gun firing agent P. I felt like she went from being the cool nerd to a Bridgette to the outcast to a gun firing unlikable bad guy. And why did she wink when she left? As for Vincent leaving it was ad and unexpeceted. He didn't ssen like a stratgeist anymore but I still like him. Maybe he'll get to meet SonicLuv46 (that was her name right?). And Donny winning? :| ......Why not Elle? Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 01:08, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Rhonda, I guess. :P It was a bit sad writing these elims, but y'know, it's part of the story. Who said anything about Donny winning? And yes, Cammy did transform. A lot. XD Sonicxluv46... We haven't seen the last of her. XD I really wish you could all be California boys. 01:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
Are you TRYING to make me hate Cammy? XD She was beast in the challenge, even if she made Vincent unrealistically fly away. XD Vincent being evacuated was sad, since he was so epic. XD I was bummed to see Cammy go, and am excited for TDTokyo. XDD SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 01:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
Naaaaw. I'm not trying. XD But thanks, glad you liked it. Vincent's end was super sad. :c And the unrealistic flying away was based on how a person "dies" in SSB. I really wish you could all be California boys. 01:34, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
Doesn't make a whole lot of sense for Donny to have been safe instead of Cammy, since Cammy was the one who, I dunno', basically won the challenge. Then again, who ever said Chris played fair? And Cammy couldn't have been voted out, anyway, if she were declared safe =P
Poor Cammy, though. She wound up so hated, even by Tasia. Guess Tasia really doesn't like nerds =P Frank15 18:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah... Chris never plays fair. XD And Cammy still has Trick and MacKenzie. Cammy was the one who seemingly tried to vote out Donny. Glad you liked the chapter. I really wish you could all be California boys. 18:48, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
...Chapter 15 was so epic. XD I loved PJ and Cammy in the chapter. XD Dolph's little mention was epic, and Mick Swagger would totally be an FQ if FQ still existed. XD SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 01:40, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
Loved the Aftermath chapter. I'm so happy to see Cammy and Trick again. Lizza is hilarious, I don't know why she is your least favorite, Toad. My favorite line was PJ's: "...". Epic quote. I saw Dolph today, seriously. I was O_o "There are you, Dolph". xD This chapter had a lot of co swear. xD Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 05:37, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Bruno! I'm growing to like Lizza, surprisingly. O_o And I agree, PJ's "..." was my favorite quote. XDD And you saw Dolph? Creepy. O_O I really wish you could all be California boys. 23:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
Don't lie, Josh. You can't have too much Lizza. Or if you can, it's not after just one question =P
Poor Toad. No one likes him, even in the audience.
Poor PJ. She doesn't get much respect, and unlike Toad, she actually deserves better =P
Gustavo's kinda' got a point. Seeing Dolph isn't the big deal it used to be. It's kinda' like "oh, it's him again."
For someone with as short an attention span as Lizza, it's probably easy to play poker against yourself. As long as she's only looking at one hand of cards at a time, she probably can't remember what any of the other hands were. So it's actually kinda' believable that she could do that.
...OK, seeing multiple Dolphs, that's something new. You know, I'm starting to think Dolph is a tad bit weird. Maybe just slightly. Possibly. Frank15 23:35, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, just a little bit... XD And yeah. Lizza is getting better, I totally agree. I also agree that she could play poker against herself. And PJ does deserve better than Toad. XD Thanks. I really wish you could all be California boys. 00:19, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
I saw "Dolph" again. Yesterday, he was wearing clothes very similar to Dolph's clothes, except the hat. However, today he was wearing something different. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 00:26, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
This was so epic of a chapter. XDD And you sure seem to love "Dick Nixon." :P What happened of the end of the challenge srsly confused me. XDD Anyway, I wasn't too sad to see Chelsey go. I hated her. :P Everyday I'm shufflin'... 01:44, September 23, 2011 (UTC)
omg why chelsey b out she wuz mah fave boi mah life is runed i wil die now baiiii ChelseyFan2 02:16, September 23, 2011 (UTC)
...Does the story have a plot anymore? XD I liked both new chapters they're just random. Even more random then usually. The aftermath was funny. PJ was awesome. I was creeped out to see Kim and Gustavo make out. Antoine still didn't get that girlfriend. But the new chapter was great. XD I felt so bad for Elle. Chelsey desrved to go home for that. XD I'm glad that Tasia won. Chelsey and Donny was kinda expected. I'm suprised. I posted a guess for final 3 a long time ago and I've made it this far. If I win I'm gonna be surprised. But the weird thing was all the people revealing they were someone else was weird. And would never really happen. * Then Rhonda reveals she is Toad and Toad is SG and SG is Dolph and Rhonda is Dolph! Then they all dance to Moves Like Jagger.* Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 02:36, September 23, 2011 (UTC)
Taking Snooki was arguably the most villainous thing Chelsey's done the whole show. I'm not sure why Chelsey did it, though. Maybe she just felt she was overdue to do something villain-ish. How did Chris decide what order to let them choose their celebrities, anyway? I think Chris was just hoping that someone would take Snooki just so Elle couldn't have her.
