Not that bad! This is the first of many new users to come here to actually use the correct format! Great job on this chapter, I love it! I will certainly read more of this story! You have my support! Goldenshane 21:06, August 23, 2010 (UTC)
While the chapters should be longer... I can honestly say, from the chapter's actual quality, this is possibly the most underrated story on the wiki... WARNING: This user has a 100% chance of awesomeness! 18:16, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
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