Great oneshot! Very sad, especially Bridgette's last words to Geoff. You're definitely improving. Keep it up!-- I sing the song of the fading silver star...

I cried... XP I couldn't help but cry... Sunshine + Ravioli 15:31, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

This was so excellent! Great job. I loved Courtney in this story. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 17:54, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I almost cried, but the tears never came. It did leave me devastated, though. Nice job! It's me! That's right, fool! THE MADNESS NEVER ENDS! 01:19, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Same thing happened to me, Spenstar. and it takes a lot for me to cry.--HarryPotterFan5678 19:13, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Is there gonna be more--Kenzen11 I feel like a stick in the mud *turns into a stick in the mud* CRAP 22:50, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Same thing happened to me too, Spenstar. And I, like, only cried while reading when I readWhere The Red Fern Grows COKEMAN11 00:41, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I admire the story because of it's excellent selection of informing vocabulary. It transports the reader to the exact location of the depiction of the story (LOL) GOOD STORY.--YoshiPerson wuz here 11:59, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

This was so sad and beautiful at the same time, and you managed to go back and forward in time without confusing the reader, which is very difficult. Good job! --CamperThirteen 23:36, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I just re-read this amazing oneshot, and let me tell you, it's even more beautiful the second (in my case, fourth) time you read it! --DJ Spenstar! 19:05, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my gosh. This was amazing. I nearly shed a tear. That takes a lot of work. Definitely a great story. Kevin's a little bored at the moment. 03:54, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Tdirm... I just read it at 9:00 AM EST, and... I... cried... :'( It was so sad, especially the end. *cries in the corner* --Dr. TotaldramamanYou want an appointment? Then talk to me. 18:59, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

I have to agree with Kgman04. That was an amazing story. I think you really captured all the characters well. Duncan was my favorite, mainly because he was written the amazingliest (I'm tired)...but maybe it was because he was the main character. I still love the short story. Well done, TDIRM. --TDIFan13 (My Talk and My Contributions!) 15:47, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't cry, but I was close too.. This story was just so amazing! Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken. Hello, I'm the lie living for you so you can hide. Don't cry.... 22:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Seal of Approval!

I wish I gave you this earlier! XD! I said it once and I'll say it again, fantastic job. He ate my heart, he a-a-ate my heart. All the single ladies! (All the single ladies!) You make me feel like I'm livin' a teenage dream! *Crystal continues mindlessly playing music and dances randomly in her room* 21:49, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is so sad! But very good story! You think I'm annoying? I get that alot. 00:58, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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