I'm still not entirely sure just how much of a villain Chelsey was supposed to be, but she was really likable. She was cute at the end, regardless =) Frank15 04:04, September 23, 2011 (UTC)
I lost Chelsey's elimination? :( She was so awesome. Well, thew chapter was kinda confuse, specially the end of the challenge. I still don't get it: who was Tasia, who was Chris and who was Dolph? xD The end was nice. ChelseyXDonny. :3 Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 01:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Frank and Bruno. Sorry about Chelsey's elimination. And Bruno, I have no idea. xD I agree with you, Frank, Chelsey was maybe even less evil than NIC. XDD And Chonny FTW. I really wish you could all be California boys. 01:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
...What The Heck? (Pun :P). I'm kinda angry about how the boys treat the girls. Trick stares at Chelsey's chest, Karvan flirts with other girls even though Abbey loves him like crazy now and Donny makes out with Chelsey who is in love with him now (or should be) and says they're just friends. He just wanted to make out with her. And Kim and Gustavo are weird. The challenge was funny. But why did Tasia stay and not Donny when Tasia was left. Though I prefer Tasia staying. Great chapter in all though. It was funny. Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 01:55, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Well, Donny just said they were just friends. If you remember earlier chapters, he had an obsession over Chelsey, and still does. He's just a calm dude so he hid it. XD Kavren is probably oblivious to Abbey's newfound obsession over him. And Tasia staying over Donny is a mystery that I didn't think over. XDD Glad you liked it. I loved the What the Heck? Joke. XD I really wish you could all be California boys. 01:58, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
...WTF? XDD The chapter was weird, but also very, very epic. The whole Chatrotate thing was disturbing, but also kind of funny. And... *is totally not crying over the elimination* Srsly, though, I loved Donny. :P Everyday I'm shufflin'... 02:15, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, SG. XDD I thought the chapter was my second favorite after Take a Skit. And sorry about Donny. D: They all have to go sometime, except the winner of course. XD Glad you liked it. I really wish you could all be California boys. 02:19, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Really awesome chapter. But weird. xD Tell me whose chapter of this fanfiction isn't weird? (in a good way). Dolph is so annoying. Poor Donny. I like all the three, but: Goooooo Tasia. Or Elle. And one more thing: SNOOKI. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 02:23, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Bruno. I agree, every chapter is pretty much weird. XDD Sorry you don't like Dolph but glad you like Elle and Tasia. 8D I really wish you could all be California boys. 02:27, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
How did Donny get eliminated instead of Tasia when everyone except Tasia voted for Tasia? Then again, after everything else in that chapter, why would I actually question that? Besides, Tasia's better anyway, so go Tasia!
As it is, I'm almost not sure whether the Dolph Wars part of the chapter was weirder or the Chattanooga part o_O
AndohmygodohmygodohmygodLizzacameo! Frank15 02:34, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
I just noticed the picture at the top of the page! It looks really cool, but I couldn't help but compare everyone's heights. Either Lizza's about three and a half feet tall, or Chelsey's over seven feet tall. I'm going to guess it's probably Lizza who's super short, since I don't think everyone would be fawning over Chelsey's looks quite that much if she were over seven feet tall. I know tall women are often considered beautiful, but there's a limit to that ;)
And poor Toad looks more like a kindergartener at his height. I know some boys are late bloomers, but he's a bit extreme =D Frank15 15:19, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Frank! Glad you liked the chapter. As for the picture, I have no idea why Chelsey's so tall. She's supposed to be about six feet tall in the story. (O_o) Toad's super short but remember he's 12. He's supposed to be 3 1/2 feet. XDD And Lizza's imagined to be about four feet. EXTREMELY short. XDDD I really wish you could all be California boys. 17:14, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Frank is right. Chelsey is so tall. I thought Antoine and Trick was taller than her. Toad and Lizza is so tine. xD Even Mackenzie is tall, I thought she was a bit tinnier. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 17:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, Antoine and Trick are supposed to be around 6'4 or something. Antoine's hat makes him taller just like Dolph. XD Mackenzie isn't supposed to be that tall, her image is just big so I could fit in more detail. I really wish you could all be California boys. 18:15, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Final. Friken. Three. So excited! :D Watch out, He’s one of them. Zap! Way to go, Zoom. 00:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Poor Lizza. Only got
one two lines and got thrown at a TV screen.
And poor MacKenzie, being more than just a slot filler for once ;P. Poor girl got traumatized today.
And... I have no idea what was going on with Chelsey and the dog o_O Frank1501:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC) WTF FTW- that describes better the aftermath chapter. xD *realizes that FTW is WTF backwards* I didn't knew that. Well, back to the chapter, it was random, but every Toad's fanfic is random (in a good way xD). Well, I love Chelsey even more now. <3 LizzaisosepicandIloveherandIwantedtoseehersingingsomethingwiththedramasisters. I'm so excited to the final 3. I like Kraven, but Tasia and Elle FTW. My name is Bruno! 01:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, guys! Yeah, I knew Lizza didn't have enough... At least you got your share of PJ's "..."'s. It was kinda weird... Glad you're excited for the f3 chap, Zoomer. And Lizza should have been in the Drama Sisters, but I made a pic of Abbey in her rapper costume. So pop-pop-pop your peepers, and tweak out your sneakers don't sleep, come on get your Creep with me 10:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
I just read the first two chapters and can already tell that this is better than TDS, so I think I'll skip those two if you don't mind. Hopefully, I can learn what things happened before All-Stars. Anyway, I loved the first two chapters. Tasia, Kavren, and Toad are my favorites. Tasia reminds me of that girl from the sketch on SNL. I can't remember the name of it right now. :P Also, if Northworth is that big of a jerk IRL, then I understand why you parody him like this on the wiki. :P I'll try to read more later.--Radicalm18 "Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash." 16:03, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Whoo, yay! TDS and TDTJ aren't as good, although the second half of TDTJ is somewhat like TDRev. Glad you like those characters. And yeah, Northworth is kinda like that IRL but it's a bit exaggerated. XD And now you finally know PJ! xDDD So pop-pop-pop your peepers, and tweak out your sneakers don't sleep, come on get your Creep with me 18:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Aw, Elle was awesome. XD Better than Tasia going, though. :P The chapter was disgustingly short, but epic, espcecially Luther. :P TASIA MUST WIN, BOIIIIIIII. :| Everyday I'm shufflin'... 18:46, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Does Dolph even have any clue why he's doing whatever the heck he's doing o_O
Aww, poor Elle. Eliminated because... Chris felt like it, I guess. I really need to stop trying to find deeper meaning in your story =P
On the other hand, it was a random coin flip between Elle and Tasia, so it's not like either random choice on Chris' part was going to be all yay and stuff.
Also, considering the whole tone of the story, it'd be ridiculous to try to figure out which of the two will win. I could try to look back at the story to try to see whether Kavren or Tasia has more of a winner's story, except I'm pretty certain neither of them has anything resembling a winner's story, so I'll just wait and see! Frank15 18:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, guys! Glad you liked it! Frank, as for Dolph, who knows what's going on inside his warped brain? XD And as for the winners, you'll just have to wait and see! So pop-pop-pop your peepers, and tweak out your sneakers don't sleep, come on get your Creep with me 19:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, Epic chapter. I loved the special guests. Oh, I hate Dolph, but he's awesome. IDK how I hate him and think that he's awesome. I would love to dance with Lizza. xD Nyan CatXElle FTW. xD Elle was awesome. Sad to see her go. It was obvious her last words would be SNOOOKI. At least she's in a better place: watching Nebrasca Shore (at least for her). xD Go Taaaaaaaasia. You can wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin. :D My name is Bruno! 23:06, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, Bruno! Glad you liked it. Idk how you can hate Dolph AND think he's awesome. :P I'm totally shipping Elle x Nyan Cat. XD So pop-pop-pop your peepers, and tweak out your sneakers don't sleep, come on get your Creep with me 23:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
...This chapter was so freaking epic. I loved Tasia's win, all the cameos from the eliminated contestants, and the Lonesome Whatever. :P So, yeah, that wraps an epic story... NOW DRAW TDMARSH CHARRYS. XD O mai glob! What the lump?! That was lumpin' lame. 00:06, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
EEEEEEEE. The finale. It is really epic. I loved the eliminated contestants cameos, specially Lizza, Chelsey, PJ, Northworth, Ori, Elle and Cammy. And Nyan Cat too. Nyan Cat FTW. :P I laughed at Duncan and Gwen's cameo, and I agree with Kravren about Duncan. EEEEEEEEE, Tasia won. I liked Kravren, but Tasia was waaaaaaay cooler than him. Congraaaaaaaaats, Tasia. :D So, I kinda expected that Elle's last words would be SNOOKI. But didn't had idea that the last overall word would be "...". xD Really can't wait to the reunion. My name is Bruno! 01:01, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
Yay, Tasia love! I mean, on one hand, for storyline purposes, Tasia winning didn't make a lot of sense. But on the other hand, Kavren winning would have made just as little sense, so who cares, hooray for Tasia! She... well, I'm not sure she did much to earn it, but I loved her, so I'm happy for her anyway!
And Lizza for All-Stars XD Frank15 01:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, guys! :DDD Bruno, glad you liked the Duncan and Gwen scene and the cameos. XD Frank, I'm glad you loved Tasia's win. I knew you'd be happy. And strangely enough I am considering Lizza for allstars. XD Toadgamer80The jester of Tortuga. 01:30, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
EPIC FINALE MAN. XD I loved it, and although I favoured Kavren, now that I think about it, Tasia is just as cool. Can't wait for next season! And Dolph is really starting to freak me out... O.o If you have found this, you are a stealth ninja. Where'd my signature go? 21:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
Wow. I'm happy Tasia won but I'm kinda sad the show is over. I feel a part of me died (weird right?). I totally agree with Ori's dad in that Elle should have won. I hated her being eliminated. But glad Tasia won in the end. I really liked this cast and so sad they're gone D:. They're my favorite of all your casts (Ao far). I might do some rankings on how I like the characters now that the story is over. I still don't get if Donny and Chesley are a couple but you need to make sure they are in the reunion :P. I can't wait for the reunion! Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 05:39, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Zoomy. Dolph is quite disturbing. XD Thanks Rhonda! I'm also sad that the story's over, this was my favorite cast so far too. I'd like to see those rankings. As for ChelseyxDonny we'll see in the reunion. Glad you liked Tasia's win, I wanted Elle to win but I kinda want her back for allstars and other reasons I can't say. ;D There's also TDTokyo to cheer you up. XD Toadgamer80The jester of Tortuga. 12:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)
I just finished chapter 1, and your characters are fun and very unique! Thank you for making them not only very distinct, but for the great character interactions! xDD Poor Toad. :P And I'm going to love Lizzy, I think! ;) Jay JLOMThings turn out for the best for the people who make the best of the way things turn out - John Wooden 22:48, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Someone's in the Kitchen was hilarious! xDD Elle's bonkers! And fun! :) Jay JLOMIf you think you'll lose, you've lost; for out in the world you'll find Success begins with a fellow's will, -Author Unknown 17:58, January 24, 2013 (UTC)